Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For One Heartbeat Away
Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2023 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 8

One of the best happy endings I have read! Your writing is smooth and emotes many emotions 

Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2023 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

One of the best happy endings I have read! Your writing is infectious 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2021 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 8

This was a great story!!   I'm so glad that after speaking with both Daphne and Michael, that Justin was able to forgive Brian and they were both able to get past it and move on together, with a brand new start.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2019 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

love it

Reviewer: Marie-France TEJEDOR (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2017 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

Very great story ! I like it Thank you An happy ending for season 5 !!!!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2016 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 8

Loved the final chapter...it was ridiculously romantic. 

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 8

i can't believe i sat here and read this.   Not my kind of story but it kept me in from first chapter.   This was ur first.   Wow!    i would've loved to see everyone's reaction when the two of them got back together.   i also would love to see older gus.  it's weird cause when gus gets to be that age he will be the age that justin was when he met his dad.   i loved this definitely going to fave.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2016 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 8

There is nothing like that feeling you get when you re-read a favourite story -just like that, all is right in your world:-)

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2015 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hi, Brynneth! I’m so ashamed I haven’t commented on this beautiful story before – I kept putting it off until I had to re-read to refresh my memories – and I fell in love with it even more!

It’s so painful to even think about Brian and Justin being apart for so long. The saddest thing is – I can totally see it happen. Brian might get scared and try to push Justin away – again, because basically, that’s what he did in canon in the very end – he pushed Justin to go to NY with his behavior. He chose a clever strategy.

It’d also sad that your Justin’s reaction is very much in character. He fought for Brian for so many years, I can see that he would just choose to give up after Brian’s umpteenth attempt to push him away. And so eleven years have passed… when Brian and Justin met for the first time in that club, I just froze. I still remember that scene vividly – it was incredible, so emotional and raw, fantastic! When Justin said ‘fuck you’ to Brian, I felt my heart breaking for both of them - especially for Brian, even though I was quite angry with him.

I’m glad you didn’t make Justin jump into Brian’s arms right away. This topic is very personal for me, and I know for sure I’d probably never forgive a person who made such important decisions for me – like Brian did to make Justin give up. But you showed so realistically how they found their way to each other again, how Justin slowly began to trust him, and how darkness that engulfed Brian without his blond gradually started to let go of him.

I loved all artistic details you added about Justin’s career and his paintings, it was beautiful and inspiring!

I saw that you started to write a long sequel to this brilliant story – I can’t wait to start reading it! I’m so happy you decided to write it, I’m thirsty for more chapters, more information about Brian and Justin. I feel there is a lot left to be said!

Thank you so much for this captivating, painful but beautiful piece of work – I loved it tremendously!    



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a kind review!  It made my day!  Yes, I'm continuing their story, although the writing is a bit slow, so bear with me.  Hope you like the rest!

Reviewer: Frayach (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2014 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 8

I can't find the words to tell you how grateful I'm feeling right now for your beautiful story.  Truly lovely.  I look forward to reading more stories from this universe you so vividly created.  *hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks, Fray!  So glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2014 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 8

Omg I really loved this story well done it was wonderful 👍 Chris

Author's Response:

Thank you!  It's turned into a series LOL!

Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2014 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 8

I really liked this story. Beautifully done.

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 8

I think all had been said

:)

Congratulations for this great story

Hope to see more

~alois~



Author's Response:

Thanks Alois!  

Reviewer: Pat (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2014 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 8

Congratulations.

if there is a movie this could be a part of the story.  I liked it very much.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'll take any movie I can get!

Reviewer: Kathy (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2014 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 8

Excellent story. Left me with happy and sentimental feelings. Well written and paced.  I'll check out other things you have written.  Great way to spend a few hours in bed when not well.  Thanks. K



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  I have only one other QAF fic so far, but the next one is half done.  Enjoy!

Reviewer: arakiss (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2014 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

Beautifully written, thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you too for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 8

I not only like this story, I love it.  It's nice that the two finally came together!



Author's Response:

There's no way I could keep them apart.  Just had to find a realistic way to bring them back together, and hopefully this worked!  Thanks for your kind comment!

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2014 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 8

Heart wrenching, but good!

Author's Response:

I seem to have problems keeping angst out of my stories, but they usually end well.  So glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

Congratulations on the blue ribbon.  I like your banner; I didn't realise it was a rendition of Justin's painting, Broken.  I had previously missed that information in the story notes.  I look forward to more fics from you.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Until I read this, I didn't even know I got a blue ribbon LOL!  Marny did a great job representing Broken, didn't she?  Love it!  Thanks so much for your kind review :)

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2014 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

Perfect ending and the promise of sequels .. Does it get any better than that



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking to time to read it :)).  I'm happy you liked!

Reviewer: Julie (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2014 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

Loved the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: rainloverdreamz (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2014 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 8

Thank you for the final chapter . this is my favourite Brian Justin reunification story post 513 . do come up with more beautiful stories :) all the best ! *hugs*



Author's Response:

You're welcome!  So glad you liked the ending.  (I was worried it was too schmoozy.). More sequel stories to come!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2014 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! Beautifully crafted and emotionally touching story. I'm thrilled to have you in our fandom. Congrats on finishing your first multi-chapter story. Thanks for writing! TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  So glad to have found this website with so many great stories and talented writers.  You're all great!

Reviewer: QaFfangirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2014 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 8

That was so incredibly beautiful, great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2014 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great story.  I thnk the ending is perfect.  Look forward to your next story.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it because I certainly struggled over it.  Probably changed it five times LOL!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2014 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 8

I have just read this fic and it was glorious I loved it just the right amount of angst and a happy ending. I like the promise of more to come. I am going to read the companion piece now xxChris

Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!  Got more ideas, so there will be more.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2014 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 8

Fantastic way to end this story my friend! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...well done!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I know it was angsty, but I did promise a happy ending :))

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2014 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wonderful ending.

Thanks for writing. Hmm I've to make another banner * giggles *. Love it how you changed the painting 'Broken'.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

The banner's still perfect!  I couldn't make it better myself.  Glad you liked it, Marny!  Hugs!

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