Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2014 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 36
Hey Bill. Sorry about the late review; short excuse, internet connection problems. OMG what does Lindsay think Michael can do apart from annoy Brian, which can only make him rescind his offer. Yay, for Debbie. I don't know if I'm in favour of B/J taking on Peter and John. Isn't there anyway Claire can get the help she needs. Surely a drug test would be mandatory for her situation. I don't know the legal side of these things, but I would like to see her recover. Now I know Lindsay and Michael are still a tag team set to irritate Brian I can't wait to find out if Hal returns. Please say it is so as it is just too funny that you named a character Hal. :D
Cheers :)
Author's Response: I swear I did not consciously name Hal after the actor that played Michael. I don't have a good feeling about Claire getting her life together anytime soon. Showtime's Showcase cahnnel is howing the show from the begiining. It has been awhile since I watched any of the shows. It has been pretty interesting to see those early episodes. Glad that you still enjoying the story, hope you don't mind too much if John & Peter hang around for a while longer. Happy that your internet connections have cleared up, no internet can really make you feel isolated. Thanks for the review, beter late than never! Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2014 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 36
This story is moving along wonderfully the boys are now comfortable enough to speak their fears to Brian. Lindsay what a bitch! Loved how Debbie went into bat for Brian against Michael and that Brian recognised Jennifer's behind the scenes work.
Author's Response: Glad you are still enjoying the story. I think Debbie is more realisitic when she witnesses Michael's bad behavior, she always takes his side if he tells her about what happens. Thanks for the review. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2014 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 36
Oooo, another update. Thank you so much.
I bet the movers would never have seen a penny if Brian had sent the money.
And Mikey, there are just no words for him.
I like the inclusion of Patrick's Kevin in the story line. Can't wait to see what happens tomorrow.
Author's Response: Glad you like the latest chapter. Thanks, as always for your nice review. Bill
Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2014 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 36
This is a really wonderful story and I totally enjoy reading Michael/Lindsay bashing story.
First of all, Michael is just a man who never grows up, despite how everyone tells him to stay out of others business but he never listens. Funny how he never really contributes to his "precious"daughter yet he has the nerve to critize Brian's actions, what a selfish prick! Glad to see that Debbie stands up for Brian and Justin!!
And Lindsay is just an ungrateful bitch who is forever asking for money and never appreciates Brian's help. She takes everything for grantd and manipulates others to believe that she is the victim. I wonder if Lindsay will get the job from the art gallery, although I really dislike her, but I'd love to see how Justin becomes her boss hahhaha.
Love your story, hope to see updates soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for such nice comments. I think you really understand Michael. Mainly I think he and Lindsay can't accept they are not longer the most important people to Brian. Glad you are enjoying the story and I appreciate you taking time to review.
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2014 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 36
After a terribly busy time on job I´m back and enjoy chapter after chapter...
Unfortunately some people never change...Michael, Lindsay who wants always money and more money as if she had a right to get Brian´s money. Are there deeper reasons we know not yet, maybe hidden depts...? And Claire - funny her name in french means "clear" but she isn´t at all. And again her boys get hurt. IN the latest chapter you gave us readers some hopeful perspectives: permanent custody, new school. I always hope this story will not end too soon, we all need lots of chapters ;)
Thank you for writing. I will never abandon this story!
Sorry for my mistakes, spend some time in France and now I mix up the languages...but: cést la vie!
Author's Response: You are always so good about commenting on the new chapters and I really appreciate you. I think that Michael and Lindsay can't adjust to not coming first with Brian so they are always trying to get back into first position with him. They want to keep his attention on them. I am glad you are still enjoying my story and I have plans for many more chapters. Thanks again for taking time to write reviews. Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2014 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 36
I can't believe Lindsay is still complaining when neither she nor Melanie are footing the bill for their move back to the Pitts. Michael really should stay out of it, and if he had any common sense he would have told Lindsay it was none of his business to begin with.
On a brighter note, I think it's awesome that Brian and Justin are taking steps towards permanent guardianship. John and Peter will be thrilled to finally have a little piece of mind and not have to worry about the next chapter of turmoil in their lives...let's hope that the courts agree. This may also be a way to get Claire to submit to taking that drug test. If She's clean it shouldn't be a problem right?
Author's Response: Glad you liked the latest installment. I used to work with someone who often said "common sense is not very common", so Michael is not alone in lacking it. I think the chances of Claire being "clean" are pretty slim. Thanks for reviewing, you are always so faithful about commenting and I appreciate it. Bill
Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2014 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 36
I don't want this story to ever end. I can't wait to have more of Gus and Kevin friendship.
I have to say, I'm getting really sick of Michael's stupidity. He's always on Brian's back and Brian is always so patient with him. I would love to see Michael reaction to Brian openly criticizes his non-existent financial assistance for the girls and his daughter.
Brian has no obligation towards Gus because he gave his rights to Melanie but Brian does all he can for his son. Michael still has his rights for JR and wants Brian to give money for her too.
I'm wondering if the girls let JR with Michael while they're in Toronto or did they keep her with them ? Has Melanie ever let JR with Michael ? If yes, was it because she knew Ben was with them or she really trust Michael with her daughter ?
The best way for Michael to see how Lindsay manipulates him is to be present when Brian receives her phone call and see how long she waits before calling him and telling all her BS. But having Michael's approval isn't important. Brian already has it from the people that really matter (Justin and Jennifer) whose are here for and support him without expecting something from him. It's also good that Debbit starts to understand that.
John and Peter are great. They don't want to be used to this life with Brian in case it stop but they don't refuse to participate in it. Now that they know Brian and Justin want them to stay John and Peter will be more relax. They're so good with Gus and Gus is so cute.
I don't really care about Lindsay, Melanie, JR or Michael but we don't see Gus with them a lot. How old is JR right now ? Is she old enough to knowledge that Gus is less around her ?
Author's Response: Thanks for all the nice comments, I really appreciate them. Michael and Brian have been friends for a long time and Brian is pretty used to all Michael's foibles. He only really reacts negatively if Michael says or does anything against Justin. JR went back to Toronto with her mommies and she is 3 years younger than Gus (at least in my QAF world) so she is 4. JR has stayed with Michael and Ben for a few dasy at a time. I like John & Peter (in my story not so much in the show) and they will continue to be part of the story. Glad you are enjying the story, hope you continue to review. Thanks again.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2014 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 36
I do so enjoy this story. I felt like jumping up and down for joy when Debbie let Michael have it for butting into Brian's financial assistance for the girls. I thing Brian did the right thing telling Lyndsay that Cynthia would handle the movers. It has me wondering just what she planned to do with the money once it got into their account. I'm really glad to see Brian and Justin taking legal steps to give John and Peter some stability. The only complaint I have is with reading this at bedtime, I always get hungry. But I'm not about to pass up enjoying this tale.
Author's Response: Always happy to see your review. I think Debbie is too sensible to always support Michael when he is clearly wrong especially if she witnesses his actions. I think it is a good idea to limit the amont of money Lindsay had control over. I have a craving for a banana bread myself. Thanks for your comments. Bill
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