Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2019 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 6 Brazil, Bungalow #3, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 9, 2014, 7:35 a.m.
good one
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2014 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 6 Brazil, Bungalow #3, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 9, 2014, 7:35 a.m.
Great story. Great sex. Loved all the pictures.
Maybe you could do a sequel about finding the surrogate and having Justin's twins. Please.
Author's Response: Hi Lorie, thank you!
I'm very glad you enjoyed of my adventure in the jungle.
I can imagine a sequel to this story, but for now I believe it takes a while so I can write it.
Thank you for reading my story and comment.
A big hug and take care of yourself well, my dear.
Fatima
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 09:15 PM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
Whao, the pictures are so great, I want to go in Brezil :D
great chapter, thank you
~alois~
Author's Response: Hi Allois!
I ask a thousand apologies for not taking answer your comment before. I still do not know how I had not seen before.
My country is very beautiful, just like your, and I'm sure you'd love to meet you. I dream to see Paris.
There is a great link from Brazil to France. Did you know that Rio de Janeiro initially belonged to the French before they were expelled by the Portuguese. If this had not happened, now I do speak French and not Portuguese: D
Thank you, my dear. I hope you enjoy the story and the journey.
A big hug from Brasil! Fátima.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 Brazil, Bungalow #3, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 9, 2014, 7:35 a.m.
Hey Fatima
The wildlife, the pink dolphins and the water phenomenon, are all amazing.
When you wrote "Brian turns the camera toward his beautiful husband" I thought you were going to write Brian turned the camera and took a selfie. LOL
I'm glad they didn't go on the night trip, but I would have liked to see the picture if you could find any. Brian is on to Justin just like Justin is on to him.
Thanks my friend, I enjoy this Brazilian adventure.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank Flossee!
I laughed too much imagining Brian taking a self. I think if he had done that, Justin would make sure that the bright sun had destroyed all the neurons Brian's brain (I loved how it was written in English).
I have some pictures of fishermen catching alligators (they are young) to take the boats close to the tourists. I will seek them out and send to your email as soon as I find them.
Brian will always be for me the perfect match for Justin and Justin will always be the perfect match for Brian.
Thank you for accompanying me on this trip in Brazil.
A big hug, my friend.
Cheers :)
Fatima.
PS: I'm writing my answer from another review again because the translation is wrong.
"You are very kind.'m Very glad you're enjoying my adventure in the forest."
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 01:32 PM · On: Chapter Five: Brazil, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 16:25
Hey Fatima
"When the sun begins to paint the sky with spectacular colors" wow, you weren't kidding. The pictures are amazing. The ones of their resort also look great.
You have balanced this fic well Fatima and it is great to be able to see these wonderful things.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank Flossee!
You're very kind. I'm very glad you're gostanddo of my adventure in the forest.
Hugs, my dear.
Fátima.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2014 11:57 AM · On: Chapter Four: Brazil, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 10:36 am.
Hi Fatima
A jealous Brian, then a jealous Justin; set in such beautiful surroundings with such vibrant colours. NICE. :D I'm glad Brian loosened up a bit even if he is thinking of a naked Justin in a more familiar type of setting. LOL
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Hello Flossee!
Brian is starting to enjoy the adventure.
Justin naked anywhere certainly is for Brian a great incentive he look on the bright side of any situation.
Nor can we forget the ten daily blowjobs, doing our dear Brian a very happy adventurer:)
Hugs and health.
Fátima.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2014 11:49 AM · On: Chapter Three: West Virginia, USA, Britin, February 15, 2014, 6:45 p.m.
Hi Fatima
What a beautiful country you live in. I love the pictures and I can't believe the size of those Lilly pads. At least that's what I think they are called.
Justin sure knows how to get what he wants. LOL I love that Brian was willing to negotiate, but ten daily blowjobs; WHAT!!!
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Hello Flossee!
I'm very glad you like my country.
Here in Brazil we call them "vitória régia". They were named by the British thus in honor of Queen Victoria of England because it was a German botanist in the service of the British Crown who made the first record of these plants and their seeds led to the gardens of Buckingham Palace. Its leaves are able to support up to 40 pounds on its surface, if it is well distributed.
You're right, Justin knows exactly how to get what you want from Brian.
A big hug!
Fátima
Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 Brazil, Bungalow #3, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 9, 2014, 7:35 a.m.
Thank you for this wonderful story! I liked it so much! :) Honestly, I feel a little sad, because it came to the end. But each story has its ending – anyway. So I just glad that Brian and Justin are happy for now.
I didn't expect that Brian would agree with Justin regarding a child so fast. It is a very good idea to show his love in this way. It seems he is ready to do everything to make Justin happy. What could be more amazing? :)
The last chapter was so long! I enjoyed it very much – especially Brian and Justin's conversations. You managed to describe it very well. I was glad seeing Justin had refused his 'snakes and alligators' idea. It would be really dangerous and reckless. Actually, I thought that Brian would have to convince Justin for a long time – maybe, even with conflicts. To tell the truth, I anticipated to see some exhausting struggle between them :)
I liked photos and all this useful information you gave. The legend was a very interesting one. I have never heard it before. Such fairy-tales are really charming and beautiful. I always enjoy reading something like that.
Thank you once again! I'm going to re-read this story a few more times :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, my dear, for all your wonderful comments.
I was also sad because the story is over, but this is just the beginning of other stories that could come.
When I had the idea of this story, I wanted her to finish with a promise of a happy future them for and the idea of a child, for me, is a great hope of happiness. The idea was also to be of the Brian, I wish it was he who made r03;r03;the proposal that he and Justin have to create a baby. I wanted to demonstrate how Brian is ready to be happy next to Justin.
I wanted to write a happy story. I did not want conflicts and crises. Of course they will never fully agree with everything the other wants, but are ready to listen to the other and seek to make both happy. That's the attitude of a couple who really love.
I'm glad you liked the photos and all the information. Legend of the Boto is just one among many other of my country. Brazilian culture is very rich because she received the influence of indigenous, African and European and it causes us to have many interesting stories like that.
You made r03;r03;me very happy to let me know you liked my story that way. Thank you, Fatima.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2014 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 Brazil, Bungalow #3, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 9, 2014, 7:35 a.m.
This was the most joyous trip I have ever taken in your eyes. With the pics it made it more enjoyable. I'm happy Brian will be giving Justin the chance to have his own child. Great fic.
Jane
Author's Response:
Thank you, Jane!
I'm so glad you liked the story. I wanted a happy story where the boys share their love and commit themselves more and more. I wanted them to be very happy in my country, without crises and conflicts going on between them. That was my intention, and I believe I succeeded.
Thank you again, my dear, for all your wonderful comments. A big hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2014 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 Brazil, Bungalow #3, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 9, 2014, 7:35 a.m.
This is not the end, only the beginning of a whole new story! I loved this trip to the Amazon. The pictures set this tale off perfectly, the writing taking us there without having to leave our computers. Brian learned a lot on this trip and loves his Sunshine enough to make him very happy. Good job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend!
I'm very glad you liked my story, and accompanied me on this trip with the boys. Your comments always make me very happy. Thank you for that.
You are right. This is not the end, is just the beginning of a new life full of love between Brian and Justin, because that's how I imagine them living today.
Thanks again. A big hug. Fatima.
Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2014 02:35 PM · On: Chapter Five: Brazil, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 16:25
Thank you very much! This chapter was very warm, so I got a lot of pleasure from it :)
I'm so glad that Brian and Justin finally enjoy their vacations together – without any complaints and doubts. I suspect it wasn't easy for Brian to admit his mistake and see his own happiness in Justin's one. But he dealt with it – that proves his deepest love to Justin and endlessly pleases me :) Really, I always feel so good when I know that they share their feelings and emotions, make each other stronger. Honestly, I didn't think that Justin would offer Brian to leave. It was very difficult decision – both for Justin's desires and their relationship in general. And I believe the solving they found is the best thing that could be.
Oh, it seems all Brian and Justin's friends have babies :) I was both surprised and glad to see it. And Justin's love to kids isn't difficult thing to notice. Kauê and Taynah are described very alive. And Rudah on Brian's shoulders is something absolutely charming :) I liked it!
Thank you once again! I'm very looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I was so happy with your comment.
Brian left the bad mood away and from now will enjoy this moment with Justin. Justin would give up their dream because of the frustration of Brian and Justin wanted a happy moment for both and not just for him.
Good to know I'm getting through the story the love and complicity that exists between the two.
It's nine years from the end of the show and the other boys are also happy and have their families.
I'm glad you like the hot scenes. It's Brian and Justin and they are very warm ourselves.
I am very happy that you like Kauê of Taynah and Rudah.
A hug, my dear!
Fátima.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 03:08 PM · On: Chapter Five: Brazil, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 16:25
I was shocked that not only have Brian and Justin married and lived in bliss, but all of their friends. And they all have children? This sounds like there should be more story than this Brazilian vacation. ;)
Author's Response:
It's nine years after the end of the show and then I think of all that life has undergone many changes and I think everyone would have a family moment. And you're right has many stories behind this trip to Brazil.
A hug big. Fátima.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 02:58 PM · On: Chapter Four: Brazil, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 10:36 am.
Those pictures made me forget all about the humidity. Gorgeous!
That tree was amazing and the perfect spot for Brain to take advantage of.
Author's Response: The landscape is really impressive. We can always count on the creativity of Brian to show Justin how to seize every opportunity.
A big hug. Fátima.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 02:45 PM · On: Chapter Three: West Virginia, USA, Britin, February 15, 2014, 6:45 p.m.
I loved how they could discuss things while having sex. I also love that they have been married 5 years..
Author's Response: Thank you! I also loved writing it. We use to thinking that the boys know only communicate from sex, I wanted to show that after all this time together they have developed new forms of language.
A big hug! Fátima.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 02:33 PM · On: Chapter Two Brazil, 3 Bungalow Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 7:28 a.m.
The closest I've gotten to a Brazilian rainforest was the zoo and the humidity alone drove me crazy. It was beautiful but it must be pure love for Brian to have followed Justin out there.
Author's Response: I know it's uncomfortable at first, but after a few days we adapt and we can take advantage of all its beauty.
I agree with you that Brian loves much Justin to join him in this adventure. Throughout history, Brian will give ample proof of your love for Justin .
A big hug! Fátima.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 10:25 AM · On: Chapter Five: Brazil, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 16:25
I'm glad Brian knows what he's got in Justin. Being in a hammock together sounded romantic. Great update.
Author's Response: Hello, Jane!
Thank you for your kind comment. It's very romantic to sleep in a hammock with someone you love. You are very close to each other, really. Also it is very comfortable and relaxing. If you've never tried it, try it! You'll like it. Hugs!
Fátima.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 10:11 AM · On: Chapter Four: Brazil, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 10:36 am.
Now that was HOT sex in a hole in a tree. A little jealous brian can go a long way. Great update.
Author's Response:
Hello, Jane!
Sorry I missed this comment and did not reply before. I'm glad you liked the sex in hole the tree, is my favorite part of the story. When I had the idea to write this story was the first scene that I imagined. I was very happy when she was ready.
Thank you for your comment. Hugs. Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 07:09 AM · On: Chapter Five: Brazil, Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 16:25
I'm enjoying this little trip to the rainforest and seeing how well Justin gets along with everyone. Brian seems to enjoy that as well. Sleeping in a hamock lulled by the breeze, what more could they want?
Author's Response: Hello, my friend!
I'm very glad you're enjoying the trip. It really is very relaxing sleep in a hammock. It's much better when you're next to the one you love. Who has not experienced should do it. I recommend!
Hugs, my friend!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2014 10:43 AM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
Hi Fatima,
I haven't read all chapters yet, but already love it from the title and the gorgeous images of your country! It's wonderful that you posted many pics, it's like in a movie, having both the sight and the story, and what about the detailed descritions, love everything!
Fran K
Author's Response: Hello my friend, Fran!
I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. I know how you like my country and am happy to give you a little insight into the natural and cultural Brazilian beauty.
Hugs, my dear!
Fátima.
Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2014 12:34 PM · On: Chapter Four: Brazil, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 10:36 am.
It was so detailed and intense! I just couldn't help but smile reading this wonderful chapter :) You managed to create such a wonderful atmosphere! It seems I could see all the landscapes with my own eyes. And I very liked the photos - so useful thing in order to imagine everything exactly :) I was impressed by them very much.
Brian and Justin's feelings are described very skilfully – so subtly and brightly. It was very interesting to see the differences in their thoughts concerning the same situation. Brian is really happy seeing that Justin's dream comes true – what can be better at all :) I always in love with such moments in their relationship.
I like the way you described each member of the tour. Honestly, I didn't suspect that it would be so interesting. Everything was very thoughtful and detailed. And persistent – but tactful – guide made me smile a few times :) I was pleasantly surprised that Justin met the admirers of his talent. And Brian's work contacts are successfully managed as well. To my mind, he has no reason to complain – even despite the problems with his clothes :)
Justin's jealousy because of Brian's excessive attention to the tree made me laugh so much! I can imagine Justin's surprise :) And Brian's idea was so unusual - but undoubtedly, charming. Anyway, I was sure Justin would agree to try something new :)
Interesting, what will happen next? I'm so looking forward for more :)
Author's Response: Oh, my dear!
Your wonderful comments make me so happy!
Images are big part of the story and all were selected with a purpose. I'm very glad you like them. Some are from the personal archives of a biologist friend who was actually in the Amazon region. I was inspired to write Matteo in this friend.
I was glad you liked Justin find admirers of his work (he now is famous) and Brian got some contacts for Kinnetik.
Justin is gorgeous and her unusual biotype in the Amazon region, so it draws a lot of attention from everyone. David Tapajó is a keen admirer of Sunshine.
As for Justin get jealous by Brian give more attention to a tree than to him, we can all understand it.
A big hug, my dear.
Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2014 03:20 AM · On: Chapter Four: Brazil, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 10:36 am.
Justin must be in heaven. The fantastic colors all around in the fauna and animals. Brian seems to have his fellow tourist pegged.
Author's Response:
I agree with you, my friend! Justin is thrilled with all the variety of colors, scenery and lush forest. For him as an artist, is an unparalleled experience.
I believe that Brian is well with all of this, to see the happiness of her husband making that dream.
A big hug, my friend!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Frayach (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2014 03:15 AM · On: Chapter Four: Brazil, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 10:36 am.
A very timely story! I've been watching the World Cup; yesterday there was a really interesting television program on Manaus and the Amazon in general. It was really interesting. I've now decided Brazil is my next vacation destination :) I love cranky, insect-bitten Brian - and of course the beautiful photos! Very cool!
Author's Response: Oh, Fray! It makes me so happy! You'll love my country. There is great cultural diversity, the landscapes are lush and have so many amazing things here that would take a long time to really know. Moreover, the Brazilian is a very welcoming people and despite our immense problems, we are very happy and receptive to everyone in general. If you intend to come to Rio de Janeiro, I can offer you some suggestions on how to have fun here. Please contact me by LJ (fatimak7.livejournal.com).
Brian will begin to relax and better take advantage of the holidays. But all that is happening is a result of his great stubbornness. Poor Brian, the stings of these insects are very painful and he is really suffering, but Justin will help him soon.
A big hug, my dear!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 03:19 PM · On: Chapter Three: West Virginia, USA, Britin, February 15, 2014, 6:45 p.m.
Thank you very much for this interesting chapter! :) It is so exciting and charming – just beautiful :)
I very wanted to see how Justin had managed to convince Brian. I can imagine how much patience and strength was necessary to do it. I liked your description of each stage of this 'operation'. It was very deep and clever. Justin definitely knows Brian's temper very well. So he can and use these knowledge successfully. And it seems Brian doesn't mind, too :)
Their agreement is a really good thing to do. Milan shopping made me smile a few times – it is so like Brian :) You described him very authentically. And Justin is just amazing :) All these details in their behaviour make your work really bright and alive. I enjoyed it so much!
Thank you once again! Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Wow, Aliada! Much and thank you!
Your comment made r03;r03;me so happy :)
Justin has a lot of experience dealing with Brian and knows how to use his knowledge.
You were so kind to write his words so awesome about my story. I can only thank you very much for that.
I appreciate the comments and every incentive to this story.
A big hug, my dear!
Fatima.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 01:14 PM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
I loved the facts about Brazil as much as the pictures and the story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 01:14 PM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
I loved the facts about Brazil as much as the pictures and the story.
Author's Response: Hello, my friend!
I'm very glad you're enjoying the facts and figures of my country.
And I'm even more glad you're enjoying my story.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2014 07:15 AM · On: Chapter Three: West Virginia, USA, Britin, February 15, 2014, 6:45 p.m.
Was there any doubt that Justin would get his way? I think not. Looking forward to more on how Brian copes with the problems he comes across. Justin will make sure that Brian is well taken care of in the sex department, I'm sure.
Author's Response: Hello, my friend!
Justin knows what he's doing. But do not worry, Brian will relax and begin to enjoy this time with your Sunshine.
And as for the sex ... Well, it's Brian and Justin are we dealing with here, so ...
Thank you my friend for all the the comments and encouragement.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2014 07:00 AM · On: Chapter Three: West Virginia, USA, Britin, February 15, 2014, 6:45 p.m.
I'm glad Justin got Brian to go but I wonder if Brian knew what he was getting into? Justin sure knows how to get Brian to change his mind. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you Jane, for commenting!
Justin certainly knows how to get Brian and get what he wants. He has many years of practice.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2014 03:30 AM · On: Chapter Three: West Virginia, USA, Britin, February 15, 2014, 6:45 p.m.
Didn't really know what he was getting into did he? What a sucker for the man he loves. Justin didn't play fair. Loved it.
Author's Response: Poor Brian. He has no chance against Justin very determined to achieve your goal. But I think Brian does not have much to complain about because he always takes advantage of the great ideas of Justin.
I'm glad you're enjoying it.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 09:25 PM · On: Chapter Two Brazil, 3 Bungalow Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 7:28 a.m.
It is such a wonderful, unusual story! :) Thank you for it! I've never read something like that. Brian and Justin's travelling is really good idea to implement. I really liked it :)
Your landscapes are very beautiful. They are so alive and charming :) It is really difficult to find such a good description.
As for Brian and Justin's relationship, they are incredible! I can see so much love and care between them :) I enjoyed every line of it.
Brian's irritation regarding their tour made me smile a few times :) And I just couldn't help but laugh when Justin started reading the rules to prove his point of view :) I can imagine Brian's impatience because of it. But I agree that it is definitely his fault. On the other hand, it would be a little strange if he agreed to wear any unfashionable clothes – even for his own comfort :) I have a feeling it is going to be difficult for him to keep calm during their tour. But hopefully, Justin will help him :)
Interesting, what will happen next? Anyway, I think it'll be unforgettable vacation for both of them :) Thank you once again! Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Hello, my dear, I was so happy with your comment.
It is very nice to know you like my story and think so differently. I was very happy to know your opinion.
I wanted to write a story of holiday where the boys enjoy their love and complicity, but without ceasing to be Brian and Justin we love.
There will still be plenty of adventure and stunning scenery waiting for our boys.
A big hug, my dear!
Fatima.
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 02:01 PM · On: Chapter Two Brazil, 3 Bungalow Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 7:28 a.m.
It's too bad Brain couldn't take Justin's advice for exploring the rainforest and now he is suffering, lol. Hopefully they'll soon get to do something really fun, like hold a baby sloth (lol, always wanted to do that) maybe that will cheer Brian up! I mean after all: you can't spend the ENTIRE vacation getting blow jobs! haha.
Author's Response: I think winning blowjobs and make a lot of sex is the script perfect vacation for Brian. But soon he will begin to enjoy the journey.
I love sloths and think your beautiful babies. You can wait until the boys came into contact with many cuddly critters and there will be many pictures.
Thank you for your comment.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 01:24 PM · On: Chapter Two Brazil, 3 Bungalow Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 7:28 a.m.
Wow, Brian sure whines a lot, he must be taking lessons from Michael. LOL I hope to hear about the beautiful sites of the Amazon maybe through Justin's eyes as I think Brian might be limited with what he is seeing. I wouldn't mind some more images too.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Hello my dear!
Poor Brian. He is out of his element and being devoured by mosquitoes, then it can be bad-tempered. But do not worry, the mood will improve.
I'll write more about the forest and there will be more pictures.
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 09:00 AM · On: Chapter Two Brazil, 3 Bungalow Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 7:28 a.m.
Well I guess Brian is not made for the outdoors. Hope he makes it up to Justin for his foul mood.
Author's Response: He is very urban and jungle is not your element.
Justin will be able to find ways to improve your mood.
Thanks for the comment.
A hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 07:55 AM · On: Chapter Two Brazil, 3 Bungalow Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 7:28 a.m.
It's a shame that Brian is not enjoying this more. I have a feeling we'll learn more in the next chapter about how Brian ended up agreeing to this trip.
Author's Response: Brian will begin to enjoy the trip soon. He's just being grumpy and very out of his element, but things will improve.
Thank you my friend for your comment and for following my story.
A big hug!
Fatima
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2014 01:50 AM · On: Chapter Two Brazil, 3 Bungalow Hotel Anavilhanas, Amazon Rainforest, May 8, 2014, 7:28 a.m.
Well after he recuperates from his day in the woods, maybe he'll start enjoying himself and listen to justin.
Vanity, thy name is Brian Kinney.
Author's Response: Jungle trek is something very radical for Brian. He is essentially urban and very vain to forgo being fashionable, even if it is for your good.
But he will recover and start to enjoy the journey with Justin.
Thank you for your comment.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2014 08:56 PM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
Beautiful landscape.
They're so in love I really don't think Brian would mind where they were.
Will there be more?
Author's Response: Hello, my dear!
I also think that Brian does not really matter where it is provided that Justin is with him.
Yes there will be more yet. Thank you for reading and for your comment.
Hugs!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2014 11:01 AM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
Hey Fatima. I love seeing the new challenge fics get published. I don't usually like to many pictures in a fic as I stopped reading picture books many years ago, lol , however I do love them in this challenge as it adds so much more to the story. Brazil looks very beautiful; I'm really happy Justin wanted to see the Amazon. I was stuck at the mechanics all day today so I occupied myself by reading from MW and every time I was reading a hot sex scene I had to cover my screen when people passed by. LOL "the first thing they did was remove their clothing and head into the bathroom" yeap that sounds like what they would do. :D
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Hello Floose!
The Brasill is really a beautiful country with stunning landscapes. The Amazon rainforest is one of the most beautiful regions of the country.
I'm very glad you're enjoying the story and realized that the images are part of the story.
I'm sorry for any embarrassment with the sex scenes, but it is a story with Brian and Justin, so ...
A hug, my friend. Hope you are well.
Fatima.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2014 08:51 AM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
This was a great start. Love the pics you used to describe where they are. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hello Jane!
I'm sorry for being slow to respond, but I was without internet because of the FIFA Football World Cup.
It is very good to know that you are enjoying my story. Soon there will be new images. It is a beautiful region of my country with fantastic scenery.
A big hug, dear!
Fátima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2014 06:38 AM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
Nice to see another well written story from you. Loved how this shows the love of Brian and Justin plus the added bonus of giving us an inside look at the Amazon. Fantastic story and pictures to boot.
Author's Response: Hello, my friend!
I'm sorry for being slow to respond, but I was without internet for a few days.
I'm very glad you enjoyed my story and be watching.
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2014 04:47 AM · On: Chapter One: Brazil, Manaus (capital of the state of Amazonas), May 6, 2014, 4:30 p.m.
Okay well first off, I love your title and the banner.
The sexual chemistry (and the nonsexual as well) that you've created between Brian and Justin as a long-married couple is amazing. I can feel the intimacy, understanding, and familiarity that a decade and a half has built up, yet I can also sense their continuing, youthful attraction to one another. I love how you portrayed Brian with elements of his more promiscuous, sheilded persona from the show years, yet you obviously depicted how he's become more caring with Jusitn as well (as I would hope he'd be after 15 years of marriage).
The descriptions of the scenery were a little lengthy at points but painted a gorgeous picture, and after them I don't even think you needed the pics included because I had such a good mental image. I recently read a gay male author's rant on gay sex scenes in fan fic, so there were two eensy details that had my eyeborw quirked at one point during the shower scene, but the scene was hot and I think you wrote good snippets of dialogue during the sex, which is something I always struggle with.
Brazil seems liek the perfect choice for these two to have some crazy fun, and sex as hell, adventures! I love the setup, now I can't wait to see what situations you put them into!
Author's Response: Thank you, Sarah! I loved your comment.
I always thought Brian would be fully committed to Justin when the two were definitely together and understanding and connection between the two would only grow with time.
I'm very glad you liked the title (I had some doubts about it) and the wonderful banner that Predec did for me.
Photos are gifts to be a vacation and what is a vacation without a photo?
The next chapters will be posted soon.
Hugs!
Fatima.
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