Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

LOL

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

Very entertaining:-)

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

LMAO! Well done.

Reviewer: lexii314 (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2014 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

Incredibly funny. Thanks so much for writting. I enjoyed this whole heartedly.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2014 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

This was so hilarious!! This is the third time I have read it and still end up in tears laughing.....................

Loved it!!

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2014 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

I love your story, it's funny and witty and delightful. I love it when Justin gets to top, he gets to show Brian what an equal he truly is. Michael lives up to his reputation of a three year old in thought and deed, he's such an ass. The way debbie acts and her idea of humor says a lot about Michael. I hope to read many more stories from you.

Reviewer: arakiss (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2014 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 1. Brian’s Problem

With all the angst I am reading lately, this story unexpectedly* become just what I needed - witty, humorous - thank you very much !!!

* It's nothing to do with the author, It's mine personal preference (masochistic) to read angst ;)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

Great, fun little story! Very humorous! Thanks for writing! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for compliments and reading!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 17. He does exist!!!

Love Santa Brian!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 16. Cavalry arrives from behind the hills

Poor Mikey, permanently traumatized by what he thinks he saw! LOL! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 13. One dark, dark night on a dark, dark street…

"The longer Emmett listened to Michael, the more it became clear to him that if someone needed to be saved now, it's not Brian from Justin's advances, but instead Brian from Michael’s attempts to deprive him of these advances."

Lovely sentiment! Hilarious! TAG



Author's Response:

I like that you liked it

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 7. Cell phones are the root of all evil

HA ha ha!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 4. Voice in the wilderness

Oh my - I'd love to see Brian acting as Santa! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 1. Brian’s Problem

I'm just now starting on your Christmas story. Sorry for getting to this so late. Just wanted to say, before I even get started reading, that I'm utterly impressed by anyone who is brave enough to write in a language that isn't their primary one. You are amazing and that's before I even started reading. Don't ever give up! Now, I'm off to read. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

How delightfully funny.  Mikey goes all the way over there, can't get in, then runs outside and slips sending his cellphone flying.  I can see it now.  CRUNCH!  Are you sure you want to end this.  Maybe have Santa come by and haul Mikey to the North pole?  Great story.



Author's Response:

Am I sure that I want to end this?

Well, I really don't know what else I could write.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

Poor Michael, the most tormented man in all fanficdom.

Like the pressies that Brian found.

Author's Response:

Michael is THE most annoying man in the fanficdom

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 1. Brian’s Problem

Keep posting, girl! This was a fun trip and thank you for all the cellphone humor. If you only knew my history with those things! Ugh. (And yes, a truck ran over one of mine... right after my daughter's dog dragged it out of the house and left it on the road...)

Good job.

Roni



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 19. Cellphones… Again!

Thank you for the entertaining story, Natalya!  I wish I could say how sorry I feel for Michael, but I would be lying - LOL!  Always enjoy a Christmas story when the boys are happy together. Thank you again for posting on MW.

BTW, there IS such a thing as the insurance you described. I have it on my cellphone, because I am terribly hard on them. Good thing I have a cover on mine, because I have dropped it more times than I can count!  LOL!  Looking forward to your next story.

~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading and compliments!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 14. Looks like Brian Kinney’s phone is a diagnosis

That phone is cursed.

Author's Response:

It is the second phone! :)))

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 11. Meanwile in...

Interesting.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 5. Hercule Poirot and Miss Marple in one body

Saw that coming.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 4. Voice in the wilderness

Did he leave his phone? And what about Ben?

Author's Response:

You ARE right! I forgot about him!

I'll change the chapter a bit. Thank you for the hint!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 3. Deb and Santa Claus’s Problems

No way.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 2. Justin’s also got a problem

"...Brian threw him on the desk and very thoroughly fucked him?"

Loved this. Very cute!

Author's Response:

*Blush*

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 1. Brian’s Problem

Very short but very sweet.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2014 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 18. A cell phone can cause not only troubles

Something is going on.  I just not sure what.  Love your writing style.



Author's Response:

*Blush*

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2014 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 18. A cell phone can cause not only troubles

Aaargh!  Michael, give it up - ha!  This is very cute.;)  Love the way the boys are acting in this fic, and how Justin blushed at the mention of the chocolates.;)  I suspect there are more twists and turns to come yet before it's all over with.  Enjoyable read; thanks for posting!  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Now I blush, peading your review.

You are right, I think if there are no twists and turns, it's not so interesting

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2014 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 17. He does exist!!!

Brian Claus...I love it :D now what will Sunshine do with all those condoms and expensive lube *wink wink*

Author's Response:

Well... I don't know...

*blush*

Do you remember: they have to go to Debbie's Christmas dinner?

*wink wink*

Will they come?

Will Sunshine have time to do anything with all those condoms and lube?

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2014 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 17. He does exist!!!

OOO! I like Santa Brian. And hehehe, Christmas condoms.

And a Michael proof loft! Sheer heaven for Sunshine.

Thanks!

Author's Response:

"Michael proof"? I like the neologism!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2014 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 17. He does exist!!!

So much fun!  Love the idea of a sexy, Santa Brian.;) Thanks for posting this very entertaining story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2014 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 17. He does exist!!!

HoHoHo!  What a nice Christmas it is!  Brian in a Santa suit is the perfect topping or should I say bottoming? to this story.



Author's Response:

:)))))))))))))

I love your comment!!!

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2014 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 16. Cavalry arrives from behind the hills

Poor Boys! Finally on the same page and Michael occurs.

Is fainting because you thought you saw your best friend bottoming a covered condition? Or will Michael have to pay the hospital himself.

Another great chapter.

Thank you.

Author's Response:

It's 1:27 a.m. here, I'm laughing hysterically, scaring the neighbours!

I LOVE your comment!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2014 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 16. Cavalry arrives from behind the hills

How sweet that Brian is cuddling!  Darn I was hoping Mikey lost his memories, that would have been funny.  Can't wait to see what Deb and Ben do next!



Author's Response:

You have to wait just a bit.

I have to post 3 chapters and translate 1.

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2014 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 16. Cavalry arrives from behind the hills

Debbie never ceases to amaze me. Love Brian/slap Brian. Love Brian/blame Brian. It's like a pinball machine where her heart should be sometimes, and there always a 'Tilt' coming where Brian's concerned.

And I think Brian should put a tether on that phone of his. ;)

Roni



Author's Response:

Will it help?

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2014 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 16. Cavalry arrives from behind the hills

You know...sometimes Debbie can really grate on my nerves. It's good to know that Mikey is going to be okay, but it's his own fault for barging in where he wasn't invited. Brian can't be blamed for him knocking himself the fuck out.

Author's Response:

What I can say? It's Debbie...

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2014 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 15. Like on a psychoanalyst’s couch

I am so enjoying this story.

I love humorous stories about the boys, as my life has enough angst in it already.

Thank you for posting.

Author's Response:

I agree with all you say.

That is why I don't write anything angsty.

 

Thank you for your compliments

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 1. Brian’s Problem

Brilliant start! I usually don'r read wips, cause I hate to sart something good and not have an ending, going to give it a try! Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment!

Don't worry, the story IS finished long ago.

4 chapters are left. I'm just waiting for the edited ones.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 15. Like on a psychoanalyst’s couch

Mikey's lucky he didn't get knocked in the head with the vase.  How is going to explain why he was there?  And Debbie's probably going to show!



Author's Response:

He won't be able to explain anything :)

And you are right: Debbie is definitely going to show. Now she is walking towards Brian's house. She didn't take a taxi, you see :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 15. Like on a psychoanalyst’s couch

Whoa Mikey actually hurt himself...Brian and Justin can't get a break can they.

Author's Response:

When it rains, it pours

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 15. Like on a psychoanalyst’s couch

Really enjoying this, my dear!  What a hoot!  I admit I couldn't figure out exactly what the boys were doing before, but I knew it wasn't what Michael thought it was.  This is such a fun read!  Thanks for posting it on here.  *Hugs* ~Kim



Author's Response:

I do my best

(blush)

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 15. Like on a psychoanalyst’s couch

This is too funny! Wonderful twists and the chapter titles are almost as fun as the story text! Good job.

Roni



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! thank you!

I'm happily jumping near the computer.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 14. Looks like Brian Kinney’s phone is a diagnosis

This is just too funny for words Lol

Author's Response:

I did my best :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2014 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 14. Looks like Brian Kinney’s phone is a diagnosis

Must have missed this story earlier-  quite amusing-  can't wait to read the rest of it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 14. Looks like Brian Kinney’s phone is a diagnosis

How embarressing.  And costly.  Will Brian make Mikey buy him a new phone?



Author's Response:

I'm afraid, Mikey will be in no condition to buy anything. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 13. One dark, dark night on a dark, dark street…

Ah, but did Emmett get through to Mikey?  Love the 'Singing in the Rain'.



Author's Response:

"Get through to Mickey"? I'm afraid, even Ben can't.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 12. It’s not what it seems

Sounds like everything is okay.  Until Mikey and Deb show up?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 11. Meanwile in...

hehe.  Just what does Brian need saving from?  It looks like Justin's pretty much in favor of them meeting in the bedroom.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2014 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 13. One dark, dark night on a dark, dark street…

I like this.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 13. One dark, dark night on a dark, dark street…

Mikey interruptus...again, this should go over well with Brian lol

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2014 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 10. Good intentions pave the road to...

Hilarious!

Poor Brian! When it rains, it pours. And Debbie, thinking of the consequences too late; now what will she do.

Author's Response:

Well... wait a bit and see ;)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2014 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 10. Good intentions pave the road to...

I can't believe its the tenth chapter already..........its going soooo good!

love it!



Author's Response:

Nine more are left :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2014 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 10. Good intentions pave the road to...

What will Deb be able to do?



Author's Response:

You"ll know it, but you will have to wait. Sorry.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2014 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 9. Time is not always money

How will Justin take what Brian's been up to? 



Author's Response:

Enthusiastically?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2014 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 8. Don Corleone and Catherine de Medici couldn’t have done it better

Darn and I was so looking forward to seeing Brian play Santa!



Author's Response:

I hope the disappointment won't prevent you from reading further?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2014 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 7. Cell phones are the root of all evil

It's a good thing we know what it was Debbie said.  Next chapter please!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2014 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 10. Good intentions pave the road to...

Now Debbie is feeling guilty...why didn't she think of that earlier ;)

Author's Response:

Maybe she was too busy to think?

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 6. A true Machiavelli

Love the chapter title. I can't see a very jovial Santa this year at the Gay and Lesbian Centre.  Brian - dignity = Grumpy Santa.  LOL

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 5. Hercule Poirot and Miss Marple in one body

Oh no.  It appears Santa Brian is coming to town.  It looks like physical and emotional turmoil ahead for Brian. LOL  I'm really enjoying this, thanks for posting it.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Do you really think that Brian will agree to be a Santa Brian?!

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 4. Voice in the wilderness

Okay I know what Brian is doing or about to do, but what is the buzzing and beating.  Hopeful reading on will satisfy my curiosity.  I love the fact I don't have to wait; thank you.

Cheers    

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 3. Deb and Santa Claus’s Problems

Oh my, who is going to be filling in for Santa?  Poor Teddy, he's just not the jovial type and Emmett is too cheerful.   Maybe they could share the costume and get jolly just right. LOL  Thanks again for additional chapters.

Cheers



Author's Response:

It's a great idea to share the costume!

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2014 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 6. A true Machiavelli

Nice story. I can see all 3 acting that way.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 6. A true Machiavelli

I knew it. <jumps up and down for joy>  You did it!



Author's Response:

Deb did it. I mean, blackmail ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 5. Hercule Poirot and Miss Marple in one body

Hahaha.  I smell blackmail material!  Love this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 4. Voice in the wilderness

That's where she made her mistake.  She should have called Justin.  I'm sure he can talk Brian into anything.



Author's Response:

Hmmm... I think if Brian doesn't want, he won't

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 3. Deb and Santa Claus’s Problems

Brian as Santa!  Now that I would love to see.  Hope you pull it off.



Author's Response:

Wait and see :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 6. A true Machiavelli

Deb that clever devil lol...but will Brian still play santa?

Author's Response:

To play or not to play, that is the question...

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 6. A true Machiavelli

OMG, what a way to talk Brian into playing Santa Claus! Love it.;)  Very ingenious.  I knew that was going to be his cell phone.  Looking forward to the rest of your story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I love it, that you love it ;)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2013 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 2. Justin’s also got a problem

looking forward to the lesson.

Love it so far..



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 2. Justin’s also got a problem

Oh, I like this.  Justin's POV and both men seem to see things differently.  LOL   That's classic.  I hope you don't leave us hanging to long for another update.

Cheers



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. The story is finished, I only have to translate it and have it checked and edited.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 1. Brian’s Problem

Hello Natalya, welcome to the dark side. LOL Okay, it's actually the funner side of fiction.  It sounds like you already write fiction, just not in English, so I look forward to reading more of your work as you publish it here for us; fingers crossed you will.  This is a very interesting start and I love fics that can convey so much with so few words.  Thanks for posting two chapters.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Thank you for your compliment

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 2. Justin’s also got a problem

Well, when you put it that way Justin does have a point.  What has he come up with as a lesson for Brian? 

PS if you put a cellphone in some rice it eventually dries out.



Author's Response:

Well... eventually it will dry out, but will it work?!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 1. Brian’s Problem

What fun read :D I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1. Brian’s Problem

Who could blame Brian for being miserable.  Sounds like a typical marriage to me.  lol.  Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

It IS a marriage :)

Happy New Year to yoy too!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 2. Justin’s also got a problem

Congratulations on posting your first story!  Thanks for posting it here on MW. Looking forward to the rest of this.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you for the welcome!

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