Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For One Heartbeat Away
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 7

one more fucking chapter of this.   my profanity is not meant to be mean i hope you know that.  it's how i express myself when i'm really digging something.   it's almost five am and i'm still reading this thing.    why?   i don't know.   They are making me so angry but i can't turn away, it's just like the show.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

Brian is trying to let Justin see that he still cares without actually coming out and saying it.  Justin's almost afraid to trust Brian.  Daphne was there from the beginning and can give an objective look.   I like how you ended this chapter.  That was Justin at the door wasn't it?

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2014 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 7

Enjoying this story so much; PLEASE more soon!
Love your writing! Thanks

Author's Response:

I swear I haven't forgotten this story and it will be finished!  Got a lot going on in RL, but I'm half done with the next chapter, and it's coming along fine.

Thanks for the compliment. And I hope you enjoy the next chappie!

Reviewer: rainloverdreamz (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2014 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 7

This story has been wonderful...beautiful rendition and most apt explanation of their separation over the years and finally reunion...this could be the script of queer as folk 6 ;) *hugs* keep up the good work.

p.s. cant wait for the next chapter !



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks!  That's sweet of you to say.  I'm glad you like it, and I promise to have the next chapter out soon!

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2014 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

How wonderful!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2014 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh at last I think we might have some walls with cracks starting to form at last



Author's Response:

Yes!  Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2014 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hey Brynneth.  I caught up with this fic while on vacation.  I apologize as I normally review each chapter, but I didn't have the ability to do so.  I hope B/J can inhibit their physical attraction/need for each other and talk.  I'm so pleased you didn't make Adam a bad guy, as so many author would have.  Well done.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Adam is my version of what Justin originally thought he wanted in a partner.  He had all the right qualities but couldn't handle the stress of Justin's nightmares and his jealousy over a past lover.  His loss showed Justin that even when you think you have the right person, he might not be.

Thanks for taking time to review.  The next chapter will be the climax and I hope it brings the boys some peace!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2014 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 7

Now we're getting to the good stuff! TAG



Author's Response:

Yep!  More to come soon!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2014 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 7

highlight of the week! thanks for continuing, even unbetaed a great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  No need to worry about me continuing; this story will be finished.  I'm guessing maybe two or three chapters to go.  Thanks for the review!

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