Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2019 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 48
Jealous brian is my favorite brian..lol.
Author's Response: Brian is pretty possesive of his Sunshine. Glad you enjoyed his jealousy!! Bill
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2014 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 48
Happy to see a new chapter! And such a crazy twist you did with Hal - perfect! I loved it!
We have so much coming around now, please go on! I hope you have still fun writing for us!
And Lindsay: She might repeat again and again her needs....but it´s no longer annoying, it´s just boring. So, Linds, shut the f... up and everybody will move on.
Author's Response: Always happu to hear from you. So glad you are still enjoying the story. Lindsay is kind of a broken record, she just keeps repeating the same things. Thanks for letting me know you are still reading and enjoyng. Bill
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2014 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 48
great story! Every chapter gets better and better. It's a contest as to who is more clueless Lindsay, Claire or michael. I don't think Claire really is interested in getting the boys back and feel Joan is more interested in apperances and actually dealing with the boys. Gus and Kevin are adorable. Grandmom Jen and Alice need keep up with Lindsay seems that Mel is really greatful to Brian and Justin. Now is the time to sock it to Hal he is truly a scumbag demote him to janitor but don't change his pay his ego will do him in.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments, Happy you are still enjoying the story. Working on chapter 49. I don't think Lindsay stands a chance against Alice and Jennifer! Thanks fo taking time to review! Bill
Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2014 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 48
I know i'm late for the party, but i love this, please update soon!
Author's Response: Never too late for a nice review. Happy you are enjoying the story, thanks for letting me know. Hope you continue to enjoy it.
Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2014 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 48
Lindsay is sooo ungrateful. Thank you for the update. I am looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I think Lindsay feels like she is just asking for what is due to her, she has a somewhat unrealistic view of her relationship with Brian. Thanks for letting me know you are still enjoying the story. It seems like maybe keeping readers waiting awhile increases the number of reviews and I love reviews. Maybe I need to space out my updates more often????? Bill
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2014 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 48
I missed you last week. The new level of intrigue is pretty exciting .
Author's Response: You are being kind, it has been more than one week since the last update. I pormise not to make you wait as long for the next chapter. Glad you liked the new chapter. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2014 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 48
Good to see you back.
I like the plot twist with Hal. The underhandedness seems to fit him to a T.
Mel sure seems a front runner for most improved character.
Author's Response: Happy you liked the latest chapter. Sorry I made you wait so long for it to be posted. Mel needs to balance out the annoyance of Lindsay. Thanks for reviewing!! Bill
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2014 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 48
I'm really glad about this new chapter. I was starting to get severe withdrawal symptoms.
Nice turn with Hal. I'm still curious how Lindsay will get on with Kevin.
Author's Response: Sorry to make you wait so long for the update. Lindsay doesn't really seem to get along with anyone. If Lndsay doesn't get along with Kevin that will give Jennifer and Alice another reason to dislike her. Glad you are still enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2014 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 48
Great chapter. Things seems on the brink of spirialling out of control for some people, of course they deserve everything they get. Sounds like Greg might be useful to Kinnetik and he's got experience dealing with a team. I can't wait until Lindsay is brought down a peg or two.
Author's Response: Happy you liked the latest chapter. I think you are correct that some people may not be happy with how their lives are going. So you think Greg may end up at Kinnetik, Hmmmmmmmmmmm. THanks for the review, always hapoy to know people are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2014 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 48
WOW!!! Great chapter. totally enjoyed it
Author's Response: Really happy you enjoyed the new chapter, sorry you had to wait so long between updates. Thanks for taking time to review, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2014 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 48
Damn! (I've been saying that a lot lately lol) but could things get stranger with this family? I hope Brian plans to torture Hal so bad that he quits without getting a dime. Lindsay...well she better get her act together. As for Claire, she better tighten up too.
Author's Response: Damn, I'm glad you are still enjoying the story. I think Hal is in for some surprises at Kinntik on Monday. Things get even stranger with Claire soon. Thanks for the review!! Bill
Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2014 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 48
You know what I hate more than someone who is nasty to you right to your face? Passive aggressiveness, and boy does Lindsay have that in spades. I just want to punch her in the face (that's a compliment to your writing).
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment to my writing I'm glad are enjoying the story if not enjoyng Lindsay very much. She just can;t accept she can't get whatever she wants from Brian. Thanks for taking time to review I appreciate it!
Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 48
The cat is out of the bag for Hal!
Author's Response: And soon Hal will be out of Kinnetik.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 48
Another great update, Bill! I love Alice - LOL! She certainly put Brian in his place.;) And it sounds like Hal is about to get beaten at his own game. You never know who knows somebody else.;)
Thanks for this story, Bill. I love all the details you put into it. Almost feels like another season of the show. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks my friend for the nice review. Really happy you are still enjoying my story. I can't believe I am close to 50 chapters! I appreciate all your support and encouragement. Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 48
Happy am I to see another chapter. You start off with Claire and I'm afraid that she'll end up in trouble, either by taking pills or losing her job. Kevin and Gus are too cute. Lindsay is being a bitch and hopefully getting herself into trouble. Now we come to Hal. I am so looking forward to see what your plans are regarding him! Love how Alice lit into Brian and put him in his place and on the right track.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments, I always look forward to your review. Claire is certainly heading for more trouble, hopefully I have some surprises there for you. I enjoy Gus, it will be ahrd when he goes back to live with his mommies but he will visit often under the new vistation agreement. Alice take no prisoners when anyone misbehaves but she is very loyal to her boys. Thanks again for being such a loyal reviewer. Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 48
Lol Hal is toast! Omg Lindsay is a total bitch and she totally pisses me off, but she is in for trouble if she takes on the Taylor's! Both of them and in fact the three of them are loyal to Brian!
Author's Response: Lindsay doesn't have much success against the Taylors or Alice who are all very loyal to Brian. Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter. Bill
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2014 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 48
Yay!! A new chapter! I can't wait to see how Hal gets handled.
Author's Response: Poor Hal, everyone seems to be anxious to see him go down. I don't think you will be disappointed. Sorry to make you wait so long for the new chapter. Bill
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2014 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 48
Great chapter but the time between SUCKED. I hope Hal has to quit and gets nothing that would be so grat wonder if Greg qualifies for Hal's job. Lindsay is still an idiot I worry about when she starts at the gallery. jealous Brian is always so cute. I hope the next part comes really soon need to see Claire mess up again and get fired.
Author's Response: Sorry about the long wait for an update. I hate when authors do that to stories I enjoy. You are reading my mind a little on the Hal situation. I think Lundsay at the Gallery will be interesting. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bill
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