Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For One Heartbeat Away
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

after every chapter of getting no explanation i tell myself this will be my last chapter but then i say no i've made it this far i might as well keep reading, but come on man what's the deal?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 6

Justin a baby duck!  I like that analogy.  Brian's letting Justin in, I hope he realizes that Brian is different.

Reviewer: britin4life (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2014 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 6

OMG OMG OMG OMG this is getting good! Please let them get back together and only be with one another! I love monogmas Brian!



Author's Response:

I already kinda gave away the ending on my other story, The Feline Approach to Brian Kinney, but if you don't want spoilers, don't read it!  Glad you like it and more to come soon.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2014 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 6

That was brilliant .. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2014 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

This story is so good. I love the subtle ways Brian has changed. Waiting to see where we go from here.

Author's Response:

He's finally learning what is really important.  Will it be enough?  We shall see!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: QaFfangirl (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2014 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 6

So good.  Love the up against the glass image, very hot.  More soon please.



Author's Response:

They're always hot :).  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2014 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

we love to wait (though not too long a86;) when the result is as good as this story !!!

 

Keep on the good stuff!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hopefully, the next one won't take any longer!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love this story - have read the whole thing through today - and the hope it hints at has me overwhelmed

so many things to love about this story - Justin had a relationship that was all most of us could hope for...and still couldn't stop thinking about his Brian, Brian still loved his Sunshine, even after all these years. And while he seemed to have truly loved him, the heartbreak when they broke up was nothing compared to when he and Brian seperated.

I would love to see a closer view into Justin acknowledging Brian's pain - although I hate that Brian always makes decisions for those he loves, Justin has always had a tendency to look at things from only his own point of view - as he has matured hopefully he has also acquired the ability to look at things a little less selfishly, especially now that he has remembered the night of the prom - plus Brian's reaction to finding out he remembers may not have been fully explored here - that is huge

I think that while the time apart was difficult and heartbreaking for both of them, it may also be the one thing that has gotten them to the  place where they can move forward and really make it - ready to take the world on together each knowing they will never be complete without the other

nice job - thanks

Charle

 



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thanks for such a nice review!  You're actually foreseeing some of my next chapter LOL.  There's some introspection coming up . . . For both of them.  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loved the scene in the glass walled office. TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks!  They are always so hot together.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh damn...I hope Justin was really listening to what was being said to him. He was absolutely right in thinking that he wasn't the only one to suffer.

I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

Yes, they are finally getting somewhere!  Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 6

I like this story so much, enjoying every chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

I just love this very much. Aaahhh * giggles * a baby duck !

* hugs *

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Marny!  And thanks again for the banner; I love it!

Hugs!

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