Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2015 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
I really like the way you show a particular scene from many different piv's. very well done! TAG
Author's Response: Hi Tag! At first, I tried to write this way a lot, but after a while, I realized this story would become really, really long lol No seriously, I'm really glad you enjoy this, even if it's true I don't use it all the time, especially after the end of the first part.
I hope you enjoy the story, the beginning is actually a quite peaceful ride ;) Thank you for your comment, I deeply appreciate it :)
~alois~
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 7
Hi, Alois. Did not mean to step on anyone's toes. I was sure Brian spelled the company "Kinnetik," but since I can't find evidence of that I apologize. I would have to go through and ck all my DVDs to make sure. Anyway, my apologies. As part of my job, I have to look at the stories of newer authors as they post chapters in the validation queue before they are posted, and thought I was helping by correcting the name. I will not do any other changes going forward. I do not want to disrupt your beta relationship with her. I will also go ahead and validate you as an author, so you will not have to wait for the following chapters to be validated before you can post them. I will be looking forward to reading (only!) your story. ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim!
Thank you Kim and you're right, I also think it will be easier for everyone. Flossee is a great beta who helps me more than I can say with this fic and I really want to keep it that way, as the relationship we established over this story is very precious to me. I can't thank you enough for your help when I first registered on this site though and for your help and advices on the firsts chapters. You have no idea how helpful it was for me, as I don't know if I would have keep posting at the time if not for that. And I'm also so grateful for the unvaluable help that Flossee gives me, and really want to continue working with her...well, you get my point!
Thank you for offering to validate me as an author (I think it's already the case anyway but maybe I'm wrong)
And you were right by the way, I checked on my DVD this morning LOL and it's Kinnetik which is written on the door. It's in the episode 4 of season 4 (how did I remembered that, I really don't have a clue! ;D). So, your intervention was accurate!
*Big Hugs from France!*
:):):)
~alois~
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2014 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 7
Lovely chapter .. I really like that you re not rushing into Brian and Aiden hooking up, allowing their relationship to develop gives it authenticity and allows us to recognise and accept that for them the timing is right. Aiden admiring Justin's painting 'Life' is a poignant reminder (as if we could ever forget) of the person that has 'allowed' for this to happen, who rarely had timing on his side.
Author's Response: Hi Carol!
I'm thrilled that you think so, as it's exactly how I see it. Even if Justin is gone, he is always there in a way and he always will be, because Brian wouldn't be the man he is today without him.
Brian and Aidan's relationship will evolve slowly, as it couldn't be any other way. But for Brian, you don't lose the love of your life and forget about him overnight, more like you will never forget. At all. Nevertheless, life goes on...
Thank you so much Carol, again, I really love to have your feelings about the evolution of the characters and of the story.
*Hugs* :)
~alois~
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hey Alois
I noticed you changed Kinnetic to Kinnetik and then I saw Kim's review. Either way of writing it is just preference. Kinetic and Kinney are the words that were joined and correctly speaking you would take "Kin" from "Kinney" and "netic" from "Kinetic" to make "Kinnetic"; it isn't normal practice to then change the end letter. However, most of us find it more pleasing to the eye if we put a "K'. The genius in the word is the double "n" which is the only part mentioned in the series. It's your choice, but if you change it in this chapter make sure to change it in the previous ones or any additional ones you have already written. If Kim now has time to edit your fic I will step back as I don't see any point in two people betaing one fic. I will return the chapter we are working on, although I think we have finished it now. BTW I really enjoyed betaing for you.
Well, this review isn't going where I wanted it to, so now for the important stuff. LOL
I love that Aidan and Brian once again meet. Aidan's back-story is different to any other stories I have read before, which makes me just love it. I really like where you have taken this and what you are doing with the characters.
Haha Poor Ted is like the invisible man. LOL
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Hi Flossee,
I'm sooo happy for the great compliment about Aidan's back-story and about the evolution of Brian and Aidan.
Ted is just so good, and invisible once again...Poor Ted LOL.
Thank you again, this story wouldn't be so good if not for you, my dear friend
*hugs*
~alois~
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
What an amazing look into what Aidan's been doing. I'm so glad that Ted is around for Brian and if Aidan gets this job, I think he'll be around for Brian as well. I'm actually looking forward to Brian and Aidan getting closer because they need each other right now.
Author's Response: Thank you so much my friend for this great review. Ted is one of my favorite character in the show (even if I have to admit I also love Debbie, and Emmett and...all of them really) and I'm glad you like Aidan's evolution as well...
:)
*Hugs*
~alois~
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 7
an interesting story that called my attention! Lovely and different storyarch. Please keep on with the good stuff!
Author's Response: Hi reiselust16! I will try, I promise! I'm really glad you enjoy it so far!
and thank you to take the time to let a review :)
*hugs from France*
~alois~
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 7
See I am going to be swinging back and forth with Aiden, he is not Justin but he is going to make Brian happy sooooo but oh dear lol😔
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, I'm the devil as it seems to be the consensual thought for many of this story's readers lol
Thank you so much for your comment, and for giving it a try, as I know it's not easy (even for me sometimes, I have to say I think I'm a little crazy, but what can I do? aha
*Hugs from France!*
:)
~alois~
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2014 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 7
I really like this story. I'm always waiting for a new chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kathrin, this review is just awesome for me, you have no idea. I will try and not disappoint you with the rest of this story. Feel free to comment on the characters if you want...or not ;D
And I know it has been said again and again by a lot of authors, but that's really because of you, reviewers, that the story continue to live...
***Big Hugs from France!***
~alois~
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
Hi, my dear! This continues to be a very entertaining story! You are doing such a good job of developing Aiden's character that I'm actually torn now between wanting him with Brian or Justin with Brian! Ack! Good job on that.;) BTW, hope you don't mind - I corrected "Kinnetic" to "Kinnetik." Can't help it - it's the teacher in me.;) I think that is how Brian spelled the company name. Double check me, though.;) Thanks again for the story! Will be looking foward to the next part. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim!
Thank you so much for your review...again..:) It means a lot to me that you review each chapter, as I know your time is well used! And I love the fact that you give this story a chance and to Aidan.. I'm so happy!
Feel free to correct anything you see, I really don't know how Kinnetik is spelled, and I trust you completely!
**happy face**
Big Hugs from france!
~alois~
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