Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
Justin is so nervous bless him, I do hope he relaxes around Brian soon.
Author's Response: He is terribly nervous, and surprised, surprise Brian is being considerate.lol
Cheers
Flossee
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2018 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
Justin Amish? LOL
Author's Response: I totally agree with your LOL:)) I try to place Brian and Justin in situations that would certainly be different for them. I'm so pleased it amused you. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave this review; additional it also lets me know my fics are still entertaining.
Cheers :))
Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
The first kiss..I felt like I was there. In my mind I was. Justin must be very confused, but he isn't shying away from exploring his feelings with Brian. One of my favorite things about this chapter was Brian not seeking a trick and instead staying where he was to fantasize about Justin.
Author's Response: What a wonderful thing to say about the first kiss. This is such a great review; such lovely words and interesting insight, topped off by telling me your favourite part which you know I like to hear, so thank you very, very much.
Fantasizing about Justin or a trick, and Brian fantasizing about Justin won out, who would have thunk it? LOL
Cheers :)))
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 2
great fic. I am enjoying how patient Brian is with Justin. I love this series. Excited to read it again.
Author's Response: I love an innocent Justin. Writing Justin as the extreme opposite to Brian was so very rewarding and enjoyable.
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2014 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
The attraction between them is intense! I can't see either holding out much longer let alone for 12 months! :D Great writing!
Author's Response: I don't think I could write B/J holding out 12 months or wait that long for them to be together either. LOL "The attraction between them is intense!" I like the way you put that. :) Thank you for the great writing comment and for taking the time to review. Love the :D, thanks.
Cheers :D
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2014 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response: : - D Grinning
o/ Cheer "Yay, yay."
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2014 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
I always enjoy your unique stories. Hope, you will continue writing. This story is interesting. It's the first BJ-Amish fic that I'm reading.
Please, continue writing. :)
Author's Response: Hey XPO787. I know you will be aware that I did answer your review when you first posted it, but unfortunately the system has wiped out my reply. Thanks so much for saying my stories are unique as that is what I strive for. Like you this is the only Amish fic I am aware of and I'm very happy you are finding it interesting. Thank you for taking the time to review and the smiley face. I really appreciate your kind words.
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Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2014 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
I would hate to see you stop writing as you are good and an enjoyable read.
This story is getting a pass from me as I just don't see how it could have a happy ending, as Justin would surely be shunned if he goes with Brian and lose his family. Or he could stay with his family and lose Brian and be unhappy.
I am trying to stay away from unhappiness in stories, as real life has enough right now.
So, please don't let the reaction to one story push you away from writing more, just know that some of us just can't handle unhappiness right now.
Author's Response: Hi CFC. I understand your hesitation, but I can't reassure you as to the outcome as that would give away the whole crux of the fic. You may be surprised as to what happens, however I would never push you to read something you don't want to. I feel the same way about cancer fics as it reminds me of real life, and usually the fics are way off base and I just want to yell at the screen for the author to at least get it right and not belief everything they find on the web. Sorry that's my little outburst for the day. LOL Really, I think it is just that I don't want the constant reminder.
I hope life improves for you. I wish you ever happiness and I hope you can find something or someone that can put a smile on your face every day (I have that and I know how important it is). Thank you for your kind words and letting me know you enjoy my other fics.
Cheers
Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2014 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
I enjoyed your stories.I do hope you continue to write. I hate to see a talented writer discouraged. You are truly appreciated.
Author's Response: I smile whenever I see your reviewer alias as we are both bulls (Taureans). I presume you have heard we are supposed to be stubborn; I say that's a load of rubbish, we are just patient people who wait for others to come around to our way of thinking. LOL Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying my fics and your very kind words. Question: Am I to stubborn to change my mind???? LOL Sorry, I hope you don't mind me having a little fun with your review, I truly do appreciate you reading and reviewing.
Cheers
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2014 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 2
Have always loved your unique and often humorous stories about the boys. But I didn't post every time. Regret it now. Hope you change your mind and decide not to leave us.
Author's Response: Hey Anonymous, thanks for your kind words. At least I now know I'm not boring everyone, just the majority.LOL I really would like to thank you for any support you may have given me in the pasts, I can't say anything specific as I'm not sure which Anon you are. I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to tell me you have enjoyed my previous efforts.
Cheers
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2014 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm so glad that Justin has been able to escape the farm, I have a feeling there will be lots of new experiences for him to adjust to. Now lets hope they can find a place to stash the girls so the boys can have a little privacy. I'm am trying no to think about you stopping posting your delightful stories. The tears are flowing down my cheeks at the thought of a world without your unique looks of the world of QAF. I'm willing to bet the exhaust fumes from those dangerous red Jeeps is what has made you mind go all wonky. I think you need to spend a few hours in quiet contemplation kneeling on the floor of the shed to get your mind right with god again. It could be a build up in fluids causing you to go light headed. I just hope if you really do need to stop writing you won't cast off all your close friends who still worship QAF. Now back to this chapter, I'm a little worried about Daphne, she is looking a little pale and I'm afraid she might have a parasite problem. I hope she can be tested at the free clinic. I bet Ted would be just the one to take her to the doctor. I do think a shopping trip with Em would be good for Justin, he will need some fancy pants to really show off his assets when he discovers Babylon. I sure hope he takes to driving a Jeep quickly, well I guess he can always crash the ugly red one and then get the safer blue one with amazing gas mileage. Must dash, the mean librarian is glaring at me. I think she can tell I'm reading impure material.
Lori~ wishing for WIFI
Author's Response: I love waking up to your quirkiness as it puts a smile on my face and I know all is right with the world. A jeep, a shed and quiet contemplation, where do you get these ideas??? LOL I think you should invite the librarian to join you, she probably needs a little fun in her life; can you imagine being surrounded by all those well written and exciting books, she is probably hankering for a little badly written fun with porn (there may be porn in this one, I can't promise, lol). She might even have a suggestion on how Justin can ditch the girls, and where Daphne might be able to get an exorcism for her parasite problem. Okay, after writing that maybe I have been affected by exhaust fumes; note to self, don't sit in the shed with the jeep (undisclosed excellent colour which may be red) running or I will turn a disgusting shade of blue. Thanks for taking the chance at being exposed, by the librarian, to leave this review. I have truly missed you on this site. As always my friend I appreciate your type and duck fun library review, thank you.
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Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2014 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
Thanks for the chapter. So far it has been really terrific
reading. I think the women should remain as they
could/would add so much more to the story. Since the three
of them can during Rumspringar smoke, and drink, I was
wondering about sex. If the women are ‘that’ attractive, then
there are many non gay men in the Liberty Avenue area and of
course other places they may visit. I don’t expect an answer as
let the story tell me whatever I want to know. Is it only gay sex
between Brian and Justin that would cause Justin to be an
outcaste from his Amish Community?
Anyway, there is so much for us to learn plus a good story
line. This story is going to be fun. Thanks again.
DavidR
Author's Response: Hi David. The next chapter will submit Justin to more of Brian's world and the consequences might not be so pleasant. I won't say any more as I don't want to give too much away. LOL I'm glad you're looking forward to reading more. I had intended to write this as drama and then write a few one offs as humor to introduce Justin to clothing etc, but now I don't think that will happen. I hope you're not too disappointed as there is very little humor in the story. Honestly, I didn't know you read my fics so thank you for taking the time to read and review this one, I really do appreciate it.
Cheers
Reviewer: tiff (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2014 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 2
Sorry to hear you won't be posting anymore. But I have to say, it will be unfortunate for the readers that do still post. Not having the gift of writing myself, it must be difficult to put in so much effort for fewer replies. Still, were it me, having the talent and the devotion of even a few eaders would be more than enough.
Author's Response: Hi Tiff. Thank you for letting me know you have read this fic. I hope you understand your review is one that has me thinking I may be boring people and I have no intention of doing that. I will explain. When I first came to this site everyone was met with a smiley face from Bob, readers and other authors would come and say hello and encourage you to continue. The atmosphere was very welcoming. Now however some of the reviews I receive are quite odd. I have had a person tell me they aren't enjoying the fic only the jokes, another who obviously reads my work has only ever reviewed with ‘Y is Justin in a wheelchair' and multiply just telling me what is wrong with my fic; I have even had people wait until I review their fics and then they tell me how much they enjoy mine, which seems odd as they have never reviewed any of them. I pride myself as being a very astute person, but you can see the mixed signals I'm getting here. Do I actually have people enjoying these fics as I can't tell if they don't review and the last thing I would want is to bore people? I really enjoy writing and I will probably continue to do so, but I just won't post them. I actually have to write them down as they won't leave me alone until I do. Where you write ‘having the talent' this is how I see it. There are authors that write the same old, same old and string the words together well and there are authors who aim at original fics as I do, and I know my writing leaves a lot to be desired, but there are very, very few authors that can do both and if my talent is original plots then boring readers would be my nemesis. I hope now you understand my reasoning.
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Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2014 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Justin having the "English" lifestyle thrown at him and him not really knowing how to handle it. He's as attracted, to Brian as Brian is to him.
A year? So much will happen by the end of that time. Exciting.
Sorry you feel you need to stop writing, I've always enjoy your stories. I used to comment on every story I've read. After a while when my reviews were passed over, not replied to, I stopped. I understand the time you put into writing and posting your stories, but some writers don't understand the time it takes us readers to read and review. Maybe posting your stories on a different site may attract different readers. I wish you luck with whatever you decide.
Author's Response: Justin does struggle with the lifestyle he has been thrown into and he will have misgivings. I know, that's no surprise but I'm trying really hard here not to give anything away. LOL
I will still writing my fics I just won't post them as I really don't want to bore people. Thank you for saying you always enjoy my stories I appreciate that. I agree with you about reviews; since I started reviewing I review everything I read and only recently have I not been able to keep up with reviewing every chapter on some fics, but that is because of health reasons. I too stop reviewing when the author doesn't pay me the courtesy of replying as I find that to be rude. Thanks for the good wishes and for your help in the past, I've always appreciated your input.
Cheers
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2014 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
Now that I know why Justin and the girls are in Pittsburgh, it all makes sense. It must be hard to get Justin to realize that because everyone in the area is gay, he won't have to worry about unwanted attention being paid to his sister and Daphne. Everything is so new to them. TV, electricity, not having to wear their Amish clothing. I wonder how Debby will react once she meets them. They will be going back to the diner won't they?
Author's Response: I like it when you add the words" it all makes sense", as you know I don't have a beta so it helps me to know if I'm on track. They can use electricity etc., but they won't try everything they are allowed. Justin will hold back on something's and so far they only have their Amish clothing. I had intended to write this as drama and then write a few one offs as humor to introduce Justin to clothing etc, but now I don't think that will happen. He will meet Debbie, but I am trying really hard not to give anything away so I hope you stay tuned. Thank you so much again for your support.
Cheers
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2014 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 2
What a dilemma to be in for both men. Brian trying desperately to hold back, and Justin wanting to 'take the plunge,' but his beliefs and upbringing holding him back as well. It's like two powderkegs waiting to combust. Something tells me that once Justin is giving 'proper tutelage' in the fine art of having sex, he might just be one very enthusiastic participant, and Brian may find himself with a delicious handful on his hands.;)
A little surprised that Craig would agree to let Jennifer ship them off in Brian's care considering where he lives and his lifestyle (sorry, I can't remember now if his sexual orientation was brought up in the previous chapter (?)), and I could still imagine the two girls being hit upon by the lesbians that also hang out around Liberty Avenue. I can still remember the "Boots are Made For Walking" song blaring from Babylon during that girls' night out. Which reminds me, I could just imagine Justin's reaction to THAT place - ha! And to Debbie as well. Talk about sensory overload!
I also suspect that Jennifer might know exactly what she is doing, and is either testing Justin's willpower intentionally, or knows in her heart that her son will never be able to live the regimented, strict life he has been dealt, and is pushing him to find out where his true heart lies. Lots of conflicts and emotions here! Looking forward to the next part. ~Kim
Author's Response: I like it when someone says what they think might happen as it keeps me on track to try and surprise them. LOL "two powder kegs waiting to combust" I think virgin Justin actually might physically combust if he continues to live so close to the man of his dreams. xD No sexual orientations were discussed previously, the only dialogue was that Jennifier had an inkling Justin wasn't into the opposite sex. Babylon, Debbie and sensory overload will definitely ensure. LOL Thanks for the encouragement Kim and for taking the time to review and give me a laugh; I really appreciate it.
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