Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2014 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 44

Hahahaha man Lindsay is a pain up my ass she's such a cow and I love love love Alice she's awesome 



Author's Response:

Alice takes no prisoners!  Glad you are enjoying the story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 44

Brian and Justin are so good as a team and family. I can't wait to see what Craig will do at the meeting.

Author's Response:

Happy you are still enjoying the story.  I hope Craig will not disappoint us.  Thanks for taking time to review.  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2014 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 44

Read it yesterday, commented yesterday, security code rejected 2x, so just this.

I'm still liking this story a lot.

Author's Response:

Glad you are still liking the story.  Hope you continue to enjoy it.  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: bjlover8676 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2014 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 44

Love this story love how justin and Brian are such a great family love how u depict Lindsey always thought she was such a prissy bitch that thought she owned Brian  can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Glad you are loving the story.  I am having fun writing it.  I have always felt the same way about Lindsay.  Thanks for the nice comments.  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2014 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 44

That was just another terrific chapter of a wonderful story.  I


keep writing that, but it is true. 


       One huge storm cloud that sits over this entire story is


Claire.  Though in this chapter there seems to be a few


important  hints, or am I reading too much into it.


      Claire gives Tino the slip.  Sounds to me she no longer


needs him or wants anything to do with him.  I know she is on


prescription medicines that she got off a dealer.  I am not sure


what that all means, but could it be – good bye Tino?  Of


course how to get rid of him is a problem.  A huge problem.


     Next, what I found  really startling is her realization that not


having to care for John and Peter is kind of good.  It does make


life so much easier.  I wonder if that is the path the story will


take.  I vote for that one.  I wouldn’t mind saying good bye to


Claire.


    Finally, just thanks for this terrific story.  There I said it


again.  Please take this as a compliment as how closely we read


every word. 


   DavidR



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your encouraging comments.  I responded to another review that after 44 chapters I keep waiting for readers to start saying they have had enough.  Good to know you are still enjoying the story.  I think Tino is not done with Claire.  She is a sad case, kind of what Brian could be if he didn't rise above his childhood or have Justin to teach him about love.  Now I'll repeat myself and say I really appreciate your encouragment.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2014 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 44

Looks like I was reviewer 300.  Woopie!!!  I forgot about Craig. Can't wait to see what you have planned for him.



Author's Response:

There was a lot going on in the last chapter.  HOORAY for 300!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2014 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 44

What an enjoyable chapter.  I didn't want it to end.  I'm glad that John decided to go with a tutor.  Thank goodness Justin was able to comfort Brian after his 'talk' with John.  It was very nice of Sally to help Claire out.  Hopefully Claire gets her wish and doesn't have to deal with her sons.  Joanie, of course, needs to read her bible, better yet have Father Butterfield explain parts to her.  Love all the wonderful food you had in this chapter, especially McDonalds.  Yummy.  Poor Lindsay, nobody will let her get away with anything.  Thank goodness.



Author's Response:

I think you were my 200th review and now you are my 300th review (not couting the ones that got lost on the old web site). Glad you enjoyed this chapter. After 44 chapters I am waiting for readers to say they are bored and ask me to stop writing new chapters.  It was lucky that Justin was able to get Brian over his rough patch.  Claire and Joan are neck in nceck for mother of the year award - NOT.  I prefer the homemade peach cobbler with vanilla ice cream to McDonalds.  Lindsay really is out there all by herself.  Thanks my friends, as always, for your nice comments.  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2014 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 44

You make me smile more and more with each chapter! It would be wise for Lindsay to finally straighten up and just accept the fact that Justin is Brian's husband and not hers. In the meantime, the rest of the family have quite a trial to get through.

Author's Response:

Hope I continue to make you smile.  Glad you are still enjoying the stories.  I think Lindsay thinks she is having the trail with the rest of the family.  I am sure she is hoping Jennifer doesn't put in an appearence.  Thanks for the encouragement.  Bill

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2014 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 44

Just last night I finished a re-read of the story to this point. I can truthfully say it's my favorite "in progress" story right now. I check for a new chapter several timesa day.

 

Carol

 



Author's Response:

Wow!  The whole story, that must have taken a while.  Glad you are still enjoying reading it.  Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2014 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 44

I forgot: The Brian-John scenes are always my favorites!

Moving moments I think for both of them, and time of healing!

Thank you!



Author's Response:

I am not sure they are Brian's favorite scenes.  Glad they are yours.

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2014 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 44

Just back from vacation, I made myself comfortable ("gemütlich") in front of my PC and read the latest new chapters! I enjoyed them, you did great!!

You prepared our new family well for the earthquakes to come: The dean at school -arghh, Linds still on the jealousy trip and our dear friend Craig, who might win the competition "asshole of the storyline"...let´s see.

Great job, my dear!

Like Claire I´m now an addict, but my drug is your story - gimme more, I need it...;))))  LOL

 



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoyed your vacation.  My grandmother was German (her parents were born in Germany) so I would have know what gemutlich meant.  Her maiden name was Schmitt - the "tt" is a little more unusual spelling of the name.  Although that is almost the extant of my German language skills.  Happy you enjoyed the latest chapters.  There is some pretty heavy competition for that "ashole of the storyline" award.  We'll just have to wait and see who pulls ahead in the home stretch.  Thanks for all your nice comments that encourage me to continue with the story.  Bill

Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2014 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 44

Intrresting visit yeah right i think Lindsay may get herself fired before she starts working. Poor Brian more tears thankfully Justin is there to fulfill his needs and make him think happirr thoughts



Author's Response:

Glad you are still reading and enjoying. B & J always have to consider Gus when they are dealing with Lindsay they want to avoid a complete break in the realationship. Poor Brian but you are correct he has Justin to keep him happy. Thanks for the review, Bill

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2014 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 44

I'm really enjoying every new chapter. If it would be a book, I wouldn't be able to stop reading before the end.

But I think the next chapters will get a bit more stressfull with evverything coming up at the same time.

 

 



Author's Response:

It is great that the story is holding your interest. I am happy that you are still enjoying it. Thanks for taking time to send me the nice comments, I appreciate it. Hope you continue to enjoy the story. Bill

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