Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Not Giving Up
Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2014 04:59 PM · On: Resignation

I'm really interested in this story. I'm wondering what's going on with Brian. Why is he hiding from Justin? Will Gus come to live with them. Please more soon!!!!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2014 09:05 AM · On: Resignation

Go, baby, go! TAG

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2014 09:00 PM · On: Resignation

A REALLY take charge Justin. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2014 08:32 PM · On: Resignation

Nicely done.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2014 06:30 PM · On: Resignation

Well...it looks like someone put their big boy pants on and decided to stand his ground.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2014 05:12 PM · On: CONFRONTATION

Oh how very fucking clever of Justin to find the perfect way to get Brian to admit that he was lying about not wanting him anymore...next chapter quick! Lol

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2014 12:37 AM · On: CONFRONTATION

I really love this and will be waiting for more

thank you!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2014 11:45 PM · On: CONFRONTATION

Silly Brian! When is he going to learn? He can't escape from a determined Sunshine! TAG

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2014 01:33 PM · On: CONFRONTATION

keep chipping away justin. that piece of ice he calls his heart is shattering to pieces.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2014 01:27 PM · On: Brian

can't run now brian. not from justin or the lies you keep telling yourself.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2014 01:23 PM · On: The Phone Call

glad justin is going home to show brian he isn't going to take no for an answer.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 11:14 AM · On: CONFRONTATION

I am loving your Justin.  He is right Brian's body can't lie to him. 

I really hope you aren't too stressed.  Staying well is your first priority as we can always wait for your return.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2014 04:46 AM · On: CONFRONTATION

welcome back  story is great update soon  kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 04:38 AM · On: CONFRONTATION

Good to know he's not giving up.  I want more!!!



Author's Response:

in my universe he never does, who would want to give up on brian kinney

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 10:42 PM · On: CONFRONTATION

Great story.  I always enjoy a take charge Justin who doesn't fall for Brian's bullshit.



Author's Response:

Yup, he´s my favorite kind of Justin. The one i think Brian sometimes needs the most-even if he doesn´t want to admitt it ;)

Thanks for commenting, hope you enjoy the rest

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 10:24 PM · On: CONFRONTATION

Update soon! Are there going to be more chapters? Although, I think you have pretty much said everything that needs to be so far. Last sentence is good. 



Author's Response:

i´m glad your enjoing this story. Yes their will probably be three more chapters. i think i could leave it like that-but i still really want to write my first sex scene ;) and then wrap it all up with a nice big bow. Thank you again so much for reading and comenting        -love Lena

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 10:21 PM · On: Brian

Great ending! And did you mean "beer" instead of "bier"? Love the interaction with Cynthia as well, and Brian's secret hurt. 

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 10:18 PM · On: The Phone Call

I think that Brian is probably assuming that the happier Justin is in New York, the less interested he would be in their relationshop, so he is closing himself off before he can get hurt. This is sort of similar to how he acted when Justi went off to Los Angeles- assuming he wouldn't come back before Justin had the chance to explain himself. Good start- could have been longer, but enough interest to carry onto the next chapter.

Reviewer: Silverfish (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2014 08:03 PM · On: Brian

This is promising. Can't wait for more!!

Looking forward to finding out what Brian is hiding and what Justin's going to say to him...

I really like this!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2014 06:11 AM · On: Brian

I love mature, take charge Justin...........look out Brian, he's here for his guy.

 

Loving it !

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 05:45 PM · On: Brian

I love how you wrote Brian in this chapter and I always enjoy reading a strong Justin.  I look forward to the next update.

Cheers

Reviewer: Frayach (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2014 04:34 AM · On: Brian

Argh!  I must be a closet masochist - I can't stop reading break-up stories.  They just hurt so good.  This one was especially wrenching.  You did a good job of putting me in Justin's nead when he heard Brian's words.  Ouch!

Isn't writing fanfic fun?

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2014 08:40 PM · On: Brian

HMMM!!!! what is Brian up to now. I am sure Jus will find out soon. Lovin this story.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2014 01:50 PM · On: The Phone Call

Nice start. Welcome to MW. We love new authors. The more, the merrier! TAG

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2014 03:42 AM · On: Brian

Poor Brian :)

Always his worst enemy himself

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