Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Consequences
Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi Alois!

Gosh, there are so many perfect things about this chapter that I want to mention, but I’m having trouble remembering them all because there were so many.  I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again – I LOVE your writing :)

You write the Michael/Brian and Ted/Emmett friendships *so* well.  Seriously, I am in awe!  The dialogue is just perfect and completely believable.  I also love that you included Debbie.  She’s definitely one of my favourite characters and you’ve captured her beautifully in your writing.

I can’t say enough good things about this chapter.  It was the perfect mix of drama and comedy.  I absolutely adored it.  Thank you! :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!

I'm so glad you like it ** smiling ** And I really love you for pointing that you like the scenes between Brian/Michael and Ted/Emmett :) Not to forget Debbie, who I love dearly too ;)

At the beginning of the story, I tried to mix some funny moments with the drama going on, but I think I failed at one point to carry on the fun... But I try too when I can :)

Thank you to read this story again, and I'm really happy that you enjoy it. I hope you will enjoy the following chapters if you decide to read them :) and I'm also thrilled you find it believable. Some readers can't imagine Brian with another man so they consider this story an AU (and I understand why they do), but I try to stay as close to the characters in canon as possible anyway.

*big hugs!*

~alois~

 

 

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2014 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

I don't know what your original language is but I really like the turn of the phrase " you have to turn your tongue seven times in your mouth to stop the words from spilling from it". The differences in phrasing make the story charming.



Author's Response:

Hi Jean!

I'm French and this is an expression we use when someone tell something and should have refrained himself. I didn't even know it wasn't used in English, so thank you for the information!

And thank you for giving a try to this story :)

*Hugs from france*

~alois~

Reviewer: rainloverdreamz (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

So they meet again ! Sad for B/J but curious about the new relationship thats going to bloom . Your rendition is perfect , loving the story. next chater soon please :)

 




Author's Response:

Thank you again rainloverdreamz!!

Next chapter today (I had a few days off and I manage to write nearly 3 chapters *happy face*) I just have to read it again and again to try and see for mistakes arrrggg :D

I truly appreciate your reviews, it helps me going

:)

*Hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

Just read the three chapters. And I definitely want more. Love your writing-style.

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Hi Marny!

And thanks a lot for your review! It helps me knowing that you guys want to read it and that I'm not writing nonsense (I'm kind of a perfectionist and it bugs me to have my work unbetad))

I'll post the next chapter today

:)

*hugs back*

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

My bad.  I didn't pay attention to the dates.  So Aidan and Brian hook up?  Now you've put me in a dilema.  I normally root for Brian and Justin, but Aidan would be a good match.  Can we make this a three way?



Author's Response:

aha, I've not considered it yet, but now that you say it...;D

Thank you again to review, I have to admit it's hard when you don't know what people think, I finally understand all the writers I've read as I was not a great reviewer in the past...

Better late that never ;)

*Hugs from France*

~alois~

 

 

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