Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2014 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 33

I am back on track (after some trouble caused by my beloved laptop..)and happy to find many new chapters of your story.

So, how long will it take for Linds to get it - she has no claim on Brian nor his money! It can´t take that long! Oh girl, please wake up soon....... Your plot is like real life and very well written.

I´m glad you even kept the nephews in mind, esp. John and his soccer game.

Thanks again - I hope there will be lots of chapters for your readers.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice review.  I had some PC issues a while back so I sympathize with yur laptop trouble.  I am almost done the next chapter but it has been really nice weather and I have been spending all my spare time in the garden.  I'm happy you are continuing to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2014 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 33

I can see it now.  Lindsay will not be offered the position and she will blame Justin- saying it was his fault- he told Sydney not to offer it to her.  Lindsay better get smart or she will lose a lot more than she bargained for.



Author's Response:

Somehow I don't think it wll happen exactly like that.  I see more potential in Justin being Lindsay's boss.  Thanks for always doing reviews, I really, really, really apreciate you.

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2014 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 33

love the lindsay bashing i love the story i would take gus and let the girls sink or swim thanku kim

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter.  I think Gus woud miss his mommies but they sure are a lot of trouble to everyone else.  Thanks for the review, you know I love to get them.  Bill

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2014 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 33

I am do loving this.

To think Lindsay could out WASP Jennifer, ha!
Michael got what he deserved too.
Please update as soon as possible. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Really glad you are enjoying my story.  Jennifer has way too many years of WASP experience to lose out to Lindsay.  Poor Mikey, so deluded and out of touch with the real world.  Thanks for taking time to review, I really appreciate all my reviews. 

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2014 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 33

I loved the chapter!!! I think the confrontation with Michael went very good, even if he is a stubborn assh**..... I also loved that Ted defended Brian and Justin's position..... On another note, I'm really getting tired of Lindsey, trying to undermine Justin's authority like that, I just wanted her thrown out with a kick to the ass.... ¬¬* Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! :) Hope to read you soon! Kisses!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Poor Michael is his own worst enemy and even though Lindsay calls Brian Peter, Mikey is really the boy who never grew up.  I suspect a Justin/Lndsay confrontation sometime in the future.  Thanks for your comments, I always appreciate them.  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2014 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 33

Well it seems that all of Lindsay's bitching about how Justin came to own the gallery is about to bite her in the ass. Furthermore, her constant complaints regarding her and Mel's new living situation just might cost her both her son and wife.

I really applaud Brian for putting Mikey in his place. He had absolutely zero right to call Brian selfish when he is basically taking up the role of father to not only Gus, but to J.R. as well. They better get their shit together quick before Brian and Justin leaves everyone hanging except the kids...because they are the main priority here.

Author's Response:

I think Lindsay will get what she deserves eventually. Poor Mikey is pretty clueless. Happy you are still enjoying the story. Thanks for your comments. Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2014 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 33

Great chapter. Gus is so sweet. Lindsay is a bitch. Michael is such an ass, I am so happy Brian gave him what for. Maybe the girls move in with him , see how he likes supporting them.

Author's Response:

I doubt the girls will move in with Mikey but that would be a horrible fate they would all deserve, except for the poor kids.  Happy you are enjoying the story, still fun for me to write.  Thanks for taking time to write a review. 

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2014 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 33

I don't want to wait for a week to see how the story will continue!!!!!

Sorry, I don't want to be ingrateful, but I like it so much:)



Author's Response:

Hey I poasted the update really quickly (for me) this week.  Glad you are ejoying the story!  Working on 34. Bill

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2014 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 33

Well Lindsey has once again stepped in it....



Author's Response:

She is a pro at doing that.  Always wants to be number one with Brian, but doomed to failure.  Thanks for taking timt to review!  Bill

Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2014 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 33

OMG Michaela nod Lindsay are immature selfish bitch and prick. I am gladBrian and Justin are awRe of their thinking and will deal with it so I look forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

That is a pretty fair discription of the non dynamic duo.  I don;t think thay have a chnace against Brian & Justin, a real dynamic duo.  Thanks for your comments!  Bill

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2014 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 33

Lindz might have just talked herself out of a job! TAG



Author's Response:

But if she doesn't get the job that would cut a lot out of my planned story lines.  I think Sidney & Justin are going to have to hire her!  Thanks for reviewing, I apprecaite your loyalty.  Bill

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