Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2019 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
cute
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
I loved it! :D It was so cute! ^-^ I love how you pictured the domesticity and gave us a glimpse of how their lives turned out to be... and of course, Gus is so sweet! Hope to read you soon in another story! Kisses!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I enjoy writing B & J that way. You can see them having fun and/or adventures
in many of the other Challenge stories.
I do have another story in process, which in many ways is similar to this one. Everything is different, but
once again, they are simply enjoying each other.
DavidR
Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. It was fun writing the story.
DavidR
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2013 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
I loved this story.
So sweet. Love stories with Gus. View Brian being the great dad that is, fills my heart with joy.
And Justin has yet to make the story even better.
Loved it!
Hugs!
Fatima.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment.
Combine Brian, Justin, Gus, and Ghost, with a beautiful summer day, and that is kind of
story I would and did write. I am happy you enjoyed the story, and I had lots of fun writing it.
DavidR
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2013 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
This was great. Loved how you put yourself in the story a couple of times. Loved the ending. This was definitely a summer story. Great fic.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I do have another story, though only in process, which ends in a similar way.
I like the technique of talking directly to the readers. As a writer, I am also a reader of my story.
I am glad you enjoyed the story – me too.
DavieR
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
I read this last night during lights out desperately trying not to wake up my comrades with my laughter thus incurring the wrath of my Sgt in charge. This was such a fun read and I loved all the playful banter between our boys. I especially loved the ending and it's personal touch. Very nicely done my friend :)
Author's Response: It was lots of fun to write. Putting the author (me) into the story and talking directly to the readers
just made everything more fun for me. I had that ending planned long before I finished the story.
It was suppose to be more realistic, but all the lines and borders just disappeared upon uploading.
Oh well.
Thanks for the comment.
DavidR
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very sweet
Author's Response: Thanks,
It was fun writing it.
DavidR
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love reading about a happy, thriving Brian and Justin. And when you add in Gus, well, you have the holy trinity of QAF!
Very delightful and charming read.
All the best,
Laura
Author's Response: Yes – think happy thought; bring together Brian, Justin, Gus; and this is the kind of story
that gets created. I am glad you enjoyed it.
DavidR
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
nice story - love that you have included the important nuances that make the boys who they are - and gave us just enough sweetness to satisfy our 'love' addiction -
very cute
thanks
Charle
Author's Response: I am happy that you do see the underlying feelings of this fic. Besides the first
time Brian held Gus, but also when Brian was on the floor playing with the train set with Gus,
and when Debbie and Brian smoked pot, were very revealing to me. I find that aspect
of Brian meaningful to me. That is how I see him. I wish I could have seen more of it. That is
the Brian I write.
DavidR
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Michael and Debbie, a comedy duo, I wish you had written them in action. LOL I like this as Brian is just so comfortable and at home with his family; even the four legged member. Good luck with the challenge.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting.
Actually I do have another fic. sitting on my PC (for now) that once again
has Justin telling jokes. I like his energy and I do see Justin as a character that
could be silly and funny. Justin entertaining Brian is a 'hoot'.
DavidR
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
What a wonderful story. That Justin is so sneaky. First he cons Brian into going to the country club, where he gets knocked in the head with a volleyball, then informs him that they were going to be guest at Debs. Personally I think Brian tells a better joke. At least Gus showed up and Ghost had someone to play with. The ending was perfect, but the best part was the mention of DavidR's Burgers & Shakes!!! You did manage to put yourself into this story. <smile>
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments.
I always felt that in QAF lacked the banter between Brian and Justin. There is another author who uses a prop (fireplace)
who does this beautifully. I really enjoyed that technique and though that if I were to write something, I would like to do that.
Actually I used me (DavidR) three times in the story. That was out and out fun.
DavidR
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
Sweet story, David! I always love it when the boys are happy and together, and Gus is an added plus in any story. And I like how Brian knew that Justin was up to something even without him saying a word - shows how well our boys know each other.;)
Thanks for participating in the challenge! ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you for helping to make the challenges a reality.
As for me, it was fun writing.
DavidR
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