Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For P-Town
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2020 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 4

good one

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2016 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loved this no angst, happy little story:-)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2014 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 4

I'm so sorry, but I don't think I wrote you a review on this story when the challenge was over. Please accept my humble apologies and my thanks for writing such a fun summertime tale. I've never been to P-Town myself, but it sounds wonderful. I'll have to put it on my own bucket list for the future. Loved the character of Shampagne, too, BTW! TAG

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2014 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 4

So adorable.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2013 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed this.  I didn't get a chance to read these when they were published but I had some time now.  I love the romantic Brian and the Brian that is politicaly active- wow.  Nice to see it play it forward to.

 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2013 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 4

Funny stuff here. Loved Brian telling Justin to stray away from old tire clothing and his comparing tiny Michael and Justin to small dogs.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2013 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

Okay, this chapter made me cry and I wasn't in the mood to do that but the ending was wonderful.  This is so different from because the gang are IC and its not the same story of Brian and Justin falling in love story.  There's nothing wrong with that but everyone does it and I find it boring.  Some of the other writers write like bad romance novelists and the story are so long that I have to scroll through them to get to the real action.  I really loved this and I love your writing.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2013 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

Never been whale watching but I have to go now.  This is really a great story.  I thought I would get bored with the whale watching seen but it was so exciting.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2013 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

This reminds me of my family when we go out to dinner.  I really am enjoying this.  It's a nice summer read.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2013 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just love that its a story about the gang.

Reviewer: Amanda (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2013 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great ending to a great story!! 

Thanks

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2013 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 4

stupendous story. Sooo different, in a very good way, from a lot of stuff out there. Hope there is more of this sort of tale from you someday. But regardless, at least we have this.

Reviewer: Amanda (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2013 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great chapter!! Off to read chapter 2. Thanks

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

That’s a very clever reason to enter the challenge; to "spotlight" your fics, as I agree if you aren’t constantly writing then they might not attract attention. I think I read somewhere you are one of the authors here that would like to be published one day; well I wish you the best of luck with this goal. Your ideas are unique and your writing is spot on, never over explaining or getting bogged down in unnecessary detail and very entertaining from the get go. Congratulations on the blue ribbon; it’s nice to see your work recognised.

Cheers

Reviewer: reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2013 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 4

Your stories are addicting, this is my 3rd time reading this and I've read your other ones to.  They get you involved and I feel what they feel.  so good.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2013 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 4

Love this story. Love that the gang's all here. Hope we hear more from you.

Reviewer: tonton (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2013 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 4

VERY NICE AND SWEET AND GOOD LUCK.  NICE TO READ ABOUT THE GROUP TOGETHER.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

Very sweet ending.

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 3

Love this story.

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm using someone's kindle and its weird. You've got the best story but not the most comments. You may not win but yours is the best. I keep getting knocked of. This is my 2nd try.

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

Sorry Brian but it was romantic. This a really nice sweet story.  I wish there was more.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 3

I like how this starts out.  It sounds like they're having sex.  This makes me want to go whale watching.  That action was very good writing.

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

So funny with B and J in the store.  The scene of the friends reminds me of my friends.  We can never agree on anything.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds like a fun trip for the boys.

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

Nice:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

Nice:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

Love it:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love it:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 4

Nice:)



Author's Response:

It was very kind of you to read and please a pleasant comment.  I really appreciate it very much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hello, Laura!

I liked both of their history.

You managed to put emotion, humor and romance, all in the right measure.

The ending was amazing. Brian Justin kissing because it is only necessary ... WOW! Issso is much more romantic. It's magical!

Great story!

A big hug!

Fatima.

PS: Sorry about the mess I made to answer your comment.




Author's Response:

Fatima,

Thank you for your kind words.  Congratulaltions on your story, it was well received.  I think you and Kim are the top contenders to win the challenge.  (I'm just happy to be read and commented on.)

All the very best,

Laura 

Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

Brian brushed his lips over Justin’s.  “Do not think of this as romantic, it’s just… necessary…” He licked Justin’s lips and then captured the blond’s lips with his own. ....  so classic Kinney..he so gives a shit :)

I really enjoyed reading this, it was well written  and hugely entertaining ..looking forward to more fics from you, Kimi

 

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 4

I loved this story!!! *0* So romantic!!! >_< I loved the part at the restaurant with the boy that reminded Brian of himself... and Brian's speech.... and the "ridiculously romantic" ending! (which for me is "unbelievably romantic" :D) Anyway, I love this! Hope to read you soon in another story! (maybe a sequel of some sort? :D) Kisses!



Author's Response:

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!  I appreciate your kindness very much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: cck (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 4

speech was great.never thought I would read affix with a so I am message.it worked.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

This was great. Loved the 'pay it forward'. I do that all the time. Glad everyone had fun in P-Town. Great fic.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  And thanks for taking the time to read and comment.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed this story a lot :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

I loved this chapter! Seeing Brian paying it forward, the whole whale watching scene, and the "non romantic" romantic beach scene. Very well done, made me wish I was there.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and writing.  Thanks for the kind words.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jay123 (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 4

the best. so many different kinds of stories!

Author's Response:

Jay,

Thanks so much for your kind words.  I like variety, my basic modus operandi is to see how I can change the settings and plot dynamics, but still keep it all IC.  It's a challenge.

Thanks for hanging in there with me and commenting all the way along.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 4

Nice!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I appreciate you reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: petloversmd (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 4

So 'necessary' and romantic.  The best ending!  Loved this story so much!

Reviewer: petloversmd (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

I don't remember if I commented on this chpater.  But, I loved it and loved the whale watching, it reminded me of when I went.  Great chapter

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMG!!! Wow, you did an amazing job with this Laura. I really enjoyed the whole story alot.

That speech Brian did almost had me in tears at his love for Justin. He bared his soul to the public, the world and that kiss....thud!

I really loved '“Well, that’s what I tell people, but actually the seed of the foundation began to develop three years before that, when my partner… he’s that beautiful blond standing against the wall… who is trying to hide behind the man in the purple and pink striped shirt…” The gang was standing to the right of the stage, against the wall, and as Brian stated, Justin was trying to hide behind Emmett.' I could just imagine Justin hiding behind Emmylou lol,. poor sunshine.

An amazing job my friend, and the end part where they shared that kiss on the beach 'because it was necessary… not just ridiculously romantic…was really bloody romantic haha. I loved it alot.

I hope to read more stories from you again my friend ~ Yvonne xx

Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

Excellent. This isn't fan fiction, it's real writing.



Author's Response:

Wow, that is quite a compliment... it definitely tops the list for me.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 4

Each chapter was better than the previous. This was my favorite. That speech Brian gave had me silently applauding and the ending was ridiculously romantic. Thank you for sharing this story and I look forward to more.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 4

I wanna go to P-Town!

Great fic.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 3

The whale excursion was beautiful, but the pay it forward moment had me near tears.

Author's Response:

Oh, thanks for sharing that with me.  I'm touched that you were touched. (LOL - sorry if that sounds hokey.)  I really appreciate the fact that you stopped in to read and comment.  It was very kind of you.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 2

I can't believe Emmett could have meant to be bitchy to Justin. But I can see Michael being bored.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was exceptional. I love your detailed descriptions. I can almost picture the place and it sounds like a wonderful place.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 4

What can I say.  You've taken us on a wonderful trip to P-Town and made me wish I could go.  Brian certainly has come a long way, and that speech of his - well I really wish that someone would make that sort of speech and not change a word.  All in all this story was necessary and just a little slightly romantic.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 4

Once again you have surprised me with where you have taken
this fic.  I love the way Brian conducted
himself and his dialogue.  Emmett and
Justin; I enjoy people writing a closeness in their relationship.  Bravo, that you didn’t need the men to be
married and live happily ever after with 2.5 children.  I really relished the ending; as not too many
authors are bringing in new ways for Brian and Justin to express
themselves.  Brilliant.  Good luck with the challenge; you have an exceptionally
entertaining fic here.



Cheers 



Author's Response:

I apologize for my delayed response to your kind comment.  Work <head thud>... it's one of my busiest times of year.

Thanks for mentioning the areas that you enjoyed, the feedback is very appreciated.  I entered the challenge so that I could get my stories some "spotlight" time.  I hoped that this one and others would be read and commented on.  Getting supportive feedback, getting encouragement helps me try new projects.  So, an incredible big hug to you for kindness and support.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Randy4me (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 4

You finished it, Congratulations !  The story did grow on me and it was fun just now reading it all together.  Liked the strong social political statement in this chapter blended in seamlessly with all the fun and games. Basically I really admire the range of what you can write.  

Loved the ending, remember I told you that I was disapointed they wouldn't be going to the beach ...?  I'm glad they did go and that it was ridiculously er ... necessary.  ;-) 

 

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love Truro Winery!  My favorite wine from them is their Diamond White.  It's in a blue bottle shaped like a lighthouse.  They get their lighthouse bottles made in Itally especially for their winery and it's been patented as well. 

Now that I'm done gushing about the wine... Another great chapter!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

nice ending - very satisfying and heartwarming!

love the snarky 'no romance' interpretations - one day Brian will just be able to call it as it is - but in the meantime - so glad that Justin understands the Kinney manual - cover to cover!

good job,

Charle



Author's Response:

Charle,

Thank you for the kind words of support.  I'm a fan of your work, too.  I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, it means a lot to me.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed reading this, and wouldn't mind seeing a sequel or epilouge at some point

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed reading this, and wouldn't mind seeing a sequel or epilouge at some point

Author's Response:

You are so kind, what a lovely thing to say.  Thanks for reading and leaving such supportive comments, I really appreciate every one.

All the best, my friend,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 4

What a beautiful story, Laura!  Full of love, imagery, and friendship.  And I think it shows how far Brian has come throughout the years.  I'm so glad to see you writing again. I hope you will continue to do so as time permits. Thank you for participating in the challenge, and for sharing such a wonderful piece of fiction with us!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2013 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is a good start. Never been to P-town so the background is interesting.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the first 3 chapters, the last one has been posted.  If you ever get a chance, go to P-Town, I'm sure you'll love it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

The whale watching stuff was true to life and just as I remember it. I love seeing the tough exterior of Brian fade away to his truly compassionate, loving, caring side. Another great chapter!

Author's Response:

I've heard from so many fellow whale watchers - let's unite!  It was an awesome experience and it's wonderful to hear other stories.  I'm glad you liked a changing Brian, I like to believe that's what happened. Thanks so much for the kind words.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 2

Even better chapter. I felt like I was right there with the whole gang. I always love how Brian gets jelous and tries deperately not to show it whenever someone shows Justin a little attention. I also like the reality of having a group of friends trying to come up with a plan for the weekend without little strifes accouring, very true to life.  

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great opening chapter. I would love to stay where Brian and Justin are staying the next time I go to P-town. Brian always gets the "strays" stalking him where ever he goes, that's funny. Looking forward to reading on.

Author's Response:

Hi There,

Brian does attract all kind of people, doesn't he.  The inn was actually a combination of a couple of B&Bs that I've stayed at, it doens't exist.  But, there is one with the same name and from the website, it looks very nice.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 3


I’m an Aussie (Australian).  Mardi Gras in Sydney is a lot different from the one you see on QAF.  Firstly it’s held after dark and there is no way you could sit on steps and still see what’s going on.  There are other differences, but this is a review so I should get on with it.


I love how you just seem to be bringing back so many memories for me in this fic and whale watching was an enjoyable one, even though I spent some time in the cabin trying not to throw up.  Ah, Such fun.  LOL  I know they say look at the horizon, however, that didn’t work for me.  We saw Southern Right whales and a colony of Sea Lions, but the dolphins really made my day.  Brian calling Justin his poodle; hilarious.  “Got it.” this is a great piece of writing; as that is what friends would do; continually repeat the phrase.  I have to confess I also found the sandwich story bringing back memories. but not from Brian’s POV.  I love that Brian knows Justin will keep his secret, as I’ve always felt they had a trusting bond.    Great update, however, I need more than one more chapter of this fic.  Please, pretty, pretty please.


Cheers




Author's Response:

I know you probably hear this a lot, but I so want to go to Australia.  It looks so beautiful and unique.  We plan to go someday.  <fingers crossed>

I've been sea sick myself and the patch and wrist band worked, but when I didn't have anything, the horizon sort of helped... sort of... but being up on deck was the best thing.  I want to go whale watching again, somewhere different to see different types of whales and such.  The sandwich story... a lot of people have them, in some form or another.  I really believe in karma and passing it forward. 

I'm working on the last chapter now.  It will have to be abbreviated since the deadline is in 20 hours.  I kind of like a kinder, gentler, more mellow Brian.  Angst is great, don't get me wrong.  LOL.

Thank you X a million for reading my story and supporting me with kind comments.  I sincerely appreciate it.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hi darling,

I loved this chapter alot. Most of it really made me smile. I love how lovely Brian is being. I laughed really hard at '“Hey lady!”  Brian spoke directly to Ben and deliberately addressed the professor incorrectly.  “Do you mind getting your shih tzu away from my poodle?  Don’t you see that there’s a dog fight building here?” lol.

Wonderful update, Laura ~ Yvonne xx



Author's Response:

Sweetie,

Seeing your name made my day.  I'm glad the story made you laugh and that the line worked. You never know if something will work or not. Thanks for letting me know that it did work. 

I can't thank you enough for staying with the story and commenting.  You are wonderful person and I really appreciate you!

All the best,

Laura

 

Reviewer: petloversmd (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is excellent.  I felt like I was there on board the boat.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you, that's a writer's dream, to put the reader in the moment.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2013 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 3

Whale watching sounded exciting, even Brian enjoyed himself.

Brian has always been a good soul yet hated the recognition. Would love to know the background story of his first time in P-town. How exactly did Pop help him out?

Loved this update.



Author's Response:

Hi Sophie's mom,

I agree with you, Brian is a good soul that doesn't like the public's eye.  The quickie background on Brian's first time in P=Town was that he was very poor, and stayed at a run down motel with other guys.  He was hungry and went to the restaurant to buy a sandwich and they gave it to him, just like it happened in the story with the teenager.  I think Brian has 'paid it forward' so often in the show, but he rarely was apprecaited for it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wonderful story I really enjoyed thank you so much

Author's Response:

A big hug to you with thanks for reading and commenting.  I appreciate the kind words!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2013 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

Fun and funny chapter.
Wine with ice in it lol! Only Michael.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2013 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

Seems like everyone but Brian are planning to have some fun while he has to work before he can partake.
PCDH, clever.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 3

           Thanks for the chapter. It was fun reading.  When I was in


P-Town, I too went whale watching and it was wonderful.  There


is just something very special experiencing in person, out


on the ocean, a whale.  It is one of those events that stay with you. 


Your description of it was done beautifully.  I relived my


experience. 


           Nice job in having Brian leave all that money, as he was


able to pay back, and in his way celebrate who is now.  Very


touching, done very well.


           When I was there, we rented bikes.  I was wondering if they


still do that.  And yes, I went to Google, and the A-House is still


there.  My friends and I, for some reason, called it ‘The


Alanteeek’, with the emphasis on ‘teeek’.


            Thanks again and I think the number of people who read


your story is much more important than the number who leave


comments.


            DavidR



Author's Response:

Hi David,

You're right, it's the number of people who read, not the number who leave comments... but the comments really help the anxiety... LOL!

I Googled the A-house, too.  It does look like it's there.  The first time I went was in April, and we took in shows, went to the museum in the tower, and saw artifacts that were dug up when they were fixing the water pipes.  We found pottery shards and the like.  Fascinating.  The second time we went was during the summer and we went whale watching and shopping, etc.  Love the area, and so looking to go back.  I love the cool summer weather, I wish we had it here in my area, I'm in Annapolis Maryland, near D.C.

Anyway, sorry, hope that personal history wasn't TMI.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, as a writer, you know how appreciated it is - and I do, very much.

All the best,

Laura 

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 3

really nice chapter - I am such a sucker for the secrets that these two share - it makes these rare glimpses into the tender side of Brian Fucking Kinney so much more precious

as for the read/review ration conundrum...yeah, its hard to stay motivated sometimes - but our hearts keep us writing - chin up - those of us who enjoyed it enough to let you know hopefully will make up for the numbers

great read!

Charle



Author's Response:

Charle,

Thanks for your supportive words.  It does boogle the mind and tampers with the self-esteem when people read but don't comment.  Writing in a vacuum is very difficult.  I know you understand, from writing stories yourself.  That's why i'm grateful to you for reading and commenting, so very much!

I love Brian's secret side.  LOL.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 3

It's great to see a kinder side of Brian, so giving and affectionate...

PS I know all about sea sickness, and focusing on the horizon, that brings back memories...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I now live in Annapolis, Maryland which is a sailing town.  I moved here to sail and that lasted for about 5 years.  Ten years later, no sailing.  But, in that 5 years, I had some sea sickness experiences and one was real rough.  I'll never forget it, and the horizon helped, somewhat.  LOL.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I truly appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hello, Laura!

This chapter was so wonderful! the mixture of emotions was so intense!

Very exciting sighting of the whales, it was like there, going through this experience.

Then it was very touching to have a glimpse of the past Brian and see their emotions so exposed. And sharing it all with Justin. It was very touching and strong. Unforgettable!

A huge hug!

Fatima



Author's Response:

Fatima,

You're so kind and and thanks so much for reading and commenting.

I'm behind in my reading but I hope to catch up to your story after I finish writing mine.  Probably Sunday night.  I enjoy it very much.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great story, Laura!  And OMG, I laughed out loud at these lines - hysterical!

 

“Do you mind getting your shih tzu away from my poodle?  Don’t you see that there’s a dog fight building here?”

 

Loved it! And the part with Brian leaving the money was so IC for him, but very sweet at the same time.  It's so great to see you writing again.  Looking forward to the rest.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim,

I'm so glad you enjoyed that moment, I thought about cutting it and then said, 'why not.'  

I really appreciate you hanging in there with this story, especially since you're helping others and writing your own entry.  The comments are so very appreciated!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

Fantastic chapter my friend.....you have captured Brian's true character very well here. I can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response:

So sorry, my response is late - work, ugh!

You are so kind!  Thanks for the kind words and support, I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story.  One more chapter to go.

Thanks for hanging in there with this story, and I SINCERELY appreciate the comments.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Sorry about my delayed response, work is yanking my chain.

You're so kind.  Thanks for hanging in there with the story and commenting.  It really is appreciated, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2013 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 3

great chapter :)



Author's Response:

Snow,

Thanks for dropping to read and comment.  I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Just one more to go.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2013 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love the comparision of Mikey and Justin to dogs.  Never would have thought of that yet it is so apt.  The visit with whales was awesome!!!  And now I know how to tell the difference between starboard and port.  Thank you!  Then you saved the best for last.  Brian is indeed a decent man, who pays it forward.  <happy sigh>



Author's Response:

Sorry about responding so late, work is a bother.

So glad you enjoyed the dog reference and the whales.  The whale watching was a challenge.  I agree with you, I think Brian is a decent man, but secretive about it. 

Many hugs of thanks for sticking with this story, I sincerely appreciate it. 

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2013 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ben was probably the only one who never made any anti lesbian comments.

Love this whole chapter. But especially the last paragraph.



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the story.  Two more chapters to go!  I hope you'll come back to read and comment.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely mean that.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2013 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

     That sign, welcome to Provence Town.


     Then of course the Roller Girls, or whatever they are called


            these days.


     Next, maybe twice, but there is Commerce Street.


     Then they had dinner at the Lobster Pot. 


     There was the ocean for Whale Watching.  The Post Card


          has some other kind of fish.  Being a city boy, I have


          no idea what kind of fish it is, nor am I sure that is a


          fish. Mrs. Paul’s frozen fillet is what I call fish.


 


One more thing:


I like the story, and yes I have been to P-town several times.  In


my day, which hasn’t been recent as now I go to Ft. Lala.


during the winter, the dance club could have been


the Atlantic.  But rumor has it that it is no longer there.  But


maybe?


 


Anyway, thanks for the story.  So far it has been nice reliving


the past.  You a fine job in writing description.


DavidR


 



Author's Response:

Hi David,

Thanks so very much for reading and commenting.  You got all the pictures correctly!  The big fish jumping out of the water is actually a humpback whale.  Whale watching will be written about in my next chapter.  I hope you'll come back to read and comment!

I really don't know if the A-House is still around.  The last time I was there, which was about 5 years ago, it was still there.  We're hoping to go back next year, I'll definitely go around to see if it's still there.  I hope the place hasn't changed that much, I just love the quaintness.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2013 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

Loving this fic. It is so festive and positive.



Author's Response:

Oh, my gosh, you're so kind!  Thanks so much for the lovely words and I'm so glad that you are enjoying the fic. 

I really can't thank you enough for reading and commenting, and I mean that sincerely.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: irisW (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2013 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great story. Hope there's more soon.

 

And I like ice in my wine.



Author's Response:

Iris-

I have friends who have to have ice in their wine, no matter the color or type.  I thought it was a cute trait for Michael. 

I can't thank you enough for reading and commenting, it means the world to me.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: petloversmd (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2013 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 2

The story is so good and funny.

 



Author's Response:

Honey,

You made it in to read and comment!  Big hug of thanks!  I really appreciate that you are supporting me.

XOXO,

Laura

Reviewer: petloversmd (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2013 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is funny, easy to read, and has a believable plot line.  Good luck with the contest.



Author's Response:

Sweetie,

Thanks for reading and commenting.  I really appreciate that you came into the site to read and support me.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2013 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

P-tOWN IS A FUN PLACE TO VISIT WHETHER YOU ARE GAY OR NOT. iT'S FUN TO SEE ALL THE PEOPLE THERE DRESSED UP IN CRAZY GETUPS. tHE GUYS WILL HAVE A FABULOUS TIME SEEING ALL AND DOING ALL. LOVE THIS STORY.

Author's Response:

Linda,

You are absolutely correct, P-Town is warm and welcoming to anyone, no matter who they love!  It sounds like you've been?  The first time I went, it was Spring, and they were having a drag queen contest and these girls were FABULOUS!  So much fun!  I think you're right, the guys are going to have a great time.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.  You have no idea how much I appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 2

I am really enjoying reading this I had missed he first chapter I was able to catch up. Michael! WTF ice in wine!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you came in to read - and thanks so much for commenting.  I actually know a couple that always have ice in their wine - all wine, all the time.  He and she are a little quirky and the ice thing is an odd thing to watch.  Well, to each their own, but I thought it would be an interesting trait for Michael.  LOL.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 2

The ratio of comments to people reading is so low for the writers - so, all comments are valued and welcomed.  I agree; read counts are good and reviews only take a minute to write.  Come on readers, join the fun. 

Poor Emmett he doesn’t seem to be able to say the right thing.  LOL  I love the men on roller skates as it reminded me of one of the Sydney Mardi Gras’ we attended.  A man dressed up, or should I say dressed down, was heading towards the city on inline skates (rollerblades); we were in a car.  We had to stop several times for traffic and he continually caught up with us.  Long story short; at Mardi Gras that evening he was there; he must have skated all the way into the city.  What a hoot.  OMG I can’t believe I am saying this, but I can so sympathise with Michael; as I got sea sick while whale watching and I don’t drink alcohol.  Soppy note; I love that Justin got the kiss he wanted, in the centre of town in broad daylight.  I love your fics.  Good luck with the challenge.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Mardi Gras in Sydney - are you in Australia or from there?  I've not been to Mardi Gras in New Orleans, but I've been to N.O., I have a brother and his family there.  Very colorful and fun.  The sea sickness thing occurred as I was writing - what if Justin had planned this thing, but someone suffered from seasickness - eek!  Your skater story had me smiling, I can imagine it happening.  :)

I appreciate that you noticed my note and are supporting it.  Really, why is it so hard?  I always comment if I read, it's so little to do for so much in return. 

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I really can't thank you enough.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

Omg....Brian was hilarious here, I could just imagine him teasing Emmett in such a way. It seems like our little gang is in store for quite an adventure

Author's Response:

Thanks for hanging in there with this story.  I think the boys will have a memorable weekend.  Brian will be responsible for some of them.  ;)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 2

See that...that's what I am talking about there, you placed alot of humour in it and I loved it alot.

Now get that perfect little ass of yours into gear and update the next chapter asap, Yvonne needs more lol.

Great chapter hon, I loved it :)

Hugs From Ireland - Yvonne xx



Author's Response:

Yvonne,

A heartfelt hug to you for sticking with me and a sloppy kiss on the check for reading and commenting on this story.  And thanks for the "lttle ass,"  I'll take the compliment.  Though, I wish it were true; it's been awhile since it's been little.  LOL!

All my very best to you, dear lady.

Laura

PS: I love the "Hugs From Ireland" sign-off!  So charming!

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 2

My family and I go to P-town every summer for a week.  I'm having a blast reading this!



Author's Response:

How wonderful!  I'm envious!  We haven't been in about 4 years and are thinking about going next year, but a little off season so we don't have to fight the crowds.  You'll notice that I've taken some poetic license with the place, but I hope you'll understand.  ;) 

I'm so glad that you're enjoying the fic and I really, really appreciate that you took the time to comment.  Sincerely, thanks so much!

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh, my God! I cried laughing! I'm laughing even now!
My family must think now it's official: I'm crazy!
At least, so it seems that tells my husband's face at that moment.
This story is very good!
Poor Brian, I thought he would have an anaphylactic shock within the clothing store, and also try to take your Sunshine, right in front. I loved the "He's not yours!" and "Selfish!" It was hilarious!
I love both Brian possessive and romantic ...
You have all the elements there. Very good!
Love this story and I look forward to more.
A big hug! Fatima.



Author's Response:

Fatima,

You're comments are so wonderrful and mean so much to me!  I can't thank you enough for taking the time, I truly appreciate it! 

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 2

This chapter was hilarious. Love this story.

Author's Response:

Lorie,

So glad you enjoyed it!  I really appreciat that you let me know, your comments mean a lot to me.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

It sounds like they have a jam packed weekend, they should be able to get into a little trouble along the way...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi Kathleen,

Yeah, their have a lot planned, or at least Justin does.  LOL. 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, it means the world to me.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Kimi (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2013 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

This was so adorable!!Especially possessive Brian :)...Enjoyed the bantering among the gang....



Author's Response:

Kimi,

So glad you are enjoying the story.  I hoped the interaction between the actors worked, thanks for letting me know.

I really appreciate you reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm really enjoying this look into P-Town and all the interest people.  The skaters in particular were a nice touch.  Em seems to have developed foot in mouth disease.  lol.  I'm sure he didn't mean anything bad by it.  The shop they went into reminded me of a couple of pics I'd found. 

 

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Brian's reaction to the clothing they were looking at  was soooo funny.  Poor Michael, I hope he gets to enjoy the wine tasting and whale watching.



Author's Response:

I recognize these pictures, the actors were doing promo shots.  I love them, thanks for sharing them!  Yep, Em had a touch of foot in mouth syndrome.  At one point or another everyone gets everyone's nervous - like in real life.  LOL.  I know when I've traveled with loved ones, at one time or another -  EEEEEEEEEEEK!  LOL.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting - I really can't thank you enough.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

Laura, this story is delightful! I love all the details you are putting into this, and I laughed at loud at the man on rollerskates trying to grab Justin on the way by, as well as Brian's reaction to it.  The dialogue is to die for and so clever.    And looks like Justin might have some competition from Ben now in the "PSA" department - ha! 

Looking forward eagerly to the rest of their adventure.

*Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim,

Thanks so much for reading and leaving your supportive comments.  Yup, Ben has that PSA quality, I was drawing on the professor in him that is used to lecturing.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2013 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

I really like this story a lot! i cant see the pictures because I am reading it on my phone. but I really am enjoying this so much! :)



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much for commenting from your phone!  How great is that?!  So glad you are enjoying this.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I can't thank you enough.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2013 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

The way I knew that the writers were not gay, or at least not gay men who had sex after condoms became the norm, was the use od KY Jelly as the lube of choice in the first season. But this was corrected in later seasons.

Great story. We need more happy outings with the gang. The show wasn't a constant death dirge after all.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi *Hides* sorry I'm only commenting now hon. I thought tht since you hadn't put complete in that there would be more chapters, is there?

If not, I loved it very much Laura, especially.... 'Ted, however, did not.  He wise-cracked, “Nice boys, real nice… it’s lovely seeing Zephyr and J.T. working together to take down the interlopers… and that was a particularly moving speech, Brian… I will remember those words forever.”

Brian cracked back, “Here’s two more for you – ‘you’re fired.’”...lol, poor Teddy is always getting fired.

I also think Post coital, dead-head” (PCDH) is incredible! 

Listen to me very carefully...I lOVE YOUR STORY ALOT!!!

Massive Hugs - Yvonne xx

 

Reviewer: bonef (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2013 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

It is wonderful that someone out there is doing a story with all the characters. This reader really appreciates that.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words.  I love how the gang interacts, their bond is very touching.  i have to admit, it's work to give everyone a voice in the same scene.  It's a great learning experience.

I really appreciate your reading and commenting - sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jay123 (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2013 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Why arent you posting at FF.net?

REally like it, great writing. the best anywhere.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Jay,

I'll be posting there eventually.  But, my True Blood readers sent me angry mail, they were upset that I was doing QAF postings and not updating my TB fic.  So, after this QAF story, I'll be writing TB and will post this story when I'm ready to post the TB.  i know that it sounds confusing, but glad you could read it here or at my LiveJournal blog.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  The rate of reading to commenting is very low, so your support is so appreciated!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: himawari29 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love the possessiveness side of Justin towards Brian..

can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I love it, too.  And I like that Brian isn't making a stink about it.  I'll be updating soon, thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2013 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

In regard to one of the comments below....

The show did mention P town. In an ep in season one Brian talks about going and says something  to the effect that Michael can't go because he is with David. Don't know wich ep is was, but I know it happened.



Author's Response:

Wow, I do not remember that moment or any other moment, that's why I wrote what I did.  But, I go back to what you wrote and agree with that, too.  But, it's still odd that they really didn't refer to it beyond what you saw.  It's a big deal, a Mecca, so to speak of most gay people thatI know, or at least my crowd, which is pretty diverse.  At least once in your life, if you're gay, you try to go P-Town and experience that freedom.  I'm been to San Fran, Hopetown, Rehoboth (it used to be very gay, but not any more), Miami, D.C. (Dupont Circle), etc. and none of these are like P-Town. Have you been?

I hope you enjoy this story.  Thanks for sharing that with me.

By the way, who are you?  LOL.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh my - the boys with no need for filters ... this looks like it is going to be a lot of fun!

great start - can't wait for more!

Charle



Author's Response:

Charle,

I love your phrase, "the boys with no need for filters,"  it says it all, regarding the feel of P-Town.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, there's a few more chapters to go.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a perfect way to get the whole male contingent together for some summer fun.  How wonderful that Brian not only allowed them to tag along but supplimented their cost of room.  The Bed & Breakfast sounds absolutely devine, not to mention the owner Shampagne.  I think my favorite line had to be -  They didn't make it to the 3:00, English High Tea.  Glad to see this is not complete and that their will be more!!!



Author's Response:

Brian and boys, I thought it would be fun.  The B&B in the story is based on 2 real B&Bs in P-Town.  I combined them and used the name of one of them.  I love B&Bs, love staying in them - well, good ones.  LOL.

I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, there's a few more chapters to come.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, it means the world to me.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

His story is amazing!
The images are so well described that I felt as if I had seeing. I loved the idea of the gang take a trip. Although Brian squirm and deny to the grave, he likes these moments with your friends, especially when a blonde is next.
Justin and Michael joining forces to defend the virtue of Brian? It was sensational!
Eager for more.
A big hug!
Fatima.



Author's Response:

Fatima,

Thank you for reading and commenting, I truly mean that.  I'm trying something new with this story.  It won't be so intense, but hopefully it will be fun and enjoyable.  I hope you like it.

Hugs back to you and all the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

PCDH....hilarious lol, I can't wait to see what's in store for the gang during the rest of their visit.

Author's Response:

Hi!

I hope you'll come back and see what they are up to - hopefully, you'll like it.  I'm taking the intensity down a couple of levels, and going for a lighter touch in the story.  I hope it works.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2013 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's great when the author actually knows something about the subject matter. Always wondered why P town was so overlooked in QaF fiction.



Author's Response:

Yep, been there, done that, plan to go back.  LOL.  You know, I was wondering the same thing.  I also realized that the show never mentioned P-Town.  That says two things to me 1) the writers weren't gay, and they weren't  2) the writers weren't familiar with the US East Coast, and they weren't, they were from California or Canada.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, you ever you are.  I do appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2013 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved this first chapter and can't wait for MORE!



Author's Response:

Cheryl,

So glad you enjoyed the chapter and I hope you'll enjoy the others to come.

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, sincerely!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2013 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

LOL! That was awesome, and Brian was ...well, Brian! I love how Michael and Justin fist pumped near the end too. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

A big hug to you for being so kind.  Glad you liked the fist bump, and I thought what the heck, let's have Justin and Michael get along in the story.  LOL.  Why not?!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it - truly!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2013 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

I can just imagine all the trouble our boys could get into here in P-Town...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Kathleen,

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really can't thank you enough.  I'm trying my had at a different kind of story, for the experience.  The fic won't have angst or tension, but I hope the guys' experiences will keep the reader's interest. 

All the best and again, thanks so much.

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2013 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lovely, Laura!  You always do such a great job of keeping everyone IC; I can just see all of this clearly in my head.  And I appreciate all the details that make the story come to life.  I was glad, too, that Brian turned down his invitation.  I'm hoping this isn't a one-shot (?).  If not, I'll definitely be interested in reading the rest.  Thanks for participating in the challenge! *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim,

Thanks so much for your kind support and generous review.  This is my first challenge ever, I'm using it as a learning experience.  I wanted to try my hand at something light and fluffly and the contest was a plot bunny in itself - summer.  I'm not sure if people will be interested in a mild, happy fic, but what the heck. 

Time has made Brian a little more mellow in this - that's why I put in OC in the chapter discreption. LOL. 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it. 

All the best my friend,

Laura

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