Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2019 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 70
I would say it again...linds is a bitch...a selfish bitch.. 😄
Author's Response: She truly is and it is not working out too well for her. Bill
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2015 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 70
This was a great chapter, of course I always love it when you put Lindsay in her place...
I'm loving this fic so much that I just posted it for this weeks recommendation for "Kathleen's Favorite Fics" on Livejournal...
Off to read the next chapter...
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments and the recommendation. Our story styles are very different - I have one long story and you have a bunch of really cool small stories. Glad that we appreciate each other. Hope you continue to enjoy this story. Bill
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2015 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 70
OMG! I Love this fic so much! Mikey and Linz being put in their righyful places, YEAH!
Love John an Peter's relationship with Brian and Justin.
Great work of artful writing! Can't wait for update, soon please!
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Happy you are loving the story. I am enjoying writing the John and Peter aspect of the story. Thanks so much for letting me know are reading my story, hope you continue to love it. I love reviews so I appreciate you posting one! Bill
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2015 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 70
Even after the party there is a lot going on for our not so small but loving family - I begin to see B&J, John, Peter with Jen, Tucker and Molly, Alice and Charles as a whole family. They will stand together nearly everything!
I never give up hope for Claire - maybe she will find in prison some counseling to understand and one day take responsibility.
San Francisco will bring fun for our boys - I heard saying it´s the town with a good gay culture, so Peter will see lots of gay couples on the street like his uncles.
What´s about Red&Blake and the little girl? I´m sure you have something in storage....so let´s have an next-chapter-party soon! Congrats - you just made 70! Please do at least 100 - I need it!
Author's Response: Julia, my friend, always look forward to hearing from you. I think you are right we are seeing a family group come together. Grandmom Jen will make sure they stay out of trouble. Prison really may be a good thing for Claire and help her realize her troubles are mostly caused by herself.
If you are looking for gay guys San Fran is a good spot to find them for sure. John and Peter have never been anywhere so I'm sure they will enjoy SF, it is an amazing city to visit. This coming weekend Nina will stay overnight with Ted and Blake and they may bake cookies together. Thanks for all your kind words and encouragment - that is what keeps me writing. Bill
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 70
Thanks for the last couple of chapters. I am surprised that
after all this time and all that has happened, both Lindsey and
Claire haven’t somewhat improved or maybe just mellowed.
After all, they are two very important people to this story. But
no, as Claire is a worse person than I had thought. I somehow
assumed that without Tino, and no drugs, should would be
different. As for Lindsey, she is the bitch we thought she was.
No Improvement there at all. I am not sure there is any hope
for her.
As far as the story getting old and stale, that just won’t
happen. I think one reason is the characters we enjoy hearing
about. Even Tucker has a nice part in the family structure. My
feeling is that as long as you keep writing about these people,
you will have an interested audience.
DavidR
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments and the encouragement, I appreciate both. Maybe some time in prison will get Claire to examine how she has screwed up her life. Both she and Lindsay view themselves as victims but the wrold at large does not agree. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and you are correct that there are plenty of nice characters to offset the bitches. Always good to hear from you. Bill
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 70
Yes Yes Yes! Finally Brian is not letting Lindsay manipulate him and is standing his ground. Now if he can only put Michael in his place too!
Author's Response: Everyone has a limit, I guess Brian reached his. We'll see if it makes any difference in Lindsay atiitude. Thanks for the the review, I love them!!! Hope you continue to enjoy the story. Bill
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2015 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 70
Thank you for a wonderful update! I can't belive Claire is still playing the victim card. Lindsey is such a BITCH--she thinks Brian and Justin should give her money for a new wardrobe buy her a car and take care of her like a queen. I was so glad Brian quickly put a squash on that. Melanie appreciates everything he has done for her and the kids and the fact he loves Jenny just like Gus making sure they have the same advantages. I was so glad when Brian pointed out how sucessful Justin is as an artist. So glad Jen is going to go to grandparents day, she has so much love to give and I am glad she is giving the little boy a grandparent at last. Thanks so much, more please.
Author's Response: Thank you for a nice review! I agree that Claire is pretty unbelievable. Basically I think Lindsay really wants to be Mrs Brian Kinney and is frustrated because that will never happen. B&J have to put up with her for Gus's sake. I'm sure Grandmom Jen is enjoying all her "grandsons" and they are enjoying her. Family doesn't have to be defined by blood ties. Happy you are still enjoying the story. Each chapter I think will this be the time no one reviews because they are tired of the story. Thanks for making sure that hasn't happened yet. Bill
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 70
I also like to read the other reviews, and I agree that you should write about Justin's show. Maybe something about the flight attendant that Justin gave the business card to, his family could be rich and hire Justin for a commission (but not something that would take him away from home).
Also, I love Brian's little dig to Lindsay about how much Justin makes on his art.
Author's Response: My flippant reply to the other review was an inside joke for me and that reviewer. They often anticipate what I am going to write about so I accuse them of being able to read my mind. Don't worry there just might be some details of the trip to SF CA in the next chapter. San Francisco is one of my favorite places that I ever visited. Two reviews, double thanks. Bill
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 70
Clair just never gives up. Nothing is ever her fault. Maybe she should team up with Lindsay. Very curious about the letter she wrote to her brother.
It's great to see the boys happy and at ease with the family.
Glad that Greg came to Justin to clarify things. Now he will have a job with great bosses.
Lindsay never gives up and that was a very low blow about asking Justin for a car because they got Daphne one. Apparently she thinks they have never done anything for her. Glad Brian reminded her.
Love the story. Thanks for the fast update.
Author's Response: I think that Claire and Lindsay both consider themselves victims nut no on else really see them that way. I enjoy writing about John and Peter coming to live with the uncle so I am glad you are enjoying that part of the story. Some interesting stuff about Greg coming in the next chapter. Thanks for letting me know you are still enjoying the story. I appreciate all your reviews. I replied to another someone else that the reviews are what keep me writing the story. Bill
Reviewer: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2015 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 70
So I just discovered this fic the other day. It's wonderful! Completely emmersed myself in it for a couple of days. (Even read a bit at work. don't tell :) )
Not sure how long you intend for this to be, but I'm loving every minute of it, so will be thrilled to have much more to read with lots and lots of updates! :)
thanks for this great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review. Glad you discovered my story and are enjoying it. I actually have lots of ideas for future chapters so I have no current plans to end the story. The number of readers and the number of reviews is staying pretty steady. As long as people are reading and reviewing I will continue writing the story. All writers look forward to reviews so the way to keep stories going is to review them. Welcome to the story and I hope to continue to hear from you. Bill
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2015 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 70
woohoo a chance at a number ending in 00 and an opportunity to beg for a new chapter i need to read about san fran soon
Author's Response: Nothing devilish about 700 but I appreciate the review. I wasn't thinking I would write that much a San Francisco, do you think people would be interested in that??? I guess I'll have to reconsider my plans for the next chapter.
You may have to check out my mind to see if that is true or not. Bill
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2015 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 70
Great chapter.
Can't believe Claire thinks she did nothing wrong and yet is probably expecting Brian to get her off and out of jail.
Thank goodness Brian finally told Lindsay more or less to go tuck herself. About time if you ask me. Loved the dig about Justin and his show. She'd never be as good and talented.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter. Claire lives in her own world where she is a victim, saldy for her the real world has a different opinion of her. So Lindsay should "tuck "herself - I like that - very refined way for someone's "mom" to express disgust .
Your nice review made me happy and the Lindsay remark (which I think might be an incorrect typing) gave me a good laugh. The non-autocorrecting of remarks has gotten me more than once. Thank's for always reviewing, I appreciate all your support. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2015 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 70
Well, Brian finally told off Lindsey! It's been a long time coming.
It's good to see that Brian is not just happy, but knows he is happy
It's good to see harmony between Justin and Greg.
Author's Response: So according to you all good things in the last chapter! Really glad you feel that way. Thanks for the nice review and thanks for enjoying my story. Bill
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2015 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 70
Wonderful as always.
Every chapter is like hearing news from the family:)
Author's Response: Wow "hearing news from the family" is such a very nice thing for you to say. Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Bill
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2015 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 70
Great chapter. Grandma Jenn was great last chapter. Lindsay is so bitchy .I love it.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter. I love Grandmom Jen (I guess that shows) she is always looking out for her boys. Thanks for reviewing, you know that I love them! Bill
Reviewer: KC (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2015 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 70
I'm so tired of Lindsay (and Michael) making passive aggressive remarks about Justin living off Brian. So glad Brian drove home the fact that Justin can certainly afford several cars from just one art show and I'm so glad it struck home where it hurts.
Author's Response: L&M just can't adjust to the changes in Brian's life and resent not being in first place any more. Thanks for letting me know you are reading and enjoying the story!!! Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2015 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 70
Again stellar chapter my friend! Claire came to her senses, John's party was a success, Greg changed his perspective, and I think Lindsay is finally starting to open her eyes about her current situation.
Have I mentioned that I feel more like one of the family with each chapter? I guess it must be wonderful writing ;)
Author's Response: Wow this is a really nice review, thank you very much my friend. What could be a nicer thing to say than you feel like one of the family. Really happy you enjoyed this chapter. You are optimistic about Lindsay, hope you are correct. Thanks again for all your support I appreciate it!!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2015 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 70
Another amazing chapter and so much happened I don't know where to start. John and Peter realizing they are home and it's a safe and happy place to be. Claire thinking there was a way to get a better deal deal until how truly shitty of a parent she is was thrown in her face. Greg realizing that the job would only be his if Justin agreed and then doing something about it. Justin and Peter finally on their way to San Fransico I am thinking the way his Uncles travel is not going to be anything like what their friends told them traveling was like because they go first class all the way and this trip is going to be a lot of fun if they just sit back and enjoy. Then there is Lindsay still demanding things she does not deserve she is not the wife she is an employee and at the moment not even a very good one it makes me wonder if she will try to use Gus not necessarily by withholding him more by talking when he is around so he tells Brian and Justin innocently what he has overheard. I can't wait to read about Justin show and the whole trip to San Francisco but I am also looking forward to hearing a bit about Johns cooking classes and what he has learned. Oh yeah when Hal find out Greg got his old job I wonder how that's going to play out. Can't wait for the next chapter debated challenging you for the next one but I kind of like the surprise of just seeing something appear here's hoping its soon Thanks again for continuing my favorite story
Author's Response: Wow, my muse writes a review with no suggestion and no challenges. Are you feeeling OK??? Happy to still be your favorite story!! You did do a bit of mind reading to mention that Hal may not be happy - I think there may be a little drama coming. I'm pretty sure John and Peter will be left wide eyed by their trip to the city by the bay. Glad you are still enjoying the story, I always look forward to your reviews and you very loyal about posting them. Thanks for all your support. Bill
Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2015 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 70
I'm so happy every time I see a new chapter updated. It's scary.
How many times B&J had this type of conversation with Lindsay ? Grrr ! Talking to her is like talking to Claire or Joan. They don't listen. B&J shouldn't bother anymore.
Melanie has a tast of what it was like years ago when she was the one always against Brian and Lindsay was in the middle. I just want her to stop letting Lindsay's behavior making things worst.
Like Jennifer, I'm in love with Kevin. I want to know everything about their "date".
Author's Response: Glad the story makes you so happy. I am happy when I see reviews for me to read! I think Lindsay is like Claire - they see themselves as victims but no one else does. Unfortunatley Lindsay is Gus's mother so B&J have to leep dealing with her and keeping the best relationship they can. I suspect we will "be there" for Grandmom Jen's visit to Kevin's school. I appreciate you taking time to review. Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2015 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 70
Another wonderful chapter! So nice to see how Peter and John are fitting in with Brian, Justin, Gus and Alice. Peter going with Justin to San Francisco and Justin helping Peter decide what to take was wonderful.
Claire tried everything to try and look like a victim. It was good that she didn't fool her attorney. I wonder what was in the letter she wrote?
Greg made a good decision to talk with Justin and apologize. I think he'll do a great job for Kinnetic.
How nice that Jennifer is going to Kevin's school. Now she's grandmother to Gus, JR, John, Peter and Kevin. She's definately more loved than Joan is.
Best part was Brian telling Lindsay off. Bravo!!
Author's Response: Fast read and review my friend. Happy you enjoyed this chapter. I think Claire really does consider herself a victim, her problem is that no one else feels the same way. It was good that Greg realized he f--ed up with Justin and not in a good life affirming way. I think he will be a great addition to Kinnetik. It could turn out that we find out what Claire write in the letter. Poor Lindsay is kind of like Claire, she considers herself a victim but no one else does. Always look forward to your reviews. Thanks for never disappointing me. Bill
PS Thanks for getting me to closer to 700 reviews. Kind of unbelieveable.
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