Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For One Heartbeat Away
Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2023 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Yes you are Brian

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 3

okay now ur totaly got me going craxy what is going on?    Did he not wanna end it?   Was something wrong

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 3

okay now ur totaly got me going craxy what is going on?    Did he not wanna end it?   Was something wrong

Reviewer: Frayach (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2014 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

A beautiful painting - the way you described it made me see it perfectly.

I'm wondering what Brian *wants* - Justin wants closure, but what does Brian want?  I'm not sure he knows.

This is wonderful so far :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2014 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

Eleven years. I have mixed feelings on them getting back together.

Author's Response:

Yep, I know.  They needed time to grow :)

Reviewer: Joules (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2014 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

Loving your story,  would of loved to have see this happen. 

Characters are staying very true to QAF.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Please write more soon

Joules



Author's Response:

I'm trying to keep the cast in character.  Glad it's working!  Thanks for the kind review :)

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2014 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hanging in is not the problem. Hanging ON and not compulsively checking for the next update however is proving more of a challenge. I LOVE angst .. 

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2014 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

This story just gets better with every chapter .. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!  Kinda angsty, I know, but hang in there.

Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2014 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2014 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG!!! This is one of the best things I have read here in weeks. Keep giving us these great chapters. LOVE,LOVE,LOVE this story. You are an excellent writer. Brian has a lot to take in with Justin giving him the business.

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks!  Justin is fully grown now and harbors a lot of bitterness toward Brian.  They have much to work through :).  Glad you like it!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2014 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

I wish they would quit running away from each other and finally clear the air between them.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, they have their demons to conquer first.  Just a warning:  the next chapter is even darker, but these guys are strong!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2014 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Now, that's some real ANGST for ya! TAG



Author's Response:

Yup :).  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2014 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

Those two are created for myself.
I'm curious to continue.
Thank you for a nice chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2014 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Maybe now they can come to their senses and realize that they never really got over each other.  What was Michael really thinking when he left that paper on Brian's desk?



Author's Response:

He wasn't LOL!  Thanks for reading :)

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