Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Rescue Me
Reviewer: urugwaj (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2013 12:04 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Oh poor Justin. Nobody understand him :(



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie - thank you for reading this and for the comments. Do not fret, soon Brian will do something to show Justin how much he cares about him.  So happy that you're enjoying this story! Thank you for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2013 02:33 PM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Wow, I'm really enjoying the story but I have to say I don't like Justin in this universe. He is being one annoying, whiny, touchy, diva bitch! Seems like the end of every chapter he is flouncing off in some pissed off, touchy, Scarlett O Hara huff!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, I know - he's being a little bit of a brat, but he has to make Brian work for it - ha!  I like to think that part of it is fear of being used and thrown away afterward; that, plus his level of inexperience.  But don't worry; I'll get it straightened out before I'm done.  BTW, let me know if you want any changes made to that banner if you decide to use it. Totally up to you, though. Thanks, my friend, for reading and for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 05:59 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

So resourceful! 

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:38 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Nice:)



Author's Response:

You're a fast reader.;) Thank you again for taking the time to leave comments for each chapter; that's very thoughtful of you and greatly appreciated.:)   ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 01:15 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

"He was beginning to see how Justin could get irritated with this man."

I loved the confrontation between Emmett and Brian.

I wonder if Jennifer is more open ti Justin having a relationship with Brian.

Justin is acting like a Gidget. I don't see anything wrong with Jennifer's suggestion.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 09:30 PM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Oh, so sneaky, Brian.  Getting Em to help you out.  Shame on you!  LOL.

I like that Craig is not as much as an a-hole as he was in the show and that MomJen seems to be more supportive of Justin having a love life.

Hope to get to another chapter later.  At least I can catch up after Sunday.  Duh, I just thought of that!

Enjoying the romance of the boys.  Nice build and sexual tension!

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response:

Hi, Laura - thanks for your latest comments; happy that you are enjoying this story.  Yes, I may have to work like a dog, but I have to get this all wrapped up by Sunday night.  No more extensions this time!  Probably just as well.;)  Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks again for taking the time to leave me feedback; I really do appreciate that.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

It's too bad Justin's dad isn't behind his art aspiriations.  He should find someone who appreciates it ... hmmmm.

- Jackie

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2013 05:20 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Hello, dear friend.
I think Brian started forward in achieving your goal to make an ally of Emmet. I'm curious to know what Brian is planning to Justin.
I love Emmet and is very nice to see him as a character so active in this story.
I would like to tell you that your banner is amazing! I had not said that, but I think it's not too late.
I'm really enjoying your story and I dare say that you are in top form as the author in this work. Congratulations!
A huge hug ever!
Fatima.



Author's Response:

Olá, Fátima! Obrigado por todos os comentários, meu amigo. Estou feliz que você gosta do banner. Eu acho que ele faz um bom trabalho de contar o que está acontecendo entre os dois rapazes.;) Acabei de publicar a próxima parte onde Brian começa a colocar seu plano em movimento. Haverá muito mais a sua data se aproximando, embora, então eu espero que você continue a apreciá

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2013 02:54 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Now what is big bad up to, and using Emmett to solidify his plan. We soon shall see. I think this was abuilding chapter. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc!  Thanks for your latest commments.;)  I will post another part before the day is over which goes into more detail about Brian's "I don't do dates" date - ha! Thanks again for all the support, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2013 02:11 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

what is Brian planning now? :)



Author's Response:

Hi,Julieta!  Hm...let's just says he may be recreating a few scenes from some old movies, with a little bit of "Easy Rider" mixed in (wink, wink).  Thanks for hanging in there with me!  I'll get another part posted before the day is out; I'm trying to finish up the very last part right now.  Thanks again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Kiddo (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2013 01:18 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

to read more that one chapter in one go is great :-)

poor brian. must hurt quite a bit... but also i think he deserved it a little bit... after his act with the surfboard at the beginning...so on one hand i feel bad for him but on the other not....

looking forward to the next parts

 

oh and thanks for your long answer to my last review. if you ever need a test reader for this story i would gladly voluteer ;-)



Author's Response:

Hi, Kiddo! Thank YOU for reading and for leaving comments.  I think no matter how many stories someone writes, it is always very motivating to get some positive feedback that others are enjoying what you are writing, so I truly appreciate you taking the trouble to do that.;P)  I think both boys here are being a little unfair to each other. But they are slowly coming to a more amicable solution.  They're getting closer - even more so in the next chapter.;)  Let the Kinney-style wooing begin!  They will both discover some more about each other; what they like and what their hopes and dreams are, especially Justin's.

And thanks for the offer!  I'll keep that in mind.;)  I think I'll be posting the rest of this fairly quickly, though, so hopefully you will get the rest of it very soon.  Thank you again for sticking with me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 11:17 PM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Mr. Kinney pursuing someone, miracles cease...

So many chapters today makes me smile...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thank you for all the support, Kathleen!  Yes, Mr. Kinney will actually be doing a little 'wooing' (in his own over-the-top way) coming up.;P  I will get another part posted later today.  Working on the conclusion right now so I will have it all done before the deadline; I'm almost there now.;)  Thank you for reading and for all the comments.  I am very grateful, and it's always motivating to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 11:15 PM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Hmmm, Craig is an unusual in that he is obviously business savey, but on a personal level while he's not as homophobic as he was partraid on TV he's not the most understanding person either.  Emmett is adorable.  He's willing to help but not at the risk of hurting Justin.  Brian was smart to know that Emmett might be the key to getting to know Justin.  You make writting seem so effortless, which I know better.  How do you do that?



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for sticking with me on this story, and for taking the time to leave me comments.  I truly appreciate that.  As far as Craig goes, I think he can be pragmatic when it comes to business, but when it's on a more personal level, I still think he has a long way to go.  But yes, I'm trying not to make him out to be quite the (excuse my French) prick that he was on the show.  I still couldn't quite see him as a total good guy, though; it just doesn't seem in his nature for him to be portrayed that way.

Emmett, on the other hand, seems to have just the perfect traits to be a true friend, and I love to write him into my stories when I can.  He seemed like the perfect choice as the employee at the surfer shop with his personality, as well as a sort of confidante for Justin.

As for writing, thank you for that lovely compliment!  I enjoy writing, but I struggle with it just like everyone else.  Some stories seem easier to write than others; perhaps that is the case here (?).  I do feel badly about not updating my other ones faster.  Sigh...I would like eventually to only post completed ones like this one.  Hopefully one day I can get to that point. But THANK YOU for your confidence in me - and for all the comments!  I will get another part to this posted later today.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2013 10:50 PM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Kim you're killing me here lol.....

I have to give Brian credit, enlisting Emmett's help was the smartest thing he could have done. It will help ease Justin's mind just a bit to know that Brian considers him more than just a one-off....that is if Emmett ever tells him ;)

Jennifer turned my stomach a little with her insinuation that she agrees with Craig about Justin's career choice. As hid mother you would expect her to be more supportive knowing how his father feels. Needless to say I can't wait to see how it all turns out.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara! Thanks for sticking with me here.;)  I will try my best to make it all worth your - and the other readers' - while.;)   I do enjoy putting Emmett into the stories when I can. How I wish they had shown more of his and Justin's friendship on the show!  I loved his character!  And while Emmett may not tell Justin what is going on, soon it should be very evident that he knows Brian really does want to woo him a little (at least in Brian's own way).;) 

As for Jennifer, I just think she is concerned and wants to make sure that Justin can still pursue his art but still have a backup plan just in case for financial reasons.  I wouldn't be too harsh with her.  But I can certainly see your viewpoint on it.  Poor Justin's going to need a little TLC right about now.  But I think Brian may have that taken care of soon.;)

Thank you for reading and for all the comments, Tamara!  You have been so faithful about that, and I do appreciate it more than you probably know.  I hope you continue to enjoy this.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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