Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2014 02:37 AM · On: A short blonde in one old sneaker. (29.12.14)
It would appear that Bri Jr is going to have problems when he gets to the diner.
Author's Response: I like this idea! ;)
BUT... now he is going home...
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2014 11:36 AM · On: Hi, I'm Your Aunt! (10.10.14)
Okay, that was brilliant. :) Brian Kinney so worried he refused sex; priceless. Brian Jr playing Lord Babberley from Charley's Aunt; this chapter is short, but oh so clever.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 10:52 PM · On: Hi, I'm Your Aunt! (10.10.14)
Hahaha! At least there is an explanation. Funny.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2014 02:32 PM · On: The best remedy for nerves and other diseases. (28.09.14)
Hey Natalya :)
I have really enjoyed being able to catch up with your fic. I love the matchmaking chapter and I really like the way you wrote this chapter, starting with the printer then going back to the reason the broken printer was mentioned. Excellent writing. The ending of this chapter is great. Hurry back please.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for your compliments.
We all live our real life. So as soon as my beta sends me the next chapter, I'll place it here
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 04:52 AM · On: The best remedy for nerves and other diseases. (28.09.14)
Ok, why is Bri Jr ordering bras? Does he want to give his dad a heart attack?
Author's Response: As soon as my beta sends me the next chapter, you'll know!
*whisper* Why are you so sure that it was he who ordered bras? ;)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2014 04:37 PM · On: Have you got a plan, Mr. Brian, Jr.? (10.09.14)
Never a dull moment.
Author's Response: And it's just the beginning ;)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 07:53 PM · On: The End of Chaos. (31.08.14)
Nice to see another chapter. I'm so sorry you haven't been well and had computer problems. That's a bummer. Justin seems to be having problems of his own. I breathed a sigh of relief when you noted that Justin was pulling Brian to him and still had Jessie. Bri (the son) has done wonders. The family might have fallen apart without him.
Author's Response: I don't think I will ever write a death fic, so threre was no danger for the readres' psyche.
Justin & Brian's family will not fall apart either.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 01:24 PM · On: Several minutes before the... (08.02.14)
"there comes the guy I fucked in the alley a week ago" Yep, the action begins now. All because the father and son are doppelgangers. LOL
Cheers :)
Author's Response: :)))))))))))))
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 01:17 PM · On: A couple of hours in the life of Brian Jr. or a voyeur and a sexual terrorist. (05.02.14*)
I remember this chapter. "I've already fucked you. I don't do repeats." The son using the father's line to get rid of a trick; that's classic. LOL
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Yes. LOL
I like the line too!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 01:12 PM · On: The End of Chaos. (31.08.14)
"Who needs me when I'm like this? I don't want to live anymore." That is so sad. I'm glad Bri heard it as he was able to help. Brian was possibly to close to the situation to think beyond losing Justin. A very emotional chapter and nicely done.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank you
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 01:07 PM · On: Chaos. The Moment of Truth. (14.03.14)
Oh, poor Brian must be so worried at this stage.
I love fics where the men reach maturity (I really want to say old age or middle age, but I'm trying to be polite, LOL) together and are still so very much in love.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 01:01 PM · On: The beginning of chaos or the chapter which should have been the first one. (12.03.14)
Hey Natalya :)
I went back to the beginning as I had forgotten some of the important parts of this fic, and I'm not sure, but was this supposed to be the first chapter or did you write ahead with the intention of then putting in the back story. Since I don't know the answer I'm going to review this chapter first. I hope I'm making sense. :)))
This is a worrying time for Brian and I'm glad we have other chapters that lets us know Justin is going to be alright. Whew. :)
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Hi!
You've answered yourself: this chapter describes the events that happened prior to the ones from the first chapter.
It's some kind of retrospection.
The prder of chapters is the way it should be :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2014 04:34 PM · On: Chaos. The Moment of Truth. (14.03.14)
”I was waiting for you so much, and you didn’t come...”
I like the way you bought back the prom memories.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2014 04:24 PM · On: The beginning of chaos or the chapter which should have been the first one. (12.03.14)
I think I'm getting it now. I have to back track to understand it better.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2014 04:23 PM · On: The beginning of chaos or the chapter which should have been the first one. (12.03.14)
The beginning of chaos, what a perfect title. Adding ideas is going to be difficult since I don't know where you're going with this, but I will enjoy following along.
Author's Response: :)
Some ideas that the readers suggested at another site were valuable.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2014 11:51 AM · On: Everybody dance or some prefer blondes. (01.03.14)
Justin must be pretty happy to look so young and be mistaken for his son. It's good to see this update. I thought somehow Justin would be mistaken for what happened in the alley, but I didn't think it would be by the trick. Well done.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2014 12:19 AM · On: Everybody dance or some prefer blondes. (01.03.14)
Well that was something. Bri Jr was the cause of the Diner being vandalized? Poor Coco. A comedy of errors and Brian, Justin and Bri still haven't gotten anything to eat. Well the days not over, so I wonder what you have planned with Vance Gardner and his agency.
Author's Response: What I have planned with Vance Gardner?
Ha-ha!
A lot of things!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:52 PM · On: Several minutes before the... (08.02.14)
"...and there comes the guy I fucked in the alley a week ago."
Interesting.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:48 PM · On: Several minutes before the... (08.02.14)
"...and there comes the guy I fucked in the alley a week ago."
Interesting.
Author's Response: :)))))))))
I did my best
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:45 PM · On: A couple of hours in the life of Brian Jr. or a voyeur and a sexual terrorist. (05.02.14*)
"I'm an good boy and their only joy."
That's a big responsibility but I can see that being very plausible in such a chaotic atmosphere. Plus he has the responsibility of taking care of James. What is wrong with Justin?
Author's Response: It'll be clear from the 4th chapter :)
It's being translated right now
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:36 PM · On: Several minutes before the... (08.02.14)
It would seem that Bri Jr. does have a little too much time on his hands. LOL. You meet the most interesting people in alleys evidently.
Author's Response: Hmmm... Maybe...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 03:01 AM · On: A couple of hours in the life of Brian Jr. or a voyeur and a sexual terrorist. (05.02.14*)
Poor Bri Jr. has way too many responsibilities. Amazing how much he's like Brian even though Justin is his bio dad. BTW what happened to Justin that he was so sick?
Author's Response: I don't think he is like Brian.
There will be an explanation about Justin in the 4th chapter :)
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