Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Bet
Reviewer: tgrayfic (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2023 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 20

OMG this was so good! I just spent the last couple of hours reading this entire story and I all I can say is that I absolutely loved it. As you said in one of the chapter notes, I definitely don't see canon Brian quite ever being quite this mushy, even for Justin (buying him a house not withstanding)... but in the context of this story it was perfect! Thank you for this!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2019 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 20

Loved this story. Thanks a bunch.

Reviewer: Shell Scott (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2016 09:59 AM · On: Epilogue

amazing

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2016 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this story, it was a really interesting premise and I found myself completely invested in Brian and Justin, as growing and maturing individuals, and in their relationship.  This is one of those special ones which I would happily have read for much, much longer.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 06:21 AM · On: Epilogue

I AM SO SAD THIS IS OVER! I loved it so much. Seriously, amazing! Thank you x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 20

How can you write something SO hot, but also so romantic at the same time?

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 19

He should be proud of himself, look how far he's come aw!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 18

Brian is such a slutbag, I love him, and he's not slept with anyone else omg, I adore this story so effing much!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 17

I want to cuddle Justin please, thank you!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 15

I never want this to end <3

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 14

I knew it, I KNEW not to trust that guy. He is totally spying on Brian and Justin - omg is Aiden involved too? SO MUCH ANGST!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 13

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 12

Jealous Brian is so fucking adorable - and I LOVE them playing out their fantasies.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 11

I'm so emotionally drained from this, but in the best way possible!!! He wants to change for Justin, he just doesn't know how! ahhh!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 10

That was so hot - and I love that after all that hot smut, he calls his baby and I melt!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 8

KInky, I love it.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 7

I think Justin does forgive too easily - not in this, but in general, but he has a good heart, you know? And as shitty as what Brian did, Justin knew he was trying and I think that's what meant the most to him.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

I want to punch Brian in the nuts SO hard, he better have a good explanation. Also, love me some drunken Brian x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 5

Brian is so worried about fucking it up, but he wants it so bad. God, I love this! Eeeep!!!!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 4

Brian SO wants it, he's just scared!!!!!!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is so hot, I can't even deal *hoses self down*

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 2

LOVING THIS! This bet is going to be very interesting indeed :)  Brian at the end - I love how honest he's being with Justin :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

As much as I love original fiction - and I do *and would LOVE to read yours when it's out* I cannot wait for you to continue writing. If you need any ideas I have lots of prompts ;) Seriously though, your writing is like a breath or fresh air and I cannot wait to keep reading. Apologies for the next lot of reviews you will get x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

OOOH! I love where this is going :)

Have you stopped writing for B/J???



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I have not stopped writing QAF fanfic, but I have been on a long hiatus to focus on original stories.  I have a book coming out with dreamspinners press this August and a second novel under review.  Now that the second novel is done, I want to finish The Fall at least.  I'm do for a series rewatch soon and that always inspires my fanfic.  

 

thanks again for all your kind comments.

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2014 11:21 PM · On: Epilogue

I just read this last night and absolutely loved it. I enjoy your Brian so much. I will definitely look into more of your stories! - Anne

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 10:44 AM · On: Epilogue

"I want you safe. I need you around for a long time." He says and tears start rolling down his cheeks."  OMG, Brian thought Justin was doing it raw with other people. 

I'm glad they found an arrangement that suited both of them.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 20

I like the opening line here, where Brian is trying to get Justin's attention; hilarious. 

"Are you ready for me to fuck you raw now?"  Hopefully they at least tried it once with a toppy Justin.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 19

"Botox, eye lift, gym memberships, anti-aging serums"  

'You're So Vain' by Carly Simon - kept repeating in my head as I read this. LOL  Even though he said it was for Justin I'm sure he used these treatments BJ (before Justin). :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 18

Creepy Brian.  Videotaping his conquests, and so many men. 

Brian having vanilla sex; priceless. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 18

Yay, REVIEW #100, Yay

 

WOOT, WOOT

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 17

Oh no, Justin has made a mess of things.  Let's hope Brian can come up with a solution.  Brian must have realized he would have bottomed at some stage on the videos before it was pointed out to him.  Fingers crossed it all works out sooner rather than later.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 15

So the video will take care of Aiden's advances.

"maybe we can leave off the 'fuck off' part" that's hilarious.

Cheers :)    

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 14

Oh, it all becomes clear; Evan is a very naughty man.  It's a pity Justin's new position or work offer now may be at stake.

"Because I'm fucking in love with him" This Brian is really having some OOC moments.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

I admit this did not go where I thought it would.  It looks like Brian has some explaining to do.  I can't wait to see how he gets out of this one.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

I have always loved a jealous Brian. :)

Lover, "I'm just trying it out" Haha

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 11

Well Justin knew the risk.:( I liked the text at the end; bringing hope he may one day get his man.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 10

Evan just shakes Brian's hand.  Haha, that is so funny.  If he just likes watching why is he rubbing himself against Justin?  Curiouser and curiouser.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 9

Evan and Brian in college.  Shouldn't he have called Brian on not celebrating birthdays.   OMG, did Brian turn Evan straight. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 8

Who was at the door?  I love how Justin, ever so politely, tells mystery man to leave. LOL

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 7

"I could taste him on you"  Okay, yuck.  You know my mind doesn't go where other people's might and all I am thinking is.  Yay, when Brian and Justin swap jiz, but when Brian shares someone else's with Justin.  Yuckity, yuck. LOL  Now I need to get that image out of my head so I will read on. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 6

"I remain afraid of not being enough for him. I am both aroused and disappointed by the lengths I was going to" Yay, I like this Justin; he is not a push over even though he may be unsure of himself.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 4

uhoh.  Evidently Brian thinks that the bet being called off means he won.  Just how will Justin take that?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 3

So Justin won!  Why do I feel that there is more?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm kinda surprised he admitted the thing about Justin hair, buy then Justin caught him at it.  So the game is on!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't know - sounds like a win-win situation to me.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

I like Brian giving Justin some private fun time before their public appearance in the backroom.  "I want you to fuck me....raw" I wasn't expecting that.  I know it is in the show, but where you placed it surprised me and I like it when an author can do that.

Cheers :) 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

Well, it seems I should have waited to ask the timeline question as you answer it here. LOL  This is how BK would definitely behave and Justin giving him an out is a clear way of knowing he doesn't want it.  Well done.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow, that was a surprise.  Brian Kinney losing at a sex game.  I love it. :D  Yay, to Justin, for staying strong.  Is this canon?  If so, where does it fit in their non-relationship?  :)

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ha. First I thought Brian is crazy; trying and win the bet when Justin has had, happy fun times, twice already.  Then it seemed like Brian wised up only to have him deviously resort to flattery.  LOL  Oh, this is going to be fun.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey Erin :)

So the game's afoot, or is that, the bet is in place.  I don't think Justin has much at stake here as he gets Brian to himself or he becomes Brian's sex slave.  Oh, maybe it's the reader that is in the win-win situation as I look forward to either scenario. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 12:20 AM · On: Epilogue

I loved, loved, loved this story... I'm all for you continuing this story. I'd love to see them progress in their relationship as a committed couple. But then again I'm all about the love...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

*Hugs*

Reviewer: kathy (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2014 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great Story. I am waiting on a sequel based on Justin saying: ....You wanna bet? in the final chapter.

 

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2014 08:16 PM · On: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this story.  I would love to read a sequel and find out what happens with the boys.

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2014 06:34 PM · On: Epilogue

Thank you for this story, I enjoyed it very much :)

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2014 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 8

Woww hello chapter 8. you were good!

Author's Response:

he he, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: bamamary (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2014 04:19 AM · On: Epilogue

Good story to read.  I do enjoy a more asertive Justin and like a kinder Brian once-in-awhle.

I fyou keep writing, I would love to keep reading.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2014 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love this story

thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it.  Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2014 09:13 AM · On: Epilogue

What a great story .. Loved it.

Reviewer: Silverfish (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2014 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing story! loved it!! What a great idea for a story and a perfect ending for a new beginning !! I hear a sequel calling :-)

Lisa xx



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2014 07:53 AM · On: Epilogue

Very realistic ending. Thanks for writing! Congrats on finishing your first official MW Story. TAG

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2014 01:57 AM · On: Epilogue

Great story.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2014 01:55 AM · On: Epilogue

Following this up would be great. Also, did Justin ever get to top Brian raw? If he did a very long chapter about how it went would be very nice.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2014 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 20

Haha, very clever ending. This was a very entertaining story from beginning to end. And Brian's sitting Justin down to clarify that Monogamy isn't what's truely goign to give them the perfect relationship, was really well-explained, as was Justin's reception of it.

Reviewer: britin4life (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2014 10:55 PM · On: Epilogue

I wanted them to finally only be with eachother! Cause I do believe Brian would be with only Justin cause towards the end of the series he grew up. But I loved the story!

Reviewer: pam (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2014 08:44 PM · On: Epilogue

Enjoyed this story so much, would love a Brian wins the bet story or justin wins and must be justins for the taking any time and any way. That sounds like a fun story!

Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2014 06:33 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved the story, look forward to more of whatever you decide to write!

Reviewer: britin4life (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2014 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 18

I like brian monogamous it's so awesome 

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2014 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 18

really enjoying the story.  love that you oost evrry day.    should be interesting to see how the video pans out.  great way to get back at Evan.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2014 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 18

Holy shit...it's good to know that with everything that's happened, at least Brian has been able to remain monogamous.

Very good chapter my friend...can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2014 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 17

Damn...I hope our boys can find a way to take Evan down.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2014 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 18

Aw, Brian was so cute! He was like, so adorably proud to reveal that he'd been monogamous.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2014 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 17

It was so nice to see Brian being so caring and loving towards Justin, even when he was a pa puking mess. Being that he'd been victimized in the past, I can see how these events would lead him to make some poor decisions.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2014 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 17

Poor Justin. I really hope Brian can figure out how to fix this.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2014 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 15

I loved this chapter. Toppy Justin, hot sex and flustered Brian. Great writing. One question though, how could anyone ever think there was too much sex in a Brian and Justin story.

Author's Response:

I don't know I certainly never would say that.

Reviewer: Ducana (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2014 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Excellent chapter Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

 

 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 15

Another fabulous chapter my friend :) Now that Brian knows about their secret peeping tom, it will be interesting to see how he handles things.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 14

Evan that sick bastard!!! I hope he burns for what he did.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 15

Oh my gosh, Brian saying those things to Aiden in defense of his relationship with Justin was the sweetest thing! But I also like how he didn't say monogamy was important to him. That's not the truth and lies aren't love. Rather, he said that he's doing it because it's what Justin need sfrom him. Like you indicated in your response to my earlier review: Brian knows the differences between how he and Justin handle love and sex. And it looks like he's being thoughtful enough to keep that in mind when it comes to his own impulses.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 15

have read this entire story over the last two days - and am really really loving it - all the things that make Brian be...well...Brian are still there, but there is a tenderness and a willingness to let Justin past the walls that is just enthralling - and I love when Justin stops being the victim and takes his place beside his man, instead of behind him (no pun intended...I love toppy Justin and vulnerable Brian)

add to that the story of the two men who are about to get there due...and this is a great story...well told

thanks for using your obvious talent to entertain us - your stories have really added great reading to MW

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 13

Maybe Evan planted a camera?? BTW: I googled edging. I never had heard that term. Go figure.

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 15

"Oh how I wish that last scene in 2x14 was longer!"

You are not the only one :)

 

I love your story SO much!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15

You want to know hat I think? I need MORE MORE MORE ... sorry ... please * blushes *.

Reviewer: pam (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 15

Every chapter leaves me wanting more. Wonderfully written!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh ! Thank God. I was so scared Brian had let him watch. Great twist.

Reviewer: NENA (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 14

omg, I absolutely love this fic and the pace you're moving with it!

Evan's sick, but for once his sickness did some good.......

waiting impatiently for the next chapter ;-)))

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 14

This is so good thanks.

Ugghhh Evan is sick, but I'm also glad that he did it. Now Justin knows that nothing did happen between Brian and Aiden.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 14

I SO love the story!!!

MORE please!

 

PS. Evan is REALLY sick.

Reviewer: JLW (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 14

Thank goodness! WFT Evan and Aiden! Thank you, Erin!

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 14

How was Evan able to get camera in the loft?



Author's Response:

He sent a virus to hack the webcams so he was able to see into the loft using the camera's already on the computers.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 13

That Damn Even...I knew he was trouble!!!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 14

Thank you. This chapter is a relief after the last one. I wonder what Brian will have to say about Evan's videos.

Author's Response:

You can bet he will not respond well :)

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 13

Please update soon I'm dying to know what happens next 

Reviewer: JLW (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 13

Okay I'll try to stay calm. I wondered if Evan was watching while Justin was blindfolded...hm..guess I'll have to stay tuned. :) I'm hoping nothing happen between Brian and Aidan. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2014 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 13

My stomach is in knots for Justin and how hurt he is, please fix this soon.

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2014 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 13

I'm so angry Brian better not have done that and I hope Justin doesn't make a mistake and sleep with Evan I think he will regret it

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2014 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 12

Have I told you how much I adore this story :) it seems that our boys are trying to settle into their new situation but I have a feeling that Evan has different ideas in mind though.

Author's Response:

It's going to get bumpy shortly but I'm so glad you're liking it so far.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2014 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 12

Brian wants to have his cake and eat it too, hmm? I'm surprised he'd be jealous, when like you said: he himself is so opposed ot monogamy. If he's so good at seperated sex and love for himself, then why doesn't that extend to Justin for him? As for these domineering fantasies, they seem to preoccupy Brian's thoughts a lot. If I was Justin, I'd definately be trying to get more of that! I thought Brian's response of "Shh, I'm just trying it out," at the end was so funny. He is so in love with Justin, and it's simply the best when little things pop out to show how true that is.



Author's Response:

My take at least from the perspective of the story is that this Brian recognizes that Justin is not able to seperate sex/love as he is, which is why Justin being with someone else feels more impactful to their relationship.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2014 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved this chapter. No smut but very insightful.

Reviewer: katie (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2014 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 12

more toppy justin Plleeaaassseee :D



Author's Response:

Your wish is my command, you have to wait out a few chapters but it's coming.



Author's Response:

Your wish is my command, you have to wait out a few chapters but it's coming.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2014 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 11

That text from Brian had my heart melting. That was him reaching out, which is amazing to see since we rarely get to see that from Brian. Maybe he''l want to stay monogamous for six months so that they can do it raw, but I don't think Justin should be heartbroken over Brian's desire to sleep with other man. Brian explained his desires perfectly at the end of the chapter, and I think that Justin is a smart enough guy to realize where his boyfriend is coming from.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2014 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 10

The dialogue from Brian in this was so erotic! I think I wish Brian had won the bet, lol. In the beginning, I really thought for a moment that Evan was going to stay and watch, since that techniacally wouldn't be a third party having sex with them. Maybe later? Great chapter!

Reviewer: JLW (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2014 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 11

This is a great story! I LOVE the text message from Brian at the end of this chapter. Your writing is wonderful. I found myself enthralled with Brian and Justin's conversation about commitment. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2014 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 11

Tsk..tsk..tsk, Sunshine when will you ever learn?

Reviewer: pam (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2014 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 10

I love this story!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2014 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 10

More, please. TAG

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2014 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 10

Hot...hot...hot!!! And poor Evan didn't even get to watch lol.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2014 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 7

FYI, I like the stronger Justin who can handle Brian's choice of a blowjob instead of outright infidelity. I don't think it's at all OOC. The Justin in the series wasn't a doormat at all. Go, Justin! TAG

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2014 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm enjoying this story.  Brian is a little more romantic than I would think, but it works for the story.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2014 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 8

I would be more than okay if Brian wanted to go furthur with this exploring of the fantasies. Yep, perfectly fine with that. Can't wait to see what perverted things Brian has in his head, hehe.



Author's Response:

Thanks,  this comment made me laugh

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2014 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love the premise for this story! Sounds like it could get really fun! TAG

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 9

So enter Evan into the picture and for once both of our boys are jealous of the same guy...I love it!!! But you know what I love even more, their little escapade in the rain (definitely a drool worthy moment)

I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 7

I vehemently do NOT think that Justin forgave too quickly. Sure, he forgave him quickly, but the discussion you had them hash out in the loft made it seem totally appropriate. Brian actually became a very sympathetic, albeit kind of funny, character once he explained his reasoning. Beacuse you just know he had to suck up a lot of his pride and personal preferences to actually get down on his knees in his office like that. He did that for Justin, so in a perverse way, it's actually really sweet.

only you could make a convincing case…. for giving a blow job…. as the only option…. to save people's jobs" ---that was sooo funny! And so true! Only Brian, lol.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

Okay, so this was one of those chapters where I read and I read, and each new paragraph holds something that I think is perfectly written. Most of it was little details and ways that you phrased things, so it seems silly to comment on each of them here, but this chapter definately felt like it was perfectly expressing each and every scene.

Your description of Justin's mental dilemma of both enjoying the temporary chance at monogamy, yet having that niggling doubt about Brian's committment and his own abiluty to fully-satisfy him, was very succint. The argument between the two men felt very real, for lack of a better word, and there's nothing I love more than a story that feels as real to me as my own life. And lastly, I kind of thought your brief (again, succint) depiction of DrunkBrian was awfully cute, albeit in a pitiful way; and very much still true to Brian's cannon character. I actually kind of feel like maybe he was tell ing the truth and does have a non-bullshit explanation as to why he was coming onto the client. Can't wait to read on and see if he does.



Author's Response:

This is one of the nicest reviews I've had the pleasure to receive.  Thanks for all the support.

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 7

Holy Cow this is good! : ) I started reading this last night and just finished the new chapter (no, it dosn't take me THAT long  to read - HA) Looking forward to  the next part of this : ) Hugs ~ Janet

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 4

Damn, I was almost hoping that Justin would lose and have to be Brian's sex slave, lol.



Author's Response:

Stay tuned...there's a little of that to come in future chapters :)

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh my god, Brian's tactic to try and win was the hottest thing ever!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

In my honest opinion, I think that Justin gave Brian something to think about when he left to go stay the night at Daphne's. Brian thought that this could really be the end so he had no choice but to be completely forthcoming about what he did and why...which by the way was very noble and humbling.

Justin didn't forgive too easily, he took the time he needed to cool off and approach the situation with a clear head.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh this is fantastic!!! I can't wait to see how Brian justifies his actions...or could it be that Justin really was just too hasty in his assumption? The outcome of their conversation should be interesting.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support

Reviewer: Silverfish (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! I LOVE this story!!! It's fantastic!! So "just business"?? How is he going to talk himself out of that one????

Brilliant idea and really well written 

Lisa xx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support.  You know Brian, he will always find a way.

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2014 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

wow, very interesting premise, i love it! you're very good at writing! i love when brian gets jealous and posessive, and when he's a jerk even if he loves justin. angst is my favourite! i'm glad justin won! does it mean soonthey will be able to fuck raw? maybe brian will agree to stay monogamous after the bet is off? but he won't agree lightly and just like that, that's for sure!



Author's Response:

Plenty of more angst coming your way.  You just can't have Brian do anything too easily!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 3

Even though Brian was doing it to try to win the bet, using the dildo and asking Justin to fuck him was really hot.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  I tend to get carried away with the sex scenes.  More good ones to come....

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 5

Very hot story.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome to Midnight Whispers! Great to see you posting this on here.:)  I'll get the story validated so you won't have to wait for me to approve each chapter individually.;)  Let me know if you would like any help with a banner, too.;) Thanks for posting with us!  ~Kim

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