Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2015 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
The plot thickens! I love jealous Justin almost as much as jealous Brian. I think you must have wrote this story specifically for me.
Author's Response: You could say I wrote this fic for you as I wrote it for anyone with a sense of humour and you certainly have an entertaining one. The plot thickens with a jealous Justin, joining a jealous Brian, throwing a delusional Ethan into the mix, while Confucius does all the talking. Confused yet. LOL Confucius says, "Do not listen to Confucius." The idea of confusing was first discovered by a confused Confucian philosopher Confucius in the confounding era of confusion; I could go on but I'm confused.
Cheers O.o
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2014 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 4
I didn't see Brian kissing Ethan coming. Expecting jealous Justin to really make an appearance next chapter now.
Author's Response: Brian kissing Ethan; I really didn't think too much about writing that, then someone mentioned it in a review, and I'm like, YUCK. LOL
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2013 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 4
"...passionate kiss like spider web...soon lead.."
LOL! Where do you find this stuff?
Author's Response: I wasn't going to admit this. I've never been a fan of knock, knock jokes or Confucious say, so the challenge was for me to enjoy them. It's amazing how many you probably know when you think about them, however, I googled and adjusted some to suit my fic. LOL I don't know why, but I have the urge to add "No Copyright infringement intended". LOL I was pretty happy that I was able to fit so many in and I'm really chuffed that they made you laugh.
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Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2013 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
OK, I think, I m understanding a little bit better. I thought it was sad that they had to be reprimanded for saving his life but protocol is a strange thing sometimes i guess. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Protocol just brings a little more tension between B/J and as usual Brian handles it with the upmost grace and aplomb. LOL Thanks Jon for reviewing, the final chapter has now been posted. I really appreciate your support.
Your timing couldn't be better; I have obviously missed something. I went to read "The Red Hoody" (love the name) and realised I had missed something. I thought I had read all "Beauty and the Beast" and I was sure I had even reviewed more chapters than are there. So am I right in assuming you moved some of the chapters from "Beauty and the Beast" to "Jack and the Beanstalk". I'm totally confused and I can't wait to get to "The Red Hoody" as it starts with a pregnant Justin and I have been looking forward to that.
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Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2013 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
Gotta say, I'm a little bit confused (some of it is down to not remembering what happened in the previous chapter). But I'm confused in a good way. As it makes me want to keep reading to find out just what's going on. Far as I can make out, Justin, Connor and Ben/Brandon (I got lost there) are fuck buddies due to convience. And Ethan wants to sleep with Justin, and Brian, but so far hasn't been successful. Brian is toying with Ethan to make Justin jealous, as he wants to sleep with Justin. (More than once, I'm assuming.) And Connor, Justin and Ethan are all part of the same crew and Brian is the new guy filling in for the guy who had the affair or whatever. Is that right? (I'm also confused as to what their mission is, but I'm less bothered about that, as it doesn't seem to be central to the plot.)
(And in reference to your previous response, I initally didn't get the B1, B2 referene as I haven't watched Bananas in Pjyamas in forever. But once you'd mentioned it, I knew what you were talking about.)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for wanting to understand this fic. You are correct with all you have said. Justin, Connor, Ben and Brandon are fuck buddies for convenience. Ethan has a crush on Justin and thinks he is amaaazing. I had such a hard time letting Ethan say that word.LOL Ethan wants his one-off fun time with Brian. Brian is toying with Ethan as he is trying to figure out if Justin has any feelings for him, without asking of course. Connor is part of the ISS crew and Ethan is part of Justin's shuttle crew. Brian is filling in as the new guy of Justin's shuttle crew because of the cheating astronaut. I have skipped a few of your observations as I don't want to give anything away, but they will be answered in the final chapter.
Thanks for letting me know you have read "Flight Plan B" and that you got the B1 & B2 reference.
I really appreciate your review, thank you. I hope you enjoy the ending.
Cheers
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2013 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 4
Funny and silly (In a good way.) fic. But gotta say even the thought of a possibility of Brian and Ethan together made me worry about possible nightmares.
Author's Response: LOL I totally agree with you, the pairing of Brian and Ethan is certainly nightmare material. Sorry. LOL Funny and silly; thank you so much. I write for fun and I just hope people join me in my silliness. Enjoying writing is my downfall as the plot sometimes gets forgotten; hence, my sincere appreication to you for your support and giving feedback. I really do appreciate it.
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Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2013 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 4
Well that's obvious. He jealous of Brian being with Ethan. We know that Brian's one fuck policy is what's holding Justin back. You said so.
Author's Response: Do you think Ethan is delusional thinking Justin wants him and that's why he is jealous? LOL I hope you enjoy the ending. Thanks again for taking the time to review.
Cheers
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