Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2018 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 41
WOW, they all like to use Brian and milk him.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2014 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 41
I love this story.
I really hope Brian and Justin stick it to Craig.
There are some very sweet moments that make me tear up. Great writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for all the nice comments, I appreciate them. Nice reviews are what keeps me continuing this story. Really happy you are still enjoying this story. Bill
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2014 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 41
Hi!!!! :) Sorry it took me sooo long to read the last two chapters, but you know how it is... RL... T_T However, I'm here now and I have to say that I loved the last two chapters!! :) (as always) Gus is sooo cute! >0< And the confrontation between Jennifer and Craig was awsome! :) I also love the fact that Brian and Justin seem to like having people over so often... The only thing that worried me a bit was that whole conversation between Brian and the school about John... :S I hope everything goes well.... Anyway, I really can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Happy you are still reading and enjoying the story. I have had out of town guests staying with me so my update is way overdue. Hope to have it posted tomorrow. Bill
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2014 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 41
it nice to be able to be yourself in your own home. the friends brian and justin are making ate friends that like them for themselves. not what they can do for them.
i love that brian has craig over a barrel and i'm waiting for his reaction.
is it wrong that i don't have any sympathy for
claire? her life is of her own making.
Author's Response: I have a feeling that Carig will not be overly delighted when he finds out who Sunshine Associates are. Claire does seem to make one bad decision after another. Now back in her unhappy childhood home with a judgemental mother she really needs to do something to get her life on the right track. Thanks for the review! Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2014 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 41
I love Alice, nice as pie, but feisty too.
I like that you followed up on Claire's situation after the car incident.
What nefarious plot is Craig about to embark on?
It would help if they got rid of the tinymice altogether.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I always like hearing from you. Happy you are still liking the story. My old PC had a real issue with tinymce. I could only reply to reviews on my iPad for awhile. I have no idea what it even is, some sort of techie thing I guess. Hope you continue to enjoy the story. Bill
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 41
* waves *
still here - still reading - still loving this story - still love Brian for helping other people - still loving all the new people you bring in - love Gus and Kevin together - love Justin for being Justin .... uhmm don't like Craig, Joan, the friend of Claire. Claire must grow some balls !!
What can I say more? hmm I really look out for the next capter every time.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I still love my story banner! Happy to know you are still reading and still enjoying. Thanks for all the nice comments. I'm not sure that Tino is really a "friend" of Claire's??? Bill
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 41
I can't wait till Monday to read each new chapter, but I think we need some more angst, may Mickey trying to save Brian from money stealing Justin, or the girls move. Nice to see Craig is still an ass.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The girls are coming back soon and sure to bring some issues with them. Glad you are still enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2014 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 41
I needed to write a second review after I read everyone else's. I know I complain in every review about the wait only because I love love love the story. Now I can't wait for Michaels head to explode because Brian and Justin have new friends.
Author's Response: I always have good intentions of posting new chapters faster but somehow I never make that happen. I was sure I would post this chapter over the weekend. So I would like to promise I will do better but i don't want to lie! Bill
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2014 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 41
Brian showing his softer side to people who won't abuse him for it meaning not Lindsay Michael or Debbie. I like that. I like that Brian and Justin own Craig or Sunshine Associates does. I guess I just have to wait patiently (i suck at that) for this story to move meaning Mel and Lindsay come back Michael is a bigger idiot and Claire either steals drugs or moves in with the new boyfriend. Any chance I can talk you into updating more than once a week see above for the reason. This is my favorite story in here right now and I retread the whole thing constantly.
Author's Response: I actually answered your newer review before this one, sorry about that. As I said in that reply I would like to promise I would write and post them sooner and I have really good intentions but somehow I never make it happen. I work them out in my head first but it is the typing them up that I procrastinate on for some reason. I'm sorry about that and I know how hard it is to wait for updates on stories you enjoy. Bill
Reviewer: lyn (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2014 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 41
I so Love this story. It just gets better.
Author's Response: Thank your for letting me know you enjoy my story. I truly appreciate the nice comment, Bill
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2014 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 41
I absolutely love this story. It feels so natural, like it could have easily been a part of the TV series. And I am impressed with how well you've managed the stories of so many characters outside of "the gang".
I (not so) patiently await the next chapter. Seriously, I could read this story everyday and not get tired of it.
Author's Response: Wow, what a really, really nice review. Thank you so much for letting me know you are enjoying my story. It is very encouraging when readers let me know they appreciate what I am writing.
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 41
Sorry I haven't been able to give feedback recently. Since you asked,nothing has changed. I still think this is a terrific story. It sure has changed a lot, more than a lot. The issue that keeps me concerned is what about Claire? What would happen if she found her way back to some normalcy. She now has a job, and she is capable to keeping it and functioning well. How does that affect Peter's and John's future? So far she had been able to stay away from any drugs that don't belong to her. Noww hat about Tino? Since Brian has helped so many, can he help Claire or is she on way to jail. So many questions and so many possibilities. Of course,I don't want any answers except let the story unfold whatever will bewill be.
Thanks for the story I am really enjoying it.
DavidR
Author's Response: Glad you are still enjoying the story. I think Claire has a way to go before her life could get on the right track. Brian has tried to help her, he paid for rehab, but Claire has to be ready to accept help. Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it. Bill
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2014 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 41
I noticed that I didn't wrote reviews for a lomg time. I'm sorry. When I read at work I can't make any review.
But that doesn't mean I'm not enjoying each chapter.
It's a real novel. And there are so many different plots that at the end of each chapter I'm asking myself and what about the others? You write so beautiful, dramatic and funny. I will be really sad when you finish the story. For me it could be going on and on...
I'm looking forward to lots of new chapters.
Kathrin
Author's Response: Well this is a review worth waiting for. Thanks for your really nice comments, I appreciate them. I do have lots of ideas for new chapters and some things just come to me as I am writing a chapter. The whole money to Craig thing just kind of happened in this chapter without any prior plan. Happy you are enjoying the story. Thanks again for the very nice review. Bill
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 41
This is becoming a great story. Love how people like Claire, Joan and Craig are being put in their place by Justin and Brian.
I love how Brian is changing for the good in this story. Fantastic read. Keep up the great work.
Jane
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review. Happy you are enjoying the story. I like to think that the good that was buried in Brian is just making its way out. Thanks again!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 41
I always enjoy the adventures you manage to come up with. Claire put in a cameo appearance with Joanie. Craig is in for trouble and I can't wait till he finds out who Sunshine Asso is. Brian better watch out or Babylon is going to turn into the place straight people want to be. Why is it I always get hungry after one of your chapters?
Author's Response: Always happy to see your review and know you are still enjoying the story. Craig will have a problem unless he has a different source for the money he needs but that is doubtful. Are you hungry for gluten free cookies? That would be kind of sad. Thanks for always being so loyal with reviews. Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 41
You already know how much I love this story...every time I finish a chapter I can't wait for the next installment to be posted!
Author's Response: Thanks for your really nice comments. Bill
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 41
Hi, Bill! Another great chapter. I think this one is one of my favorites.:) I love all the details you put into this story, although at this rate you might have 100 chapters on your hands - ha! But I'm not complaining. I think the pace for this story is just right.;)
I love how you have incorporated so many new characters into this fic and made them come to life. That's not always easy to do, but you have made them endearing to me, which means (IMO) you're doing a great job with that. LOVED the part about Gus helping Kevin to read; that was SO sweet. And i adored the part about Justin and Brian in the pool house discussing Brian being 'out of character,' and how Justin was concerned about not wanting to make Brian uncomfortable.
And Joan watching the "Catholic Channel" - LOL! Keep it up, my friend. Still really enjoying this story. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks Kim for all the nice comments. I still have a bunch of ideas for new chapters so not sure when the story will end. Glad you like the new characters, I think since B&J's life is changing so the people they associate with have to change also but they will always have their old friends/family. Looking forward to updates to your story. Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 41
How sweet of Brian to prop up Taylor electrics to ensure Jennifer and Molly are ok. The boys are so settled and happy
Author's Response: That's the way I like to think of them as settled and happy but still having really good sex. Thanks for the review, Bill
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2014 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 41
love the story brian has a heart of gold update soon kim
Author's Response: I think he always had the heart of gold but it was hidden under all the hurt of his childhood. Happy you are still reading and enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2014 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 41
I am enjoying reading this story. I really like brian and justin with the boys and gus. And Brian is awesome, he really is taken care of the entire Taylor family. Including Craig.
thank you so much for the update M)
Author's Response: I think the taking care of Craig is an unfortunate biproduct of his care of Molly and Jennifer. Happy to know you are still enjoying my story.
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 41
I am really enjoying this story. Waiting to see what happens to Craig.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to review, I appreciate it! Craig is going to find himself in that proverbial place between a rock and a hard place. He can't repay the loan but he will HATE knowing the money is from Brian. I think Justin will really enjoy letting his evil sperm donor know who Sunshine Associates really are.
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