Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2019 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 49

One gone and another enters...haha.



Author's Response:

Hal really was a dope.  Happy you are still reading & enjoying!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2014 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 49

 I can't believe I caught up usually when I wana catch up on a story I get really bored but your story kept me on my toes can't wait for the next chapter 😄 your awesome 



Author's Response:

Wow, you read a lot of chapters in just a couple days.  I am really happy that the story held your interest and that you are anxious for more.  Thanks so much for all your nice comments.  I have 50 about half written so it should be posted in the next couple days.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story.  Thanks again for letting me know you like my story.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2014 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 49

So I was just looking at when you started this story, which I will say again and again is the one I look for new chapters of daily, and noticed you are coming up on a year in 3 weeks.  Now for a little begging or a challenge if you will is there any chance between now and November14 you can put out 3 more chapters so you do 52 chapters in 52 weeks. Just so you know even if you don't get there I will still look daily for new chapters and review them as they Ppear thanks for reading my request.



Author's Response:

Two minds with a single thought.  I have been considering the same thing myself.  Since you brought it up, I am going to try and do 52 chapters in 52 weeks!  Thanks for the encouragement. No Promises but I will try!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2014 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 49

I really enjoyed catching up with your fic.  OMG, I love how Hal got his comeuppance.   You were very clever using the name Hal for this character as we are all familiar with the name, yet it is not so common; allowing Brian and Justin to surmise he was one and the same person.   I really want Claire to be able to kick her drug habit, although I am a little worried that she isn't missing her boys. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Really happy you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Claire has some more trouble on the way so not quite ready to give up her drugs.  Hope you won't be too disappointed.  Thanks for you nice comments, I always look forward to your reviews.  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2014 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 49

A good chapter, interesting movement of the plot and well executed. They handled Hal very well. It's nice to see the inner workings of Kinnetic.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Next chapter has more abiout Claire and custody.  Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2014 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 49

I was thrilled to see a new chapter so soon and that long!

You gave us some lovely family moments with Gus, the nephews and sweet Kevin. The Hal thing isn´t finished yet, I can smell more trouble (the same with poor Claire).

Poor John with this strange teacher, alone in dining room with classroom athmosphere - how crazy is this going to be? I think Justin will take good care of this freak if need be.

One thing made me laugh: John and the girl! I already can imagine poor Brian with John having "the spech" LOL! And this boy should have some fun. He hasn´t had much luck with the women in his life yet.

You gave us a very long chapter - there you have it: Your readers are even more addicted and hungry - hahahaha! Give us more and soon ;))



Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed this chapter.  You are right about more trouble for Claire, she hasn't got her life under control yet and things could get worse.  So you don't think Ron is just very professional?  You may be correct.  Thanks, as always for you nice comments.  I also look forward to reading your review and appreciate you letting me know you are still resding and enjoying.  Working on chapter 50, which I can hardly believe.  Thanks again,  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2014 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 49

What a wonderful chapter.  Kevin and Gus are really getting along great!  I was reading about what everyone was doing and wondering where Peter was when he showed up in the next sentence.  Clair's life seems to have gone from bad to worse since meeting Tino, not that it was all that great to begin with.  Now for Hal. You really did a fine job of getting rid of him.  I wonder what those personal files contain.  Can't wait to see what you plan next.



Author's Response:

As always happy to see your comments.  There was a lot going on so I kind of forgot where Peter was for a while.  Tino is NOT done with Clair yet, I have some really neat ideas for them.  I think the files on the art department PC will be pretty interesting.  Thanks for still reading and reviewing.  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2014 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 49

Wow! You covered so much in this chapter , it was awesome.

Author's Response:

WOW, so good youhad to tell me twice.  THANKS.  This was a long chapter glad you enjoyed it.  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2014 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 49

Wow! You covered so much in this chapter , it was awesome.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2014 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 49

Ah I can see already that the tutor is a pretentious little shit, not to mention that Hal is in for one hell of a rude awakening.

I can't wait to see what happens next ;)

Author's Response:

Glad the story is still holding your interest at chapter 49.  Hal is pretty clueless, doesn;t look like he is going to get that bog severance bonus he was counting on.  Thanks, as always, for you nice comments.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2014 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 49

Love love love how they got Hal.  Very curious to see what the detective brings Brian and Justin about Claire.  Not sure what to make of this tutor but I know Justin will take care of it.  Hope it's a short wait until the next chapter my withdrawal is painful...



Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed the Hal meeting.  PI report on Claire coming soon, this chapter already ran long.  I'll try to get the next chapter done quickly but I always say that but somehow it doesn't happen.  Bill

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