Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2015 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 69
Finally -it´s me! ( I had somme difficulties with my pc)
I didn´t miss Lindsay in this chapter one bit! You brought up every other bad guy or girl like Claire, Craig.
I wondered why our boys might need a refrigerator to lock up - with Joe, the bully I unterstood - you better take no risk! I also had some hope John might have a girl invited...well, not really with all the boys around there. You mentioned once a girl and I don´t give up hope to "meet" her some time ;))
A lot interesting moves a under way....I hope we get more soon. Thanks for your writing!
Author's Response: Julia, my friend, you are really paying attention! This birthday party was not the place to invite a girl you are interested in. Her brother is on the soccer team so he was at the party. Don't worry Patrice goes to the Washington Academy so think that her and John's paths will cross again once school starts. I think if you have a party with all those teenage boys you better lock the booze up. I am happy you are still enjoying the story. Always look forward to your comments!! Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2015 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 69
Another great update, Bill. Favorite line: "He doesn’t ever want Papa to be mad at him because then they couldn’t kiss so much.” Out of the mouths of babes! And Michael - what a whiner!!
I really like the small details you put into your story. Thanks for the update! ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks for the review my friend. Glad ydou enjoyed the latest chapter. Poor Michael can't even win an argument with a 7 year old. I can hardly believe I am working on Chapter 70. Bill
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2015 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 69
I love what Gus said to Michael about Brian needing to keep Justin happy.
The party sounded like fun, I'm sure those boys feel very loved in that house.
Still loving this story.
Author's Response: Two Reviews!! My cup runeth over! THANKS. Gus knows what he is talking about and is probably much smarter than Mikey. John & Peter are experiencing a life they never knew existed. As long as you keep loving I will keep writing. Bill
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2015 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 69
Great chapter, as usual.
I hope Claire's conviction will help Brian and Justin get permanent custody of the boys.
I wonder what Craig is trying to hide in his personal accounts.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed this chapter. I think Claire in prison will definitely help the custody case. I think Craig is just being a butthead, he is very good at it. THanks for the review, Bill
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2015 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 69
Sorry, forgot to ask, has Craig done something illegal? He needs the help from Brian and Justin why doesn't he just cave and give them the info that is needed?
Author's Response: Craig just spends too much money. He is afraid that B&J wil insist he start living within his means which he will find humiliating.
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2015 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 69
I enjoyed the new chapter. That stupid kid Joe Harkins is ill mannered and a bully and I wished he had been sent home, he needs guidence he also needs to have his parents know that behavior isn't accepted at Britian, school, or the soccer field. I'm sorry to hear that Claire might be able to make a deal, she gets so many breaks and doesn't appreciate any of them. I don't understand Michael's need to know how many people were going to be at the party, the question didn't deserve a reply. it's none of his business to know how many and who they are .
Author's Response: I think we can all agree Joe Harkins is a butthead. We might see more of him in the future. I think actually going to prison may be an eye opening experience for Claire. Poor Mikey just can't accept that Brian is not the Stud of Liberty Avenue and is happier than he had ever been in his life. Glad you enjoyed this chapter and I'm always gald to see your reviews!! Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2015 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 69
Oh, I forgot to add in my above post. I love how JR told Michael the money was for him to hold and not keep. Speaking from experience? Even a baby has his number.
Author's Response: JR is her mother's daughter she just knows what she wants and doesn't mind speaking her mind. I think Mikey is in for some straight talk from his little honeybun over the years. Bill
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2015 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 69
Uh Oh. Is Lindsay making Gus sick? Or have I just read too many anti-Lindsay fics?
Author's Response: Lindsay is selfish and self centered but not really crazy in my story. Gus just got over-indulged by Grandmom Debbie and Lindsay tried to use that to keep Gus from his weekend with his Daddies. Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2015 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 69
As always I didn't want this chapter to end. We have the additional delight of looking forward to the audit of Craigs books. Will Claire except the deal? Mikey once again puts his foot in his mouth. lol. This party was perfect and even had the kid who always tries to bully. Wonder if he tells his dad?
Author's Response: Hello my friend, always happy to see your review. I am thinking Craig will not be overly thrilled by accountants' audit report. As I told another reviewer Claire is crazy but not stupid so I am thinking she will not want to take her chances in court. Mikey can't help himself from thinking that he alone is looking out for Brian. I am pretty sure we will see more of Joe Harkins in future chapters. Not that Brian would care but I think Joe will not run to Daddy to complain. Thanks, as always, for all your loyalty. Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2015 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 69
Another great chapter my friend! Now I'm curious as to how Claire will react to the plea agreement.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments. I am glad you are still enjoying the story. I am thinking Claire will realize she should take the deal but you never know with Claire. Always happy to hear from you. Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2015 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 69
Wow party time was almost more than I expected. I am just glad it was such a good experience for John now to your little hidden bits in this story Mikey is actually going to spend money on his child I am shocked and amazed. Craig agreeing to a look at his books umm why do I see this going really wrong really fast when the accountants are done. Plea deal for Claire I admit I was thinking Peter would testify against her but I also saw that not being so good for him maybe this plea is the best thing 5 years should make Brian and Justin getting custody almost a done deal providing they don't get a homophobic judge. I eagerly await your next chapter hope it appears soon. Thanks for continuing this great story I love it.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed this chapter. I think John was kind of overwhelmed to have such an amazing party. Mikey was proud to announce he was buying his daughter some school clothes, didn't really think about the fact that B&J are paying the tuition. I think Craig will be unhappy with reports on his finances. I think even Claire will agree to plea deal rather than take her chances in courtroom. Always good to hear from you, I appreciate all your support and am glad you enjoy the story so much. Thanks. Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2015 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 69
Such a fun chapter I love lioness Jennifer when her cubs are attacked lol
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Jennifer is always on the lookout for her boys. Thanks for reviewing!! Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2015 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 69
Another successful day in the life!
Good for Granma Jen.
I wonder if Claire will accept her plea bargain?
This was an enjoyable chapter to read.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter. Jennifer looks out for all her boys! I think Claire is crazy but not stupid. Thanks for taking time to review, I always look forward to your comments!! Bill
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