Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2019 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 7
vic32
Thank you so much for the fantastic work comment. Beating Joan at her own game was fun to write. I don't know what I did wrong so I hope you still see my response on this. Sorry a85;
Cheers
Flossee
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 7
So proud of Justin how he handled Joan was perfect and I'm excited to see where else it goes from here. Fantastic work x
Author's Response:
Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
Go Justin! Love that he stood up to Joan, and I really love that Jack gave him a tutorial using porn. lol
Love this story so much! Excited to read the other parts!
Author's Response: Tutorial using porn. OMG, I love that line. Justin and Joan having a religious face off, well that just had to happen. LOL.
Thank you for reviewing each chapter. I hope you enjoy the remainder of the series.
Cheers :)))
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
This is so well done. I enjoy the character development, and you always do such a wonderful job of keeping them cannon even in an AU.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying I kept them cannon. Even if I didn't use all the traits they have in the series I was hoping I had included enough to make them, the, Brian and Justin we all know and love. Thank you, I truly appreciate all your comments.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2014 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 7
what an interesting premise for a Brian/Justin story. Very good.
Author's Response: Hello. Thank you so much for letting me know you have stopped by and read my fic. I'm truly happy you like the premise and I appreciate the "very good" comment more than you could know, as I'm not a very confident writer. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2014 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 7
I just read the whole story. I love it. I love Brian being sweet and loving, and Justin being naive is very sweet. Can't wait to read the next part of this story.
Author's Response: Hello Lorie. Thank you for such lovely comments. :) I'm really pleased you like my OOC B/J and that you have read on. I had so much fun writing this, but that doesn't mean people will enjoy reading it; which makes the support and feedback you have given invaluable, thank you so much.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2014 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 7
I have enjoyed this very much- a very different fic and after 14 years of QAF, that is difficult to do. I would love to see the fic continue- showing them a few years down the road- Justin less naive but still showing their love- maybe a look back fic with vingettes of past experiences.
Author's Response: Hey Sandy, thank you for saying you enjoyed my AU & OOC characters. Also thanks for saying you would like to see this fic continued. I like your ideas. I will keep these characters moving forward, but in what direction now, I'm unsure. I am ecstatic to hear you say this fic is very different after 14 years of QAF, as that is what I hope for when writing B/J stoies, so thank you very much. I really do appreciate you taking the time to review and your input.
Cheers
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2014 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thanks for the story; it was terrific. I was one of the lucky ones who read it just before MW had its crash. However, my comment somehow never got posted.
The characters were memorable and the story interesting enough that even though you wrote “The End”, it wasn't,not really. My self and I would guess many readers said, “not so fast.” In our minds we saw the future. What did I see? I am not telling you or anyone else. But please take this as a compliment as we cared enough to look into the future and continued your story.
Again, thanks for the story.
DavidR
Author's Response: Thank you David for letting me know you commented before the system went down; I'm sorry I didn't see it. I agree with what you are saying; I will never write a fic that concludes with "they all lived happily ever after" as I too like an ending where people make up their own minds what the future holds. I am really pleased you didn't tell us where you took the characters. I understand fully what you are saying and I do take it as a compliment. If someone thinks about these OOC characters beyond what you have written then I think that is cause to be chuffed. :) I really appreciate your reviews and I truly like the comments you have made.
Cheers
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2014 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Thanks for the unique story, Flossee. I'm glad to hear you are considering writing a sequel to this story, and continuing to write. :) I'm confident that our previous troubles with the site are behind us now, thanks in large part to the support of our members and other readers. ~Kim
Author's Response: Well that is a nice surprise. I was just checking the site before going to bed. Thanks Kim, and thank you for saying my story is unique as you know that is what I strive for. I'm chuffed. xD Thanks again.
Cheers :) ;)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2014 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
Now in my version of the sequel Justin will start a small garden on the roof, just to keep himself busy and close to his roots. I'm thinking a few salad type vegetables and perhaps a small rabbit hutch. I'm sure he knows some delicious bunny recipes and slaughtering fluffy bunnies is so much quieter then pigs or cattle. I am bothered by the thought of what is going to happen when Brian tries to talk Justin into filming their manly moments. The Amish do not like to have photos taken so live action filming is probably a huge no no. I'm sure Justin will adapt to going to church with Joan, he will no doubt want to become an altar boy. I just hope Brian can maintain his new behaviors toward nameless tricks. It does seems like Justin is starting to enjoy his new life but it will take time for him to adjust to all the new things. Will Brian buy him his own blue Jeep to make it easier to haul bunny feed and fertilizer to his mini farm? Ohhh, maybe he could build a wood working shop and craft his own frames for his art. Thank you so much for this story, I really enjoyed trying to make you add important details, like the color of the Jeep.
Lori
Author's Response: Do you think Justin should grow Pumpkins or Squash? Enquiring minds want to know. xD Maybe instead of taking care of rabbits Justin could just use road kill for their meat products. Oh, you thought I had forgotten all these wonderful ideas did you? LOL Yes you are correct; Justin not having seen a movie wouldn't know how they are produced so he will be surprised when Brian brings in a crew to film their marital activities. LOL The most important part of this whole fic hinged on the colour of the jeep so I thank you very much for your input. :)
Serious note; thank you, you have been reviewing for me from the start and I love your sense of humour. I believe I have only made it to 30 fics because of your support and the laughs we shared along the way; lots of laughs. Thank you my friend.
Cheers :) :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2014 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 7
"I'm happy it has, and I'm really happy you don't get to kiss him on the lips anymore."
I always wondered about that. I thought Ben was a wuss for putting up with it and I thought it was disrespectful for Brian and Mikey to do it. For Justin, I thought he was just grateful Brian wasn’t fucking Mikey.
“This is Justin's first display of affection in public and in front of Joan no less.”
I was impressed on how Justin handled the situation with Joan. I also thought it was ironic that Brian married a very religious person after being raised by an almost religious fanatic. You did a great job with alluding to the fact that it may not be that easy to get Joan to loosen up and that she more than likely would disappoint Justin who seemed to miss discussing the Bible with someone. At the same time, I like how Justin asserted himself to let everyone know that he loved Brian and was not ashamed to show it. Nice touch.
“This is his normal…”
You can’t tell me you don’t think this is your best work. That last paragraph alone made this story. Brilliant!!! This has got to be a blue ribbon. You go gurl! And please continue.
Author's Response: "I always wondered about that. I thought Ben was a wuss for putting up with it and I thought it was disrespectful for Brian and Mikey to do it." I agree wholeheartedly with this statement. Moot point; the kisses looked anything but comfortable between B/M in the series.
Where you wrote about alluding to the fact that Joan might disappoint Justin; Joan plus each conversation around the table has been taken up in the continuation. I'm sure you can guess which part might be slightly comical, but not overly so, as I want to keep the emotions as the main focus of this AU. I don't know if I will post it as I have given the reader the opportunity to say if they want it or not, and I think you are the only one to express an interest in continuing.
"You can't tell me you don't think this is your best work." LOL You know I do think I have come a long way from that very short first fic and I am going to agree with you in saying this was my favourite one to write and that is probably why I thought I got it wrong when nobody seemed interested. You are very insightful. "That last paragraph alone made this story. Brilliant!!!" Thank you they are very kind words indeed and very much appreciated. "This has got to be a blue ribbon." I think I lost too many reviews for that to happen; I know I lost at least 43 and for a fic only 7 chapters long that is a huge amount, but I thank you for the sentiment and the encouragement.
Cheers :) :) :)
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2014 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm sorry that you do not write more B / J story. I read all the stories you've published here. I enjoyed it. Thank you very much!
Orhida
Author's Response: Hey Orhida. I'm so pleased you let me know you have read all my fics and have enjoyed them. Often I see the read count go up and hope someone is enjoying them. I will definitely be writing more B/J fics as I need to get them out of my head. I'm undecided if I will post them to MW, however the response to this story was encouraging. Thank you for taking the time to let me know you have read this one.
Cheers
|
