Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2019 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 86
Linds have completely lost it...she is mad women.
Author's Response: Things get worse before they get any better!! Bill
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2015 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 86
Maybe someday Michael will realize that Justin works too. How would he feel if everyone started saying that he was spending all Ben's money.
Lindsay better watch out or her parents will throw her out on her lazy ass.
I wish I'd grown up with parents as wonderful as Brian and Justin.
Still loving the story.
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I've been helping an author with a story. It's a lot of fun but I don't know how you guys do it.
Author's Response: Mikey realize things change, You and Linds are both having a little trouble with reality. I think her parenst are already sorry she is staying in their house. B&J have lots of love to share. Glad you are still enjoying the tsory. Thanks for reviewing as you catch up. You know I love to get them!!! Bill
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2015 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 86
So good to see Brian & Justin's family thriving and growing. They're great dads!
Author's Response: They are great Dads, glad you are srill enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 86
Oh what a nice update. It was nice to read about the celebration, letting tillie see Brian now and how far he's come. YAY!! surrogate! Can't wait.
Good to see Deb finally putting Micheal in his place. Mind you, I think it has more to do wit hJR than it does Justin, but either way,as long as she starts really seeing Michael for the snivling little twerp he is.
Not sure about Lindsey. There's so many ways you could take her character now. Definitely curious. Hope her parents forget about her threats and boot her out. Wondering if their reation was actual fear of their own standing in siciety, or just merely stunned and will not pur up wit hher crap. hmmmmmmmm...
Was very excited to see this the other day. Lat reviewing as I hate tyoping on my tablet. :)
cheers and many thanks!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter. I think you are correct about Debbie, she is most concerned about JR. Everyone kind of knows Michael has a blind spot about Justin's relationship with Brian but don't want him involving JR in his silliness. Lindsay has some real issues and I'm not sure her parents are equiped to deal with them. I don't like typing on my tablet either! Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2015 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 86
great update- nice having achpater without a whole lot of drama- although I do love the angst. love that Peter and John are nowfull fledged Kinney's. can't wait for more
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter. Got to have no angst every once in a while so we can enjoy the angst when it comes. Thanks for the review!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2015 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 86
Fantastic update! Nice celebration for John ad Peter along with the change of their last names Happy Debbie is seeing how wrong Mikey is about Justin, also Ben ( always thought Ben was too good, smart and nice toe with Mikey).
Don't think Linz is going to last long at her parents. Just hope she doesn't end up being a surrogate, a surprise one, that has gone through the clinic that Justin and Brian is using. Surly you wouldn't be that mean.
I forgot about Craig and the loan he has with Brian and Justin. Going to be an ineresting meeting with him and Ted.
Cont. to LOVE this fic, so looking forward to next update.
Thanks for sharing!
Always your fan, JoAnn
Author's Response: Hi JoAnn, always good to hear from you!!! Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter. This starts a new happy chapter in John & Peter's lives. I think they realize how lucky they are to have wound up with the uncles!! Debbie has always had a soft spot for Justin, she was the first to call him Sunshine. I think Ben has accepted Michael's obsession with Brian but, like Debbie, he isn't happy about Michael trash talking Justin to JR. Wow; Lindsay as a surrogate, that would be too weird. I will not be anywhere near that mean. I think Ted knows he is in the driver seat for that meeting and Craig won't have a chance against him. To be honest I kind of let that story line slide but it took a while to get the reports from the accountant and business consultant - that is my excuse and I am sticking to it. Thanks for being so loyal about commenting on each update. I always enjoy reading your comment, although the thought of Lindsay as a surprise surrogate may give me nightmares. You know I love to get reviews so thanks very much for taking time to post them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2015 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 86
Really enjoying your story. Thanks for writing and the frequent updates. I look forward to every new chapter.
Author's Response: Happy to know you sre enjoying the story. It has been fun writing it. I love reviews so thanks for taking time to post one!!! Bill
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 86
Yeahhhhh!!!! A baby is coming!!!
Sooo Love this Story
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying this story. It will be a while before the babay arrives. Thanks for the review. Bill
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 86
Michael has gotten worse. At first while reading this chapter I
wondered why people haven’t just sat him down and
explained to him why he is so wrong. You know, not just that
what he said was wrong, but explain the issue.Then I
remembered in back chapters, people did. Well – Michael has
reached a point where Brian and Justin should wash their
hands of him. Simply put, he is just no good. Sadly he is such
an important character that it is just not possible.
Anyway, we have another line I really enjoyed. They were
going to meet for dinner in a sort of celebration. Sure enough,
so typical of Brian:
Brian frowned. “I hope no one is going to get too
sloppy or sentimental.”
I liked that line a lot. Of course we all know just how happy
Brian was, no one happier than him. In side, though he would
never show it, he was as sloppy and sentimental as anyone.
Thanks again for the story.
DavidR
Author's Response: I think Mikey is incapable of change. He wants to be his 14 year old self when he and Brian were best friends. I never think of him as deliberatley mean just clueless and single minded. He preferred a screwed up Brina who relied on him more. I agree that line is typical of the Brian we all know and love. No outward expressions of emotions suits him best. Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer. Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2015 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 86
Sorry Bill, I forgot my questions, Will Hal re-appear? Any chance Justin will become Justin Taylor-Kinney ? somehow I think will bring the small family closer and their will be less jealousy for the new little Kinny showing there is enough love for all of them. Plus the big bonus: Joan will go screaming into the night cause there is nothing she can do! Lindsey will pull her hair out and will look like Kojack! Best of all Mikey will climb a tree, police have to get him down and rush him to a nice padded cell where it can talk to the walls about his bestest friend. Come on giggle I know you want to.
Author's Response: We are done with Hal, he is not interesting enough to have another story thread for him - I am having enough trouble keeping evryone and evrything straight and not dropping any story threads. Not a big fan of hyphenated names but I have thought about it. It might become more of an issue if there are little Sunshines running aorund the house. I imagine Joan just drinking herself into a stupor. Maybe Lindsay and Michael can get adjoining padded cells but she may get there first. I did giggle!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2015 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 86
Hi Bill, I really enjoyed this chapter,you're always worth the slight delay. I'm glad the boys are so happy with Brian and Justin and Gus is really to young to understand even Clair's sons don't understand her attitude. Mikey aka Dumbf--k was so mean trying to spoil JR's fun with her doll house he is a jealous boob. I think Lindsey has a form of mental illness, I don't like anything about the Petersons but they should be treated with respect they gave her everything she wanted until she wanted Mel and Gus. They should give her a month to find a job and move out so they can sell the house or rent it out due to financial problems. About the people who have a problem with with the drinking, in my family we didn't drink, but on big gatherings on Thanksgiving and on Christmas I being the only child was allowed a sip of wine, I still only drink on those holidays and I'm in my 60's and didn't turn into a wine-o.please more chapters.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Sorry my schedule is not strict enough for you. Mikey pretty much is a jealous boob but I always think he really can;t help himself. I never think of him as mean just clueless. I think you may be right about Lindsay. Lindsay always felt that her parents favored her sister so she may not feel musch gratitude to them. I do actually think about things before I write the and thought about the champagne, Gus got a cordial glassfull and John and Peter had two small glasses of champagne. I am one of those believers in exposing kids to stuff to take away the mystery and appeal of the unknown. My Dad was a functioning alocholic which I didn't really realize until I was an adult but I drink only rarely in social settings. I don't think a little champagne will cause any life problems for the three boys but everyone is entitled to their opinions and I respect them. I was going to insert in the story that none of them liked champagne but I didn't bother, oh well.
I will try and meet the arbitrary schedule some of my readers have set for me and get a new chapter posted soon. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2015 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 86
Wow! Such good stuff! Lots going on!
Just remember we want you to keep writing for years!
Lindsey seems to have her parents on the run., while Michael 's Mom is dishing out the rules to him. And Ben seems to be wising up to Michael, or maybe just getting fed up with him.
A good day for B&J, with custody of the big boys and news on the baby front.
Thank you for posting!
Hope you and yours are safe from the fires.
Author's Response: Happy to know you enjoyed the latest chapter. Lindsay's parents don't seem to have any idea how to deal with her. I think both Debbie and Ben are upset that Michael is tryig to infect JR with his jealousy of Justin. B&J are expanding their family right now and maybe later. The fires are all on the other side of the mountains but one day the wind direction changed and we dealt with smoke for a day before the winds switched back. Thanks for the good thoughts!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Jennie (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2015 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 86
I,ve reviewed before. But I have to say I soooo enjoy this story. And enjoy each update. But I think. We need so,e Brian whumpage soon. We do love to see justin as a mother hen. More please
Author's Response: Glad to know you are still reading and enjoying the story. Thanks for letting me know. I love to get reviews so I appreciate you taking the time to post one!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2015 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 86
So I changed my mind your not allowed to fast forward to get to baby time if you ar still writing this in a year or so when it could legitimately be baby time I will still be reviewing and be annoying you for more chapters tomorrow not in a week
Author's Response: So you don't want me to agree with you???????? You are a mystery.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2015 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 86
Happy for the boys, permanent place to live, a surname they can take some pride in. Good. But given their grandparents backgrounds, they should have celebrated with sparkling cider.
I had forgotten all about Craig and the loan. Teddy is going to be in heaven relaying the news to him. I'm with Tucker, I do think he's going to give Jenn a call. Figures he'll save some money on her commission. Wring!
As for Lindsay, Ron should just pack het bags and put her out on the side of the road. Call her bluff. She'd be too embarrassed to write and tell anyone what's happened to her.
I do look forward to a new chapter.
Author's Response: I think the name change makes them feel more like one family. I think we are OK with 2 small glasses of champagne but it is something the uncles should keep their eye on. I agree that Ted will enjoy telling Craig hat he has to do and I am thinking Tucker is correct. I don't see Jennifer giving Craig any discounts, he may get charge an annoyance fee on top of her commision. I think the Petersens are going to have quite a bit of trouble getting Lindsay out of that bedroom. Glad you are still enjoying the story and I appreciate the review!!!! Bill
Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2015 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 86
“It’s easy to be generous with someone else’s money.” It certainly is Michael. As YOU well know. At this point, I think he knows Justin has his own money, but he thinks if he says it enough, others will believe. And he's stupid enough not to realize the only person he's trying to convice is himself.
I wonder what Ben's strange look is about. You keep saying Ben loves having a helpless partner, but dare I hope he's realizing there's helpless and there's.......Michael?
Author's Response: Poor Mikey I'm not sure what he knows and what he dreams. Helpless is one thing mean is another, I don't think Ben liked Michael trying to turn JR against Justin. We wil have to wait and see what happens there. Thanks for the review, I love to get them and see what readers think of the story. Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2015 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 86
Yes it taking more than a week for a new chapter was noticed but it was a good one so not a complaint just me whining for more faster....
Anyone who thinks Michael is done cutting on Justin in front of JR raise your hand no one I thought so...
I love Gus but I have to admit I think you may be trying to kill him you know it's not legal for him to be in the front seat booster or not it's also really dangerous. Sorry I have become really fussy about car seats the more I learn about them my youngest niece will be rear facing until at least 4 because that's when your spine fuses one accident and a forward facing baby can be internally decapitated. Gross I know but my older niece is still in a booster she is 8 it's safer. They need to keep Justin's small SUV for when Brian has to drive Gus to school and get the bigger one for when everyone is in the car. Public service message over.
I was so happy to find this when I got home today I refresh the site 2 times a day just to see if miraculously there is something new. I loved how Gis questioned both his Papa and his Daddy' so he could understand why John and Peter are celebrating. I think Craig is going to throw a fit when Ted tells home to downsize it should be pretty funny. I want Ron and Nancy to have another open house so they force Lindsay out of the house that should be fun, not that it will sell but Lindsay being pissed cause she has to get out of bed will be fun to see. I liked how the Hospital wanted Greg back not a chance in hell and Hal got fired again yippee.
I almost want a huge fast forward to Justin and Brian bringing home their twins and sorry that's what I keep thinking and either both girls or one girl one boy. That is what is stuck in my head and now I continue to gently hint (or forcefully shove the idea) to you.
fYI I do not see a pink mini van in their future maybe a tricked out Cadillac Escalade in black with every safety feature available.
Another great chapter I am still willing to bribe you for the next one to take less than 7 days what do you like Chocolate, candy, cookies, Lobster gimme a hint....
Author's Response: One lousy day!!!! Picky, picky. I don't think any rational person beleives Michael will stop complaining about Justin. Strangely our minds travel along similar paths (one of us should be worried). I did consider the whole Gus riding in the front seat thing. Here is my take on it: my calculations say that Gus is 7 and will be 8 in a cople months. He was born when Justin was still in school so I am going to say his birthday is in November - at least that is when it is in my story. He is also tall for his age since both hsi parents are pretty tall. So I decided it was borderline OK for him to ride in front but I understand your concern. I also feel a little emabaressed to have put this much thought into this car thing - now you can understand why it takes a while to post these chapters.
I think Ted will enjoy giving the news to Craig and won't care if Craig has a fit or not. He really has no options so he is going to have to go along with the requirements or delare bankruptcy. It may take dynamite to get Lindsay out of that room. I thought we would all enjoy Hal failing at another job. I agree that we wil need to do some fast forwarding to get to babytime. I refuse to comment further on baby things at this time!
I will try my best to pst the next chapter in less than a week. Alway enjoy reading your comments!!! Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2015 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 86
I am really enjoying this story.
Please keep writing for you are a gifted writer.
Debbie
Author's Response: Glad to know you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the nice comment, I have no plans to end the story anytime soon. I love reviews so thanks for taking time to post one. Bill
Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2015 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 86
Yes! I am excited for both Brian and Justin as they make this big decision. Lindsay sounds like she is suffering from depression. Michael acts like a jealous infant. I'm glad both Debbie and Carl can see it.
Author's Response: It will be interestng to have a little Sunshine around the house. I think you could be right about Lindsay. Debbie, Carl & Ben all saw how silly Michael was acting. He just can't help himself! Thanks for taking time to review. Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2015 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 86
Oomh I can see why Gus would have some questions on the custody of Peter and John and I am sure he will have a little problem when he has to leave and go back to Mel and Linds. Lol Lindsay is having so much fun finding herself in her bed!
Author's Response: I think Gus may be going back to just Mel at least for a while. Lindsay is hiding more than finding. Glad to know you are still reading and enjoying. Thanks for being such a faothful reviewer!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2015 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 86
I hope Ron and Nancy kick Lindsay out of the house quick. She doesn’t pay any damn bills there and has absolutely no right to be rude or disrespectful.
Author's Response: WOW, cold blooded! LOL I think they may try to reason with her before kicking her to the curb but we will have to wait and see how this plays out. Thanks for the laugh and the review!!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2015 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 86
How exciting to see another new chapter. I like the special dinner Alice had for everyone. Made me hungry. lol Mikey put his foot in his mouth yet again. Even Ben noticed. I never thought this would happen, but I actually feel sorry for the Petersons. How will you manage to get Lindsey back to sanity? Great Job!
Author's Response: My friend, quick to read and review today. Mikey is very good at putting his foot in his mouth, he has lots of practice. The Petersens, all three, are having a rough time right now but you know - shit happens! I think Lindsay still has a way to go down before she can start back up. I saw on a different story's reviews that you said this was your favorite story, you read and review a lot of stories so that really made my day!!!!!! Thanks for all your support, I appreciate you. Bill
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