Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2018 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 28
Brian should take Gus and give the 2 munchers no more money
Author's Response: I think Gus might miss his Mommies
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 28
OMG Justin has now become a personal shopper. :D It looks like Gus might be seeing a lot more of his cousins in the near future. I like the way the children are interacting as it seems realistic.
Cheers
Author's Response: Realistic is a very good thing - THANKS.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2014 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 28
I loved the chapter!!!! I think Brian and Justin are too generous with Melanie and Lindsay, they keep blackmailing Brian into giving them money... I just hope that they don't get away with it, they have to know that their actions have consequences and that they cannot expect Brian to save them all the time... But anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: More information to come about the Melanie and Lindsay's financial mess. I don't think Justin will let Brian get too badly taken advantage of. Thanks for taking tim to review and all your kind comments. Working on Chapter 29.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2014 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 28
Sounds like there is a full house. I like Justin's plans for the girls moving into the loft, lets hope they go for it. This story line just keeps getting better and better.
Author's Response: Glad to see you are chimeing in at the appropriate time and I will not need to hunt you down for your comments on this chapter. Thanks for the kind words, happy you are still enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2014 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 28
Good job! Very enjoyable chapter, with plot development and characters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the really nice review. Glad you are ejoying the twists and turns of the story. I appreciate you taking time to review.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2014 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 28
My goodness, couldn't the poor uncles get a breather...lol. I agree with our awesome duo that there has to be more to the story of why the merry munches are broke. And big kudos to Brian for putting such stringent conditions on his ability to help them out.
Author's Response: It would be a boring story if things settle down too much. More to come on what happened in Toronto to bring about financial ruin. Thanks for taking time to review and I am happy you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2014 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 28
This is the beginning of some changes.....the nephews get along well with the little ones(???); Brian gained confidence in his abilities as a caretaker and father and needs more time with his son, Justin gained strength in his new role as some kind of nephew protector.
Just add Gus (and JR?): Will there be a new family around the corner ? Will Mel&Linds like it? And lots of lots chapters to come? hehehehe, as I always say: Can´t wait ......
Author's Response: Thanks as always for your comments, I appreciate you taking time to let me know you are enjoying the story. I still have ideas for many more chapters as long as reviewers let me know they are still reading. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
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