Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
Nice:)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the comments, Nina! Hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 06:30 AM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
"Gidget." Loved the nicknaming. The stunt was cute too.
Author's Response: I think Justin looks like a Gidget, don't you?:) Don't worry, though; eventually he'll come up with a nickname for Brian, too. Thank you fo reading, Sandra.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
"I needed some mouth-to-mouth." I'll bet.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 03:34 PM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
Ohh this is getting interesting, I am excited to see the reaction of both once they see each other over dinner! (Damn...my break is almost over, but I need to finish the next chapter, can't wait for later)! {{{Hugs}}}
Author's Response: Hi, Cindy! Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sweetie.;) Yes, things are beginning to heat up now.;) And their 'after-dinner time' will get quite interesting (wink, wink). Will most the next part to this story shortly. Thank you again for all the support, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 06:07 AM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
That's just like Brian to razz Justin, giving him a hard time...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Hi, Kathleen! Thanks for your latest comments and for reading. I hope I'm keeping Brian at least fairly IC here. He may find that Justin is not such an easy mark; of course, that will only fuel his desire more (wink, wink). So glad you're enjoying this. Thank you for all your support. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 06:04 AM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
Kim, I loved it!
You described a so precisely the feeling of catching a wave, which made me feel like I had on a surfboard again. Great memories!
Brian falling plank to see Justin's ass ... How is that good!
Brian is really an idiot gorgeous. Stealing a kiss from Justin so ... WOW! But honestly, who can blame him?
Poor Justin. So worried about getting red from the sun, eventually turning red with embarrassment.
Justin angry is soooooooo hot!
I love Molly! I already told you that. I always thought she was unexplored in the show and would like to have seen more interaction between her and Justin.
Eager to read more.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Author's Response: Olá, Fátima! Obrigado por seus comentários e pela leitura. Estou tão feliz que você está gostando, meu amigo. Justin não vai ser tão fácil de pegar como Brian poderia pensar. Acho que ele terá um grande desafio em suas mãos.;)
Vou começar esta atualizado novamente muito em breve. Obrigado novamente por todo o apoio! Você é muito gentil. * Abraços * ~ Kim
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 01:48 AM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
Bad Brian! The hottie who cried wolf.
Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: "The hottie who cried wolf" - love it! LOL! He's just beginning his torment, I'm afraid. You know Brian and 'courtship' - he has an odd way of pursuing someone he's interested in. I'll be posting another chapter tonight. I hope you continue to enjoy it; Brian and I are just getting warmed up - ha! Thanks for all the comments and for reading, my friend; I am very appreciative. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 10:22 PM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
Brian is one clever sob lol....faking a wipe out just to get a little taste of Sunshine. I like how mature you've made Molly here. Very accepting of her brother and perceptive to boot. Now the question is how will Justin respond to his surprise dinner guest.
Author's Response: Hi, Tamara! Thank you for always taking time to comment; I really appreciate that, my friend. Yeah, I kind of wish they had shown more of Justin and Molly on the show; we really saw very little interaction between them, and even at her birthday party she seemed less than thrilled to see him there. Odd.
And Justin's about to get a big shock when he finds out who their surprise dinner guest is.;) Thanks again, Tamara; I'll get this updated again later today.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2013 10:17 PM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
Enjoyed this immensely!!! Can't wait to see sparks fly at Molly's party :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment! I really appreciate that.;) And I'm happy to hear how much you're enjoying it. Yes, Justin's about to be in for a big shock when he finds out who's coming for dinner - ha! Will post another chapter later today. Thank you again for the feedback! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 10:11 PM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
Just read all four chapters. Beautiful written as always. Like the idea of a lifeguard and surfer. Like it ... uhhh ... Love it.
But I agree with Justin .. Brian is an asshole. You don't play hurt, at that moment Justin can't help other people. Ugrr stupid Brian. Sorry.
You have my permission to post all chapters at onces * grins * . Please.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny! Thanks for the comments, my friend - and for the 'permission.' I will be posting this quickly. I have just the last chapter to write and it will be all done.;) Glad that you're enjoying it. I'll post another chapter later today. Thanks for the support! Hope you are doing well.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 08:03 PM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
Damn this is good. From the interaction with the little girl, so cute, to the rescue of Brian, to Brian's meeting Mrs. Taylor and Ms. Taylor. You have a lovely way with descriptions a person can actually see the 'scene'. Love the reference to Gidget. That really ages me. Justin is at the want him but irritated by him stage. Having Emmett included is an extra bonus. Molly's birthday should really heat things up. This is really great Summer Fun!
Author's Response: Hi, my friend.;) What lovely comments; thank you so much! That means a lot to me, coming from such a talented writer as yourself.;) BTW, don't worry about the "Gidget" reference aging you; I'm right there with you - ha! I thought that it fit, what with Justin's slender frame, the blond hair, and Brian's penchant for knowing about old movies.
I am blessed this time around with my updating schedule, since I knew I had to get this completed -and posted - by the challenge deadline. I really do need to get back to my other WIPs, though, which I will be doing simultaneously, just as soon as I finish the last chapter to this, which I'm working on now.
Anyway, enjoying your own story as well! Thank you again for reading and for all the support! I am very grateful, and it's always so motivating to me. I will likely post another part to this later today, too, that does include the dinner.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2013 08:03 PM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World
I LOVE how quickly you are updating this. Brian is hilarious! this is great! I can't wait for Molly's party!
Author's Response: Hi, Julieta - I'm so happy that you're enjoying this; thank you for reading and for the comments. I do enjoy writing humor for them, although lately my stories haven't had much room for that - ugh. So maybe after I get done with another one of my WIPs eventually, I may need to go back to the "Tricky" universe to make up for that.;)
I should be able to post another part to this later today. Thank you for all the support! *Hugs* ~Kim
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