Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Consequences
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 3

I hope Aidan will be good for Brian, better than selfish Justin

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2014 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hello Alois! 

I love Aidan! Oh God, now what? 

I blame you for leaving me in a great dilemma. 

The luck of Justin's  I the love more and I can not conceive of a universe where Brian and Justin are not together. 

So I would ask you two things, if you allow me. 

The first thing is please do not make Aidan a psychopath or an idiot who comes abuses of Justin and irritates Brian  because of it. The vast majority of authors do it and I do not see consistency in this outcome. Sometimes Brian is someone very good for him, Gus and all other then Justin appears and the guy instantly turns into a psychopath, serial killer or just a big idiot. Please do not do this with Aidan. 

The second thing is, please do not kill Aidan. Let the man have a chance to be happy with someone else (this is where I start my campaign for my beloved Emmet). Such an amazing guy like him does not deserve to die (I did it with a boyfriend  of Justin in one of my stories and  today I'm sorry because for the poor guy, but his death fit the plot, poor guy), so let Aidan live and be happy (with Emmet, please ...) 

My dear, I keep hoping that you get a beta and can continue this great story. 

Hugs from Brazil! 

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Hi Fatima!

aha I love Aidan too lol

and all I can say is that he is a real good guy, so don't worry, he will not turned into a bad guy or a dumbass..;D

interesting idea about him and Emmett, I hadn't thought about it... But unfortunately, it´s not going to happen...:(

as for his fate (alive or dead, happy or not) I can't tell you without revealing some part of the plot, so... Please don't hate me! 

Thank you so much Fatima

*hugs from France*

:):):)

~alois~

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

I am struggling to stay with this fic.  I know Brian and Aidan hook up and are with each other for a while and it also looks like Justin will find someone, hence Justin/other; yet Aidan and Emmett, that is just too much like Brian and Ben.  Now when Brian bottoms he knows Emmett has been there first.   To me that is almost incestuous (I know it's not but it certainly feels that way).

I do have a request please; if you are going to kill Aidan off don't let it be an automobile accident as that has been so overdo. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Hi Flossee!

aha, so Aidan and Emmett, I didn't think about it that way really! To me, it was just a way to add a little fun to the plot but now that I think about it, I can understand the feeling  :) 

and no, I can assure you Aidan will not die in a car accident.

Thank you for the review!

*Cheers back*

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2014 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

I like this story very much and I like Aidan.

You're writing very nice and you have great ideas to develop the plot. So I'm looking forward to hopefully many chapters of this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you Kathrin! At first I thought there will be about ten to fifteen chapters, but, at the rate I'm writing, I think there will be more...

:)

*Hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

*sigh* I really want to enjoy this story...I really do, because your writing is beautiful. The thing is, there have been quite a few heavily angsty stories posted recently and I just don't have the emotional fortitude to get through another one right now. Please don't take any offense as that is not my intention, but I must be honest in telling you that I will probably have to wait until this on is completed before I can truly enjoy it. Maybe by then I will have recovered from my angst overload ;)

Author's Response:

Hi Jazzepoet!

no offenses taken, as I can totally understand what you feel, having been here myself. Sometimes, Angst is not what I want either, and this story is full of it, so, you are right about not wanting to read it !

so, thank you for your review, it means a lot to me that even if you don't read it, you take the time to tell me what you think.

I promise I will do the same as soon as I have a little time to read!

:)

~alois~

 

Reviewer: rainloverdreamz (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 3

here i am again.. just to say.. totally hooked up with the story..keep posting.. and dont worry ..your english as well as your writing is just perfect. and i know how you feel coz i recheck my reviews atleast thrice before posting Lol :D and did you just mention my birthplace in your story ? ;) good luck !



Author's Response:

Oh my god, this day 's getting better and better with each of your review! thank you so much!

And are you born in India? If so, it's a sign! :D

thank you so much my friend and more soon I promise!

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

I have to say I've never read a story where I wanted someone other then Justin to hook up with Brian, until now.  You put so much into Aidan and all of it likeable.  I think he and Brian would be good for each other.  When do we learn more?



Author's Response:

Oh my god, I'm doing an happy dance right now :D

Well, there will be some time before they see each other again, and it won't be pretty is all I can say (but it will be in the next chapter)

I'm currently (like right this instant) finishing chapter 5 and things are slowly but surely beginning to evolve as you will learn more about Aidan. but it's going to take some time, as I don't think that Brian is ready for anything at the moment...

Thank you again for your review!

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hello, my friend. I am still very much enjoying your story, so I do hope you continue. I wish I could offer to beta, but I have my hands full at the moment writing my own stories as well as helping to beta for a couple of other writers.  I will try to do a few edits as I have time, if that's okay, however.

I will be looking forward to the rest of your story! *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hello Kim,

First of all thank you for the review and for your help for the edit, I know how full your hands are and I really understand that it's impossibe for you! I don't know how you do it, writing so much, beautifully, and helping for this site while having your own life to live.

I don't have the time at the moment to read anything but I really want to start reading your stories again, as I have read many in the past and I absolutely LOVE them. I hope I will have much time soon!

Thank you again for your support and your kind words, it means a lot to me... :)

*Hugs*

 

PS:(And I just saw in one of your review today that you lost your father not so long ago so I would like to extend my most sincere condolences to you and to your family as I know these moments are the most difficult times in our life. Wish you all the best in the world* alois*)

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