Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Flight Plan B
Reviewer: AD (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2015 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

read some parts twice.  Funny



Author's Response:

Thanks heaps for the funny comment.  I really appreciate that you took the time to review each chapter.

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2015 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm living for jealous Brian! He's my favorite. I'm loving this story!



Author's Response:

 Jealous Brian; I'm with you, I like a jealous Brian also.  Thank you for loving this story, what a delightful thing to say. :)))

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2015 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

LOL your a/n, I was definitely wondering about Kip's looks. I eventually just made them both look like Ben, because...reasons. ;P I always love a jealous, vexed Brian. Wonder what happened with the landing. 



Author's Response:

OMG, what you just said, well that is also the only way I could deal with the Kip/Ben twin thing.  I never found Kip handsome, yet Ben was certainly at the front of the queue when they handed out looks.  However, I know not everyone feels the same way so I was interested in the reader's mindset when they read they were identical.  Oddly enough not too many had them both Kip look-alikes.  LOL  

Vexed, that is one of my top ten favourite words.  Okay, admit it, when someone writes top ten in relation to a B/J fic you don't expect the following utterance to be 'favourite words'.  LOL

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2015 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

Jealous Brian May be one of my faves. I would say that Brian's body with Kip's head would be hot. Lol



Author's Response:

OMG, really; Brian's body with Kip's head.  I love that some else thinks of these crazy things too.  LOL  

Reviewer: QaFfangirl (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2014 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Can't say I've ever had a funny pilot but really enjoyed the banter between the pilot and Justin.  

Now you've introduced Ben and Kip? as twins.  My interest is still peeked.



Author's Response:

Alas no, I have never had a funny pilot either; although I have had the occasional funny cabin crew member.   One of my reviewers said I ruined future flights for them; they pray to have Justin as the flight attendant with his crazy announcements.  It would make the flight seem to go faster. LOL

Thank you so much. :)))))))

Cheers :D

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2013 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 3

I hoped they both looked like Ben. I hope you explain the end in next chapter. Rather confused here



Author's Response:

Two Bens.  Yummy.  I can see you made it to the end so I hope all is clear now.

Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2013 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 3

I never saw any appeal to Kip so I am going to have to say they are all Ben. Now my mind is running wild with possibilities on what happened during the flight. I don't want to make some amazing suggestion and then have your idea made dull in comparison, well alright just a quick option. I am assuming something happened in the cockpit, must have been pilot related but not plane related as no mention made of a wing falling off or any other little bothersome events. I'm thinking the new pilot was bored during the short flight and decided to take out his own built in joy stick, while manipulating it he noticed a huge problem, lack of movement, dripping sore, 3rd testicle, take your pick. Something that will mean he can't have any together time with a cute flight attendant anytime soon. Or maybe he happened to hit a hang gliding emu and the poor bird was sucked into the motor and came out the other end as a stuffed pillow...do emu have goose down feathers???
Lori...more sadness, my poor banana was all bruised and beyond edible.

Author's Response:

Yes, your ideas now make mine look dull.  Thanks, thanks a lot.  LOL  Alas our poor Emu's cannot fly and therefore would have been easy to suck into the motor.  Banana karma has just struck.  Your banana wasn't edible because of the image you conjured up about our soft feathered, flightless birdy. 

No Cheers for you.  LOL

Reviewer: blacklizard (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2013 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

brilliant so far

i was laughing loads

great humour



Author's Response:

Hey, it's good to see you are still on MW.  I hope this means your health issues are under control and we may get an update to your fic soon.  I'm glad we could share a laugh.  Thanks you for the brilliant comment. 

Cheers

Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2013 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 3

Loved the easy banter btween BJ even though they re only aqcuaintances at this point, they definitely share a comfort level....loved the light hearted feel of the story, and the flight crew 's comedic antics had me in splits, what i wouldnt give to be on a flight like that :).......you ve got me curious aboutt what happened to J...cant wait for the next chapter.....
Hugs, kimi



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the light hearted feel of the story, however, (I'm giving you a little warning, shhh it's a secret) we are in for a little angst.  The men will be back to being themselves by the end of the next chapter though.  Now I think I've given away too much.  LOL  Thanks you so much for taking the time to review; I really appreciate it.

Cheers

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

I did lol when I read the comment about Brian's lack or arousal a rare event indeed

Author's Response:

Hey Chris.  I like how people are laughing at different things in this fic.  Thank you for letting me know.  Thanks also for the lol; love it. 

Cheers

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 3

I would love an identical copy of Ben walking around, we can totally eliminate Kip to have this benefit.

Loved the interaction between Justin and the pilot, and the suggestion that there is something more between the two. Brian jealous is one of my favorite scenarios.

I'm curious to know what happened to Justin during the flight.

Hugs and lots of health, dear!

Fatima.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, I like your way of thinking.  Kip the twin should look like a carbon copy of Ben, as his HOT.  LOL  Justin and the pilot, what is that all about???  Oh wait, why am I asking you as I already know what's going on?  LOL  Justin had some very bad news during the flight and hopefully it doesn't crush his spirit.  Will Brian be there for him?  Let's hope so as I like witty Justin.    Hugs and lots of health to you to; I really appreciate the positive energy you are sending my way Fatima. 

Cheers

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2013 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

How odd, they had to be identical for Brian to know they are twins, but what they look like just went over my head. I wonder if identical twins can be of different sexuality? If so, what does that say about saying it is genetic? Doesn't do much for the nurture theory either.

Author's Response:

Nurture v nature, WOW, I like the way you think.  I know some identical twins have different sexual orientations, but I'm certainly not qualified to give an opinion on why that is.   If you ever want to beta a fic let me know as your perception would definitely keep me on track.   Thanks for reviewing; I'm really enjoying your observations.

Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

I LMAO at the antics of the pilot and Justin.

I must admit that Ben and Kip as twins had me thinking about that fly horror movie. It creeped me out.

I loved the dynamics of Justin and the pilot possibly being in a relationship and Brian's jealousy over it.

I have to say my husband asked me why was I smiling so much and it was because I was reading this story at the time. Awesome story!

Author's Response:

Justin and the pilot; what's going on there????  Brian sure knows he isn't getting anything, so is the Captain getting lucky?  LOL   Ben and Kip mixed together.  Yeah, that's a horror fic just waiting to be written.  NOT.  LOL    I love what you said about this making you smile, thank you for letting me know.   Thanks also for the awesome comment.

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

Interesting cliffie there my friend. Now it's got me wondering....did the plane get shot down?

Author's Response:

No the plane didn't get shot down.  Those words were used because the landing was poorly executed and the passenger thought they were being funny, just like the previous announcements they had heard during the flight, they wanted to join in the fun.  However, be prepared for a disaster, because I need it as a catalyst to get the men together since they seem to be stuck as friends at the moment; only seeing each other on flights.  I'm going to stop writing as I have a bad habit of giving away too much.  LOL  I will promise to return to the levity as quick as possible in chapter 4.

Cheers

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2013 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great Story



Author's Response:

Hey Jay.  Thanks for commenting.  I'm really pleased you're enjoying it and have let me know.  I love it when I can share a laugh.

Cheers    

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2013 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

This was so much fun in a variety of ways. I love how you wrote Brian handling his jealousy; of course - that didn't work out so well for him. But... you have to hand it to Brian, he has his own unique style of pain management! LOL. 

Such a delightful and fun read. I am thoroughly enjoying this! *Hugss*



Author's Response:

I was thinking of writing Brian way OOC in this, but there is just something about him that won't let me.  LOL  That must be one of the oldest pickup/rejection lines, second only to "Do I know you." LOL  I'm glad you're still enjoying this.  Hold on now for a little angst, however, we will get back on track before the end of the next chapter; hopefully, I can't promise.  LOL  Thanks so much for once again leaving such a lovely review.

Cheers  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2013 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

Brian seems to travel alot.  Ben and Kip twins!  That's original, I can't quite imagine what they would look like.  Poor Brian, he's not use to being shot down.  What happened that changed Justin's tune?  Please more soon.



Author's Response:

OMG you make me laugh.  Brian's travel habits are discussed in chapter 5; I think your psychic.  LOL  Justin hasn't changed his tune as that to will be explained.  Justin and Brian aren't together yet as they just see each other on these flights between New York and Pittsburgh.  I hope if Ben and Kip were ever twins they would be lucky enough to look like Ben.  Double Ben; how delicious would that be.  LOL  Thanks for asking for more and for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it.

Cheers

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2013 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ooh...a cliffhanger!  Interesting.  Now I want to know what happened there.;)  I would like to fly on a plane that has the same type of wisecracks as the pilot and Justin engaged in; loved that part! And Kip and Ben as twins?  Ack!  Not sure how to envision THAT.  That was a big surprise.;)  All I can say is, if they have Ben's body with Kip's head on it, what a waste of a perfectly good body - ha!  Liked the little jealous touch in this, as well as the subtle way that both boys are 'accomodating' each other and looking out for each other without making a big deal out of it.

Very entertaining story, Flossee - will be looking forward to the next part of this.;)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kip and Ben as twins?  Ack!  LOL  I was trying to think of the most implausible person to be Ben's twin.  It had to be someone that would get a reaction.  LOL  I'm so bad.  I agree with everything you say about heads and bodies though, maybe they could both look like Ben. Yum, no, double yum.  LOL  "boys are 'accommodating' each other and looking out for each other" this is very pertinent for the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Kim; I'm really thrilled you're finding this entertaining.

Cheers

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