Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2017 01:31 PM · On: Playing Human

I really don't like Evan, he is going to ruin Justin if something isn't done and fast.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2015 12:08 AM · On: Playing Human

Interfering friends trying to keep the lovers from reconnecting: Mikey with Brian, and Evan with Justin.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2014 06:19 PM · On: Playing Human

Really like the way this story s developing. Evan is obviously self serving but in the process if he succeeds in pushing Justin outside of his comfort zone this could be a good thing ? Justin needs to fully understand his true nature and embrace what he now is before he will allow anyone else to. 



Author's Response:

I like your word to describe Evan: self serving. Not evil, just not very good. Justin definitely has a lot to figure out, but the question is who he will do it with? Brian? Evan? It depends on a lot of things. I'm glad you like the angsty direction this is going, lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: Amanda (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2014 01:16 AM · On: Playing Human

Loving your story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2014 06:36 PM · On: Playing Human

I generally don't like Justin/Brian vampire stories, so I haven't been reading this.  I started it to today and really like it.  You kept a true Brian/Justin feel, making the vampire thing more plausible.  Can't wait to read the rest.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you finally decided to give it a try. And that's so cool to know that you kept reading because you liked the characterizations. I'm happy you thought it felt realistic to the QAF universe.

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2014 11:31 PM · On: Playing Human

Wow. What an amazing chapter! What happened between Kai and Justin? Eek, the suspense! Between Evan and Michael, who needs enemies?



Author's Response:

You'll soon find out what happened between Kai and Justin. Evan is no good for sure. Michael, as usual, is mixing up his priorities and it's not in Justin's favor.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2014 05:24 PM · On: Playing Human

I had to absorb this for a while. I was put off by Justin's inherent affinity for the wrong person to hang out with -- I mean, Ethan, Cody, and to some extent Brian, then Evan. You would think that becoming a vampire would have made him a little more intuitive.

Author's Response:

Haha, yeah I gues that's true; he is always hanging out with not the best people (I love how you included Brian in that list). I like to think of it like: Jusitn is inherently good, so when he has a weak spot or is having trouble, it is very easy for less inherently good people to worm their way in and take advantage of him. Being a vampire unfortunately doesn't imbue many "super" abilities, in this fic.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2014 05:00 PM · On: Playing Human

This chapter was a little disturbing.  Michael's attitude was not nice.  I want to think that others will not feel the same.  I was hoping that seeing Kai would help.  There is more to martial arts than actual fighting.  Perhaps Justin could find his center?  But from what you wrote that might not happen.  I want to punch Evan right now.  He's so mean.



Author's Response:

Michael is most concerend for Brian, not Justin. That's something he's done in the past, whether or not his actions to look out for Brian wind up hurting Justin. Other people in their social circel are usually able to have more balanced opinions about things. I actually don't know much about martial arts, but I do know that Krav Maga is about taking down the guy who's putting you in danger by whatever means necessary, and not much else. Trust me: Jusitn isn't going to find his center there, lol. Evan is a very scared, very selfish person and he's certainly living up to his reputation. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: kimi (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2014 03:02 PM · On: Playing Human

Well this is really engrossing...cant wait to see what happens next, I really dnt like Evan i hope Justin can escape from his clutches unscathed.....and my heart goes out to Brian



Author's Response:

Evan isn't a good guy for Justin to have in his life. And Brian is definately going to see his negative effect on Justin.

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