Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 81

Oh Lindsay, go see a shrink - NOW! Otherwise everything will go downhill. Nobody will trust you ever more. You´ll loose your job, then Mel and in the end: Gus. What a drama.

She is ill, mental disease, isn´t she?

When Brian is about to hear the petty cash-incident, he will drive crazy and going to protect his son. They are going to court for custody cases anyway.

The nephews want to have their name changed! A better sign Brian will never get: There are role-models named Kinney in a life-affirming way! There is healing on the way...

So, give us the weekend-party-chapter already, we are "hungry"...;)))

 



Author's Response:

just posted the new chapter, took a little longer but it has a lot in it. The longest chapter so far! Lindsay sure does have issues. We'll have to wait and see how she handles them.  More about petty cash in 82, along with other mucher issues. Always look forward to your comments!! Glad you are anxious for more. Thanks for helping on the march to 1,000.  Bill

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2015 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 81

Hmmmmmm....haven't checked the site for a while so just getting caught up....Was very interested in  the petty cash situation...Uh oh!  and the whole Jen vs Linds  threatening situation...very amusing. Also glad for Tille entering the picture, I was riveted by her story.  Great job as always.

Have to ask...Are you a fan of the "Good Witch" movies and show? Have to say your story reminds me a lot  of that show (with light romance, rl situations and not serious or easily resolved problems) Just wondering.



Author's Response:

I have not really ever heard fo the Good Witch movie or show. The only "good witch" show I am familiar with is Bewitched.  I am a big fan of low angst stories.  There will be some new clues to petty cash issue in the next chapter. I wanted Tillie to shw that Joan did have options but she was too proud to take them. We don't know what Joan's home life was like so it could be that she came from an abusive family and so Jack's behavior may have seemed "normal" to her. That might make an interseting story - Jack & Joan the romace. Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  It is fun to not read a story for a while and than have a few chapters to catch up on.  Thanks for helping on the march to 1,000.  I do really LOVE to get reviews.  Bill

Reviewer: Stephanie (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2015 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 81

I don't usually comment on the stories I read....way too many to comment on each and every single one of them!

But yours is truly the BEST Brian/Justin story I have ever read. And I've been reading fanfiction for a few years now so I've read a lot of them. I just read yours a second time from the top in just a few weeks.

I love that Brian and Justin have minor tiffs but are basically an extremely solid couple and I love the relationship between Gus/Justin.

I'm also a big fan of anti-Lindsay and anti-Michael so your story ticked all the boxes for me.

I'm really happy you seem to post chapters regularly and can't wait for the next one! I'm sensing some Lindsay gambling.

Best of luck to you and thanks for this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much for your extremely nice comments.  I am both flattered that you took time to review my story and a little sad that you don't review regularly.  Reviews are the only "pay" that authors recieve and I LOVE to get reviews and I know other authors feel the same way.  It is the only way we know readers are enjoying the story.

I try and make the story as real world as possible and I think all couple have tiffs, if not something is wrong with them.  I also think B&J really understand each other and do their best to deal with their's partners annoying traits.  Lindsay was always my least favorite character in the series, as I have mentioned several times in reviews.  I think of Mikey as clueless and completely unable to deal with change.  I never thought he was in the same category as selfish Lindsay.  That is why he just gets the occasional putdown.  I think both Brian and Justin appreciate that he (& Debbie) were good friends to Brian when he really needed them.

Thanks again for this incredibly nice review, I hope you continue to enjoy the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

 

 

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 81

Terrific last couple of chapters.  I was wondering if John and


Peter thought of changing their name to Taylor-Kinney.  Just a


thought…


    Also, silently I keep hoping that Lindsey would somehow


change.  She is not anyone but rather a very important person


in this story.  Then again, I felt the same way about Claire.  Oh


well!


    Nice that you are looking forward to your 1,000 Review. I


was just wondering if it would be too much for readers to


suggest that if you get 1,000 Reviews, we get 1,000 chapters. 


Just a thought...  The story is that good!


    DavidR



Author's Response:

Glad to hear from you and happy you are still emjoying the story. I think the boys are going to stick with just Kinney but you never know when things could change. Lindsay has a probelm that she needs to deal with and when she does that I hope she will be able to get her life together. I do have to say I never liked Lindsay in the show.  I always found her to be selfish and she played Mel and Brian against each other to get what she wanted.  So, to be honest, Lindsay is never going to be a beloved figure in my story - sorry!  I am pretty sure that everyone, including me, would be bored with this story way before 1,000 chapters,  Thanks for the review and helping the march to 1,000!!!!   Bill 

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 81

Oh, "drag it out" is definitely a good thing. It hate when other writers let Mikey and Lindsay off the hook too easily. This makes for a much juicier story, especially when you like the "Mikey/Lindsay bashing" as much as I do!



Author's Response:

good to know.  I hope I live up to your expectations.  Bill

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2015 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 81

OK...I was going to wait until this story was tagged as completed until I started reading it, but it just kept going and going and going...

Anyway, I figured, as long as it was, to be sure by the time I got to the end it would be completed...not so. Well, now I don't ever want it to end! Damn! I love me some Mikey & Lindsay bashing and I have to say...nobody can drag it out quite like you!!! Love it! Love it! Love it! My only complaint is that I can read faster than you can write LOL!

Please quit your day job & write ALL DAY LONG! We'll send donations! :) Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Always happy to hear from a new reader. Happy you are enjoying the story and want it to continue. I still have lots of ideas for storylines. Wasn't really certain the "drag it out" was a good thing but since it was followed bu "Love it..." I am going to take it as a compliment. Thanks for taking time to leave a reviews since I LOVE getting reviews!!! Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2015 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 81

Okay, I've been thinking, is Lindsay gambling again or is she taking money that she feels is 'owed' to her as the mother of Brian's child.

Also, I love how you respond to all of your reviews. I really appreciate that you do. Some authors always ask for reviews but never even put up just a smiley face to acknowledge that they have seen them, much less take the time to leave sweet and sometimes very funny comments about the review like you always do. I leave reviews because I really appreciate that you writers take time out of your lives to entertain us, it's just nice to know that someone reads the review. :)

Author's Response:

I'm pretty sure you don't really want me to pick one of those options.  What would be the point of the next chapter if I did that.  A very wise person (Predec2) told me to always answers reviews.  She is the one who got me to post this story here and gave me lots of encouragement for this story (my first ever).  I really do enjoy getting reviews and kind of getting to know the regular reviewers.  Thanks for always leaving reviews I truly appreciate it!!!  Only 79 to go - YAH.  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2015 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 81

It is a good thing that Mark is on the ball and reported Lindsay's request for yet another check. Really Lindsay--must you steal from the hand that is feeding you? Yes, Pat, you should definitely talk to Sidney about the petty cash. "Corporate interference" is called for! Glad that Jennifer is on the case and is working to thwart Joan's plans. Jennifer is quite resourceful. So sad to hear details of Brian's childhood. But, loved hearing about B&J's devotion to each other. Looking forward to the upcoming weekend--that should be eventful with all the kids running around. Oh, was glad to see a mention of Nathan...I thought he sounded kind of interesting in the earlier chapter. Adore this story!

Author's Response:

I think that everyone who works for Ted better be on the ball.  Love him but he is a little anal about things being done correctly, Blake probably enjoys that side of him (couldn't resist).  Poor Lindsay villified by all my readers.  Joan has no hope of sucess against Grandmom Jen.  I thought it would be good to get a glimpse of the majorly dysfunctional Kinney household.  Brian's life is way better now even with the pending kid invasion.  Thanks for helping me on the road to 1,000 by leaving a review!!!!!!!!!!!Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2015 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 81

Sibling rivalry...gotta love it lol. What in the hoo haa could Lindsay be spending all of that money on? She better have some damn good answers.

Author's Response:

Gus is pretty unhappy to have his Daddy/Papa time intruded upon by his pesky little sister.  Not one single reviewer has stood up for Lindsay, pretty shocking.  Answers coming soon but not from Lindsay.....  Thanks for the review and helping me towars my goal!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2015 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 81

Me again, I was really surprised that so many reviews thought Lindsey was gambleing again. If that was true I think Mel would run straight to Brian and alert him neither of them have the patience with this and nip it in the bud. I kind of thought as vain as she is and how she feels entitled to everything the money went to a new wardrobe she's always trying to empress everyone. I don't see Sidney stealing from himself, he made money from the deal with Justin. Your story just keeps giving wonderful chapters and your responses always make me think, It won't be long til you get your 1000 then we will have to set a new goal. Love always. 



Author's Response:

AH but would Melanie know the gambling had started again????  People would notice the new outfits.  All will be revealed soon but I like that I've got you thinking.  I think it is fun that a couple reviewers say they enjoy my responses.  That makes me think more about how I respond.  82 to go!!!  Thanks for all your support.  Bill

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2015 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 81

what in the world is Lindsey doing, trying to get rid of Pat or start in-fighting between Sidney and Justin proving Justin isn't able to run the gallery? Justin needs a meeting with Ted, Sidney, and Pat to find the true story and he needs to do it at the gallery making sure Lindsey is not invitied that ought to put her on notice to stop this, then tell her how much will be deducted from her salery for stealing from petty cash and that Sidney will now keep the petty cash! I'm waiting (not patiently) for the custody of John and Peter, for the first time in their lives they are loved, well fed, have friends and are going to a school that is great for them. Then of course cold hearted bitch Joan has to try to ruin it, she doesn't care they're happy and laughing and enjoying their life like regular kids should. ok guess what? More chapters, gotta see Brian with all the kids!   



Author's Response:

you and many other readers have poor Lindsay found guilty without a trial, very shocking.  I think Ted will find time on Saturday to let Justin know about the pett cash issue.  More information may come from an somewhat unexpected source.  We will find out if all of you have been unjustly villifyng Lindsay or not.

I don't think Joan cares much about happiness or own or anyone else's.  I don't think there would be much fun in her house but the chances of John & Peter winding up living there are low.  Always enjoy you comments.  Thanks, Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2015 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 81

If B&J have a little girl she may be growing up in a house full of testosterone, but I think she would be the ultimate princess.

You just have to keep writing until she and the boys give them grandchildren!

Author's Response:

Wow, you jumped grandchildren!  I have been wondering how quickly I could bet to the new baby since there seems to be a lot of anticipation for that arrival.  Good to know you are still reading and enjoying the story, always great to see your comments.  Only 84 reviews for our goal!!   Thanks for the review.  Bill

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2015 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 81

Hahaha can't wait to read about Brian "ordeal". which I think he will secretly enjoy ;)

Author's Response:

I'm sure Justin will help keep Brian calm.  He knows all the "secrets" for doing that.  Happy to know you are enjoying the story.  Thansk for helping on the march to 1.000!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2015 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 81

Buttt, buttt ... I don't want this story to ever end! <whining>  trying to sound like Mikey. <snicker> 

PS- if I'm lucky I'll get to be reviewer 1000 : )



Author's Response:

87 to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2015 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 81

I just noticed where you said that we don't know that Lindsay has been dipping into the petty cash, but who else could it be?  You indicated that Pat doesn't have a key, thankfully.  Could it be that Lindsay wasn't lying when she said Sidney doesn't like to fill out those petty cash forms?  I have trouble believing that.



Author's Response:

Time will tell!!!  I can't give all my secrets away in the reponses.  I haven't said she isn't dipping, I just said there was no proof it was her.  Could be that Sidney really is careless about using Petty Cash and he may be very upset to be questioned about it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2015 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 81

I hadn't thought about Lindsay trying to frame Pat.  Lord knows I wouldn't put it past her.  Brian's changed so much and he couldn't be happier.  Mikey probably thinks having all the kids over is going to drive Brian crazy or to drink.  Little does he know that with Alice and Jennifer around they'll make sure that doesn't happen.  Who do I talk to about getting a blue ribbon for this story?

 

You just did. Thanks for the input. Noted.  But they are only awarded for complete stories (at least now). ~Predec2



Author's Response:

Pat doesn't have a key to the drawer in Lindsay's cube where she keeps the petty cash.  Brian has been changed by love which he didn't get enough of when he was younger.  I don't think anyone told Mikey about JR spending the weekend with B&J.  I don't think he will be pleased when his daughte tells him how much fun she had visiting her uncles.  You probably tell all the suthors that they deserve a blue ribbon.  I am going to have to pay more attention to your other story reviews. 

You are the only reader who ever said they enjoyed my review responses almost as much as the story.  I try and keep them interesting for you.  Only 88 reviews to go!!!!!!!!!  Thanks my friend!  Bill  

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2015 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 81

Can't seem to be able to comment using the mobile site. Doesn't really matter.

I haven't commented on the last chapter because I somehow missed it. Can't believe Lindsay has stooped to embezzling from petty cash. Time to throw her out on her ass.
Glad the court date is moved up and Tillie is willing to testify against Joan. Justin better warn Brian before the hearing.

Ted should have talked to either Brian or Justin or both of them about Lindsay. I know he can handle it himself but they are partners with gallery so the should be made aware.

Loved Jennifer at Kevin's school. She a wonderful grandmother.

Surprise Mel, Brian is a changed man. And he's happy about it.

Love this story so much I look forward to the next update.

Author's Response:

Looks like you left the "emergency" review - number 911.  Poor Lindsay everyone thinks she is a crook.  I think Joan will be surprised by the new witness in the custody case.  Hope she didn't hire the same lawyer that Claire used!  I am thinking Ted will find some time on Saturday to discuss the gallery petty cash with Justin.  Jennifer enjoys being a grandmother and her grandsons enjoy her - the perfect relationships.  I am glad you are still enjoying the story.  I did let one of the site admins know about your mobile issue.

I love reviews and appreciate you being so good about posting them.  In case you haven't read it below I am on a mission to get 1,000 reviews, only 89 more to go!!!  Thanks for all your support.  Bill

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2015 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 81

I totally understand why Pat didn't go talk to Sydney about what she heard Lindsay said on the phone. She knows that Lindsay isn't trustworthy but I understand Pat doesn't want to put someone in trouble. However, Pat has to talk to Justin or Sydney. If Lindsay can lie about who paid the wire, she could have lied about who took the gallery's petty cash (Pat clearly has suspicions) and she could framed her too.

Pat should wait for Lindsay to be in the same room with Justin and Sydney to casually ask Lindsay for her refund and then ask Sydney to not forget to fill out the petty cash sheet.

I can't wait for Michael to come back. Not that I like him, but for his reaction when JR will tell him how much fun she had with Brian. We saw the competition between her and Gus for Brian's attention but I can't imagine the same for Michael's.

I really want for Melanie and Ben to actually do something about Lindsay and Michael's BS. Their apologetic smiles aren't enough anymore.

 



Author's Response:

I suspect the petty cash issue will be solved without Pat having to get too invovled.  I think you are correct about Michael, he may have a stroke when JR mentions how much fun she had with B&J.  I think that is the probelm with Gus he knows he nevers goes anywhere with Michael & Ben so he doesn't understand why JR is horning in on his time with his Daddy & Papa.  You might be getting part of your wish in the next chapter.  Thanks for the review, only 90 more to go to achieve my shallow and selfish goal.  Bill

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 81

great update, thanks.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed it.  I enjoy my banner everytime I go to recent stories and see it!!!!!!  Thanks for the review.  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 81

Great update! :) Loving that it's weekly. I get so excited when I see it posted.

So  lindsey is dipping into petty cash huh? I'm thinking Gamblers Anonymous isn't as effective as everyone had hoped. Just my guess on it. She's relly digging herself into a big hole. Like many other thigs, gampling addiction is a disease, but with her whole attitute, she really isn't going to recieve much sympathy or understanding from the others. (well, except Michael perhaps)

Jennifer to the rescue! She's gathering the troops and marching against Joan. Can't wait to see how you write the courtroom scenes. :) Lots of angst...and probably a few chuckles along the way. Joan getting put in her place always makes me  smile. (really hoping that everything goes in way of the boys staying with B&J!!)

This weekend should be....interesting. If Gus is jealous of JR, how will he be when the boys bring a bouncing new baby into teh mix. Hopefully, he'll get over those issues, and that Lindsey doesn't interfere with her own opinion and cause problems there. I can see her manipulating Gus's thoughts, telling him that Daddy and Justin won't love him as much if there's another baby. Nevertheless, it's going to be a busy weekend for the family adn friends. Looking forward to it.

As usual, you've given us a great chapter. thank you!! 

I'm going to have to download this onto my kindle and just keep reding it every now and again. I find myself reading it over and over again.

Cheers and of course, look forward to the next update. 

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

I try my best to post a chapter every week, don't always make that goal.  We don't know that Lindsay is dipping into petty cash, all my readers seem to be suspicious people.  Keep in mind we haven't heard anything about GA since the move back from Canada.  I don't think Lindsay is attending meetings.  Maybe those suspicions are justified???  Tillie might be carrying a switch blade in her purse so Joan better behave herself.

I think Saturday will be a wild and crazy day but fun filled as well.  8 kids running around means a lot of noise and activity.  I think Gus knows he never goes to JR's father's house or does anything fun with them so he doesn't want to share his time with his Daddy & Papa.  Thank you for all the nice comments, I look forward to reading your reviews.  Thanks also for helping on the march to 1,000!!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2015 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 81

So funny!  Love Brian dealing with the squabbling siblings!



Author's Response:

I laughed to myself just imaging how unhappy he was having to deal with Gus ad JR.  Usually his time with Sonny Boy is pretty trouble free.  Thanks for the review, they all help on my journey to 1,000.  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 81

Lol poor Brian his life is so different but then you think of his life as a child and you can only say Amen!

Author's Response:

As we know different is not always a bad thing.  Thanks for reviewing and moving me closer to my review goal!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2015 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 81

Ok so you seemed weirded out by my lack of begging so here goes I NEED the bbq chapter ASAP!!!!!!!!! Now on to review Lindsay is stealing the petty cash I know she is finally a real reason to fire her take custody of Gus and throw her out on the street where she belongs.  Yeah yeah I know you are going to tone that way back but really we all know that's where she belongs.  I knew people in that neighborhood were aware of the abuse Brian was subject to I am so glad Brian and Justin will have that additional witness but Joan is so delusional I think she will still think any place is better than a home where 2 gay men reside together. I hope they cut Joan's money back after the hearing. The way things are working out with Lindsay stealing and John and Peter and soon Gus all living with Brian and Justin that baby really needs to be a little girl (my wish for twin girls will continue till you write them) they all Justin, Brian, John, Peter and hopefully Gus need little girls to fuss and dote on.  JR does not count she is not theirs she really is just a houseguest not that they would treat her like that so Brian and Justin really need little girls.  A little more Begging I NEED the bbq chapter I also now need to see just how bad the relationship between Gus and JR is I can already see the jealousy I just wonder how bad it will get. My dream right now is 2 chapters in the next 10 days first one bbq second one hearing and somewhere in there Lindsay is arrested for stealing the petty cash I can dream.....



Author's Response:

I just enjoy bantering with you. You can't foget that everyone is innocent until proven guilty. Why Lindsay would be stealing is the big question, I will try to keep that secret deep in my mind where it is inaccessible to you. Tillie was a lat minute addition to this chapter but I thought it would be good to have a window on Jack & Joan's disfunctional relationship.  You don;t think there is too much testosterone in that household for a little girl?  I have started on the next chapter but RL could make two chapters diffiuclt to achieve.  Thanks for all your support, I always enjoy reading your comments and occasionally giving you a hard time!!!  Bill 

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2015 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 81

lol I was just reading your reviews I'm actually feeling sorry for Lindz 



Author's Response:

Don't waste too much sympathy.  Anything that results in double reviews is a very good thing - the march to 1,000!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2015 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 81

I don't think Michael is going to like this. Hopefully it goes well with their weekend 



Author's Response:

I think Mikey will be horrified the first time JT tell him she enjoyed her weekend with B&J or that she really loved spending time with Uncle Jus. I think the weekend will be pretty wild and crazy - 8 kids running around.  Thanks for the review.  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2015 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 81

The issue of when and what they will say to Gus about the new baby may be a ways off, but it should make for an interesting chapter.

How nice that Mel is getting it, but that will only be another divide between her and Linds.

I can't wait for the response from Sidney the first time he is asked about the petty cash.
A wonderfully entertaining chapter with lots of leads to more chapters. I can't wait!

Thank you for posting.

Author's Response:

I think that Gus's cousins might be really happy to hear about a new baby and that would help Gus accept the news.  I'm sure that B&J will make him understand that a new additon would not make them love him any less but you are correct that is a ways off.  Mel is sensible, Lindsay is delusional so that makes for a big divide they have to work on.  I think Sidney will be surprised to be questioned about his petty cash use - why he will be surprised is the big question.  Leads for more story lines means the story will go on for quite a few more chapters.  Thank you for the review, I love reviews and if you have read some of the other reviews you know I have a GOAL!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 81

What is Lindsay up to.  Something fishy is going on at the Gallary.  I think if Ted asked Sidney about the petty cash, Sidney would be surprised to learn that $300 had been spent.  This needs to be straightened out soon.  Thanks to Mother Taylor the court case for John and Peter's custody will undoubtedly go in Brian and Justin's favor.  Yay.  I think by the time the weekend is over JR will want to spend more time with the Kinney branch of the family much to Gus' disgruntal.



Author's Response:

My readers are very suspicious.  You all think poor Lindsay is behind the petty cash issue.  That poor girl is being villified without any proof.  I am pretty shocked by all your attitudes.  I am thinking Ted will mention the petty cash to Justin who will run with that ball.  Tillie was kind of a last minute addition for this chapter but I thought it was good to hear a little about how Jack and Joan ran their household.  I think you may be correct about JR but Brian is way more concerned about what makes his Sonny Boy happy than what JR wants.  You often comment on the food mentioned so I am thinking you are not a fan of stuffed cabbage but I think it is delicious.  At review 901 you have officially started the drive towards 1,000!!!  You are such a great support to so many authors here on Midnight Whispers and I'm sure that all of them appreciate you as much as I do!!!!  Thanks for the review my friend.  Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 81

Fantatic update.  So glad Brian ad Justin are having the extra support during the custody hearing. Hope ole Joanie gets it really good. Hope Pat approaches Sydney reg. the petty cash, Linz needs to be kocked on her arse good,despite her being Gus's mom. Mel needs a wake up call on Linz and all her playing around and games.  Looking forward to read about Brian's and Justin's incredable weekend coming up.

Continuing to Love this Wonderful. Fantatic fic, thanks for sharing!

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, thanks for all the really nice comments.  Congrats on being review 900!!  I am shamelessly campaigning to get 1,000 reviews, yes I am that shallow a person.  I am amazed that no one thinks Sidney is causing the problems with the gallery petty cash.  You will all be surprised when that is what it truly happening.  I think this is going to quite a weekend, just refereeing Gus & JR will be time consuming.  Thank you for all your loyalty and support I truly appreciate you!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 81

I'm glad that Mel finally sees the real Brian.

Love Brian's comment to Ted when he asked if he could bring Viola.

Ted really should have mentioned the petty cash situation to Brian.

Still loving the story.

Author's Response:

Double reviews!!!  That is going to help me on my shameless march to 1,000 reviews.  I am going to need your continued support to get there!  I like that Brian has resigned himself to the weekend invasion.  Brian has made it clear he doesn't want to be involved in the running of the Bloom Gallery.  I bet Ted will find a moment to mention petty cash to Justin on Saturday.  There may be additional information coming from a somewhat surprising source - SUSPENSE!!   I am glad you are loving still loving the story and thanks for all your nice comments!!!!  Bill  

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2015 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 81

I guess if Brian won't give Lindsay more money, she will just steal it. Maybe she'll like working at McDonalds.

Jen was smart to find Tillie. Joan will be very surprised when she sees her in court. :)))

Justin crying always gets me crying too.

There are a lot of people who should never have been parents, but there are also some really great people who would never have been born if they hadn't.

Author's Response:

I am shocked, truly shocked that you don't believe that Sidney is the one causing the petty cash issue, I mean really, really shocked.  I think you are correct that Joan will NOT be happy to see her old friend Tillie siitting next to Jennifer in the courtroom.  It is one of those unanserable questions - would Brian be Brian if he was raised with better paernts in a nicer, happier home??  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

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