Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For In His Kiss
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2019 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 35

good one

Reviewer: Britinfan1984 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2018 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 35

When will you start posting the sequel???

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 35

Wow wee that was some talk wasn't it. Loved every word of this story. Thank you so much for writing it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 34

So emotional here, I could feel every bit of it. Such an amazing story.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 33

Urgh they really need to talk and talk properly before they lose something that can't be replaced.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 32

Brian and his son are so great here and he is getting on with Mel, miracles happen huh. Oh dear, why oh why did you do that Brian, I would kick you myself. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 31

Wow that must have been a big shock, but a good one it seems and omg Gus is just adorable , please have more with him.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 30

Brian really has it bad huh, it must be really confusing for him. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 29

I love your Brandon and I hope we see more of him. Daphne is right though, it's not over between Brian snd Justin, I can feel something coming x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 28

Phew I need a cold shower after that chapter and again tender moments within which I love x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 27

Justin's creativity is awesome and I love how everyone at Plexus sees it and how they like him. I feel sad it was his last day.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 26

Lol I love Jessica, she has them Sussed doesn't she. Justin is so lucky to have friends who care that much, we should all have that for sure and Brian, sooo sweet x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 25

Now that's how to be liked after when sick.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 24

Fan me down plzzzzzz

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh Justin, I wish you knew the truth instead of jumping to conclusions.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 22

I hope Justin finds out the truth that Brian wasn't back doing what he thinks he was, please let him find out soon.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 21

Justin's friends are awesome and I loved that Brian got on with them. Why do I feel something bad is gonna happen x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 20

Lol I love Cynthia she really is in charge isn't she. I am really enjoying the original characters in this story and the interactions with Brian and Justin.

 

loving this story x 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 19

I seriously loved this chapter, not just for the hotness but for the underlying feelings within and emotion. It really moved me.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2017 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 18

Gosh you can really feel the pride radiate off Brian for Justin and that makes me so happy. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2017 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 17

Every time I read this chapter I fall more and more in love with Jessica, she is a doll I swear. And my hesrt melts even more each time the way Brian describes the painting and how it makes him feel.

 

such beautiful work x

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2017 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 16

That was super hot and I loved what he bought and his thoughts while doing it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2017 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 15

I live Justin is living working in the art department and I can feel both of them struggling not to take things further and I can understand why Brian reacted like that. I hope things get better. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2017 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 14

This is one of my fav chapters, there us a connection here that really moved me. Truly brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 13

I LOVE Daphne and I love how you write her, I think she would get on with Lilah. Jeremy is such a brilliant character as well, I'm so excited to see if Brian shows up.

 

Excellent work xx 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 12

Justin must be so confused as to shy he is getting called to Brian's office so often. I swear the heat between them is getting stronger all the time. 

 

This is is so fantastic.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

The heat between them is growing isn't it, talk about HOT stuff. You are doing a fantastic job writing this keeping us into what they are thinking.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 10

Brian must be so confused with how he is feeling since he never felt this way before. I am enjoying their to a and fro lol it's fun. Excellent work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 9

Loved this chapter with Justin in Pittsburgh and I love that Gus took to him. Oooh Brandon, this is gonna be interesting huh.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 8

He really has fallen for Justin and is scared to his core. I love these guys they should never be apart. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Justin is awesome when he gets like this with his art and I'm drawn in by it and want more. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 6

I can't wait for Justin to meet the gang.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

Brilliant, I love Justin in this chapter he really threw off Brian didn't he lol. I am seriouly enjoying this story again. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ooooh I loved this chapter, I love a spunky Justin. I could picture the look on Brian's face, brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hot and energised I love that Daphne is there as well. I'm loving this so much.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh jeez Brian is pissed off, good luck to that bartender now huh. I am looking forward to seeing when he meets Justin again. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

Such a brilliant start and I would love to see this design. Cannot wait for more even though I have read this lots of times lol 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2016 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 35

Reread this and enjoyed it so much.  Are you ever going to post the sequel?  I'd really love to read it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2016 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 6

Somehow I think with Mikey in Daphne circle, poor girl, there will not be a Kinney blackout.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2016 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

Love how you intigrated orange is the new blue into this chapter.  Surely Justin listed the Los Angeles School of Design on his resume.  Love Brian's reaction to finding out that that Justin is this Justin.  When does he find out the Pitts. Justin is the same Justin too.  Let me guess, Daphne's new roommate is Emmett.  Perfect.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

It's a good thing that Justin's on to Brian.  Otherwise he wouldn't have the job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 3

Little does Justin know that Brian really is that much of a dick.  It's always nice for Justin and Daphne to get together.  I fear for Brian if Daphne meets him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 2

Just goes to show you should never discount a google search to give you all the information.  Wonder when Brian will put it all together.  Like how the employees look out for Justin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Rereading this thanks to a recommendation on MW facebook.  It's just as good the second time around!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 35

I discovered your stories on mags-nificent.com (at the beginning of July, via a shout-out from tagsit on Midnight Whispers, if I recall correctly) and sent an email to express my admiration and appreciation via that website at the end of July.

I didn't discover the QAF series and the related fanfiction until early June of this year--no idea how it escaped me until then.  Now I can hardly tear myself away from anything QAF-related.

Regardless, your alternate universe stories are some of the most fascinating and well-crafted that I've read.  Hands down, I think they're the best edited--and that does make reading them a greater pleasure.  I really appreciate a fanfic author who cares about editing; I can understand why it's sometimes neglected, so it's that much better when the opposite is true.

I'm not certain which of your series I like the best: Spin and Fall; The List; or In His Kiss and its sequel Together. I've already read each series more than once.   I'm going to pick In His Kiss and Together because they have provided the longest reading pleasure. You introduced incredible, well-fleshed-out, new characters as well as developing other characters further.  Brandon and Todd make an incredible couple, and I adore Jessica.

I think you should post all your series on Midnight Whispers, not just “In His Kiss”.  No matter where you post them, your stories will be a hit.

I'm hoping that one day there will be a sequel to Together, as you hinted might happen at the end of that series.  Any chance of that?  It looks like it has been a few years since you wrote stories in the QAF universe.  Please let me know if you reenter that realm.

Thanks again for your incredible stories!

Reviewer: Dylyn Maghanoy (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2014 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 35

Hi how are you? First i just want to tell you how incredible your story is and can't wait to start the sequel..i started watching gay japanese movies until i run out of it so i went to american versions of movies,i keep looking whats good to watch suddenly the clips of QAF appear on YT so i tried to see whats in it,and then it all started i became addicted all of a sudden despite the sexyness and boldness of the series but what  caught my attention is the romance between Justin and Brian..Right then all i'm watching is the series,straight 6 months i only fucos my eyes on them,watched the series for 5 times all season and then i don't really satisfied about the ending so i tried the fanfiction all my wishes and dreams about our lovely boys are answered..anyways i am from Philippines and totally straight but it doesn't stop me from being a QAF lovers..anyway i hope you continue writing about out boys it's really inspiring..take care Conzieu more power to you and Godbless!!

Reviewer: Coni (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2014 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 35

This was a great story. I am always happy when I see Brian and Justin together and in love. I can't wait for the sequel.

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2014 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 35

This is one of my favorite stories, ever! Thank you!

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2014 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 35

Hi!!

I found QAF on YouTube, went to Google images, saw a picture with a name of a story on it, and ended up at MW.

I read your other reviews and saw you had completed The Kiss on MST, and went their to read the rest of it and your other stories.

Now I am back here, rereading The Kiss.

I'm from sunny So CAL.

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 35

Well, after reading your whole story without almost stopping and even in my work, I finally got a moment to comment. 

Firstly I found your wonderful story. You built a great love story and portrayed very well as the love of boys has evolved and become so strong and intense. It was great to read this wonderful story. 

As for knowing who I am, here it is:

My name is Fatima, and I'm Brazilian. I live in Rio de Janeiro and love reading fanfiction about Brian and Justin. I just recently started writing. I do not dominate the English and use Google Chrome to read fanfiction and write comments to the stories that I like and respond to feedback of my stories. 

I have the best beta in the world to translate my stories, Predec2, who kindly help me with my stories. 

I fell in love for the boys on Youtube. I discovered them in 2010 when I was looking for a Brazilian film called "Do Início ao Fim" which depicts the story of two brothers who indulge in your love even against all the taboos of society, when I found the movie showed a video of Brian and Justin (the scene of the prom), I saw and fell in love madly. 

I searched the QAF videos on Youtube, I downloaded and watched the Show several times less the 513), which now already lost count of how many times I saw them. 

I read QAF fanfiction almost two years ago, but only began writing stories a year ago. I was encouraged to write my own fanfiction, when I was not in accordance with the series finale as was done by the producers and writers (my first fic is my version of an alternate ending). 

I am married for 18 years and have two teenage daughters and I am very happy to share the universe with other QAF fans and MW family. 

A big hug!

Fátima.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 35

Hi there! I just wanted to say thank you for writing this story and especially, thank you for getting back into the fandom.

I can really tell that you love Brian and wanted to give him the respect he deserves. In my opinion, you've allowed him to gradually grow and change without making him to OoC...that is OoC to what CowLip did to our beautiful man. I believe that Brian matured over time, so the show Brian, in my opinion, was completely out of character.

Another thing I enjoyed was you kept Justin youthful, sexy and excited about his future. He didn't become jaded, self-righteous and selfish. It was nice seeing his relationship with Daphne continue to be strong and present.

Speaking of Daphne...it was really cool to catch a glimpse of her family when Justin was young. I loved their playful banter and making fun of Justin. Although, I'm not really a fan of racial comments...you made it funny. Really...I've had a lot of racially diverse friends and sometimes we got silly like that. It was all in jest.

Of course...I had to mention that I love that you didn't make Lindsay, Michael and Melanie into hateful, sadistic, psychopaths. Although I abhorred the way they treated Brian in the show, I'm glad that treatment didn't continue in your story. 

Oh...the sex. First of all...the first time they had sex was on that dance floor. OMG...I was fanning myself...Muy Caliente! When they actually consumated, it was amazing, but the first time Justin "came apart" in Brian's arms and Brian felt it happening...was CRAZY CRAZY HOT! 

I didn't intend for this to go on so long, but I would have said so much more had I commented after each chapter. The first time I downloaded, I only had up to Chapter 15...and I freaked when I finished that. I immediately came back here and saw you added and had up to Chapter 30...and nearly screamed. I was thinking, "OMG...she lied that it was complete!" I was so happy to see that the last 5 chapters were here. Now I can't wait for "Together"! YAY!

**Having read M/M books and watched M/M movies for a couple of years, I found QAF U.K. first last April/May and loved it! I felt so lost when it was over and decided to watch the U.S. version. At first, I was disappointed thinking that they copied U.K. verbatim, but then it took on a life of it's own. I watched the first season on YT and I was hooked and NEEDED to buy the rest of the series. So, I bought all five seasons and have watched it more times than I can count (except for Season 5).

After that, I NEEDED to find other people like me...I knew you were out there and finally found Fan Forum, which has a QAF board that started in August of 2002. There I met some really great people who have been in the fandom for many, many years...and are wonder fanfiction writers too! 

Through my immense love for QAF, I started making clips of scenes and started a YT Channel. Then I started making GIF's and screencaps. Since then, GIF making has become my favorite hobby. 

I really wanted to share my love and one of the girls over at Fan Forum recommended for me to join LJ and share over there. I started posting and one of the members "introduced" me to other long time members and now I get to share my love and enjoy theirs.

Oh...and since November, I've had the honor of becoming Co-Mod on the QAF boards and it's been wonderful! Our board boasts being in the Top 20 of almost 300 boards...including new shows and random OT boards. In May, we celebrated 350,000 posts! In August, we'll celebrate being on FF for 12 years. Can you tell I'm excited? :)

Oh...I live in Florida, I've been married for 25 years and have 3 beautiful teens. 

So...you asked! 

~ Deborah 

P.S. Do you have any other full-length QAF fics? 


Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 35

Hi conzieu!

I first read your story a few years ago on livejournal. It was so good and still is, as was the sequel and all your stories really.

If I remember correctly, you come in France often? Glad you like this country! (no, I don't like my country at all..lol)

Thank you again for your stories

*Hugs*

~alois~

 

Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 35

Thank you for sharing this story, it will be one I read over and over again.  So beautifully written.  This Brian/Justin dynamic is so provocative and sensual, it's truly reading a love story.

I found QAF for the first time 6-9 months ago and took 3 days off work to watch my newly aquired complete series DVD set and fell in love.  And cried for weeks after as I couldn't get over the finale of Brian and Justin parting.  I still can't watch the final episode again even though I've watched the whole series 3-4 times now.  Since then, I've been devouring fanfiction to the point of having temporarily abandoned one of my own fanfiction pieces because I can't stop thinking of these two.  sad...

I live in the US, in the Midwest where cornfields/wheatfields and urban sprawling dominate our landscape instead of skyscrapers and inner city life.  I do love to travel to larger cities than KC to experience all they have to offer.

Thank you again for sharing this emotion filled story.  I look forward to seeing this continued in a sequel, so much more to tell of their story.

:-)

 

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 35

I read this story when you first posted it almost four years ago. Loved it then and will re-read it now that you have posted it here.

I first heard of QAF when I read about it in TV Guide. Watched it from the beginning. Loved the show right from the start, was a wreck at the end of season one after the bashing. One of the soap opera magazines here let it slip that Justin lived, I was so relieved. I had recently seen Harvey Fieirstein's movie "Torch Song Trilogy" (great movie) and thought they were going to kill off Justin.

I'm from Bayonne NJ.

Love your stories, I have them all saved.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 35

I really really enjoyed this storyline and look forward to your posting of the sequel.  This last chapter was a delight with them getting on the same page and agreeing they are together.  Now I think Brian is just a tad jealous of Brandon.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 34

Love how you give us a look at what happened from Brian's angle.  Enjoyed the subtext to the conversation between Justin, Brian, and Daphne.  Once again I like how you write Ted.  They really do need to talk.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 33

Justin got back at him.  Brian is not happy and he's not sure were he stands anymore.  Love the parts with Ted, he's funny.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 32

What a fun time everyone is having or was having.  It's nice how well Mel and Brian are getting along.  And I love how you write Ted.  So Brian and Brandon meet.  I'm worried about how Justin is going to take seeing them come out of the backroom together.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 31

What a wonderful Christmas surprise.  Especially Brian declaring how much he wants to continue to see and be with Justin.  Very enjoyable chapter.

Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2014 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Please! Please! Please, update! I'm dying to finish this. It is great!



Author's Response:

Just posted the last chapters!  enjoy...  And thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2014 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 10

This chapter was simply magical. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 30

Hmmm, I take it the New York number from the last chapter was Brian calling.  Justin should have tried it.  Love how Cynthia tells Brian like it is.  The Pitts is going to be interesting this year.



Author's Response:

I always liked Cynthia/Brian interactions, and I love the Cynthia in this fic...  Hope you enjoy the last few chapters!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 29

I think Daphne is right.  It isn't over between Brian and Justin.  I'm glad that Justin told Brandon there was someone else.  Seeing Brian and Justin get together Christmas is going to be fun.



Author's Response:

Daphne is ALWAYS right.  And, yes. a lot of fun coming up!  The last of In His Kiss is up!

Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 30

You just leave me craving for more :(



Author's Response:

Just finished posting the story!  I hope you enjoy Christmas in the PITTS!  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 28

They both think things are over.  But it's not.  Brian doesn't just let anyone fuck him.  I love how you describe things, like the lable in the last chapter.  You can actually see it in your mind. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 27

It's almost a shame that Justin has to leave Plexus.  Everyone loves him.  Hopefully once Brian has Justin, he'll still want him in his life.  Surely he will!  I'm really interested in Christmas in Pitts.  That ought to be interesting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 26

I like how you give us a backview of what happened in the last chapter from Brian's pov.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2014 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 30

Boy, are Brian and Justin in for a surprise! And everyone else at Debbie's!

I love the twist on Brandon's character, and that he really won't be a stalker, it appears.

Author's Response:

I don't know why Brandon appears, in one form or another, in ALL my QAF fics.  He is particularly likable here, I think, and plays a big role in the sequel, which I will start posting next since I finished posting In His Kiss today.  :)

I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 30

Hey

I really enjoyed this; thank you.  I haven't started the sequel yet, but when you upload it here I will review here.   I can't wait now as what you wrote about Brandon makes me want to read on immediately.  Good luck with your deadline for the other fandom. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I will post "Together" here, next, (the sequel) since I finished posting In his Kiss today.  As for the other fandom, I'm really up to my neck!

But posting here reminds me that YES! I am capable of finishing a fic, and yes!  People do enjoy the stuffI write.  So thanks for the support and the comment!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2014 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 30

I ve read this before ..but that didn t stop me reading it again and yes .. It's a good as I remembered. Reading the sequel (which I ve also already read .. And loved) as we speak.



Author's Response:

There are so many OC I love in Together.  Jessica, Jason, Lamonte...  It was such a fun fic to write.  I'm glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2014 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 30

Confession time - after I started reading I couldn't stop, so instead of waiting for you to post the rest of the chapters here I went over to 'Mags-nificent' and read the whole thing and the sequel. Ready for more please! Is there a sequel to the sequel? TAG



Author's Response:

I always meant to have a sequel.  I'm not sure if you know this, but I was terribly ill when I wrote Together.  I was bed ridden, and wrote non stop, putting out a new chapter every three days.  I lived and breathed that universe.  It was my escape from RL, from the real possibility I was not going to make it.  Then, my father died when I was writing the last 2 chapters of Together.  I just couldn't go back to it after that, not right away.  I got better myself, and started to have a life again, enjoying my kids.  So I wrote The List, which was just  a short distraction, and then got really inspired by a prompt, and wrote Spin and Fall.  I got SO MUCH SHIT from people about Spin and Fall!!!  It was kind of funny, really.  I started another QAF fic, which is about 1/3 done, which I really liked, but I got sucked back into Harry Potter for a while, then moved to yet another fandom...  I don't know if I can go back to the Together universe any more.  My writing style has changed, and it has been so long...  I am really proud of these fics, and would hate to do a subpar job at the next instalment, and I can never dedicate myself to it the way I did when it was my escape from my illness. Still, I will never say never...

Probably more than you wanted to know!

Thanks for the comment, though.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2014 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 25

I'm so happy to see you posting here in MW! I've read this story before on another site, but it will be so much easier to read and re-read it now that you've posted here! Wonderful story. Love the descriptiveness. Adore the scenes in Essengey where they're kissing until Justin comes. It's sublime! More please. TAG



Author's Response:

I am glad you love it.  And the kiss, yeah...  When I was 19, (and the dinausors roamed the earth), I had a boyfriend I could do that to.  Ah, the good all days...

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2014 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 25

I have just read all the chapters in one go and was gutted it was a WIP lol I want more. Great work love it thanks Chris

Author's Response:

OMG!  So sorry!  And it took me forever to update, too... Well 5 more chapters for you!  And thank you.  But it's not as if you haven't read this before...  :o)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2014 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 25

I admit I completed this on another site and I didn't review there as I don't know how, so I will review here.  I rarely stray from MW, but occasionally a fic that I know is completed elsewhere will have me hunt it down. lol   I'm now thinking of starting the continuance.  Did I read on the other sites that you had a banner for this?  I only ask in case you are having trouble adding it to this fic; maybe I'm just totally wrong with that.  I really enjoyed this part of the series and I love where you ended it, leaving us wanting more.  I adore B/J fics with Brandon in the mix and I really love Brandon in this one; thank you so much for that.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I suppose you are probably well into the sequel by now...I am taking too long uploading!  Yes, someone made me a banner, but I have not even looked at how to insert it yet.  I am actually on a deadline for a fic in another fandom, and it's taking all my time!

For some unknown reason, I have NEVER written a QAF fic without Brandon makinf some kind of appearance, with different last names and different personalities.  I LOVE Brandon Bloomquist (This Brandon, in case you have not read ahead) best, though...

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2014 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 25

LOVING it! The bit about the hat was neat(giving my age away, lol).

Just what I needed.

Thank you for posting

Author's Response:

Honey, I could probably be your mother...

Glad you are enjoying this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2014 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 25

Poor Justin.  Not feeling well, but look at how many people care about him.  Lilah, Jessica, and Brian.  Not bad.  And Brian said he wanted Justin in his bed!  Not just some trick in the backroom!



Author's Response:

After all this pining, definitely not backroom for Sunshine...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 24

Brian is so hooked.  He's kinda in shock that he's going to get his wish, which is strange.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 23

Oh boy, Christmas is going to be really interesting.



Author's Response:

Indeed.  I love that part.  (If I must say so myself!)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 22

Love how Brian's plan for the watch came together.  Love it even better that Brian wouldn't take no for an answer about taking Justin home.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 21

Can't blame Justin for not wanting to get his hopes up.  What's going on with Andrew.  From what you've written this is soooo out of character for him, even with Brian's chemical help.

Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 25

LoL sorry I didn't comment earlier but i have been reading this story daily and loving multiple chapters. Its a lovely story. And I' so looking forward to it. I know it's an AU and I do love AUs but I don't know some how Justin having Tylenol sent me screaming...NO... U are  allergic to it Hahahaha... I know it's stupid. Anyways great chapters l'm really looking forward to the Thursday sexapade :p and since I'm a sucker for angst... I would love Brian to act like he didn't give a Damn on Friday. And Justin feeling hurt :p ... But ya'knw the ends are worth the angst :p



Author's Response:

Hey!

Actually, if you remember, Brian corrected him in the pilot:  "No one is allergic to tylenol!"  and the boy knows his drugs.  I am a doc, and it's true:  Tylenol is what you give people with allergies.  Justin either remember taking Tylenol+codeine, or is plain wrong.  (I seem to recall he correct himself?  Not sure...)

I think you are going to enjoy the next few chapters...

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 20

I had every intention of reviewing as I went, but I just couldn't bring myself to stop.  I'm even thinking of heading over to the other site just so I can finish this engrossing story.  I love the reason for the men not going all the way and I've always enjoyed reading about Brian dealing with his feelings for Justin.  I really hope Brian does the right thing and doesn't hold back in offering Justin the available position just because he wants his one off.   Great fic.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2014 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 20

This is an wonderful story, full of plot.

I like how the characters are developing.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2014 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just thought I would read the first chapter of this fic to see what I have waiting for me.  I had every intention of catching up with a few other fics before I started this one, but now I've started I don't want to stop.:D  I went to your other site and it looks like you have more series and fics for us once you have published this.  It's nice that you haven't tried to publish them here all at once as it gives the other author's a chance to have their work read and it gives us time to read them instead of just picking a few we have time for.  I really do hope you have every intention of eventually bringing them all to MW. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Glad I got you hooked!

:)

I actually starting posting it here because someone e-mailed me and told me they had read it in one sitting, with its sequel (!!!) over a long week end!  It made me feel like reading a bit of it again, and I thought, "Hey!  This is really pretty good..."

So I thought I would post it on MW and see if it got read.  I like MW because it gives you a readers' count, and comments are pretty easy to make.  The other site my stories are on is fabulous:  they re-beta and post for you, but since people have to comment by e-mail and there is no readers' count, you never know if more than a handful of people are reading them.  I am planning on putting all my QAF here, 5 chapters at a time...  Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: QaFfangirl (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2014 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 20

I loved the story  but I'm confused as it is marked complete and the story doesn't seem to actually be complete.  I hope this is not the actual end.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story.  It actually has 35 chapter .  It is complete, and I am loading it 5 chapters at a time (10 more to go after today!)  I just didn't want people to think it was an unfinished WIP.  So many of them get abandonned that I have a hard time motivating myself into starting them... This is not a WIP, it's a PIP:  Posting in progress, I guess...;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 20

Well, Brian had a busy week.  Nice that he cared enough to check up on Justin's lawyer.  Love Bob's pholosiphy on gays.  Why else would God have given men a prostate.  LOL.  Deb will definately appreciate that one.  What would he have done if Justin had accepted his offer to stay at his place.  lol.  Now Kinney lived up to his nickname of god when he sent everyone home.  Lovely.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 19

Well this is a day Justin will long remember.  How OC of Brian to take someone to his special club and refuse offers.  I think things have gotten to a point where hopefully Brian will follow through.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 18

Love the part where Alan has the check written out and tells her that no, it's not for Little Justin, even though it is.  LOL.  Everybody seems to agree, except for Sarah, who doesn't know anything - read dumb blonde- that the painting is magnificant.  If Justin's new agent had been there it most probably would have sold for $30,000.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 17

Justin is one lucky bastard.  First he sells one of his paintings to Plexus, then Sam's brother-in-law agrees to represent him, on top of that Jason's mother agrees to be his attorney.  All top of the line people.  I have a feeling we are all going to love Jessica and what she does for Justin.  I notice that Justin never did answer Brian on were he was showing his paintings.  Won't that be a surprise.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 16

Brian can buy me gifts any time.  The thing I see here is that he bought something for Justin even though he has no intention of giving anything to him.  Also while he could have taken unfair advantage of Justin he didn't.  Brian's got it bad!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2014 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi there!!!

I love your stories! I think I read all of them except harry potter ones. and I don't know how many times I read in his kiss and together, such wonderful stories. They are in the pantheon of the best B/J stories of all time, classics!!!!!! Where do I start? The details about the advertizing world and campaigns (you either work in it or researched it, which is amazing), all the characters, just magnificent!!!!

A Brian who is not a caricature, a Justin who is not a victim. A love story more beautiful than the one in the show.

I heard you wrote a RPS but I never found it. You shouldn't keep this one to yourself, think of all you readers (me! me! me!), who would love to read it.

You are really talented!!!! Thank you so much for your stories, the pleasure I had reading them, the sleepless night before school, the silly smiles on my face in the train, making people think I was weird etc.

Merci beaucoup!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Hi.

About the RPS.  I felt a little weird about writing about real people, so I actually did not post it.  It's only about 1/3 done anyway...  If you really want to read it, (and I do like it a lot, BTW), you can give me an e-mail to send it to, and I will be glad to share what I have with you.  :)

Thank you for your comment.

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well, I'm pretty sure there are a lot readers out there like me - as former eastern european person I discovered QAF only 2 years ago, fell hard in love and searched frantically the web for fanfictions...
I love your alternate universe, your Brian - he makes so much sense - I never understood Brian's character in the show, he was supposed to be smart and intelligent...
Anyway, I'm looking forward for your new qaf fiction :)
Sorry for my clumsy english :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2014 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 15

I can't tell you how many times I have read this story. I remember years ago running across the first chapters and frantically searching the web for the others. It is an classic.

Thanks again for writing it.
Sandra:)

Author's Response:

Thanks for that nice comment.  It's cool to be considered a classic by someone!  I always thought of XiXiXi and her group as the "Classic" QAF writers, and as far as I know, they have never read my stories, so I've always considered myself on the fringe of the fandom.  It's nice to know there are people who feel this story has actually been a positive addition to the qaf world!

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2014 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 15

I reallly like this story.  I like how there is a lot of detail about the campaigns, it makes it more realistic.  And I like the long build up between Justin and Brian.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I did soooo much researchon advertizing and on NY city for this story, it's good it's appreciated!  And I almost always prefer both writing and reading "Slow burn" stories, where things happen over time.  So I'm right there with you with the long built up!

 

  (I wrote a Harry Potter  fanfic where it takes Harry and Snape 98 chapters  (192000 words or so) to get together.  Bwa hahahahaha!!!)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2014 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 15

At least they're talking to each other.  Love the bit about everyone having to undress while they shoot Drew.  LOL.



Author's Response:

I had fun imagining that scene, with Brian all casual about going around with a boner, while nobody knows where to look.  :)  Hang in there!  they're getting closer!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2014 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 14

Does Brian honestly think once he has Justin he can let him go?  I doubt it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2014 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 13

Somehow I think Brian is going to show.  And Justin thought this past week was a week in hell? 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 12

Do you think anyone is noticing how Brian is always finding stuff for Justin to bring or do at the office?  Brian seems to be into blonds now, more than before.  He also seems to be getting more considerate of his tricks.  Could that be Justin's influence?  I can't wait to see what happens during Christmas, because surely Justin will be in the Pitts too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 11

I adore the fact that when Justin has a problem he calls Daphne.  Even if she does laugh at him.  Brian is going out of his way to find things for Justin to do in the office, it seems to me.  How nice that Mr. Curry offered Justin to use his treadmill.  None of my bosses were ever that nice.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 10

Brian has got it bad.  Justin is probably embarressed, coming like that just from kissing. 

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2014 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love this story. I have read it on another site as well as Together. You are a wonderful writer. They are both spectacular stories. Just thought I would say this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for saying it!  You are very kind.  I just re-read IHK myself, and thought, that's pretty good!  I should put it on MW and see how many people will read it.  (I love that about this site:  You can actually see how many people look at the story!)  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love how you wove all the characters into this chapter and kept them true to the series.  Except maybe Brandon.  So he's really a ballarina?  How cool.  And evidently he's fallen under Justin's spell like someone else we know.  I gather that Justin still doesn't know that Gus' father is 'his' Brian.  lol.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 15

I have read all your stories that are on the Tribe website, after Tagsit gave you a shout out. They are just wonderful. I love the cat and mousiness of this one. The delayed gratification is amusing and very satisfying.

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

I just re read this beautiful story 2 days ago - it's one of my favorites (with Together, of course).
And I do envy a little  those who will read it for the first time :)



Author's Response:

I just got an e-mail from someone who had read the whole thing (IHK+Together!) in one go, and I re-read the first chapter of IHK just for grins and thought "This is really good!"  :)

So I decided to post it here, thinking perhaps there were a few people out there who might enjoy it.  I am glad you did.  I enjoy having things posted on mags-nificent because they do such a good job, but you never know how many people read what you have there, and only get a handful of comments.  It's nice to get a readers' count, and it's fun to see what people who are discovering the story have to say!

I actually have a new QAF 1/3 written, but have not worked on it for a long time.  I got sucked back into HP fanfiction, and have discovered a couple other fandoms that have really inspired me, so...  I'm not sure when I'll have a new QAF, but I would never say never...

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2014 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 8

I was glad to see your note about more chapters, as I could not see how this would wrap up in Chapter 8.

This is an interesting take on the B/J show.

Thank you for posting.

Reviewer: jax (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2014 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great story! I like this story but you really shouldn't list it as complete until you uploaded all of the chapters because it is confusing. Can't wait for an update

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

Aww, Brian's going to be at the White Party while Justins in the Pitts.  That means they don't meet up in Pittsburgh until Christmas.  Does Sam eventually tell Brian who came up with the idea's for Body by Design?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 7

Love how Justin gets so caught up in his work.  Four campaigns?  And Brian's going with them all.  Not surprising.  Sam's going to be blown away when he see's Justin's paintings I'll bet. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 6

I was right!!!  It is Emmett.  Ben may be one of Daphne's professors, but he can't be too smart if he's devoted to Mikey.  So Justin's visiting Pitts.  Will Brian show up?  Is Gus in this too?  Loving this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

The new roommate has got to be Emmett.  I always thought he and Daphne would get along great.  Love how you took one of the episodes and with a few tweeks included into this chapter.  Great stuff.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

It has got to be fate, those two running into each other at every turn and Justin is so on to him.  His catching and pointing out the reasons that Brian wasn't going to hire him is terriffic.  Now to see what you have planned next.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 3

Like how you divurge from show yet keep some things the same.  Brian is making a mistake in reminding Justin that he's a bastard, it only reinforces Justin in not taking a chance. Love seeing Daphne.  Justin is soooo lucky.  Nice place and neat roommates!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 2

Who would have thought that the Justin Taylors Brian googled were the same guy.  Glad to see that the gang is in this story.  Doubly glad to see that the bartenders at Essengy(love the name) are looking out for Justin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love this.  It's plausable and appears that Justin and Brian have never met.  Meeting Chaz was a good thing and I look forward to the future chapters.  So Brian lives in New York?



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying this.  Brian does live in NY.  He never met Justine in the Pitts, and moved when he almost does in QAF canon, so he is 34, the age he is at the end of the series, older, more ready to open his heart than 29 YO Brian.  There are 35 chapters to IHK.  I'll be posting them fairly fast, they are pretty short.  I like reading about 7-10000 words updates myself, it gives one a better chance to really get in the story!  Hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

My heart Is smiling from here to Tallahassee seeing this posted on MW. I can't tell you how many times I've read and enjoyed this story and it's sequel. But for those who are just experiencing it for the first time are in for a real treat. ;)

Author's Response:

I just got an e-mail from someone who had read the whole thing (IHK+Together!) in one go, and I re-read the first chapter of IHK just for grins and thought "This is really good!"  :)

So I decided to post it here, thinking perhaps there were a few people out there who might enjoy it.  I am glad you did.  I enjoy having things posted on mags-nificent because they do such a good job, but you never know how many people read what you have there, and only get a handful of comments.  It's nice to get a readers' count, and it's fun to see what people who are discovering the story have to say!

I actually have a new QAF 1/3 written, but have not worked on it for a long time.  I got sucked back into HP fanfiction, and have discovered a couple other fandoms that have really inspired me, so...  I'm not sure when I'll have a new QAF, but I would never say never...

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 8

I found this story on another site and have read it at least 3 times. So glad to see it posted here. Readers here will love it. Hope to see more.

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

I LOVE this story SO much!

Thank you for posting it here!

Reviewer: D (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2014 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

I've read and loved all of your stories back on mags-nificent. In His Kiss and its sequel are two of my favorite QaF stories. I'm glad to see them being reposted over here and I'll keep my fingers crossed that we'll see something new from you!



Author's Response:

My first review on MW!

I just got an e-mail from someone who had read the whole thing (IHK+Together!) in one go, and I re-read the first chapter of IHK just for grins and thought "This is really good!"  :)

So I decided to post it here, thinking perhaps there were a few people out there who might enjoy it.  I am glad you did.  I enjoy having things posted on mags-nificent because they do such a good job, but you never know how many people read what you have there, and only get a handful of comments.  It's nice to get a readers' count, and it's fun to see what people who are discovering the story have to say!

I actually have a new QAF 1/3 written, but have not worked on it for a long time.  I got sucked back into HP fanfiction, and have discovered a couple other fandoms that have really inspired me, so...  I'm not sure when I'll have a new QAF, but I would never say never...

Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2014 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really like this story and have read many times. I am glad you have started posting it here and look forward to you adding more chapters as you stated. You are one of my favorite authors, too. :)



Author's Response:

"You are one of my favorite authors, too. :)"  *grins*  Thankyou!

I just got an e-mail from someone who had read the whole thing (IHK+Together!) in one go, and I re-read the first chapter of IHK just for grins and thought "This is really good!"  :)

So I decided to post it here, thinking perhaps there were a few people out there who might enjoy it.  I am glad you did.  I enjoy having things posted on mags-nificent because they do such a good job, but you never know how many people read what you have there, and only get a handful of comments.  It's nice to get a readers' count, and it's fun to see what people who are discovering the story have to say!

I actually have a new QAF 1/3 written, but have not worked on it for a long time.  I got sucked back into HP fanfiction, and have discovered a couple other fandoms that have really inspired me, so...  I'm not sure when I'll have a new QAF, but I would never say never...

Reviewer: debbie (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2014 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

The end stated 35 chapters but I only read 8.

Loved the story. Was waiting to have Brian and Justin finally have sex together but did not happen.

Hope you add the rest of the chapters.

Please, keep on writing.

 

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