Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2013 03:53 PM · On: Epilogue
Congratulations Jon on, finishing another fic, over 100 reviews, and the blue ribbon. I love seeing original work that is a little different get recognized. Fairy tales are definitely your forte.
Cheers
Author's Response: Here's to one over one hundred! LOL Thanks a lot for everything and the compliment.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2013 12:47 PM · On: A Spell is Cast
I get to be your #100! Yea! You know I'm a huge fan! Great job! TAG
Author's Response: THANK YU! Just saw the push to triple digits so I'm happy. I'm a big fan of you too TAG. I'll catch up on Oddest Couple real soon and review there too. Did you read Jorinda and Joringal yet. I found a very nice version here and you'll easily see the elements I used in my story. http://www.authorama.com/grimms-fairy-tales-3.html
Hope yu like.
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2013 08:04 AM · On: Epilogue
Thanks for the story. You truly are amazingly creative,
appear to be highly intelligent, and a little nuts. Mix all
that together, and you get a terrific writer.
Thanks again, it was fun reading.
DavidR
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2013 09:34 AM · On: A Spell is Cast
Good for you on the blue ribbon - well deserved! TAG
Author's Response:
I just saw this and couldn't believe it! I wonder why? And why now?I've been working on it forever. I wish I could have gotten a ribbon on Beauty and the Beast...now THAT took some effort....but no someone waved their wand over this one. Oh well! Thanks a lot for the congrats TAG. I'll take them AND the ribbon!! Love ya!
Just an FYI...Blue ribbons are ONLY awarded now for COMPLETE stories. ~Admin
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2013 05:06 AM · On: Epilogue
I was hoping it was all a dream, however, very creative story, even with the parts I didn't like.
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2013 04:53 AM · On: A Spell is Broken
I am confused. Brian had to turn back into an owl and Justin a human and drink the milk/potion inorder to break the spell. Why didn't that happen?
Author's Response: Brian didn't change until nightfall, so they waited till then. You'll see.
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2013 04:06 AM · On: Suit and Suitor
"The Muffin Man?" I love it, can't stop laughing. It's Shrek all over again. That movie cracks me up.
Yes, you are evil! Please say this is all a dream.
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2013 03:50 AM · On: Woods and Witches
I don't know why, but I am thinking in the end this will be someones dream/nightmare they wake up from after watching too many movies?
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2013 01:54 AM · On: Flight of the Arrow
I feel very uncomfortable reading about Gus kissing Brian and/or Justin. Even though Gus is not Brian's son in the story, it still feels like incest. I have a hard time seprating the two in AU stories.
I was enjoying the story up until you had Gus kis Justin and Brian. Then you write the horse pooping things out for Gus.
I want to get to the end of the story, but if it gets any weirder I might have to stop reading.
Love the part where they could talk one in darkness and one in light! Very Creative.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 11:18 PM · On: References and Bibliography
Thank you for the lovely wrap up. I look forward to your next take on classic tales. Or anything you'd care to post, for that matter.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 06:16 PM · On: References and Bibliography
Thoroughly entertaining (not to mention a little weird), Jon - ha! Hansel & Gretel. OMG, I won't even comment on that - or the rather peculiar foods the two husbands were craving (Rocky Road and radishes?). Once more, I wonder about you just a little.;) But if it weren't for your wild imagination, we wouldn't get these wondrous tales afterward. Thanks for the very enjoyable read! Will be eagerly waiting to see what fairy tale you manipulate next. (And the bibliography was a nice touch, too. Who knows what inspiration you'll get out of the NEXT Star Wars movie? Now if I had only kept all those collectibles!) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2013 01:33 PM · On: References and Bibliography
Great idea to post all your references. I think I got them all (or pretty much all) except ' Jorende and Joringal, also Jorinda and Joringal' - this one I've never experienced. Guess I've got some catchup reading/viewing to do. What a great eclectic combo of sources! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2013 01:28 PM · On: Epilogue
Congrats on completing another epic happily ever after. Great job! Just think of all the ensuing adventures this one could spawn. Thanks for writing. TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2013 01:12 PM · On: A Spell is Broken
Hey - how'd you sneak this chapter in without me noticing? Where have I been? Was I trapped in a magical fairy tale loop? Shit, I hope not - especially seeing as how those tend to turn out. LOL! But, all I can really say about this chapter is "Ewwww! Ewwwwww! Ewwwwww! Stop it! Grosss! Ewwwww!" Hehehe. TAG
Author's Response: That's why I put the warning in. LOL Glad you liked!
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 01:57 AM · On: A Spell is Broken
Thanks for the story, and yes, it could use a little more
explanation. Some of the lines where hilarious. I mean,
talking about an understatement:
…”this odd little caravan advanced toward the gnarled
and ugly tower…”
Odd little caravan? How about weird, or actually I don’t know
how to describe them.
Also what happens to Arrow and what happens to the cow.
Looks like mpreg. has little to do with the story, so far. What
about the buns in the oven?
Well -- enough questions. Thanks again for this terrific
story. I guess it’s back to Ward 9 for you. Don’t worry, us
readers have made arrangement to have them let you out to
write the epilogue.
DavidR
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 12:46 AM · On: A Spell is Broken
Oh my, that was totally diabolical. And no more than Craig deserved.
Author's Response: Thanks Yum! And thsanks for being a faithful reviewer! Hope you like the happy ending, I cooked up...Should be up in a day or so.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 08:58 PM · On: A Spell is Broken
This Jazzy little dwarf says you are a genius!!! What better poetic irony than to make sure that Craig is truly good and fucked for all eternity haha!!!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 08:57 PM · On: A Spell is Broken
Well! That has to be Craig's worse nightmare "come" to life! (snicker). Craig's body and head trying to reunite was priceless. I do wonder about you sometimes, though, Jon - LOL! What an imagination! Thanks for the wild ride - looking forward to the last part. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: This WAS a wild ride wasn't it! You should be wondering about me ALLLL the time, hon! I've told you repeatedly, I'm nuts! Mostly hazelnuts and cashews up there though! They're my favorite! That has to be the worst thing I've ever done to him! Such fun!
My favorite line was about the frigid virgin on her wedding night. A perfect Catch 22. Glad you liked the head keep away game. **Hugs** J
Author's Response: This WAS a wild ride wasn't it! You should be wondering about me ALLLL the time, hon! I've told you repeatedly, I'm nuts! Mostly hazelnuts and cashews up there though! They're my favorite! That has to be the worst thing I've ever done to him! Such fun!
My favorite line was about the frigid virgin on her wedding night. A perfect Catch 22. Glad you liked the head keep away game. **Hugs** J
Are you glad I missed the summer deadline ? *wink*
Author's Response: Oooops
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 10:48 AM · On: Love is Strength
Nice chapter. When you kill someone off, you really kill
someone off. But it is good that Walter is dead, actually more like disintegrated. So now they are on their way home:
one part time owl
one part time swan
one fat cow
Gus and Randal
one “very strange” horse.
Ok, I am ready for whatever happens next, and it could be
anything.
Thanks for the chapter.
DavidR
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2013 12:53 PM · On: Love is Strength
Hi Ho, hi Ho, it's off to read I go . . . *whistling dwarf* I'm so glad Todd managed to direct them to the magical dry cleaners before the left on their quest - so sorry about messing up the leathers like that, it really was inexcusable. I liked how you equated religion with witchcraft - not much difference in my opinion (sorry if that offends anyone, but I AM a recovering Catholic, myself). Hehehe 'sprrooiingggg'' and 'clothes ceased to have any meaning . . .' I liked! TAG
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 10:05 AM · On: Love is Strength
What a shame Justin is turned back into a swan once again. Then good ole Walter shows up again and things get really screwy. Thank goodness Gus was able to take care of him. Now on to the other evil witch. Great to see another chapter of this tale.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 03:58 AM · On: Love is Strength
Hi, Jon! Very entertaining update! The 'cow patty' drop was a nice touch - ha! And I liked the description of Brian's ass-tastic leather outfit.;) Glad love conquered the horrid Walter. It was sad when Justin reverted back to a swan, but I thought it was sweet how he showed Brian where his ring was for safekeeping. I'm sure you reunite the 'lovebirds' again soon, though. Thanks for the update! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 03:14 AM · On: Love is Strength
Walter's history, Gus is a big bad Dom (the Sswitch in me loves this btw) and now our motley crew has everything they need now to make Carl really 'See The Light'
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2013 05:52 PM · On: Love is Strength
Wow Walter, jaded much on the love front. Walter's definition of love; nice. NOT. I'm enjoying this scenario; Night Owl Brian having to deal with two amorous twinks, while he isn't getting any. Priceless. LOL Dwarf Flossee might not be able to review for a little while as she has a seven to ten day spa stint ahead (okay it's a hospital, but I can pretend). Keep the entertainment coming please, if RL allows.
Cheers
Author's Response: Oh my! I hope you are all right! Yes, Walter's been through a lot...I suppose...(and me 2) although I m not hopelessly jaded (yet) Thinking about fairy tale life helps.Hope you get this be4 your hospital stay because I should be finished with this story within seven to ten days and then maybe another chapter of The Red Hoody as well. Hope yur "spa stay" gets you better! Snow Jon wants all his sweet dwarves healthy!
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2013 11:22 AM · On: The Engagement Party
Thanks for the chapter. I usually keep away from M-Preg
stories. Hopefully it will play only a small part of in this story.
Well – if not, you do what you do, and I can do what I do.
Anyway, thanks for the story. It is totally amazing.
Davidr
Author's Response: Don't worry, you'll be fine and the m peg will simply be a part of their happily ever after. Keep on reading, you won't be sorry.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2013 04:22 PM · On: The Engagement Party
Jazzy dwarf I love it....and it's very fitting being that I'm short as hell haha!
The boys are getting closer to their goal now and I can't wait for the nuptials. Now let's see if Todd can help them with their leather troubles ;)
Author's Response: whoops, well that s wasn't a crack at you, I diddn t know about your height, luv yu and the reviews. There s more to come and yes Todd helps out but it will be kind of a gloss over, we need this story to get moving!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 03:06 PM · On: The Engagement Party
When I read chapter 14 this morning it appeared to finish with Todd dancing and the men leaving. I know I was under the influence of drugs from my operation, but please tell me you added dialogue and the picture to this chapter afterwards. I'm pretty sure I wasn't that out of it, however now I'm worried I may have been. I love Muffin Man Todd. I say keep the cum stained leather and let Craig deal with it. LOL
Cheers Dwarf Flossee
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the addition. Don't worry, you're fine, as you can see from the credits, sexy new part was done by Tag after I shouted out for help as I didn't want to do it myself. Glad you liked the Muffin Man.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2013 08:10 AM · On: A Spell is Cast
Thanks for letting me write your sex scene for you! If any readers out there hate it, I'm blaming it all on Jon! TAG
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 03:01 AM · On: The Engagement Party
Hi, Jon! Dwarf dec2 reporting in. I see Tag beat me to the punch with the sex scene. First chance I've had to comment since heading off to work, though. You'll just have to guess now how I would have written it - pffft! I'm sure she'll do a good job for you.
As always, I'm amazed with your ingenuinity and creativity. Loved the idea of the bride and especially Todd as the omnipresent Muffin Man. Looking forward to the rest of your story, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Awww, you woulda done a great job! Thanks for the comments and thanks for just being willing. I know you're busy with your own multiple projects and I felt bad because my issues were stopping me from continuing with my one. So I'm glad that either of you would help me out.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 01:14 AM · On: The Engagement Party
Enjoyed this chapter immensly. Truthfully I read this story for the action, adventure and characters, of which there are many, the sex is mere bonus. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanx Yumster. I wasn't sure. I'm glad to said that because I write those genres so much easier but the stories that have a lot of sex in them seem to be so much more popular and get way more reviews. So I'm a bit confused sometimes.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2013 11:40 PM · On: The Engagement Party
Loved Todd as the stripper Muffin Man! But I felt so sorry for the rejected butcher, baker and candlestick maker. Poor lads! This sure is a horny little village out in the middle of nowhere! Now, as for your gratuitous sex scene. . . Hmmmm? Well, I'll go eat breakfast and see if any inspiration pops up in my Cheerios! Do I get any special props other than the leather codpiece, of course? TAG
Author's Response: Thanks for the answering call. Any props you like... and you know what? ...even the pickles....just as long as they are not damaged and not put in the mouth (they must remain "uneaten" remember) and not done anything so that they are inedible to a cow. This is a bit of a spoiler but yu cut me to the quick here. Sorry.
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 10:50 AM · On: Suit and Suitor
Well – we have gone through portals, and turned humans in birds. I can’t imagine what is next. We will find out soon enough. In this story, anything is possible. I do mean ANYTHING.
Thanks for the chapter.
DavidR
Author's Response: ANYTHING huh? I'll have to keep that in mind! Thanx for reviewing!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 06:48 AM · On: Suit and Suitor
Oh, that was just evil, Jon! I'm proud of you - ha! So much I loved in this chapter, my friend; your wicked imagination never ceases to astound me:
"Oozing machismo like a sweating construction worker." Loved that line!
Although I kind of went "WTF" with this one: Several rounds of mind-blowing sex later:... Uh, excuse me??? Where are the details here???
Now, where was I? Oh, yeah...
This exchange had me laughing out loud:
"Who else are you fucking! The butcher!? That bodybuilt baker!? The one who makes those gingerbread men...just for you!! The candle maker!?"
"Candle maker!? Baker? What are you talking about? Brian, I'm not fucking with anyo..."
"I know!" Brian yelled, still in full queen out. "It's that guy who runs the muffin shop!
"What? Who? The muffin man?"
"The muffin man!" Brian growled in feral jealously
"What? That one on Drury Lane?" asked Justin, a little alarmed.
"The one...on Drury Lane!" repeated Brian reflectively, punching a fist into a palm. "The one who's going to need a lot of candles from that candle maker...for his own funeral!!"
Hysterical!! I'm not sure between you and Flossee's banana twins that I can a lot more of it.:)
I really liked your choice of rings, too, and Brian's heartfelt speech. Now I have to wait and see what your diabolical miind has in store for the next chapter! Really enjoying this - sorry it's taken me a while to catch up. Looking forward eagerly to the next installment. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response:
Yup, that was my one bit of funny in this chapter and was totally unplanned. The muffin man needed inserting and planning a bit but otherwise those parts made this chapter fun.
Loved the construction worker line too.
Sorry for skimping on the porny details but if I'd done a play by play for several rounds this chapter would have pointlessly gone on forever and I AM officially 2 months late on this festival of crazy . I just wanted to convey that they had been sucking and ficking for at least 6 hours.
Well...that wasn't inappropriate at all......Author walks away slowly with hands in his pockets, whistling.....
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2013 01:27 PM · On: Suit and Suitor
Okay, I can deal with the butcher, the baker and the candlestick maker . . . But not the muffin man, too! I KNOW him! I know the muffin man who lives on Drury Lane . . . and he would never . . . at least I don't think he would . . . of course I did see him that one time wearing high-heeled red stilletto pumps and carrying around that large jar of pickles . . . Not that there's anything wrong with that . . . *ahem*
Right! Now what was I doing?. . . Oh yeah, writing a review, I remember now! Sorry, those pickles are just a bit distracting.
Exactly how much time did you spend on designing Brian's sexy leather outfit? Your leather fetish seems to be developing nicely. Every story has an even better leather outfit! I only have one question - is there a special hook or pouch on that belt for the pleasure pickles or should Brian just stick one in the really large codpiece? You know, just in case . . . TAG
P.S. LMFAO
Author's Response: Honey, my leather fetish has developed and been thriving ever since I was 10 years old! Now I just get to write about it! :P
Believe it or not, the butcher, baker, candlestick maker/muffin man thing happened nearly spontaeously and is unfortunately the only funny bit in this chapter, I'm reallly trying to move this along but it's like a freaking mule!
I did spend a bit of time researching codpieces and watching a show taking place in medeival times (no, not Spartacus) to get the clothes right as it was getting a bit mixed up in my head. Some designs of codpieces are actually hook shaped or "elephant nosed" to alow roomfor your pickle and are blatantly sexual but I didn't want that as your imaginations are already there.
Are you sure you're getting enough pickle in your diet?
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2013 08:03 PM · On: Suit and Suitor
Hold on tight boys. There's no place like home, there's no place like home, there's no place like home. Could it be time to throw water on Craig? Come back soon, evil author, lol, as we reviewers should get rewarded for letting you know we are enjoying your fic. Please, pretty please.
Cheers
Author's Response: Ohhhh, I have an especially evil fate in mind for Craig, but it has nothing to do with melting. BWA HA HA!!!! But I'm not saying a word!! Thanx for the no place like home comment that has given me an idea, athough that particular device is safely in its own AU. Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2013 09:18 AM · On: Suit and Suitor
Goldielocks & the Three Bears? Little Red Riding Hood? An almost Happily Ever After! Yes you are evil, but we love it!!!!
Author's Response: Awww thank you!This story has been a lot of fun but I'm really hankering to get back to the Red Hoody. Thanks for following the story, reviews are fun to answer and make me want to type.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2013 09:05 AM · On: Woods and Witches
Hansel & Gretel, Narnia, & Wizard of Oz! That's what I call a three for one.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2013 06:11 AM · On: Suit and Suitor
Yes you are pure evil...I'll have you know I almost burnt my dinner I was so excited about this chapter (well as much as you can burn a pot of mustard greens lol) oh but why are boys being pulled away from each other? Has the queen of Narnia come back to seek revenge? Please hurry back so that we can find out my friend :)
Author's Response: I will do my best. After the Woods and Witches chapter I ran out of steam and hence the long pause. But I was still puttering away at it and I'll let you know I already know how to resolve the cliffy and next chapter should be faster up. However, I'm not saying a word! Aren't I a l'il bastard? Sorry about yur mustard greens.
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2013 12:31 AM · On: Woods and Witches
It was nice to meet some old friends. That was wonderfully creative writing. Best of all, it was enjoyable reading.
Thanks for the Chapter.
DavidR
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2013 03:18 PM · On: Woods and Witches
Thanks again, I love these dedications; you are spoiling us. I thought my question about the Mayor and Arjax might be a bit cryptic. The Mayor: "YAAA-HOOOO!!!! YIPPPEEE! WAAAA-HOOOOO!!! YIPPEEE AI! AI! AI! YAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!!! Arjax: "YAAA-HOOOOOO!!!!! YIPPPEEEE!!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEE-HAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" They both have similar colloquialisms so I thought they may be related. LOL Educational entertainment; that's because I don't know a lot of fairy tales, however, I did know all the ones in this chapter and I loved your idea of sending them all in different directions so they each got their own. I enjoy reviewing for you as we are on such different wavelengths, and it makes for very odd conversations at times, which I find amusing. I can't wait to see what's up next.
Cheers
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2013 08:30 AM · On: Woods and Witches
Lol....please keep it coming, their adventures just keep getting better and more hilarious by minute. I can't wait for more ;)
Btw:thanks for the shoutout my friend
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2013 04:33 AM · On: Woods and Witches
Wow! Oz, Narnia AND Hansel & Grettle all together in one chapter! What are the odds of that happening? Pretty good, actually, considering YOUR imagination! What next - Dr. Who lands in the Tardis and whisks them all away to Cardiff Bay in Wales? Where they're met with a killer bunny who guards the holy grail? I could happen, you know. Loved this fun mash up! TAG
Author's Response: A killer bunny guarding the Holy Grail...hmmmm me likee! As for Dr Who, I m sorry to say I never got to be a fan of that so that whole Tardis thing prob won't happen. What's a Tardis? I AM working my way through One Piece tho (an anime) and tey had an awesome storyline with killer bunnies though. However those partic....plot bunnies....<snicker> are still being thought about.
Hope you liked the chapter. My favorite line...It's been a loooong cold winter! LOL You got a favorite line?
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2013 01:58 AM · On: Two Weeks
Hope they don't turn into zombies! TAG
Author's Response: Ohhhh I forgot the zombies! Shoot...maybe next chapter. That is... Ch. 13. Ch 12 is done like dinner. Enjoy! Thx for reviewing!
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2013 08:57 AM · On: Two Weeks
Well – thanks for the chapter, though it looks like the can got kicked down the road. Trying to figure out what happened is like pulling teeth, though it sure looks like Arrow was sowing his oats. So three like disappeared while one stood his ground. I can only assume that the clothes that Brian wore were off the rack – totally uncivilized – was the reason they had to hang around for the designer custom made outfit.
Thanks again for the chapter.
DavidR
Author's Response: I m not sure I understand you a whole lot here. I'm sorry. Kicked the can? Whata does that mean? And as for Brian's clothes change, well that was pretty clearly explained in the last two chapters. If you read them again, I'm sure you'll figure it out.
Thanx for reviewing and caring!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2013 04:32 AM · On: Two Weeks
*swats You* You little tease lol....please update soon...I'm dying to see what happens next
Author's Response: <dodges the swat and stiks ouut tongue> missed me! Thanx for reviewing! Hope you will next time too!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2013 11:05 PM · On: Two Weeks
Forgot to mention that this story reminded me of the Wizard of Oz a little. Love Arrow! So Brian is getting some now that they've moved out of Ben's place, hehe. Love the magic throughout this story.
Author's Response: I certainly hope it reminded yyou of Wiz of Oz! That was the idea <wink> I'm sure you'll like the next chapter then!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2013 10:57 PM · On: Two Weeks
Oh no! They have been pulled into a portal and without Justin. Brian and Justin belong together. What is it you plan to do? Will Justin and Arrow be able to rescue them? Will they remember anything? Another chapter soon would help immensely.
Author's Response: Justin's safe at the diner this chapter. Can't tell you my plans, that'll spoil everything....However....one chapter, comin' up!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2013 05:48 PM · On: Two Weeks
Thanks for the dedication; it's a pity more people don't review, as going by your read count you have plenty of followers. I would like to thank DavidR for proving my point; men love fart jokes. LOL Brian came every day, twice a day. He also came to sit in the diner! Hilarious (Okay what does that say about my sense of humor?) Is the Mayor related to Arjax???? I hope that's not too much of a riddle question. Thank you for the update; it has made me realize I know very few fairy tales so I can't wait to see which one they are heading into next. Thanks for the educational entertainment.
Cheers
Author's Response: you are correct! Men LOVE fart jokes! But not constant farting for the hell of it, that s just gross! Sorry, the Mayor is not related to Arjax, he's all man just think of a really fat Monopoly man or Mr. Peanut. Oh...and you might wanna read the actual fairy tales. mine are kinda expanded not to mention fu**ked up! I really didn't think of my stories as educational LOL
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 09:15 AM · On: The Huntsman Who Never Killed Anything
Thank you for this story. This is the first one of yours I have
read. I guess they let you out of Ward 10 each day to write.
What frightens me is that I like this so much that I guess I must
be a candidate for Ward 9.
I especially like – I don’t have the words to describe it.
Many of your lines are incredibly funny.
“Fortunately, the island gave a particular noisy fart
and there was an earthquake.”
That was outrageously funny. Have the doctors read your
stories? Now that I am reading this one, I wonder if the others
are of a similar style. If they are I will back track give them a
try. (Lucky me).
DavidR
Author's Response: I'm quite sure you have read at least one or two of mine. Ice King? Little Merman? Cinderfella? Anything ringing a bell? Well if not check my page, and I'm sure you'll see. I'm sure I remember you reviewing somewhere else. Glad you enjoyed my kooky fairy tales. How clever of you to guess I am indeed in an insane asylum! I keep my laptop under my bed and write at night and flush my meds down the toilete but shhhhhh....nobody knows. Besides...there's no cure for....a warped brain! BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 07:44 PM · On: The Huntsman Who Never Killed Anything
Sorry, I'm only just catching up now as the big brother website keeps calling me. They were very,very bad; details pleeeease. Thank goodness you have a clothing fetish as a mask is the only way I could imagine anyone would think Hunter was hot. LOL "There is no inn" so we won't have to look out for bright stars, gifts and frankincense??? Two weeks; let's hope the garland holds out that long. What is the fairy tale we are on, as the only one I know about making clothes is Hans Christian Andersen's, Emperor's New Clothes? Yes, I can imagine Brian walking around naked, however, it wouldn't worry him even when he figured it out. LOL I liked this update as it moved quickly and was very entertaining. Thanks.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thankfully, the suit is very real! But thanks for the idea. I wasn't exactly sure how to incorporate Emperor's New Clothes in the story but I'll try. Thanx for the compliments and the review!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2013 07:15 PM · On: The Huntsman Who Never Killed Anything
Poor Brian - he never wanted to be a flamng queer! I also see your wanton leather fetish found its way into another story! Hehehe! Yea! TAG
Author's Response: yup...more hotness and leather to come!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2013 06:53 PM · On: Pickles, Pleasure...and PORN!!
Oh that evil Walter Schickle and his nepharious use of pickles! Will poor Randall be forever traumatized at the sight of pickles? Poor boy! He'll never know the joy a good pickle can bring. He'll probably have pickle-phobias for life! I hope Gus is good to him and doesn't hold this pickle disability against him. Yea, for the Pickle Chapter! Very, very, pleasurable! TAG
Author's Response: GlD you enjoyed! Hope you enjoyed all the alliteration of which there is more to come only not so much as to be annoying. Glad you enjoyed the Pickle chapter! Don't worry about randal, with some therapy, he'll be fine but he'll most likely take his burgers and hot dogs with a little mustard and hold the relish from now on!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2013 06:12 PM · On: Midsummer Magic
When we wantonly wander through the wicked and wild western woods, weird and wonderful witchery winds through us wherever we walk, waking Midsummer Magic! (Although in my own personal experience, Midsummer Magic, or Madness, usually is triggered by too much white wine and results in great woe, sometimes even shame, the next morning, not wonderful miracles!) TAG
Author's Response: Don't let your heavy hangover spoil your special spells and celebrations of your own Midsummer magic, miracles, and madness! Thx for reviewing!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2013 12:38 PM · On: Flight of the Arrow
What say, we want to wantonly wander the wicked wild western woods! We'll walk and wander about and watch wildlife, wear our best western wear and eat waffles and roast walnuts whever we go. I love an alliterative woods! Wonderful! TAG!
P.S. where do I get a nice little horsie like arrow? He sounds like he be great on camping trips!
Author's Response: Arrow has become a favorite creation. Nice alliteration with the western woods theme. However...you haven't read the Pickle chapter yet! ;)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2013 01:41 AM · On: Love Requited
Loved Michael the Blue Fairy! But, now the real adventure begins - we're off to find pleasure pickles! Yea! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2013 01:16 AM · On: One Curse Broken
Holy orgies, Batman! That was a close escape for our hero and Gus! Now, if it had been Brian doing the rescuing here, the outcome might have been different . . . Hehehe. TAG
Author's Response: Yup! Hope you enjoyed the orgy twist and the chapter! Yur right though! Good thing justin was there too ferry our Prince to safety away from the ickyness of straight sex ! Ewwwwww!
Author's Response: Yup! Hope you enjoyed the orgy twist and the chapter! Yur right though! Good thing justin was there to ferry our Prince to safety away from the ickyness of straight sex ! Ewwwwww!
Author's Response: OK this is an interesting development! OK srry for the repeat but just meant to correct a typo LOL
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2013 01:02 AM · On: The Enchanted Ball
For some reason the Aussie song, 'Waltzing Matilda' was stuck in my head after reading this, what do you think it means? Huh? TAG
Author's Response: I'm not familiar wiht that song. But if it s a compliment...thanks!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2013 11:05 PM · On: The 11 Dancing Princesses....and one Prince
Never trust princes who live underground and claim they just want to take you dancing! They're probably vampires! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2013 09:00 PM · On: The Cow as White as Milk
Shame on you, Brian! Conning young boys out of their cows for a handful of beans! It's unconscionable. I have a mind to report you to the authorities. But, I'm too busy reading this fanfic story right now, so I guess I'll let it slide just this once, but no more tricking little kids out of cows, Mister! Off to find golden slippers! TAG
Author's Response: LOL...You are too funny. I thought itt would be a hoot to have the different tales intersect. If you can't tell, I'm also drawing a lot on the musical Into the Woods
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2013 08:44 PM · On: A Spell is Cast
Very intriguing start - I love the mash up of different fairy tales. I'm glad I saved this story up for when I had time to enjoy it thoroughly! Off to chapter 2. TAG
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2013 05:53 AM · On: The Huntsman Who Never Killed Anything
Brian a flaming queer....LMFAO that is too hilarious a thought for words. I am really enjoying this story....keep it coming :)
Author's Response: yeah, I loved that part. The only way I could think of to make Brian a flamer lol
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2013 05:11 AM · On: The Huntsman Who Never Killed Anything
Wow. Nice storyline for Hunter and Ben to show up in. But 2 weeks??? Thank goodness you're planning on posting again soon.
Author's Response: yup...don't worry, more soon. Thx for reviewing!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 12:38 PM · On: Pickles, Pleasure...and PORN!!
I held my breath until I got to the parental love bit. Thank goodness. I love the way you feature in Mr Shickle and the Pickles, plus the pits; very clever. Clothes on sex WT??? you said porn. LOL My brain isn’t working today so I can’t possibly guess why you ended this chapter as you did, but I can’t wait to find out. Thank you for two chapters.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thanks for all the compliments. As for clothes on sex or partial clothes on, it's act. quite a big fetish, esp if the guys are wearing suits. Anyway, I was quite clear that the important article of clothes was removed. As for the end, it's quite easy to figure out. Think about the time they arrived at the lake. That's the only hint I can give you
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2013 03:36 AM · On: Pickles, Pleasure...and PORN!!
Repunzal, Repunzal, or Randal, let down your hair. Such action, such adventure, such wickedness. My heart was in my throat when Gus and Randal began their fall. Shame Shickle didn't croak. Brian and Justin had a chance to make up for lost time and boy did they take it. They stayed human longer than I expected. I haven't a clue as to where your going for your next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the all important pickle chapter. I wish it was funnier but this hybrid genre story is taking on a life of it's own. Don't worry though, I know what happens next. But I'm not telling ha ha!!! As for Shickle, I'm not sure. In the show he dies but a quick heart attack seemed too good for him here. I'm not sure myself what the future holds so keep reading!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2013 03:04 AM · On: Pickles, Pleasure...and PORN!!
This was fantastic lol....I read the last three chapters back to back and I must say that I haven't laughed so hard in days. It's also very touching how Brian and Gus' relationship has evolved to one of father and son ;)
I can't wait for the next chapter my friend
Author's Response: Glad I was able to make you laugh! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Yes it took a lot of work to make B+G finally not kiss and make up but I managed it at last :P Keep reading!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2013 02:41 AM · On: Pickles, Pleasure...and PORN!!
I'll get you yet, my pretties!
Well, what a wild, wacky, wonderful writing...uh....wasterpiece? that was (sorry, ran out of "w" words!). But before bolting back into the blue, better beware! Owls ominously occupying the ozone - oh, my!
Author's Response: Yes, I wish I'd put in a little dog too! But I didn't. Oh well! Thanks for all the kind w words! And the b- ones too! This chapter was a lot of fun to write!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2013 01:52 AM · On: Midsummer Magic
It was so wonderful that Justin was able to finish the crown. Now on for the pickle!!!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2013 05:50 AM · On: Flight of the Arrow
Finally got a chance to catch up with the latest chapter. This is just adorable, Jon. I love how the two communicate so well, even though they are not in human form. And leave it to Brian to still be the show off alpha 'owl.' Loved the idea of him bringing dinner to his love.;) And I really like the poignant scenes where they have that one, brief moment to speak to each other before they change into their animal form.
I'm still waiting for these pickles, though (tapping feet....). Actually, you can prolong it if you wish; I"m enjoying this a lot. I'm always impressed with your wonderful imagination. Looking forward to the rest. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting Kim, it always means a great deal to me. Glad you are enjoying te elements of the story anf them communicating through the power of the collar.
More chapters are still to come including the ever important pickle chapter altho it didn't quite turn out the way I'd hoped. However, I need another day or so to finish it up though. I see Heart's Desire is up too.n I'll try and get to it soon. Jon
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2013 04:25 AM · On: Flight of the Arrow
I do not tire of saying how much I love this story.
You combine so well the fantasy, humor and romance making its fascinating history to read.
The banner is beautiful! Congratulations!
Excuse me for being slow to comment, I was very involved writing Gardens.
A big hug! Fatima.
Author's Response: Squeeeeee! Kind of a response to the last 3 reviews. Thank you all for the reviews and the support! With all the canon and smut out there, this makes me think I may be doing something right anyway. Thank you for all the comments, they make me type all the more!
This is a many layered story but....I will not rest until I reach pickle!
Reviewer: Alice (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2013 05:43 AM · On: Flight of the Arrow
great story!!! i am really enjoying it. brian and justin only seeing each other for a few seconds its so sad but you make it also kind of romantic. keep up the excellent work and thank you for doing it.
Reviewer: kimi (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2013 11:42 PM · On: Flight of the Arrow
This is great!!! Enjoyed it immensely,..loved the wit and the humor, all i can say is I wANT MORE :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2013 12:30 AM · On: Flight of the Arrow
Glad to see you back. Love Arrow, a wonderful addition to this story. Can't wait til you get to the pickles.
Author's Response: Loved Arrow too. Pickles are coming....hope to not disappoint you!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2013 05:50 PM · On: Flight of the Arrow
Oh, somewhere along the way I missed a chapter and after reading about Michael and Gus (I know, but it still has a slight nauseating edge to it) I was glad I had another chapter to take my mind off it. LOL Brian has every right to be angry with Justin and Gus. So Gus kisses Brian; really; okay I’m having a hard time with this, as we only know this man as a father figure to Gus, so, Ewww. Please let Gus find his pickle man soon, for everyone’s sake. Brian is all class sharing his mice and rats; what a guy or should I say owl. BTW nice banner, I shouldn’t miss updates now. I loved your response to my last review “I'm not quite sure how to respond to this specifically”, I’m glad I can confuse others as well as I confuse myself sometimes, however, with the man comment I was only referring to us having a different sense of humour, thank god, as it would be boring if we were all the same. More please with pickles on top.
Cheers
Author's Response: Things are resolving themselves in their own good time, as for the Gus situation, well, remember this is sort of a mash up of fairy tales and while it was Justin's Dancing Princesses, it was also Gus' Cinderfella which sparked its own chain of events. As for Brian's kiss, well, it was obvious it was NOT a romantic kiss. Anyway, not to worry, pickles are coming as well more magic and fairies to help them along.
Above all, when in doubt, remember my handle ;)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2013 12:50 PM · On: A Spell is Cast
Okay, thanks to you I'm now seeing pickle references everywhere I go! I just saw a clip from Mike Myers' movie 'The Love Guru' - I've watched the movie at least twice before but this is the first time I've ever noticed the 'pickle' scene. I've got pickles on the brain! Help! I'm being haunted by big, thick, dripping pickles everywhere I go. You're either an under-appreciated pickle genius or an evil sorcerer who has bewitched me with endless pickle fantasies. I'll let you know which when I'm done with this pickle . . . TAG
Author's Response: I'm glad you are so happy with the pickles but I should warn you that they won't be coming until Chapter 8 (workin on it now) and it may be anti-climactic. Just to lety you know. Anything you like about the chapters yur reading?
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2013 12:27 PM · On: A Spell is Cast
Love the banner! Kim's a great artist when it comes to photoshop! Nice looking pickles, too! TAG
Author's Response: Yes, it turned out very well. It took 3 tries and a bit of collaboration but I'm very happy with the end product and Kim was very patient with me. Glad you like the pickles! Did you know there are: pickle slice earrings, pickle lip balm, and pickle candy canes.
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2013 08:33 PM · On: Love Requited
I love that your story full of magic and fantasy. I never read anything like this in the fandom.
Well, Brian harshly treating Gus is certainly something I never imagined reading. You surprised me here.
Glad you managed to save Gus Brian time. Was tense.
I got to get nervous with Michael and Gus, thank you for nothing more serious happened.
One who uses pickle for pleasure ... I feel that I will like it very much.
Thanks for keeping Gus in history.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Author's Response: thanks very much for your comments. Yes there were a few tense moments even with Michael but you never can tell with fairies you know ;) I couldn't resist keeping Gus in the story, at least for a little while.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2013 07:41 AM · On: Love Requited
Hi, Jon! Finally managed to get caught up on your story. I have to hand it to you - you never cease to amaze me with your creativity and imagination. I really don't think anyone else on here compares to you with that.;) (I'll email you later about where to send my bribe payment - ha!).
I had to laugh when Brian and Justin got into an argument and Justin pecked him on the ankle in response - soo funny! You had me scared for a minute that you were going to pair up Michael with Gus....uh....eww....? But fortunately that didn't happen. And, of course, now I'm wondering if the 'pickle for pleasure' is going to wind up being compared to the zucchini on the show. I'm thinking all sorts of lascivious thoughts now. Let's just hope it's not a gherkin we're talking about here (sorry, couldn't resist!).
Looking forward to the conclusion! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Nope no pairing with Michael this story. Remember, he s the fairy of unrequited love. As for the chapter regarding the gherkin, i m banging it out, I promise, I'm not shirkin'. My one worry if that it may come as an anti climax and have a smaller part than advertised. If that s the case, I promise to throw in some porn.
I also am looking forward to the conclusion I just wish I could see it.
Thanks for reviewin'
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2013 06:51 AM · On: A Spell is Cast
I saw your plea for a banner maker. LOL! Damn right they better get that pickle in there prominently displayed! *snort, chuckle, guffaw* Now, where did I put my own pickle? Hm . . . TAG
Author's Response:
Yup, and no one s responded yet! Oh well...Patience will win out. Are you enjoying the story?
Response, Part Deux: I'll email Marney, who makes my banners, and see if she's available. As for your story *red-faced embarrassment* I haven't started it yet, I'm afraid. I'm kinda dealing with my own personal obsession right now . . . I'm going on three days without a shower, unable to sleep or eat or do much of anything other than work on my own new story. . . I really want to start on your story, but . . . The voices won't let me . . . (Kidding, really, well, sort of . . . Ack!) I promise to start on your story, which I have no doubt will have me rolling on the floor with laughter, as soon as I'm allowed to come up for air! Now, really. . . Do you know where I left that pickle? TAG
Author's Response: Yup, and no one s responded yet! Oh well...Patience will win out. Are you enjoying the story?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2013 06:28 AM · On: Love Requited
I'm so glad that Gus was able to rescue Brian in time. And okay, Michael was a little creepy. The horse patties smelling like orange blossoms was a nice touch. So Gus is looking for someone who uses pickles for pleasure? <snicker> Okay. But best of all Gus learned to love himself.
Author's Response: yes, all...well most turned out all right. And yeah, the part with Michael got a little...intense....and creepy but that s what I saw so that s what I wrote. Besides, witches, dark forests, abused children, cats wearing boots, ogres, pied piper exterminators/ kidnappers...I could go on....and I probably will.... fairy tales are so often filled with creepiness...so this one's no different! Enjoy!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2013 06:23 AM · On: Love Requited
Next up...repunzle ....I think haha
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 10:15 AM · On: One Curse Broken
I forgot. Thanks for
making voting easier.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:48 AM · On: One Curse Broken
Disappointed; HELL NO.
I love that this will now continue for a little while longer and you
didn’t just do a rushed conclusion. I’m a little disappointed for you though; that
it won’t be a challenge fic. Only a male
could write this (a belch and a fart).
LOL I was surprised with all the
males in this show there weren’t any outtakes on the subject. LOL If
Mel’s prince was a girl wouldn’t she be a princess. Sorry, I’m confused about the body count at
the end. However, understand I’m easily
confused. LOL Since you now have time I assume you are
going to up the ante on the angst but, please remember my hair has only just
started to grow back, so not too much additional torment, as I might just pull
it all out. LOL I can’t wait for more; I hope you continue
with frequency of your updates.
Cheers
Author's Response: I'm not quite sure ho to respond to this specifically. Do I didn't do a rushed conclusion, Ch 6 is just started act. Otherwise...thanks for your support? Don't pull your hair out!
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 06:19 AM · On: One Curse Broken
Sensational!
This story is fantastic!
Please keep Gus in history. He could help the boys in their quest to break the curse.
I'm imagining the trauma that Justin and Gus passed at the end of the text. Rectum sex and an orgy should be too much for her innocent eyes. :)
Loved it!
A big hug!
Fatima.
Author's Response: thanks for your comments, I will attempt to keep Gus in
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 05:54 AM · On: The Enchanted Ball
Chapter amazing!
Love Gus as a prince innocent and passionate.
Please find true love for our little prince.
I'm loving the story.
Hugs!
Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 05:23 AM · On: One Curse Broken
Oh lord, what a ride that was. How will they ever explain it to the King? Where is Brian during all this. Please if you can keep Gus in the story.
Author's Response: Brian was an owl. As for how they are going to explain it to the King...not sure.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 03:52 AM · On: The Enchanted Ball
I can't wait to see what happens when the curse is broken
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 03:49 AM · On: One Curse Broken
The choking hazard warning was very apropos....lol. poor Gus and Justin, they will probably be scared for life rotfl.
Author's Response: thanx... glad you enjoyed
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 09:27 PM · On: The Enchanted Ball
I love this story line. A little disappointed in Carl though, it is perfect for the story. The changes you've added make perfect sense. Gus is indeed a bright young man.
Author's Response: thanx for all your comments a keep em cummin! He he! Glad you are ok with Gus and that his first crush was Justin , just remember in this AU, he is 18. I have a few ideas to keep him in the story (not as a love interest tho) so if this is something you'd like to see...or not see, now s the time to speak up. (That goes for my other reviewers too)
As for Carl, yeah, he took on his own form in this story. All those Old King Cole jokes were too good to pass up. You'll just have to take him with a grain of salt. Cause lord knows he can't! (His blood pressure...LOLOL!!!)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 09:10 PM · On: The 11 Dancing Princesses....and one Prince
This is indeed interesting. I like how you inserted Gus and Mel into the story. I do hope that you allow them the 3 days, so they get their princes. Well, maybe except for Mel. Your dialog is delectable and down right funny. Keep bringing it on.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 05:48 PM · On: The Enchanted Ball
I look forward to waking up Monday; which will be your dead line (US time), and seeing this completed. I hope you can get a banner and a sun symbol for this to be a little more visible. I still have no idea how this fairy tale ends; I just hope it is one gynormous chapter. Pesky storyline; really, I’m loving it. It original, funny and you certain haven’t disappointed after setting such a high standard of expectation from your last challenge fic.
Cheers
Author's Response: alas, my deadline is tonight...and I won t be making it...I ll try for Ch 6 but the story has snowballed into something that won t be finished by tonight, maybe a few weeks. And thank s for the setting a high standard of expectation comment, I had no idea I set anything, high or low. That was a real lift. I feel like a wreal riter!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 12:18 PM · On: The 11 Dancing Princesses....and one Prince
I apologize for my last review, I did know Justin couldn’t see the color when he was in human form, but I thought you were alluding to the fact he wouldn’t see any color for quite some time, as Swans have bad eyesight. My bad; I was reading too much into it and wrote the review poorly. LOL I still don’t know what happens with this fairy tale; however, I do know Justin needs to be quiet. LOL Shh Justin.
Cheers
Author's Response: Np, These things happen, you read too fast, or accidentally skip something and shit happens. Happened to me lots. Don't worry about it and enjoy the coming chapters. Another new one recently. Later!
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 10:29 AM · On: The 11 Dancing Princesses....and one Prince
I'm enjoying this story so much!
I love the fairy tale and you're doing a great job here.
I have not had time to read his series of short stories, but I'll start reading them as soon as I can.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 06:54 AM · On: The Cow as White as Milk
I never thought it was Brian who gave the beans to Jack. This was a very interesting output. Loved it!
Michael, the fairy of unrequited love, could not agree more.
I do not know the next fairy tale about princesses and shoes. It will be a novelty for me.
I remain fascinated by your "Once upon a time ..."
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 06:43 AM · On: A Spell is Cast
I'm really enjoying this story.
I know of no fairytale where lovers change shape at dusk, but I know a fime 80s, Lady Hawke, in which during the day she was a hawk and evening, he was a wolf. They were in human form for a few seconds during processing. The film is gorgeous! Would this was your inspiration?
His story is very interesting and I loved the fairy Emmet.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Author's Response: Yes I was drawing a bit from LadyHawke but as I don't remember a whole lot of it, I'm going on faint memories. I may have to have a quick watch again. Also please see review b4 this for more deets.
Glad you liked Emmett...Hopefully more fairies to come as they progress.
Big Hug. Keep reading and reviewing
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 06:11 AM · On: The 11 Dancing Princesses....and one Prince
Oh this is getting good :) I must admit, I am quickly becoming addicted to this story.
Author's Response: Bwa hahaha! All part of my evil plan!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 12:36 PM · On: The Cow as White as Milk
How fortunate for them that they had a pen and paper handy. Phew. LOL Okay, do you admit that you have a fixation for “Jack and the Beanstalk”? LOL I don’t know this next fairy tale coming up. Oh, I forgot to comment on the previous chapter that I liked how even in swan form Justin’s stomach is how Brian gets his attention. LOL I love the subtle lines like Justin not seeing in color in swan form. These are nice touches.
Cheers
Author's Response: Yeah, you may finda lot of "fortunate" things happen in this AU and the tempo goes faster and then slow intermittently as i m on a time crunch. Sorry and sorry to anyone else too. As for Justin not seeing in color, he was in human form but it was night. In the darkness of night, you cannot see color, just greys and black against blacker backgrounds.
As for the Jack and the Beanstalk fixation: Welllll........mmmmaayyyybe. But thankfully in this one we just pass through. I think I got the brunt of it out of my system with that last story. The next fairy tale coming up is taking a liiiittle longer to flush out...so i'm glad you haven't heard it yet. Hope you like my version, I'm trying to keep on track....sorta....maybe...kinda....
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 12:19 PM · On: A Spell is Cast
OMG I could squeal with delight, as I love Ladyhawke. I also love the way you are writing this; an asexual Craig; what a hoot (no pun intended Brian). I love original ideas (again, an asexual Craig; first time ever I have read this, lol). I’m not going to encourage you to have this finished in time for the challenge as I don’t care if it goes on for years. I will however, encourage you to update quickly pleeeease.
Cheers
Author's Response: I loved Ladyhawke too. I was considering watching it again for ideas as I remember only a few scenes in my dim memory but I ran out of time. I thought an asexual Craig in a sexually free world would make him extra cranky hhehe.. As for going on for years...oy! I hope not I have Red Riding Hoid to muddle through and I've been wanting to do Aladdin in like forever! Wish me luck!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 08:51 AM · On: The Cow as White as Milk
This is the first time that I've had the pleasure of reading a fic with this sort of theme and I must say, that I am very pleasantly surprised....very nice job
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 08:13 AM · On: The Cow as White as Milk
So Mikey joins our legion as the blue fairy. Unrequited love sounds perfect for him. lol. So far we've had Jack and the Beanstalk. Our next tale would appear to be The Twelve Dancing Princess with a twist? Can't wait to read where you take that one.
Author's Response: It becomes rather elaborate but I'm trying to keep it short. And honey... I didn't even see where I took it until it was too late! Keep reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 04:18 AM · On: A Spell is Cast
This looks to be an interesting tale. We know that Justin is a swan, I wonder what Brian will turn into. That's guite a list of things he'll need. It could take all of 104 days to find them, but at least he has Emmett to help. Off to find Jack and sell him some beans for a bean stalk is next I assume.
Author's Response: You're getting the idea. The bird Brian will be is revealed in the next chapter but thereare clues in the first one and yu can figure it out. I'll post Ch 2 soon
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 03:43 AM · On: A Spell is Cast
I know you can do it! I have faith. Bring on the pickles! TAG
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