Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2017 01:25 PM · On: Kinney in Oil Pastel

Omg, I knew Evan would do this eventually and I'm glad Justin was dragged in with him.

 

wow those lights did it and thank god for thst, I pray this works for them and binds them together forever. 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2014 06:00 PM · On: Kinney in Oil Pastel

"Justin felt a jolt run through him as if he’d been dunked into cold water..."

Well done! You tied all the loose ends together, nicely. I loved that you brought all the pivotal characters together in this chapter. You began with Skylar and then added Evan, Gavin, and Nathan. Aiden being there at such a gruesome scene and to witness the end of Justin’s turmoil over his vampirism and loss of identity was perfect.

Justin loss his life in cold water and it came back to him, metaphorically, once he was able to remember his love for Brian. His remembering his life with Brian, from present to the beginning, was beautiful, and the video you provided after was perfect.

Another brilliant chapter!

Author's Response:

I am thrilled that you took notice of all those little details, "tied together" as you say. I work so hard to construct this story in an artful way, and it's reviews like yours that let me know my efforts are noticed. Thank you!

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2014 01:39 AM · On: Kinney in Oil Pastel

Omg, will Brian be there???? Oh please be there!

Author's Response:

:)))

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2014 08:37 PM · On: Kinney in Oil Pastel

I like your story. I cried the moment he thought he saw the face of God, I could barely read the chapter to end.
Thank you so much and I'm sorry to my "noticing"
Orhida

Author's Response:

Oh don't be sorry at all, lol. I was actually wondering if that little detail was in anyone's minds as they read, so it's good to know. Thanks for commenting!