Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Consequences
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2015 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

“Good night.” They shot the door on their way out.

it should be shut not shot



Author's Response:

Thanks. I've corrected it. Thankfully, there are no other mistakes after chapter 6 (I dodn't have a beta at first) Hope you enjoy the read! Big hugs 😊

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2014 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow! That was so intense! 

You portrays very well how Brian is sad and lost. 

Aidan is also suffering and I believe that the two men will meet in the midst of your pain. I wonder why the pain of Aidan. She lost her sister? I believe you will have the answer in the next chapter. 

Eager to continue reading this históriia. 

Hugs from Brazil! 

Fatima.



Author's Response:

You will have the answer about Aidan's pain in the next chapter!

thank you again ( happy face)

:):):)

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian, in so much pain.  Love the Christmas get together. Even Gus noticed that Brian is not happy.  Now Brian's found someone in as much pain as he is.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's definitely a difficult time for Brian.

And it's not really surprising that he can relate to Aidan, considering they are both hurting.

Thank you my friend

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

My dear friend, Flossee's statement about wanting to make you feel welcome is a very accurate one. I strive to encourage and help as much as I can, paying it forward for all the help and support I have gotten from fellow authors. With that being said, I will be heading out on military duty for the next two weeks but when I return I'll try my best to offer any help that I can ;)

Author's Response:

Jazzepoet,

 

Thank you so much for your kind words....

*happy face*

If I can do anything in return, just let me know  (I know, I live in dreamland, being french and all lol)

Thank you again, your support means a lot to me

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hey Alois

I don't speak French, yet I am helping another author who only speaks French and we seem to be able to communicate okay (translators are wonderful).  I would offer to help you, but I am having houseguests for three weeks so my time on MW will be greatly reduced for the duration of their visit.  I can see you only need a helping hand with incorrect words and a few minor imperfections which I am capable of helping with.  If you are still writing once I am free to help, I will.  I hope in the meantime someone will step in as there seems very little work involved to making reading this easier.  I will warn you I am not the best person for the job so hopefully someone who is more suited will help you.

As to the content of your fic; you are the author and you take the fic wherever you want.  I know I have mentioned to you before you will find likeminded people who will enjoy your fics and see the show and characters as you do; Toniu has already voiced that they are on the same wavelength as you.

As to people reviewing, again you need to join in the fun and atmosphere of the site.  Everyone says they are too busy, but it is obvious you have read fics on this site as some of your writing seems to be influenced by other authors.   Have a look at your reviewers; example, YumYumPM, JAZZEPOET etc; these are the authors that review regularly and will make you feel welcome and help you join the fold, so maybe read their work and review for them. 

I'm still hanging in there and everyone knows I don't really like cute children fics so I was really pleased this chapter ended with Aidan and Brian.  I love that Brian threatened the trick and he was able to get Aidan out of there without him redecorating the bar. lol

Cheers :)  



Author's Response:

Hi Flosee,

 

thank you so much for offering to help me and yeah, translators are really wonderful lol.

Glad that you're still here with me :)

You're right about the reviews. I've done some reviews in the past but it was anonymous as I wasn't registered at the time. As for reading and reviewing for my reviewers, it's already planned in my schedule :)

~alois~

 

 

 

Reviewer: toniu (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2014 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

So far this is a great story.  I hope to read more soon. Please, please don't disappoint. You have answered my prayers. I have been searching for a story where Brian finds someone. Sadly fans feel that only Justin deserves to find happiness with someone else only returning to Brian when either they a) die. b) abuse him. c) can't measure up to Brian. Poor Brian is relegated to always accepting Justin back, or trying to steal him back. I admired Brian for surviving his childhood and helping his disfunctional family. A family that I also find abusive to poor Brian.  So thank you. Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Hi toniu!

It's good to see that some people want to actually read this story! As I said before, it's not easy to submit a story like that as a first story and I understand what you say about Brian. I like the character very much too.

So thank you for taking some time to write a review, it helps me going. It's kind of frustrating  to see that your story is read but that people don't tell you what they think about it. Even if I know it's a part of the game ;D

I will be more than happy to try and answer your prayers ;) and I really hope I don't disappoint you

Thank you!

:)

*hugs*

~alois~

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