Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2014 11:19 PM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Big surprise ending-
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2014 06:45 AM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Stanley is going to even more places and Gus will be jealous when Stanley gets the first picture with his new sister. Very cute story you need to continue it.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2014 01:19 AM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
I loved this story so much that I read it twice! Once when you first posted it and then again the day the challenge closed. Picturing Brian with a flat Stanley had me chuckling all the way through. Poor Justin is a saint for having to tolerate a nicotine deprived Brian. I hope you do a follow up....even if it is just about the trip with them going to Vietnam to pick up their daughter. Flat Stanley goes to Vietnam.... :P
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 07:30 PM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Great story. Very well written. Love, laughs and hot sex, just perfect for them.
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 04:41 AM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Thanks, I enjoyed the story. Losing one’s luggage happened to me, and boy, it is not funny. I took a trip to Santiago Chile, and of course, I arrived fine, but my luggage didn’t. It did arrive only few hours before I was taking a car service to a ship that was going around South America.
Again, thanks for the story and taking us on a trip to Singapore.
DavidR
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2014 06:46 AM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
That ended well!
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 01:56 PM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Wow what a great trip! You managed to fit so so much in one chapter! I loved learning about the food and the culture in Singapore, and you included so many details right down to their efficient public transportation system. While reading, I immediately thought that paper Stanley was adorable, and I laughed when Brian was like: I am not taking my PRADA loafers off to go in a temple. Bahaha! The surprise of the adoption at the end was so sweet and definately caught me off guard. I'm surprised you didn't make this destination fic about them in Vietnam while adopting their daughter. That would have been a good fic too!
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 01:45 PM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Gus is going to be amazed at all the pics they took of Stanley. But the part of them adopting a daughter blew me away. |You have to do a family gathering to introduce her. Great fic.
Author's Response: I may try to expand on this after I finish my other WIP. Glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 07:20 AM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
What an amazing trip. Wish I could afford to travel like that. Love Flat Stanley. Then to find out they are there to pick up their new daughter! Fantastic.
Author's Response: thanks, so pleased you enjoyed it. My sister lives in Singapore and I get to use my miles for work- which is the only reason I've been, but it's a fantastic place to go.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2014 02:58 AM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Oh that was wonderful. Nicotine deprived Brian, so whiney. Justin taking control, hot. Stopping in the way home to pick up their daughter...needs a sequeal just to introduce her to the family.
Author's Response: I might do a sequel after I finish my current WIP. Thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2014 04:06 PM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Whoa...I totally didn't see the adoption angle coming. Very interesting and worthwhile adventure ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. I was trying to be cryptic so I'm glad I seem to have pulled it off.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2014 12:39 PM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
Very nice. Justin certainly knows how to handle Brian. Love a follow up story of their new life with their new daughter.
Author's Response: I need to finish my other WIP but I may do a follow up. Thanks for the comment. So happy you enjoyed.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2014 10:53 AM · On: Changi me...Changi me not
What a great idea to take a flat Stanley on vacation to photograph him in front of the tourist attractions. I only heard about these paper characters last year when my friend BigPaw (Lori) hosted a few. It's a great way for kids to learn about other countries or even their own. Brilliant idea to have this in your fic.
I think we can all relate to the lost bag situation. Recently due to the plane running late my partners bag missed a connecting flight and then they placed it on the next flight only for that to be hit by lightning. LOL Diet coke/coke light, driving on the other side of the road which makes you feel ill or frightened; your fic has all the things you notice without even trying to when you are in another country.
I am hoping to visit Singapore sometime in the next two years. I will need to revisit this fic and note the places mentioned. :D
I love how Justin handles Brian and his moods. Great job and good luck with the challenge.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Luckily I had just been in March so the places were still fresh in my mind. It was a great vacation and we were lucky enough to get the local tour since my sister lives there.
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