Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2020 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
That was fun.
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2020 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
Yes. That helped. 🤣
Reviewer: Sid401k (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 9- Dr. Alex
Always happy to see Dr. Alex.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2019 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
Love it
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2019 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 5- How the hell do you lose a patient
Jennifer always seems to fuck up
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2019 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Accidents do Happen
fucking Lindsey, Michael and Debbie
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
Good fun!
Author's Response: I had fun writing it. Thank you for all the comments.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 10-Revenge is a big turn-on.
Go, Justin! :D
Author's Response: Brian always said he was the strong one.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 9- Dr. Alex
How sweet that Brian wants a do-over.
Author's Response: Don't we all at some point.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 8-The truth comes out
<3 Aw, Brian's falling in love with Sunshine all over again.
Author's Response: Was there any doubt? Poor Brian has been walking a fine line between who he wanted to be and who his so-called friends thought he was.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
LOL. Mikey's tongue was probably hanging down to his knees.
Author's Response: I love a mystery. In this one only Mikey knew where.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
Somehow this sounds like something the so-called best friend would attempt. Poor Brian, disoriented and subjected to the whiny mosquito...
Would that hospital/doctor ever be in for a lawsuit!
Author's Response: I don't know. I get to a certain point in the story and the characters take over.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Accidents do Happen
In their manipulative possessiveness, Lindsay and Michael told Brian he needed to grow up but then undermined him if he showed any signs of doing so. With such "good" friends...
Author's Response: I agree as you will see.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
Is this a conspiracy by possessive and manipulative Lindsay and Michael? I was never very fond of either of them: Lindsay never entirely gave up her dream of the perfect hetero family with Brian; plus, she wanted to live vicariously through Justin as an artist in NYC. Michael refused give up his dream of Brian as his partner (even after marrying Ben) and remained annoyingly whiny.
Obviously, Justin could have refused to go to NYC and not let Brian throw him off the Kinney cliff. But, he probably was enticed by the Big Apple as well as wanting to become more equal to Brian.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
Is this a conspiracy by possessive and manipulative Lindsay and Michael? I was never very fond of either of them: Lindsay never entirely gave up her dream of the perfect hetero family with Brian; plus, she wanted to live vicariously through Justin as an artist in NYC. Michael refused give up his dream of Brian as his partner (even after marrying Ben) and remained annoyingly whiny.
Obviously, Justin could have refused to go to NYC and not let Brian throw him off the Kinney cliff. But, he probably was enticed by the Big Apple as well as wanting to become more equal to Brian.
Author's Response: I think you are right. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: later2night (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2014 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
Hi!
I just wanted to thank you for the lovely comment you left me on the last chapter of my Artist/Justin fic. For some reason, I can't log on to my MW account, which means I can't reply to my comments. But I'm truly thrilled that you're still reading and liking that one even though it's so long between chapters getting posted. (the next should be much quicker!)
Thank you again for taking the time to comment. It means the word to me.
Linda
Author's Response: I'm so busy reading I forget to check my reviews. It's such a little thing to do after reading a story and I do enjoy your Artist/Justin fic.
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2014 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
Great story. Really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: I'm a little behind on checking my reviews. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
nice story :) thanks
Author's Response: Thank you, I didn't think anyone was still reading this.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
Nice ending as the gang ramble on lol they certainly saw a change in the making with Brian. It needed to be so literal as the gang would never have believed it otherwise.
Author's Response: I had fun getting Brian to actually do something he'd never consider doing. Someone posted a video of the 12 days of Christmas and it was so funny I had to borrow from it. Than you for commenting it means a lot.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
Nice ending. As far as posting ... it's usually my inclination to post all in one go, but a couple of times I've done it with the installment plan. One DOES get more reviews and "can't wait until the next chapter" comments.
This was a fun read.
- Jackie
Author's Response: Thanks for saying that! I know it's not one of the really good one, but I did have fun with it and am glad that you feel that it's a fun read. Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 10-Revenge is a big turn-on.
Some people don't like writers reusing lines from the show, but I like the use of the "I want you to always remember this... " here.
- Jackie
Author's Response: It seemed appropriate. I just checked your profile and see I haven't read all your stories yet. A new project for the New Year! They look delicious.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 9- Dr. Alex
As an actress, I can tell you, it DOES improve your ability to lie.
- Jackie
Author's Response: Glad to know.:-)
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 8-The truth comes out
It's good that Brian is reacting so positively to Justin.
- Jackie
Author's Response: He almost didn't, but there is something about the little guy that hooked him from the beginning.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 7-The shit hits the fan
The instinctual knowledge that that blond is his Sunshine.
- Jackie
Author's Response: Yes!!! You got that perfectly!
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 6-Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!
Gotta love Emmett. He's smarter than people give him credit for. I loved it when, in the series, he told Vic that pecan pie story, just to get him to do what he wanted. snicker
- Jackie
Author's Response: I love that about Em, glad you do too.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 5- How the hell do you lose a patient
Our Justin in on to Michael's evil doings. Smart man.
- Jackie
Author's Response: It just seems that way, actually Justin is pretty trusting.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
I see our Mikey has a plan ... he's evil here for sure.
- Jackie
Author's Response: I'm not really sure he had a plan - he just kinda went with the flow?
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
I can see your amusement in your writing. It cracks me up when people hate Mikey so much. I, personally, am not on that track, but I respect and 'get' how people can feel that way.
- Jackie
Author's Response: Let's just say that having someone to vent about makes for a funny story.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
I'll admit that I'm a little confused as to what's going on, but it's great that Justin wants to be back with Brian again.
- Jackie
Author's Response: I guess I can understand your confusion. Let's see if I can help. Justin probably called Jen to complain that Brian didn't want him to leave New York for the holidays. Jen told Deb, who contacted the gang. Mikey probably came up with the idea to kidnap Brian, seeing as he's Brian's best friend. Deb, being the family oriented person, probably invited Brian's parents and Lindsay suggested they use Britin. Brian was secretly happy that Justin wants to come home, but being put down by his oldest friends saddens him. Did that help?
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2014 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
thank you for sharing
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting. Hope you like the story.
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2014 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
I loved your Christmas story, and at last wittle dumb ass mikey got cold cocked. It couldn't have been more deserved. I'm glad the guys sold Britin after people inviting themselves and entertaing it wan't special anymore, it became tainted and after the asshole thru a chair thru a class door to hear what clearly wasn't his or anyones else business.Frankly I can't understand why mikey, Debbie and Lindsey are even allowed to be anywhere new normal people.
Author's Response: I may have gotten a tad carried away, but what's the fun in writing if you can't mess with the characters. Thank you for commenting, it means a lot.
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2014 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
OMG...I laughed my head off! That was so great! I loved it!
Author's Response: I wanted to put the Happy in holidays so I appreciate the laughter. Thank you so much for commenting.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2014 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
Loved Justin's response to Michael's interference in the previous chapter - ha! And amazing what Brian can be talked into and actually like when he is initially pushed into doing something. Thanks for the amusing story. And thanks, too, BTW, for all your support of my stories as well; it is greatly appreciated. Hope you have a wonderful 2014. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely comment. I know how much it means to get notice for your writing so it's only fair to give appreciation to those who pose. Something I plan to continue in 2014. Eagerly awaiting your next chapters when you have the time.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
It's kind of sad that they sold britin, but being able to spend the holiday with family was worth it in the end.
Author's Response: Don't worry, they are going to get something closer to home that is more suitable, so it's all good. Thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2013 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
i loved the story lol when mikey got draged out the loft im not a mikey fan , have a great new year kim
Author's Response: Thank you. I was going to let Mikey get a free ride, but in the end I couldn't do it. Have a Happy New Year too.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 11- Happy 'Fucking' Holidays.
I love the carol signing. Every time you mentioned one I started singing it in my head. I hope Santa gives Ben the gift of some dignity so he leaves Michael, and not just to go carolling. Thanks for the entertainment and the OOC Brian, which I loved. I look forward to your next fic.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you for all your support as I posted this story. I very much appreciate it.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 10-Revenge is a big turn-on.
Justin knew. LOL He always was on to Brian. Justin really must have wanted sex to knock Michael out. xD Okay, I'm kidding, I know that's not why he knocked him out. I wonder what Justin has in mind for Brian to forgive him since sex is their normal way of making up??? Onwards I go. I really don't want to read the next chapter as then it will all be over, but curiosity will win out and I will cave. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: Of course Justin knew. As for the last chapter it is another twist in the story and I hope you enjoy it.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 9- Dr. Alex
OMG, this is brilliant. Just when I thought I knew where the story was going you throw in a great twist. Brian is so sneaky. LOL When did Brian get his memory back, as he didn't seem to have it when he was with Michael, but he called Justin Sunshine??? This very inquisitive person shall read on and see how it plays out.
Cheers
Author's Response: His memory came and went. They went to sleep and he woke up knowing who he was. It was a miracle!!! The last chapter has the biggest twist of them all.
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 10-Revenge is a big turn-on.
Oh thank God I'm so happy you finally let Justin punch Mikey lol. Even better that he took away the Loft key!! Loved this little story. So fun you made laughs bunch. Thank you. Well done!!
:)
Author's Response: If you laughed my job here is done. Thank you for all your reviews. Have a Happy New Year.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 10-Revenge is a big turn-on.
Haha I LOVE IT!!! way to fucking go Sunshine...and to Mikey I just want to say...YOU GOT KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT HAHAHAHA!!!!
Author's Response: I'm sure Justin got tired of Mikey interrupting their having sex and I couldn't resist.
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2013 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 10-Revenge is a big turn-on.
I'm glad I could give you some ideas.
I liked Justin in this chapter and Brian's reaction.
Is now Mikey going to lose his memory?
Author's Response: You'll find out in the last chapter. Thanks for all your nice comments. :-)
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2013 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 9- Dr. Alex
Wow,Brian is only acting now...that's a great idea.
Author's Response: That's Brian for you. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 9- Dr. Alex
Wow!
What a twist!
Author's Response: It's a habit that I have, can't help it. Hope you liked it.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 9- Dr. Alex
Holy shit lol...oh man this is going to be fun to watch :D Give the sex god an 'A+' for effort
Author's Response: He fooled Justin - or did he?
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 8-The truth comes out
Maybe Brian could get back part of his memory and just not remember Michael at all; Michael would deserve that. LOL I need another update please. Also I want more than two chapters as this is fun. Can you please write more? Pretty please.
Cheers
Author's Response: That's an idea. Let me think on it. If only Brian would cooperate!!!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 7-The shit hits the fan
Yay, Brian put more clothes on. I think this is the only fic where I think that is a good thing. xD I hope the denim in his jeans is super thick; still, Brian needs to scrub himself clean. Shower time Sunshine.
Cheers
Author's Response: Normally Brian doesn't care who see's his body. But this time he doesn't remember that. lol.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 6-Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!
Ted can track down Brian; he and Emmett must have some fun with the information they share about his expenses. LOL Who would have thought food would be Brian's saviour?
Cheers
Author's Response: He can only track him if he buys something. I don't think Ted's the kind that would share that information, though Emmett would love to know. hehe.
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 8-The truth comes out
Sunday isn't over!!
Will you post the remaining chapters?
Whispering: is Brian going to f..k Justin and remember everything?! ;-)
Author's Response: Tomorrow you will find out how it ends. I think you'll be surprised.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 8-The truth comes out
I can't wait to see what happens next...have I told you that I love this story;)
Author's Response: That's the best news I've heard!!!! Tomorrow will see the last two chapters, hope you continue to enjoy it.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 7-The shit hits the fan
Yeeeeessss!!! Now the fun really begins
Author's Response: It takes a sharp turn in the final two chapters. I couldn't help it, Brian made me do it!!!
Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2013 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 7-The shit hits the fan
I now know how you feel when I post short chapters complete with cliff hangers.
But yes! for Justin turning up and Brian realising there's something off with what Michael's been telling him.
Author's Response: I suppose I could have posted the story in its entirety, but I love cliff hangers! <whine>
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2013 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 6-Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!
It's moving forward. When will Linsey appear again? Will she be evil, too? Will Mikey getting worse?
Author's Response: Lindsay does make another appearance. As for Mikey getting worse, I guess it's subjective. Personally I think he does. bwaaahaaa
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2013 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 6-Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!
Oh, Boy - Michael is really digging himself into a major hole. I'm not sure who will be angrier - Brian or Justin - once Brian is back to normal. In the meantime, I love how Brian is gravitating toward Justin's favorite movie and eating so much 'forbidden' food. I can't wait to see how Michael justifies what he did. Glad that Emmett is there to be a friend for Justin at the moment. Surely Justin will be checking the loft soon; I can't imagine him not thinking to do that, if only for Brian to shower and get a fresh change of clothes, etc.
Looking forward to more. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: I know it seems like a lot of time has passed, but we're about mid-day here. I really wanted Brian to be as unBrian as possible, since this all happened because he was unhappy with how his 'friends' viewed him. Did Michael ever justify himself in the series? I really don't remember, so he won't here. I love Emmett, so he has his moment, just don't let Brian find out. At this point in time Justin has no idea that Brian has even regained conciousness. It seems like Brian and what happened is almost a figment of his imagination, except that Carl plans on looking into why there's no record of Brian. Does that make sense?
Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2013 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
I usually don't give feedback chapter by chapter, but usually at the end of the story as a whole. No matter what the actions of the characters are, its the whole of the story that is important. The writing is good and the characters are true if slightly exagerrated. If the story is not completely accurate as to medical issues and hospital policies, that falls under fiction and artistic license. Keep on writing, don't let negative criticism about characters stop you
Author's Response: How sweet. You have officially made my day!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2013 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 6-Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!
Wow...why doesn't Justin just go to the loft already? And don't even get me started on Debbie...she went way too far this time.
Author's Response: I know, wasn't it wonderful. I let Debbie rant to her hearts content. hehe
Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2013 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 6-Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!
I love that Michael thinks he can actually get away with this. And that he hasn't considered the implications of what he's doing.
And why hasn't Justin checked the Loft yet?
Also, I shall never use that hospital, as they seem unable to do the most basic of tasks.
Author's Response: I think he's still in shock from the fact that the hospital says that Brian was never admitted. I'm sure it would never occur to him that Michael could be that devious. Can you tell that I don't like hospitals?
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2013 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 5- How the hell do you lose a patient
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. So glad Jen told Justin about Michael. Can not wait for the fireworks when Justin catches up with Mikey!! So well done I really live this story.
:)
Author's Response: Thank you kindly, I had to spread out the damage and try not to offend Michael admiriers. Hope you are not disappointed.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2013 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 5- How the hell do you lose a patient
I hope this fic doesn't end too soon as I'm enjoying the fun; however, it looks like they are well on their way to finding Brian. How bad is Brian's brain injury? Does he remember anything? Will he remember Justin when he finds him? Maybe he'll think Carl is his real boyfriend? Okay, you do know I'm joking about Carl. LOL I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Cheers
Author's Response: There are only ten chapters, but I'm glad you're enjoying the ones you've seen. As for how bad and all your other questions only future chapters will tell. Wish I'd thought of making Carl his boyfriend, it sure would have been funny. I've got a couple of twists up my sleeves but that wasn't one of them.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2013 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
I'm going to be sick if Michael has sex with Brian and you will be responsible. LOL However, there will be more vomit if Michael tops Brian, telling him he is the top. OMG, I just threw up in my mouth. See what thoughts you have put in my head. LOL Michaels not really the sharpest tool in the shed taking Brian back to the loft. I must read on.
Cheers or maybe not. xD
Author's Response: You know that would have been funny, but I never thought of that. Besides I'm not that cruel. Justin would have vomited if that happened!!! Just the thought, is making me sick. Now your the one putting thoughts in my head!!!
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2013 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 5- How the hell do you lose a patient
So they all know that Michael is behind Brian's disappearance, now they just have to find them. Hiding in plain sight. How long will it take them to think of the loft. I hope at the loft Brian claims to have a headache so Michael can't have the sex he so desperately wants.
Author's Response: You don't really think I would it make it that easy. Actually at this point they don't know that Michael did anything. They just know that something is terrible wrong that the hospital doesn't have a record of Brian.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2013 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 5- How the hell do you lose a patient
The shit's about to hit the fan now...Justin just figured out the mystery of the missing sex god. I would hate to be in Michael's shoes when Sunshine gets a hold of him.
Author's Response: Wait until you hear Michael's version. hehehe.
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2013 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 5- How the hell do you lose a patient
New chapter!!!
Author's Response: Yep!
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2013 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
Oh no, That's too short.. I can't wait for the next chapter.Poor Justin and poor Ben.
Author's Response: I know, but I didn't want to give the next part away yet. The next chapter should be up this evening. Hopefully you'll be surprised.
Reviewer: Frayach (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2013 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
One of life's unanswerable questions: why/how on earth does Ben put up with Michael? Alas, we shall never know :) A lovely story, my dear. The kidnapping was hilarious - especially Emmett and Gus's contributions, and I love the image of Justin with glasses - our little Sunshine all grown up! I'm glad to know Ted's watching out for Brian (I'm a big Ted fan). I'm looking forward to the next chapter. After receiving so many kind comments from you, it's nice to have a chance to return the favor. Happy between-Xmas-and-New-Years-day :D
Author's Response: Thank you kindly for the lovely comments. There have been so many great stories this holiday season, I wasn't sure how mine would be received. The kidnapping wrote itself, it was the rest that caused problems. ;-) I've decided I preferr Ted as a Brian supporter rather then a jealous antigonist, but I love to read him either way.
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
Oh ick! Not sure I will ever get the visuals caused by your story and this chapter out of my head lol. Thanks for that and you did make me laugh 'cause even if Brian doesn't remember Justin he knows something is seriously wrong. Can't wait for the reunion!!
:)
Author's Response: Sorry for the visuals. However I do appreciate the laughs. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
Ummm...not liking this set-up at all. How could every single medical personnel involved be unavailable? At least Brian is smart enough to know something wasn't right with the situation even in his incompasitation.
I hope someone finds them soon so that Mikey can't sink his teeth in further.
Author's Response: I know. Sometimes you have to break a few eggs to make an omlet. Or in these case take liberties with reality. My next chapter gets us a little further along and features Carl Horvath, whom I thought should have had a bigger part.
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
AAAAAAAAAAAAA! I want to know what happenned later!
Author's Response: Shortly I promise.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2013 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 4- Where the hell is Brian Kinney?
Justin will eventually arrive at. the loft at where some of his things are. How will Michael claim them? So he swisks Brian away from the hospital and takes him someplace no one will think to look!? That's Michael at his smartest I guess. So happy that Brian knows something isn't right about this set up.
If Ben puts up with this then he'll be a bigger schmuck than Michel.
Author's Response: Depends on the timeline. Let's just say Justin really doesn't have a reason to go back to the loft right now. Then again, in my opinion, Ben always seemed to put up with Michael. Not quite sure why, but there ya go.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2013 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
Poor Justin. Michael's turned into a real lunatic.
Author's Response: Do you think I went a little overboard with Mikey? I couldn't help it, he just screams make me bad.
Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2013 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
Noooooo !!!!!! I read your warning but... It didn't prepared me for that. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out how much you'll successfully frustrate me. Your story is a challenge because I can't imagine how Justin could save Brian without killing Michael ;)
Where is Michael going with Brian ? Hide Brian somewhere ? But where and with what money ? Are they running away ? I would think for that one. Michael would think it's the best idea because it worked with Hunter.
Author's Response: Where is the last place you would expect for him to go?
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
So is the train wreck the Mikey's life is going to become end in a burning fireball? And will Ben addd fuel to the fireball? Enquiring minds would like to know....
Great writing! Keep going!
Author's Response: Sadly I could tell you something bad happens, like getting blown up per the series. But I didn't think of it. lol.
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
What a cliffie, I really don't like Micky. Looking forward to updates! Thanks!
Author's Response: Some things can't be helped. Thanks for the nice comment.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
I don't read other peoples reviews, but I'm truly sorry if people don't understand your sense of humour. I love it. You do always give positive feedback. I understand what you're saying as I have had reviews where people just don't understand my eccentric uniqueness. LOL Nevertheless it would be a very odd world indeed if we were all the same. I'm sure if they think about it, if you didn't write this, tongue in cheek, then all we would be getting is other people's rehashed stories. I love the fic, the humour and the quick updates. Boo Michael, but I'm sure he will get his comeuppance. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: That it! Tongue in cheek is what I've been going for and I forgot what it was called. Thank you, thank you. And thank you for saying you like my story!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Accidents do Happen
Blake and Ted; I love this couple. Blake stops Justin from moving Brian and Ted bring in the documents giving Justin Brian's POA. Now what's needed is "AWAKE UP BRIAN". xD
Cheers
Author's Response: I've always felt that Ted and by extension Blake, not to mention Emmett would be better friends then his long time friends. Just my opinion of course. Thanks for all the lovely comments. Now I don't feel so bad.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
So I've just read all three chapters in one sitting and I just have to say...WHHHAAATTT??? What the fuck was Mikey thinking? What will Ben have to say about this, and what will be the rest of the gangs reaction for that matter?
Well one thing's for sure, Mikey is going to have to answer to one pissed off Sunshine.
Author's Response: Obviously Mikey wasn't thinking. As for the rest you'll have to stay tune. PS-when has Mikey ever answered for something he's done?
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
*giggles madly* can not wait for Justin to catch up with Mikey!! I truly hope he gets even with him for once. Just PLEASE promise Brian won't get involved with Mikeynow when he seems to have a memory issue. Because all I'm gonna if that happens is YUCK!!
Other than that I'm still enjoying this. I see the humor in it. Looking forward to more.
:)
Author's Response: I can't tell you what will happen that would spoil the story. Even though Brian doesn't remember, he knows something is not right. Thank you for seeing the humor in this tale!!!!
Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish
Seriously? What is wrong with you? How dare you! Letting the doctor release Brian only minutes after he's woken up from a coma?! (I'm kidding! The doctor is obviously very inept and has no clue about actually being a doctor.)
And whilst I know the characters are OOC and their personalities are exaggerated from canon, I still hate how they think they can act like this. Especially Debbie, who seems to think she's entitled to know everyone's business. And what the fuck was Michael doing breaking a window, just because Brian and Justin wanted some time to themselves? And then being a whiny bitch about it.
Justin is going to be soooo pissed when he finds out Michael stole Brian away in the dead of night (okay, my imagination might be running away with me there) and that he did so despite Brian obviously having amnesia (I think Justin should sue the doctor for being the worst doctor in the history of the world). Please please say Justin punches him? (I'm not normally anti-Michael, I find him more irritating than anything, but the way he's acting here, he deserves to be punched.)
One minor minor critisism. It's not even that, really. It's just in the first chapter, you had Brian recognise Mel's voice whilst they were in his Loft and then again when they were in the car.
Author's Response: I know, I know, this story has nothing to do with reality. Mikey had to break the window, how else was I going to advance the story and stay in the realm of imagination. lol. As for Justin, first he has to find out that Mikey took him - oops that's getting ahead of myself. As for the critisim, I only write the story, I don't read it. <snicker> Thanks for an enjoyable review
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2013 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Accidents do Happen
I'm guessing Brian wakes up while either Michael or Lindsay is there, doesn't remember anything so Justin gets left out in the cold.
Hope I'm wrong. Terribly wrong. Hope if he remembers everything he lets loose his true feelings.
Author's Response: What! Have you been peeking at my hard drive. lol. Things have to get worse before they get better. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2013 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Accidents do Happen
You said it will be worse. Well, it is. Please don't make Justin only WANT to tell them to fuck off but just DO it. Justin is not only coming back home but Brian WANTS him to come back. The gang is messing with his and Brian's happiness. He shouldn't let them keep treating Brian like that. Would Brian remember Justin when he'll wake up ? You are that kind of evil.
The best Holidays for Brian would be away from the gang with only Justin and Gus by his side. I can keep dreaming : the more I read, the more it becomes a challenge.
Good job !
Author's Response: Sadly, it will not get better. This is about how other people perceive Brian and not in a good way. It saddens me that you find reading this a challenge. Hope your Christmas was happy.
Reviewer: dotted (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2013 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Accidents do Happen
I like the way this "Brian's injured" fic is layed out, with everyone in or around the waiting area. And it's an easy, flowing read. But why would Brian's birth family be there at all?
And it's good that the author was thoughtful enough to include the anti-Michael tag. This way when we don't get canon Michael but instead get out of character clinging psychopath Michael, the reader was been warned. So I don't understand why anyone could think the author has "nailed " Michael? If by "nail", the meaning is to skewer or beat down in print, then yes, the writer really nailed Michael. But this is to be expected due to the anti-Michael tag. However, if "nail" in this context is supposed to mean accurately represent, then I can't help but wonder if some viewers actually watch the entire show all the way through.
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I admit my memory of Michael's scenes aren't exactly flattering to him. I also tagged OOC, so you shouldn't expect things to be the way you feel they should be. However I feel that critisizing someone elses comments is not exactly nice. Hopefully it is something I never do.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2013 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
No matter how hard he tries they just can't let up. Say yes to the two of you together in NY. It will be the wisest move you could ever make.
Author's Response: I think that's what I was trying to get across. The people who knew him longest can't see past - the past. Justin's move to NY was mostly pushed on him and he gave in. At least in my verson. LOL.
Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2013 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
I don't really understand why Brian's family was there. I mean, if Justin knew about the "intervention" why would he wants to invite them ?
I'm glad Mel isn't a bitch. She doesn't like Brian but that's it. Usually authors go too far with Melanie's feelings towards Brian.Did they came back to the US or just visiting ? Where is JR ?
If only Brian would move to NY with Justin... Linsday thinks Justin needs to be there but Brian needs to be with Justin. Mwahahaha !!! In your face !
I have so many questions but it's just the first chapter and I know I have to wait >:(
How would Michael feel if Justin behaved like him for a few days ? Treating his relationship with Ben like it's not one, making sure there're never alone, making all kind of bad comments... Jennifer could do the same by becoming a new Debbie and deals with Michael like Debbie does with Brian.
I think it would enrage them but after feeling insulted Debbie would see the point of all this comedy. Ben should go on with it, he's too intelligent to not see Michael's shit and not to anything about it. I'm just hoping Gus will not be traumatized.
Author's Response: In a way you are right - this is a comedy. I think Justin was just as surprised to find the Kinney's there, but he's too polite to throw them out. JR is there, but she's so little nobody sees her. But don't worry it gets worse. Mwahahaha!!! Hope you continue to read : - )
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
Very interesting start. Looking forward to more. Love that you nailed Mikey Linds and. Deb's behavior and since they are my three least liked characters I know I'm gonna enjoy this. Thanks for sharing.
:)
Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda get carried away and let my Muse run wild. Thanks for commenting. : - )
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
Hi, my friend! So great to see you posting a new story on here (at least to us).:P) I liked how you used the idea from Brian's 30th birthday to 'convince' him to attend a Christmas function. As always, Brian pretty much only has eyes for his two 'boys here.';) It will be interesting to see how this plays out, but something tells me that B and J will have a hard time staying apart.
Looking forward to the rest of this! Hope you have a good Christmas.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you, I finally got this finished so I'll be posting a chapter a day. Some are shorter than others. Actually, they have a hard time staying together as you will see, but things do turn out in the end. Unfortunately I get an idea and trying to express it in words is most difficult.
Hope your day was wonderful :-)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 1- Intervention Time
Well, Happy ‘Fabulous' Holidays to you too.LOL Is this going to be an anti-Lindsay fic as well. I don't mind, as long as it's not anti-Brian or Justin I'm on board. xD I don't think Brian is the one that needs an intervention here; I can't see the logic in breaking a door when Brian and Justin had just been kissing. Michael needs help. Since you started this last year does that mean you have more than one chapter ready; fingers crossed the answer is yes.
Cheers
Author's Response: Yes, I do have this story finished. I tend to start then run out of steam or get another idea. This isn't exactly anti-Lindsay, it's just Lindsay as I remember her. Actually I did hit the anti-Lindsay button but it got lost. I had to go back several times to fix things when I posted. Thanks for leaving a comment. :-)
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