Reviewer: Tinkerbell25 (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2014 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the last chapter!!!!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh I'll be disappointed when this finishes. However, I do like fics that can be written with so few words and are entertaining. I would say hurry back, but I won't as then it will be over.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've never written a multi chapter fic before, so I wasn't sure how it would work out, so I'm really happy you like it.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 7
I liked it! :D I'm glad Ethan received what he deserved and went to jail, I just hope he stays there.... Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the Epilogue... Hope it'll be up soon! Kisses! :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hi, Nikki! Well, I can certainly understand about RL, so I have no room to complain.; Always glad to see Brian taking care of Justin. And I'm glad that Ethan will never hurt him again. Something tells me the boys are back together now and will much stronger as a result. Looking forward to the epilogue. Thanks for the story! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 7
The truth comes out! I'm looking forward to that epilogue.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh my, Ethan needs to be smacked down. Thank goodness Justin got out of there and realised there is a difference between S&M and violence. I can't wait for more.
Cheers
Author's Response: Ethan shall be smacked down and much more. There's one more surprise to come that'll ensure it. And Justin has always realised the difference.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 6
I really liked it! :) Sorry it took me a while to read this, but life's been hectic lately... :S Anyway, hope to read you soon! :) Happy Holidays! Kisses!
Author's Response: Don't apologise for not reading it sooner! I'm just happy that you read it, period. And I'm really really happy you liked it.
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 6
Is Justin phoning to the police while Brian is talking to Ethan at the door?
Author's Response: Yes he is. Sorry for not making that clear.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 6
Very emotional story. Hope you can update soon. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 6
Hi, Nikki! Good to see an update to this. You definitely have my sympathy; I remember trying to post a chapter a while back, and got all the way done, only to get a server error on here and I had to do it again. Ugh!
Well, Ethan is certainly a nasty little jealous troll! He would never be anyone's master except in his delusions. Poor Justin, though, having to play along. I'm glad he finally had enough and called for help.
Looking forward to the rest of your story. And I hope you have a wonderful Christmas! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: I was going to add more of Brian talking with Ethan, but it was far too much effort in the end.
The thing with Ethan is that he doesn't realise that he's being jealous and a dick. He honestly thinks he's doing what Justin wants. But he'll soon found out that's not the case.
Thanks for all your support and merry christmas to you to.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
Woah! I hope he tell someone! Ethan should not get away with this!!!
Author's Response: Ethan is not going to get away with this, don't worry. There's one more surprise regarding Ethan to come and he will definitely get what's coming to him.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 6
Good on Justin to call the police and work toward putting Ethan away.
Author's Response: There's one more surprise to come that ensures Ethan goes away for a long time.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2013 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 5
Slave and Master; whoa, Ethan you need two willingly participants for that. Please update as soon as RL allows.
Cheers
Author's Response: Ethan thought he had two willing participants. He's majorily misjudged the situation with Justin.
Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 5
Damn I lost my review. I was editing for typo errors. Anyways...I hate Ethan and I always will. What he think he is? Claiming Justin as his property? The nerve of that man. I love a protective Brian. Go Go Go Brian! Put Ethan in a place where he belongs. Update the soonest my dear. {{{Hugs}}}
Author's Response: Ethan has majorly majorily misunderstood the situation and therefore thinks he's completely in the right claiming Justin as his property. The whole reason behind me writing this is my love of protective!Brian. And Ethan will be put in his place, but not quite how'd you expect.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
Love it! ^-^ I really want to know what will happen next! I'm hoping that at least a punch in the face will come from Brian for those last few comments.... Anyway, hope to read you soon! Kisses! :)
Author's Response: I also really want to know what happens next, as I haven't figured it out myself yet. I'm not sure if there will be punching involved, but Ethan will get what's coming to him, don't worry.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
Loving this story can't wait until brian puts him in his place bloody Ian
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 5
Well, how about "Debbie's unusually subdued, brassy voice FILTERING through the speaker?" Or 'sounding?' LOL! Can't think of anything else.;) Certainly okay as it is, though.;) Thanks for the response earlier. ~Kim
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 5
I like the plot. So unusial
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh my. I'm looking forward to what's next!! Seriously Ian calling Justin his property? Lol can't wait to see what Brian does now!! But I am very curious what else was going on between Jus and Ian.
Looking forward to more. Hope the update is soon!!
:)
Author's Response: What Brian does next might not be what you're expecting, but Ethan will get what's coming to him.
The next chapter will, at least start to, explain exactly what happened between Justin and Ethan.
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 5
Ethan - Master? *rofl* I hope, Brian will put him in his place.
Author's Response: Ethan will definitely know where he belongs when Brian's finished with him.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hi, Nikki! Glad to see an update to this.:) OMG, does Ethan really understand who he's dealing with here? I'll have to say one thing - either he's got 'balls,' or, probably more accurately, he's an idiot. And I love the way that Brian quickly corrects him when he states that Justin used to be 'his property.' I could definitely see a real donnybrook about to explode here. I hope Brian takes care of this haughty asshole with firm dispatch.;)
I personally wasn't bothered by all the "Brian's" and "Justin's" here, but I know what you mean about feeling like they're being overused at times. I try to sometimes mix it up with "partner" or "lover," with an occasional 'blond' or 'brunet' mixed in, but I personally don't care for things like 'the artist' or the 'adman' on a regular basis. Just my personal feeling on it. Not sure, though, here. You might have to use "former partner" or "former lover" since in this arc they are technically still split up.
As for the other sentence, what about something like "Debbie's brassy voice erupting from the speaker" or something like that? Looking forward to the next installment. Love a protective Brian, too, BTW. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: What Ethan thinks he's dealing with and what he's actually dealing with are two very different things. And he's neither got balls nor is he an idiot. He's wildly misjudged the situation and is responding appropiately to the situation he thinks he's in. I had to google donnybrook, but I don't think that's going to happen. Brian's going to consider Justin's feelings before he reacts, so the way he handles it won't necessarily be the usual Brian way. But Ethan will get what's coming to him either way.
I had thought about using partner/lover, but felt they didn't really fit with the tone. I've tried to use his/he etc instead of their name when I can get away with is, so I'm not constantly saying their names. But if other people aren't bothered, then it's fine.
I didn't want erupted or anything similar, as I imagined her to not sound like her usual self and be rather quiet and freaked out.
And thanks for your email. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 5
Slave??? Ethan really is delusional isn't he? Just how will Brian handle this? How fast can we learn what's going to happen? Love your discription of Ethan - spittle flying from his mouth.
Author's Response: He's not really delusional. It's more he's misinterpreted Justin's actions. And Brian will handle this in a way you might not expect. I'm busy with Uni at the moment, so it might be a while before I update, but the next chapter will start to wrap up.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 5
Sooooo.....wait, Ethan thought he was Justin's Master???? was this something that they went into mutually? Or was that the chin rat's way of mind raping our Sunshine??? so many questions yet to be answered.
Author's Response: Ethan thinks it's mutual, if that helps at all.
Reviewer: NicJ (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2013 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 4
I really like where this is going :) Are you planning on continuing it?
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I am continuing this. I just haven't had the time to write recently.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2013 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 4
I really liked the last two chapters! I really hate Ethan and I hope Brian gives the weasel what he deserves!!! Can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Ethan will get what's coming to him, don't worry. And than you.
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2013 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hmmm, I like these so far. I hate Ethan (and his ugly rat face) so I love to see things like this. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well, he's made it quite clear that he's been abusing Sunshine and he wonders why no one will tell him where Justin is? Can you have Ethan institutionalized?
Author's Response: In his mind, he's not been abusing Sunshine. But there will be consequences to his actions, don't worry.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 4
Just brilliant; being able to convey so much in so few words. Hurry back please as you said reviewing results in new chapters quicker.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you. And I shall try to hurry back.
Reviewer: Sunshine5794 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 4
I hope brian kills him
Author's Response: As much as I dislike Ethan, Brian's not going to kill him. Brian kills Ethan, Brian ends up in jail, Justin's all alone.
Reviewer: jaz (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2013 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
Sorry, I can't read this, I wasn't a big Ethan fan but I hate fan-fiction that turns him into an abusive lunatic.I don't really understand the reasoning behind it, and I'm also tired of the Justin being in an abused waif stories, having witness someone in an abusive relationship I have no desire to read fan-fiction about this serious issue.u
Author's Response: Seeing as you're anonymous, I'm not sure if you'll read this, but I'll reply regardless. First off, I appreciate your honesty. Second, Ethan being abusive isn't really the main point to this, it's the back story as to why Justin's ended up how he has. I had about 7 different versions of what would make Justin act like the way he is, some of which were set when Justin was in New York. Thirdly, Ethan isn't an abusive lunatic in this, not really. He's acting how he thinks Justin wants him to act. It's hard to explain without giving away the main plot point, but Justin wasn't in really in an abusive relationship (i.e that relationship isn't the real reason behind Justin acting the way he is). Fourthly, Justin being an abused waif isn't the main plot (I'm not entirely sure if I'd call him an abused waif, as the abuse isn't the reason behind his current behavour). I just needed a senario which explains his behaviour (one alternative senario was that Justin got mugged) and it just so happened that Ethan got the brunt of the blame.
I can't make you read this, but I did want to explain the reasoning behind what I've written.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
After reading the last two chapters, I say get fucking rid of Ethan by any means necessary....what the hell has he been doing to our poor Sunshine?
Author's Response: Ethan shall be gotten rid of, don't worry. And you'll just have to wait and see. :)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm intrigued. Looking forward to more. I never liked Ethan.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yikes. I'm truly afraid for Justin in this. Takes a lot to make me afraid when a story. Good job. Looking forward to more. Truly hoping Brian kills Ian for whatever he has done to Jus.
Author's Response: I'm afraid for Justin and I'm the one writing it. But Brian will make sure nothing happens to Justin. And there will be no killing of Ethan, as he hasn't really done anything wrong. (It's a combination of factors, some of which were out of anyone's control.)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hi, Nikki! Maybe 'scuffed' or 'threadbare?' I do enjoy a protective Brian and a hurt/comfort fic when he is taking care of his boy.;) Looking forward to the next part. ~Kim
Author's Response: Threadbare is the word I was looking for. Thank you. Strangely enough, I also enjoy those. :) The next part should hopefully involve Ethan in some description.
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2013 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
ok, I am hooked........obviously Brian isn't going to find out what happened to Justin right away so I wonder how are we going to make this discovery? Lead on........
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 2
I liked it! ^-^ But the first part of the chapter confused me.... Was that Ethan's fantasy or a dream? :S I couldn't tell... T_T Anyway, hope to read you soon! Happy Halloween! Kisses!
Author's Response: Everything that was in italics was a flashback and actually happened. I deliberately didn't add any context to the flashbacks, in the hopes of confusing people, so my plan worked. :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 2
"beefed up gym dick"
LOL! I love it. I'm confused about what exactly is going on, though.
Author's Response: Confusion is the reaction I was going for, so it's not you. It will all become clear in later chapters.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting first chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. (Of course assuming you mean interesting in a good way.)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love this fic and I love how you can say so much in so few words. I hope Brian is getting in plenty of practice punching the beefed up gym dick because Ethan is next. Hopefully. Thanks for updating quickly.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Ethan will definitely get punched or bitch slapped or something, don't worry. Can't let him get away with hurting Justin.
Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 2
Did the first part a flashback of what happen or what?
Author's Response: Everything that's in italics is a flashback.
Reviewer: tnaqaf (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2013 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
when i seen you updated i squeeked
then when i read the chapter i flailed my arms and looked crazy but thats ok because the story is good. Cant wait for the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: I know that feeling well and it makes me so happy you did it for my story.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2013 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 2
I will try to comment, I tried 3 times for another story and although my code was correct, it said it was not.
Interesting story, but was Ethan fucking Justin or viceversa?
You have got a lot packed into two short chapters, looking forward to your next post.
Author's Response:
it started off with Justin fucking Ethan, but in the second flashback, Ethan was doing the fucking. The following chapters aren't going to be any less packed.
Reviewer: ceecee (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2013 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Beefed up gym dick gets the point across. pardon the pun.
Author's Response: I figured he is a dick, so why call him anything else.
Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is definitely starting out as a good story, I can't wait to see where and how you take it.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 2
Thank goodness you straightened me out. You succeeded in intensifying the mystery. I would like more soon!!!!
Author's Response:
In which case I've achieved my aim. It'd be boring if you figured out what was going on right away. I'm not sure if more will make it clearer or confuse you more, but it's coming soon.
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is really amazing. You put so much intensity into so few
words. I hope you continue, as it appears to me to be the
beginning to a wonderful story. Please keep on doing what
you are doing.
Thanks so much for what we have – so far.
David.
PS: We got the image whatever the words you use to describe that guy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Reviews like this are what make me keep writing. I will continue because a) I hate when authors start a story and don't finish it and b) it'll bug me to death (it's been invading my dreams for months) if I don't finish it.) I figured he is a dick, so why not just call him that. :)
Reviewer: Sunshine5794 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 2
Love a protective Brian!!! Cannot wait it read more
Author's Response: Thank you. Protective Brian is my favourite Brian. :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm glad you decided to go with your gut on this chapter; I think this is a unique take on how Justin wound up being emotionally battered. Would have never thought of this angle until you mentioned it to me. Intriging story, and I love a protective Brian. Looking forward to the next part, Nikki.:) ~Kim
Author's Response: It was either go with my gut and have something to post or have nothing at all. I've read a couple of stories where Justin has gotten annoyed with all the romance either during/after the break up, but I haven't read anything with this angle. I wasn't sure how much of a back story to provide, as I didn't want to give everything away. And protective Brian is my favourite Brian. Thanks for your help and support. :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh my....so little Ethan was tired of being the bottom boy and decided to take what he felt Brian should have never had...what a sorry sack of shit.
Author's Response: Not exactly, but regardless of what's actually going on, Ethan's still a sorry sack of shit. All shall become clear.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 2
This may sound a little crazy, but which one is hurting the other. Ethan hurting Justin or Justin hurting Ethan. Poor Justin, he seems a little psycotic(excuse my spelling). Hope Brian can get a straight answer out of him.
Author's Response: It's not crazy. I deliberately didn't include the context around the first flashback to keep people guessing, but Ethan is doing the hurting.
Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2013 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi! Don't leave us hanging.
Author's Response: A new chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2013 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start... I'm really looking forward to seeing where this is headed.... Hope you'll update soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Thank you. A new chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Maybe this could be the prrologue? Deb seems to be stuck on a one track/wrong track mind doesn t she? Hope you write more soon. Just keep going and whatever Ethan is up to will reveal itself. Let it flow.
If it turns too dark, don't be afraid and just write it. It'll make the happier ending all the more light.
Above all, keep going.
Author's Response: The next chapter follows on directly from this. All the chapters will probably end up being fairly short. I know what Ethan's up to, I just haven't figured out what he's done (as in, I know what the end result of his violence is).
I should hopefully have the next chapter up soon. RL got in the way.
It probably won't get too dark, as I don't think I'm capable of writing anything dark (and I also don't want to drag out the whole Ethan thing. I want it to be more focused on Brian helping Justin).
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2013 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is a captivating beginning. Please update soon.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you. I should hopefully update soon, as it's a great distraction from having to do Uni work.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2013 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great attention grabbing start! TAG
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2013 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yikes. Scary start but I'm intrigued. I hope you'll continue as I truly LOVE possessive!Brian stories. Hoping its also protective!Brian.
Looking forward to more.
:)
Author's Response: I will continue this, don't worry. I hate when authors start a story and then never finish it. (I also have to finish it to stop it from invading my dreams.) And yes, there will definitely be protective!Brian.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2013 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yup! going to be good--more soon hopefully.
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2013 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
You've got me totally and completely hooked : ) can't wait to find out what happens next. Hugs ~ Janet
Author's Response: As that was my plan, I'm glad it worked. I should hopefully have the next part up soon.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2013 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
Okay I sincerly hope you plan to add more to this. As bunny plots go this one is totally got my interest. Someone need to tell Deb that Brian isn't always to blame and you have to get Brian over there asap. Please, please, please!!!!
Author's Response: There is more coming, I'm not cruel enough to end it there. And Brian is on his way, don't worry.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2013 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay see this is why Debbie always grated on my fucking nerves, she forever assumes that Brian is the cause of whatever goes wrong in the gangs lives (especially Mikey and Justin) without having all the facts. Whatever Ethan has done to Justin must be pretty terrible for him to be in such a state. Brian needs to get to him ASAP!!!
I can't wait to see where this is going, please update soon~JP
Author's Response: I had come up with other ways for Brian to find out what had happened to Justin, but this one seemed most true to the canon (and is the one that's been bugging me the most) which I why I went with it. And it totally annoys me as well. Like when Brian punched Michael. Instead of finding out why and realising that Michael so deserved it, they just automatically blamed Brian.
I haven't figured out what Ethan's done to Justin yet, but I can assure you it will be pretty terrible.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2013 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very intriguing. I'm anxious to read more of this. Thanks for writing!! *Hugss*
Author's Response: Thank you. That means so much coming from you.
Reviewer: tnaqaf (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2013 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
oh i can see this going in some really good directions!
i like it so far. keep up the good work. cant wait to read more.
(you just made a fan :) )
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
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