Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 43

I soooo loved the last two chapters!!! XD Their day at the amusement park was awsome and Gus and that little girl were so cute!! Also, Justin's phone conversation with Lindsay was great!! :D I just loved how he put her in her place... I know she did not stay there long.... -_-U but it was great to see Justin taking his stand.... :D I'm really enjoying your story!!! (as if it's any surprise....) I really can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!!



Author's Response:

Happy your are still reading and enjoying.  I thought the day at Kennywood was fun.  Working on Chapter 44 should be psoting it in the next couple days.  THanks for all the nice comments, I really appreciate them.  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 43

Great chapter I love me a feisty Justin bloody Lindsay

Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter.  I don't think Lindsay has gotten the message yet.  Thanks for your review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2014 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 43

Brian at an amusement park what other surprises could you have.  Lindsay is a bitch I am almost sure Justin is going to have to fire her right after she starts. Can't wraith for Brian and Justin to have full custody of 3 boys yikes!!!!



Author's Response:

He was only there because Justin shamed him into it. Lindsay does really need a dose of reality. Thanks for the review I always appreciate knowing that folks are still reading and enjoying. You are always so great about letting me know that. Bill

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2014 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 43

linday better watch herself and start listening to mel. she'll be out of a job quicker than she can blink if she goes behind justin's back with sidney like she tries to brian.
i'm glad the had a good day at the amusement park.
tino is going to pop up when claire isn't expecting him to or he's already dead or in jail. she better not get too complacent yet.

Author's Response:

Lindsay is quite misguided not sure what it will take for her to wake up and see life like it actually is.  I'll make a revelation here and say Tino is not dead and will be popping up soon.  Thanks for taking time to comment and let me know you are still enjoying my story.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 43

Well it looks like Gus almost had a girlfriend.  I'm glad that they told Gus about the move back and I think it was unfair of Lindsay to complain.  Justin told her like it is and she still thinks she can tattle to Brian and get her way.  Boy is she wrong. I'd love to see that conversation happen.  lol.  At least Mel is being sensible.  Looks like things are going Claire's way at the moment. Maybe Tino got hit by a car and isn't coming back.  Of course buying those Oxy will get her in trouble again.   Good for Alice for insisting Justin eat his fruit.  What would this family do without her, even though John makes killer eggs and grilled cheese sandwiches.  Great chapter as always.



Author's Response:

The review I always wait for!  You always manage to zero in on what food is served, I always try and let you know what is on the menu at the Taylor-Kinney household.  Lindsay gettng Brian to go against Justin is not at all likely to happen.  I will let you know that Tino is alive and well and due to pop up in Claire's life soon.  Poor Claire she can't catch a break.  Thanks, my friend, as always for you nice review.  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2014 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 43

Thanks for bringing back evil Linds.

Author's Response:

You're welcome. I think of her as more misguided then evil but as long as you enjoy the story that is the important thing. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2014 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 43

That was a happy chapter for everyone but Mikey and Linds.

I enjoyed it very much, since I am all in for happiness.

Author's Response:

I think the two that were unhappy are the two who can't/won't adjust to change.  Happy you enjoyed the chapter, thanks for letting me know.  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2014 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 43

Oh man...all I can say is that Lindsay is in for one hell of a wake up call trying to play Brian against Justin. I hope she realizes that Mel is on the verge of walking out.

Author's Response:

Poor Mel really has no where to walk to.  Linds has no chance of getting Brian to go against anything Justin says but that won't stop her from trying.  Thanks for the review, you are faithful about letting me know you are reading and anjoying and I appreciate it.  Bill

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2014 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 43

this story is great i love it the fun park i had fun to update soon how is ur garden i hope u r enjoying it   kim



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the trip to Kennywood.  My garden is looking good.  Not as much to do this time of year just some watering and deadheading.  I have a huge butterfly bush in full bloom that had a great scent which drifts into the house.  Great time of year!  Thanks for asking.  Bill

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