Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2018 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 55
Hope she rots in jail
Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2014 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 55
The story is getting good. his will help the boys get custody.
Author's Response: I agree I think the whole Kidnap thing is a huge plus for B&J getting custody. Thanks for the review!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2014 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 55
You know reading your reviews are almost as much fun as reading the story. But the story comes first. I can picture Lindsay, her nose in the air as she tries to tell Justin how his gallery should be run. LOL. Can't wait to see what you have planned.
Author's Response: I do enjoy my reviews and actually do get ideas for the stories from them. Now you are triple reviewing, where will it end? LOL You have to watch review numbers as we approach 500, that could happen in the next couple chapters. I would love to see you be number 500. Can't believe it has been over a years since I started this story. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Bill
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2014 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 55
Awesome chapter just awesome stupid ass Clair
Author's Response: Happy you liked the latest chapter and Claire ir truly clueless. Thanks for reviewing. Bill
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2014 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 55
Your story just gets better and better. Peter certainly showed his love for his uncles and how strong he is in emergences. Lindsay is just sad so self centered never asking about Justin , and good old Alice and her spicey sauce, bet she like to give Lindsay and Joan a spicey enema. Keep your wonderful chapter coming, I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Hope it isn't bad to say that I am happy you are hooked and happy you are enjoying the story. A spicy enema. I wonder where I can use that in this story - someone to think about. Thanks for the review. Bill
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2014 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 55
justin's fine and finally claire got hers. no one will see joan much anymore.
charlie getting the shotgun and shells. ha. hope he remembers to take them home.
still think it's a bad idea to have lindsay work at the gallery. big mistake.
thanks so much for your quick postings.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter. I think Lindsay working at the gallery will be a very interesting story line but time will tell. Thanks for the nice comments and letting me know you are still enjoying the story after all this time. Bill
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2014 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 55
Beautifully written chapter.
Took me a while to read it though because I was crying through most of it. So glad Justin and Peter are alright. I love how they reassured Peter that what happened was not his fault.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the really nice review. I really appreciate it when people let me know they are reading and enjoying the story, that is what keeps me writing. My story is real low angst so you can be sure nothing too horrible will happen. Thanks again. Bill
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 55
Another great chapter, Bill! Loved how Peter had the presence of mind to do what he needed to do to protect his uncle, and how everyone came together to support Justin. Loved how Brian was so commanding here, and how Cynthia & Ted came to his rescue at Kinnetik.
So many things to like in this chapter! Now can Joan just drink herself to death and be done with it? (Sorry, got carried away - ha!). Thanks for the quick update; wow, 28 reviews on the last chapter! Looks like it works - LOL! Well deserved, my friend. Looking forward to the next update.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim, thanks for the review. I guess a little blackmail works well - 28 reviews!! Someone once told me it is important to respond to every review and that took some time to do. Of course that meant I had to stay up past my bedtime last night to polish & post the update since I promised to do it quickly. LOL
Poor Joan, now the whole neighborhod knows that Claire was arrested. Joan would probably rather be dead than to be the subject of everyone's gossip. Thanks for letting me know you are still enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2014 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 55
After reading the newest chapter two times... it was too delicious how everything worked out. It´s phantastic! Can´t get enough. I think I´ll reread it again and again..
Everything is already mentioned by my fellow readers out there. I loved the appearance of Carl, laughed when Charles got his shotgun (just normal in american houses-hehe), the hot sauce bottles all over the house, Peter, the hero throwing himself in Brian´s arms, his fear to loose his new home etc. As always precious moments in the story, which I appreciate so much.
Even though the crime is over, I´m already looking forward your next one: The nephews will struggle for some time with everything that happened to their disfunctional mother. It might hurt them once again.
Thanks and never stop writing this story! Hope you feel encouragement, no pressure. That´s what all our reviews are for!
Author's Response: My friend I am happy that this chapter gets the "Julia Seal of Approval"! Your comments are always so nice and good for my ego. I think you are correct about John & Peter will be feeling the effects of what their mother has done for a while. Justin and Brian will make them understand that nothing is their fault and that they still have a safe & stable home with their uncles. I hope you know how much I always look forward to your comments and appreciate all your encouragement. Thank you for being such a loyal reader and reviewer. Bill
Reviewer: carlou (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 55
Your story is amazing and this chapter was incredibly thrilling,solid writing,great storytelling.Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks for your very nice comments. I appeciate them and am glad you are enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2014 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 55
I'm glad you wrapped that up quickly. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked how the story progressed. I appreciate you letting meknow you enjoyed it! Bill
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2014 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 55
Everything has been said about Claire and Tino so I'll just shake my head head at Lindsay. Hope she gets her just desserts soon, now that Claire is getting hers. And Joan's worst nightmare coming true with the neighbors seeing their dirty laundry. HeeHee.
Author's Response: You are correct Joan is not happy to have the neighbors see her daughter taken away in handcuffs. Justin will soon be Lindsay's boss. I think that will be interesting! Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2014 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 55
Thanks for the quick update. We can all sleep better now that we know our Justin is ok! :) TAG
Author's Response: I promised a fast update if I got lots of reviews. My little blackmail attempt suceeded, lots of reviews, so I had to keep up my side of the bargain. Of course not only did I have to write the chapter but it took quite a lit of time to ready and respond to all those review. All in all it was a great thing!!! I did stay up past my bedtime last night to polish and post #55. Thanls for your support. Bill
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 55
Ok. these two chapters were real good, a little stressful. I had thought you might keep Justin prisoner for awhile, but you got it done real fast. Peter was awesome.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the excitment of the last two chapters. I considered the kidnap being sucessful but felt that anything that involved Claire was really doomed to failure. Thank you so much for letting me know you are still enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 55
I meant I hope Joanie gets a clue that she was a bad mother. I forgot to mention Alice and her idea to have the shotgun in the house just in case. Brian was always a fast thinker and having enough smarts to get John and Gus back to the house, especially when he wasn't aware that Claire was involved. I'll say it again I LOVE this story.
Author's Response: Is double reviewing the new normal? I apporove of it. I think Joan is going to have a realization about her mothering skills or rather her lack of. Alice shifted to mother tiger mode and Charlie was determined to keep everyone safe. Tino or his goons would have had no chnace against that dynamic duo. I am so happy you love my story. Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 55
Wow! An action packed chapter. Peter is definately the hero of the day. It was interesting to note that when he realized that he'd been the leak to his mother, he didn't hid the fact and was more concerned as to how it would effect the custody issue. Happy dance about Carl showing up and straightening out the cops who were suggesting that Justin was part of a drug deal gone bad. Glad to see that Claire is getting what she deserves and hope that maybe gets a clue that she was a bad mother.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter my friend. Peter was a hero but it was all pretty upsetting to a boy who is only 12 years old. I think Claire will just be upset that she got caught. Thanks, as always, for being such a loyal supporter. Bill
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2014 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 55
great up date loved it up date soon kim
Author's Response: Happy you liked it. I hope I have spoiled you by so many updates in a short time. Thanks for the review. Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 55
Damn how dumb can one person be...well at least Justin is okay and Claire is exactly where she needs to be and hopefully soon so will Tino...the schmuck.
Update soon please, I can't wait to see what happens next ;)
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter. I hope my loyal readers won't be to upset if the updates don't come quite as quickly as the last few. Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer! Bill
Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 55
Wow, I hope they get Tino soon but at least they won't have to worry about peter and johns custody anymore. Now the only people they need to deal with is michael and Lindsay. Update soon!
Author's Response: I agree that I think permanent custody should be happening soon. Happy to know you are enjoying the story. I appreciate everyone who take time to review so thank you very much! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2014 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 55
Ok thank you thank you for the fast chapter and the minimal wound to Justin. Love Brian in protective mode of everyone including Gus and John. When Peter realized what he had done I think the guilt was bad and I think they may be dealing with that for a while. More proof Claire is an idiot and Petrr recognizing the name Tino was probably a huge help. So much happened in this chapter I loved it. So glad you were so fast cliffhangers make me anxious and I love this story so much when I saw the chapter I decided late for work was ok.
Author's Response: I hope I didn't get you in trouble at work! Happy you enjoyed the chapter. I agree that Peter is going to be upset that he let his mother use him to try and hurt his Uncle who he loves. Glad you loved this chapter. Thank you for being such a great supporter and loyal reviewer that is what keeps me writing the story. Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 55
Wow great chapter so full of intrigue and love 👍 Peter did such a excellent job of protector. I loved how Jennifer had Brian by the balls and gave the eye to Brian and Justin to reassure Peter lol
Author's Response: Thanks for your really nice comments. I think Jennifer considers herself Brian's mother and to Brian she is more of a mother figure than Joan ever could be. I like that we found out Debbie gives insights into Brian to Jennifer. Hope you continue to enjoy the story (and to review!) Bill
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 55
I'm glad it ws only a flesh but whereby Justin and Brian and the other adults can deal this is going to hurt Peter and John even more now after confirming their mother had something to do with the attempted kidnapping is worse.
It's a sad situation for all but as a family they will deal with it.
Author's Response: I agree that I think it will take Peter some time to get over his role in the kidnap attempt. He is only 12 years old. I know John and Peter will get a lot of support and love they need. Thansk for letting me know you are reading and enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2014 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 55
Wow, what a chapter!
So much plot development and action. It is good to see Peter handling himself so well. I'm glad Justin was not seriously hurt.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed it. It was longer than normal but couldn't find a good place to end it sooner. Thanks for your really nice comment I appreciate them! Bill
Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2014 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 55
Great updates! Thank you so much :)
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the latest updates. Hope you continue to enjoy the story. Bill
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