Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2015 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 68

another great chapter-  am really liking Melanie in your universe-  Lindsey needs a quick kick in the brain to realize she is closely pushing the edge with both Mel and Brian-  she might regret that one last straw

 

 

Author's Response:

Happy you are still enjoying the story.  I always thought that Lindsay used Mel and Brian against each other and played at being the peacemaker.  Guess you can tell that I am not a fan of the Lindsay character, never liked her in the show.  I don't want her and Mel to break up in my story so I guess I may have to dial back the Lindsay issues a little - not not too much!  Thanks for the review I appreciate your support.  Bill

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2015 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 68

Sorry, I forgot something, I really like the idea of Jen showing up for Grandparents day, I don't understand his grandparents not visiting or loving this little child they shouldn't pity the child they are  the ones to be pityied for missing all this love this child is so eager to give. I agree with Brian, Teddy Man would make an excellent father he has tons of love inside and he needs to share that with this lovely little girl, Thanks 

Author's Response:

Sadly I think there are people out there who react as Kevin's grandparents do.  Luckily he and Grandmom Jen have found each other.  I think maybe Ted & Blake are going to hear the pitter patter of little feet running arond the house.  Neatnik Ted may have some adjuting to do.  Two reviews, YAH!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2015 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 68

I was really happy to see a new chapter this morning. This is absolutely my favorite story.

 

Carol

 

Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying my story.  Thanks for letting me know, I love getting reviews.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story.  Bill

Reviewer: mimosa1234 (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2015 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 68

OK i really look forward to reading your writing , look if i can read you must write ..you have no choice your a writer and i really like this BRIEN AND JUSTIN...

Author's Response:

Thanks for the support (maybe kind of threat).  I love hearing from people who are reading and enjoying the story.  Thank you so much for taking time to post a review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2015 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 68

Love the answer Justin gave Michael about why he was at Kinnetik for the interviews.

Brian is afraid of his husband and mother-in-law, how cute.

Don't understand why Justin seems to have reservations about Greg working for Kinnetik.

Glad to see that they are trusting the boys to be alone and obey the rules.

Nina calling Ted 'Teddy Man' is adorable.

Lindsey (the stupid bitch) never gives up on trying to get more control, love Brian's answer.

Hope your writer's block is gone. Still loving this story.

Author's Response:

I liked that answer myself and Gus's response was also good.  I think mostly afraid of Mother Taylor just doesn't want to lose sexual favors from his Sunshine.  No one understands Justin and my reservatiosn about Greg - WOE IS ME!  I think I will have them all change their minds and hire Tim.

I think Nina will enjoy having a Teddy Man along with her Teddy Bear.  You have to admire Lindsay never getting discouraged even though she never wins, she keeps on trying.  Thanks for letting me know you are still reading and enjoying the story!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2015 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 68

I think Justin's problems with Greg have nothing to do with the job he would do and everything to do with the fact that Justin will not be needed as much to fix things.  I thought it was sweet the idea of Jennifer going to Kevins grandparents day. 35 people at that party at some point Brian will hide even if its just in his study. I guess Mel is not working at all till the kids start school.  I like that Mel is doing the Gus drop because I think if it were Lindsay Brian might kill her.  I think Ted and Blake are going to do great with Nina and I see  a Nina and JR playdate coming soon.  I am sorry your muse caught the vius Linds tried to give Gus I will mail it some chicken soup. Can't wait to read about the party and the Art Director choice but I would like Justin to tell Brian about his doubts and why he has them. How long until they get a custody hearing date i guess after the art show I am looking forward to reading that. Just FYI even though your muse wandered away this was a great chapter and i go back to eagerly awaiting the next one.

Author's Response:

This is a devilish review, number 666, so it seems appropriate that it is from you - one of my most loyal reviewers and the one most frequently in my mind.  We are not in agreement regarding Justin and Greg but I think it will all work out.  Don't forget that Brian will have to slip away unnoticed by both his Sunshine and Mother Taylor.  That is going to take a bit of stealth in his part.  Mel still has one more continuing ed class to complete.  She is going to do some paralegal stuff when the kids start at Fort Pitt next week.  The playdate thing you found in my mind, nice to know you haven't lost your touch.  I am glad you enjoyed this chapter, everyone who reviews seems to like the Blake and Teddy Man story line.  You look forward to the updates and I look forward to your reviews so today we are both happy.  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2015 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 68

Thanks for the chapter. Why is Justin not sure about Greg ? Is it because Greg was not sure of himself? Love the new story line for Ted and Blake.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!! Justin thinks perhaps Greg is not serious enough about the job. He wants Greg to be able to separate business from home.  Glad you enjoy the Ted & Blake tangent.  I think Teddy Man & Blake might have a new addition to their family.  Thanks again for letting me know you are still enjoying the story.  Bill  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2015 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 68

This was a really good chapter with lots of interaction.  The interview with Greg was interesting, since you decided not to make him a sure thing.  But I still think he's a better fit than the other guy.

John's party with 35 people can be intimidating.  I'm sure that in his life John didn't have very many friends nor has he ever had a party.  Claire didn't seem the type to do something like that.  What you have planned should be really interesting.

Then there is Lindsay and her attempt to use Gus to get her way with Brian.  With Melanie in their corner, I don't see anything Linds tries working.

Teddy Man and Nina seem a really good match.  Blake with his experience with siblings will help make this new family dimention a winner.

All and all I can't wait for another chapter.  I'm hooked on this story.

Author's Response:

My friend, always happy to see your review and to know you are still enjoying the story.  Tim has no chance for the job but that doesn't mean Greg gets the job.  They could look at other candidates.  I think John will be a little overwhelmed by his party.  You are correct Claire never hosted a birthday party for 35 people.  You have to admire Lindsay for her persistance, she keeos slugging away despite never getting a home run.  I am thinking Teddy Man and Nina may have a future together.  Hope you know how much I appreciate all your support.  You are so great about reviewing all the stories you read!!!!!  Thanks for reading my story.  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2015 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 68

I am glad you put your block behind you.

There is a lot going on in this chapter. I like the way Brian handled Lindsey. And that Mel got to shine as a good person.
Where will they lock up the booze?
Of course, I'm already waiting eagerly for the next chapter! I imagine you wish they were as easy to write as they are to read.
Will the party go smoothly? Will they hire Greg? Will Justin feel OK about it?

Author's Response:

They have locking refrigerators and cabinets to stash the liquor in.  Glad you are still enjoying the story.  I appreciate all your reviews and support.  Your questions should all be answered in the next chapter.  Bill