Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Rescue Me
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2019 01:57 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

great story

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2019 01:09 PM · On: Only Love Can Break a Heart...

Love your pictures, thank you

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2017 07:16 PM · On: Surfin' USA

YAY I found another one :)

Like the diff. setting. MO MIKEY YET LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2017 12:28 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I loved this story so much.  It was nice to see a different side of Brian, one more open.

I'd love maybe a one-shot into the future...



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jessica!  I had a lot of fun with this one.  Just a little angst with a lot of humor. And I thought Justin was the perfect "Gidget" - ha!  Thank you for letting me know how much you enjoyed it.That means a lot to me. As for a sequel, who knows?  I may do that one day. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2016 01:12 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

What a delightful, romantic story - a pleasure to read:-)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Nicky! I had this inspiration for a story after visiting California shortly before I wrote it, and envisioned Justin as a lifeguard (or Brian).  I finally decided it would be more fun to put Justin in that role.;)  I'm so happy that you enjoyed this story! Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave feedback; that is always very motivating to me.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2015 05:58 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Great story!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Amanda! I realize this reponse is REALLY, REALLY late, but I was answering another review just now, and noticed I had never replied to yours. I am SO sorry about that! Sometimes it seems like I don't get the proper notification about reviews, and I'm assuming yours fell into that category. But I wanted to make sure that you knew how much I appreciated you reading this story, and especially for commenting. Thank you for that. I truly appreciate it.  I hope you are doing well. Thanks again. ~Kim

Reviewer: Brynneth (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2014 03:47 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I'm not a big fan of AU's, preferring canon, but I liked this one!  Nicely done, Kim!



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving this one a try, and for the comments, my friend. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2014 12:03 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Just read this again and realized that - what with all the hullabaloo over the contest last summer - I never actually wrote you a review. Sorry. I really did enjoy this story, though. I can totally see Brian getting into a sport like surfing. You did a great job describing it, too - do you surf yourself? Anyway, thanks for writing a lovely story and belated congrats on winning the challenge. TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag! Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this story, and for commenting on it; I really appreciate that. And no, I don't know a thing about surfing, other than watching those Gidget movies - ha!  I did think Gidget fit our little blond, though.;) Thanks again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: enika_benika (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2013 02:05 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Thank you, Kim, for this lovely story!

Just what I needed in this coldness. :-)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nadia! Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments; I really appreciate that. Yes, it's definitely getting colder now; makes me want to go to the beach with them, too.;) Thanks again for the support and for reading, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2013 05:54 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I've been so out of sinc that I forgot to congratulate you on your win. It was well deserved. I was so happy with all three of the winners although it was hard to decide on which to choose between so many excellent stories in that challenge. That Gidget reference was a hoot, though.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sandra.  I really appreciate that.  I thought Justin made a cute "Gidget," didn't you?  And Brian would make a hot surfer. Thanks again, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2013 06:42 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

this was very fun to read-  I loved  the playful Brian and the indignant Justin.  I havne't had a lot of time to read lately, but today had some down time and decided to indulge by love of these two men-  I was not disappointed.-  Thanks for sharing your talent and vision.



Author's Response:

Hello, Sandy! Thank you for reading this and for taking the time to comment.  I certainly know how RL can interfere with your best-laid plans...Sigh...Going through the same thing myself right now. But I'm so glad you had a chance to read this and enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2013 07:48 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I finally got to comment on this wonderful story! Sorry for not doing it earlier. I loved it, it’s even surprising that enough time has passed, and I still have the brightest memories. I couldn’t stop reading once I started, I swallowed it in one gulp. Fantastic! All stories were good, but yours was the best, in my opinion, I voted for it. I’m so glad you won!

As always, the thoroughness you gave to all the details – even the smallest ones - is astounding. When I read your stories, I always feel like I’m being right there, inside the story, with the characters. You described that resort in California so beautifully, I could feel the salty air, I could see the ocean! I loved how realistically you explained Justin’s reasons for working as a lifeguard – of course Craig had something to do with it, considering his disbelief in Justin’s artistic abilities. It’s a shame he couldn’t see how talented his son is for so long! I *loved* Brian’s advertising campaign for Craig. I laughed so much when he first showed it to him. It was hilarious watching Craig’s righteous indignation, and that his reluctant agreement. At least he understands what can bring him money!

First meeting between Brian and Justin was fantastic, I loved it! And that Brian’s trick to attract Justin’s attention, when he pretended to be drowning… ha, it’s so in his character! I can understand Justin’s annoyance, though, I’d be livid too!

The whole courting process was incredible, it was fantastic seeing how smitten Brian was, how much he genuinely likes Justin, how he is interested in him. Justin was dealing great despite it’s not easy to do that with a person like Brian. Sometimes he was childish, but it added lots of charm to a story. Justin is so young, so inexperienced here, and he is in love for the first time! Sometimes he just doesn’t know what to do with it, and Brian doesn’t help much – he is *so* confusing!

I was sad and frustrated when they sort of broke things off. I was angry with Brian, and glad that Justin didn’t follow him. Brian was so wrong thinking he can manage without Justin once he got to know and love him. I *loved* the way they made up! Jealous Brian is my favorite! :) By the way, I’m amazed at how brilliant the names Brian came up for Justin are in every story! I always love them, they are funny and smart.

I liked the whole Taylor family, you made them very vivid. It’s great that they didn’t push Justin away, even sort of tried to accept him and Brian.  

Thank you for this wonderful story, and for photos you added! They made it even more incredible, and the reading even more pleasant. You definitely deserved to win, I’m so glad you did! 



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend.  As always I am incredibly humbled by the thought and time you put into your comments. You really go above and beyond when it comes to leaving feedback, and I will never be able to properly express how grateful I am for that.  I eagerly look forward to your critique, because you are so good about telling me specifically what you liked about the story. Thank you for that.

 

And thank you for voting for this story; I am very honored.  I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy.  I should have a new Tricky story up soon, and I am working right now on the update to "The Parent Trap."  So that should updated very soon.  Thanks again for all the support!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 35nanou (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2013 05:56 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Excellente histoire avec l'impression de me retrouver en vacances!

Les personnages et notamment Brian sont tellement réalistes et proche de la série, j'ai apprécié chaque moment de la "ballade" en leur compagnie au point où je n'ai pas pris le temps de laisser un commentaire à chaque chapitre, désolée. Je me rattraperais sur les autres histoires!

Les photos montages sont le petit plus bien agréable illustrant parfaitement chaque passage de l'histoire.

Merci et à bientôt.



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend.;)  Thank you for reading this story and for the lovely comments.  I appreciate that very much.  I do enjoy including photos; it is time-consuming, but I agree; I do think it adds a lot to the story.  I hope you will enjoy some more of my other stories as well. Thank you again - and thank you for the favorite author designation as well; I am extremely honored.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: urugwaj (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 05:08 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

 

This is great! And Craig wasn't OOc. I love to see them (B & J)  together :)



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend - I see you got through the entire story.;) Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; you know I would never keep the boys apart in the end.;)  Thanks again, Sweetheart.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 12:11 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Well-it went very well. Did get all the reading done in the allotted time. BB proud of me--imagine!! They all want to continue with your stories. Oh God, what have i gotten myself into. Ha! So the read will continue next month. I think you are right about TLC. Very appropriate for this crowd. I remember it was one of my favorites and still is. I will be very happy to read it again--trip down memory lane. Hopefully I won't cry again, as that one got me good. Off to get some shut-eye. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  How I wish I could be there to see you reading these stories aloud!  I am flattered beyond words.:)  You'll have to eventually read them "Paper Hearts Killer" - with that drama involved I think you can ensure they will be back to read the next part - ha! Although the adventures of "Florence and Leroy" aren't too bad, either, and it is certainly appropriate for that crowd.;)  Tell everyone I said hello and that I hope they continue to enjoy the stories. And thank you as always for all the amazing support you and your friends give me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: urugwaj (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2013 12:04 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Oh poor Justin. Nobody understand him :(



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie - thank you for reading this and for the comments. Do not fret, soon Brian will do something to show Justin how much he cares about him.  So happy that you're enjoying this story! Thank you for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: urugwaj (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2013 10:29 PM · On: The Game of Love

 Can't wait for next chapter at LJ sooo I run here. Poor Justin. So big mess inside his head :)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2013 09:43 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Well!!! reading went well, I think I can get it all done in three days. Some people loved the story as it develops but don't know about qaf. I have to bring my 5 season box in so they can watch them. I know some kids are too young but it was on Showtime for a long time--the cleaned up version Any way-guess how many showed up???? 22. Can you believe it. I was quite amazed-people I had never seen, quite a few gay people to boot. Ate all the popcorn and drank all the soda. Have to resupply-I think I can afford it plus pay myself back. What a hoot!! lol

Author's Response:

OMG, lindc, that is SO funny!  How I would love to see a video of you reading this aloud to a crowd of 22!  I'm actually quite flattered by this 'event.'   I still say you need to find a nice, long one like "Stirring Up Trouble," "Remember Me," or "Tender Loving Care" to really strike it rich - ha! Seriously, I am very humbled that you think enough of my story to want to read it aloud to such a large group.  I hope they feel it's worthy.

 

Tell everyone that I said hello and tell Lee I hope he is continuing to recover.  I'm working on the next part of "My Heart's Desire" right now, and the co-written story should be updated soon.  I think I see a Tricky wedding story coming up down the road, too, but it will have to be after I get at least one other story wrapped up first.

 

I love your reading events, though!  Better keep those refreshments coming! Thanks again for all the wonderful support, lindc; that means so much to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2013 05:39 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Awesome I just wanted to say congrats 😄👍



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words, Tash.  I really do appreciate that.  I hope I can continue to write stories that you enjoy. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 11:57 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Hello Kim! CONGRATULATIONS!!!

As what I have mentioned before, MW members will always be fair in voting the deserving winners. And there is no doubt that you definitely deserved it! :):):) Stay as sweet as you always are. Love yah friend!

{{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy! Thanks so much for your well wishes, my friend; I appreciate that so much.  You're very kind.  It's been a little distressing at times, but I do thank you for all the support.  It really mean a lot to me.:)

I'll be looking forward to more of your own stories, too.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 12:09 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I apologise as I have just realised I didn’t come back and review this fics conclusion. I would never do that intentionally, as I support all the challenge fics and review them. Congratulations on the win and the blue ribbon.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you, Flossee. I appreciate the comments and you reading the story.  ~Kim

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 06:38 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Congratulations on Rescue Me winner first place. As soon as I saw that you enter I knew you would win and not because you were an admin but because you are a great and talented writer as proven by your past and future stories, and for anyone who would think that you would rig a contest I just say to them GOD DON'T LIKE UGLY. And please do not stop entering any and all challenges.

Author's Response:

Hello!  Thank you so much for reading this story and for your kind comments.  I appreciate that more than you will ever know.  I'm not sure what format future challenges will take; we may do away with the voting and just have a theme or prompts.  I loved all the stories that were submitted, though, and would hate to see that end, also.

Thank you for the support!  I really am honored and hope that I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy. Sending a big hug your way. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 04:05 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I don't know how many pages the story entails, but BB said charge them each $20 bucks and if 20 people come thats a good pool ante. Wish me luck the GREAT RESCUE ME READ-A-THON starts Sept. 11. lol

Author's Response:

OMG, lindc!  He's expensive - ha!  I just downloaded it as a PDF and it says it's 187 pages.  I had NO idea I was that wordy - LOL!  What in the world would you do with $400?  Such pressure!  You can always go to Paper Hearts Killer, though - I think that's even longer - LOL!  Good Luck!  Get those popcorn and drinks ready!:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 03:03 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Hey! good idea charging admission. I can save the money for the pool winnings when we have the next one on one of your stories. How much should I charge. lol

Author's Response:

Oh, I'm not sure I can handle that responsibility!  How about a quarter a page?  (I'm cheap; what can I say?  Ha!)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 02:41 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Ha!! Told you you would win. We are so happy--now maybe you will BELIEVE. I am having a three day read-a-thon. Going to read the whole story during our breaks. Hope it doesn't take me more than that. Going to serve soda and popcorn to the listeners. Wish me luck-and again YIPPEE!!! lol

Author's Response:

You are so funny!  Maybe you should charge admission to cover the cost of refreshments.  I'd love for you to read them "Roughing It" sometime where Brian went camping. That is a good summer story.  I really enjoyed writing all the pranks in that one.

Thanks for the good wishes, lindc, and for all the support.  I appreciate that so much. Tell Lee I'm hard at work on the election results for his favorite story.  And tell everyone I said hello!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 02:00 AM · On: Cruel Summer

Yes! Yes! Yes! I knew you would win. *Doing a happy dance!* Everyone that participated was fantastic. But, yours was just so special, my dear Kim! Congratulations! Love & Hugs! Annie

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Yes, the number of votes and the stories were all wonderful, weren't they?  Thank you for your good wishes, Annie. Hope to meet up with you again one day soon.  I'm hoping Randy will do another play before he goes to Bilbao in March.;)  Thanks again for all the support.

 

*Hugs* back.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2013 11:35 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Very good story. I enjoy it very much. Thank you

Mariana



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Mariana.  I am pleased that you liked it.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2013 11:00 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Blue Ribbon Featured status awarded by me.

 

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2013 09:24 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Cynthia seems like she takes to Justin well.  And it helps that it makes her life better in lots of ways!  Leave it to Brian with the sign.  Doing life Brian and Justin style and telling the parents!  Good for Justin getting leverage to just in defense of Gidget.  The green eyed monster is ever  present even when there is no chance.  Sweet protective Em.  "In case you hadn't noticed, he's hot."  Oh Molly, he noticed!!  Good for Jen!  Maybe Dad just needs some time?.  Brian is on a roll!  Wise woman thinking they would end up together in the night anyway!  Great declaration!  and with a audience!  Every the Taylor charmer!  Oh Molly don't scare Brian like that just yet.  Great story!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie - thank you for reading this story and for all the comments.  I really do appreciate that. So glad that you liked it!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2013 08:06 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

So sweet talking about Gus and how he makes him good.  Love that Brian is owning up to this all being new and scary! but worth it!  YEA to working it out and insatiable hunger!!  And sharing their lives!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - glad to see you still reading this one.;)  I'm glad you're still enjoying it. A little rain's about to fall in their lives, but don't worry; a little 'sunshine' will patch them back up soon.  Thank you for reding and for all the comments. It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2013 11:07 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

Holy smokes is Brian gonna have to eat some crow!!  Sweet Brian taking care of Justin!  HOME!  Brian realizes it was wrong leaving him.  I understand how one look from that man could totally derail you!  Thank you Justin!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thank you for reading and for all the comments.;)  I really do appreciate that.  So glad that you are enjoyiing this one.  You're almost done now.:) Thank you for reading and especially the feedback; that always inspires me to keep writing.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2013 10:48 AM · On: Paint It Black

Oh Brian, how sweet.  The good and the bad, every time you see it you think of Brian.  OH and, "suck it Dad".  OH Brian!  Cute tag, for hating it so much! 

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2013 10:12 AM · On: Only Love Can Break a Heart...

Don't know what they can really do, but oh Molly.  I know it's easier, but no good bye!  Like a knife to my heart.

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2013 10:07 AM · On: Let Me Tell You 'bout The Birds And The Bees...

I love Justin sketching Brian nude!  It seems so natural for the two of them.  And HOT!  It's hard to bring up even in the best of situations.  So beautiful!  As it should be Justin's first time is with Brian.  Smiles and kisses!  They are sooo good together!  So glad Brian stayed!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2013 12:36 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Doesn't look like that sign is for sale...:(( I am such a sad panda right now! That pony tail would have come out  easy with a little white out....siiiiiggggghhhhhhh....Remember white out every buddy? siiigggghhhh..

Oh well.... Later Kim



Author's Response:

LOL!  Poor Jon!  Will keep looking - it's got to be for sale somewhere!  Will let you know.  Love the line about the pony tail and white out - ha!  BTW, do you know what White Out (or was it Liquid Paper?) was invented by Michael Nesmith's mother?  (I know - I'm dating myself here now).  Just a little bit of trivia.;) 

I'm on the case right now!  Keep your fingers crossed; you've got to find a way to shake up that apartment building!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2013 10:16 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

OMG, I completely lost it at the Do not Disturb sign! Great chapter overall,  and Craig's reaction was as usually assholey. Very nicely done and loved all the pics.

You MUST tell me where you saw that sign! And if it is for sale somewhere because I WANT one! I want one more than I can say to put on my apt door just for the sake of shorting out some of the pacemakers in this boring old building!



Author's Response:

Hi, Jon!  So you liked the sign, huh? LOL!  I did take some artistic license with it, but the original one is close to what I wound up with. I had to remove the pony tail from the woman on top.  I have no idea where you would buy it, but here's a link to one of the places where I saw it online:  http://www.oodora.com/life-stories/funny-finds/funny-do-not-disturb-signs.html/attachment/funny-do-not-disturb-sign/

I think it would sure shake up your apartment building - ha! 

Thanks for reading and for all the comments!  I will have to try and include more photos in my stories.  It IS time-consuming, but I do think it can add a lot to the story, too.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2013 02:45 AM · On: Let Me Tell You 'bout The Birds And The Bees...

How very very romantic! So sweet and sexy. This indeed had summer outdoors-ey ness writen all through it! Good job.

Now as for Craig...Isn't there a hungry shark out there  needing to be fed? And poor Craig with that nasty paper cut bleeding into the water....Just sayin'...



Author's Response:

Now THERE'S an idea - ha!  But Justin's got just enough of a conscience to probably be bothered by that, and it would spoil the mood, so I'd better not do that.;)  Glad you are still enjoying it!  Thanks for the comments, my friend.  Oh, and just sent you another idea for a banner; let me know.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2013 02:33 PM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Wow, I'm really enjoying the story but I have to say I don't like Justin in this universe. He is being one annoying, whiny, touchy, diva bitch! Seems like the end of every chapter he is flouncing off in some pissed off, touchy, Scarlett O Hara huff!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, I know - he's being a little bit of a brat, but he has to make Brian work for it - ha!  I like to think that part of it is fear of being used and thrown away afterward; that, plus his level of inexperience.  But don't worry; I'll get it straightened out before I'm done.  BTW, let me know if you want any changes made to that banner if you decide to use it. Totally up to you, though. Thanks, my friend, for reading and for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2013 03:40 AM · On: The Warmth of the Sun

Hi Kim, finally starting your story now, will check more on it later as I have to dash now for an errand I've put off for 4 months! Talk about procrastination!

Great chapters and nice set up. I like how Emmett is the surfer shopkeep. All things parallel.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Jon! Thanks for letting me know; I thought Emmett was a good fit for the surfer shop.;)  I hope you enjoy the rest of it.  And yeah, I thought I was bad at procrastinating - ha!  Thanks again - *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 08:31 AM · On: It's In His Kiss

What a fantastic day and scenery!  I would think Brian's foot would be a little bit worse for wear after it though?



Author's Response:

Well, I suppose he can recover quickly with the right incentive - LOL!  You're probably right about that; I should have had Justin 'kissing his boo-boo.'  Don't think he would have minded that.;) Thanks again for reading.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 06:22 AM · On: Fun, Fun, Funnel...

Brian pulling out all the stops! and Justin accepting!  Glad Justin got brave and asked to draw him! nude would be good but VERY distracting! 



Author's Response:

VERY distracting!  But oh, so delicious though.;)  Don't worry; they won't be able to remain apart for very long now.;)  Thanks again for all the comments, my friend; very much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 05:59 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

So resourceful! 

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 05:19 AM · On: The Game of Love

Poor Brian and then add insult to injury.  But he will get to be taken care of by Justin!  Justin took such good care of him!  So glad Justin went to check on Brian!!  More info and caring Justin!!  These two!  I think our little Justin protests too much and it's sad.  Unsatisfying victory is right because it's not a victory. 



Author's Response:

Yeah - so stubborn, these men.  But don't worry; I'll get this all fixed up eventually.  A little angst heading their way, but not before Brian's 'un-date.';)  Thanks for all the comments!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 04:50 AM · On: Don't Worry, Baby...

And informational Justin appears.  and inexperienced Justin too.  Wow Justin had a moment didn't he, but who hasn't.  Em is a good conselor!  and gives good advice.  Even though I would understand Justin not wanting to be just a one timmer.  Brian is not used to any of this.



Author's Response:

Well, he did know of freak out there, didn't he? But I think he did that out of fear about his inexperience.  And he's worried as you said about just being a casual fling with Brian.  I think Brian, though, is about to convince him otherwise.;) 

Thanks again for all the comments!  I am very appreciative.  So glad that you're enjoying this.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 04:26 AM · On: Wipeout

Love how you describe Brian's technique from Justin's POV!  Justin does call it though!  A persistent Brian!  Em getting the dish on the details!  Poor Justin taking the bait.  That was perfect!  Brian rubbing sunscreen on Justin!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! I don't mind if you 'cheated.'  I'm just happy that you're reading this story.:)  I didn't want to start posting it elsewhere until it was finished on here, but yes, you can read the rest all at once now.;)  Thanks for leaving me feedback!  Don't forget to check out all the fan fiction stories for the challenge; they're great!  A lot of the LJ writers posted a story on here, also.  Here's the link:

http://midnightwhispers.ca/browse.php?type=categories&catid=355

 

You can vote for your favorite afterward if you want on the home page.  It's open to members as well as non-members. Thanks for reading!  I really appreciate that. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (T) (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 04:16 AM · On: I Get Around

I cheated!  I saw someone had posed in a comment that it was all here so  I decided not to wait!!  I have your site in my favorites and I forget to check it out!  I'm behind on Heart's Desire and some I haven't started!

I love that Brian loves Justin's art before he knows it's Justin's.  Brian the charmer!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 01:39 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Such a great ending!  I'm so glad you kept Craig true to form. He hasn't truly accepted them as a couple and made his stupid lifestyle comment.  It wouldn't be Craig if he jumped on the bandwagon.  Molly and Jennifer showed their support and that's what mattered.  Loved what a romantic Brian turned out to be in this story.  

I look forward to your next story.



Author's Response:

Hello! Thank you for reading this story and for taking the time to comment; that is very kind of you. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this.  And I would have to agree; I think making Craig too 'lovey-dovey' would be a real stretch for him - LOL!  And I'm glad you liked the romantic Brian in here.  I like to think he could be that way in his own unique style and still stay fairly IC. 

Thank you again for all the kind words!  That is always very encouraging to me.  I am planning on a new Tricky story, but want to at least complete one of my other WIPs first (hopefully two) before I move back to the lovable but pesky mutt for the boys' wedding.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: qafmyaddiction (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2013 10:28 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

A very fun summer story!Great!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comment.  It is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2013 11:27 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

squeeeeeeeeeee!!!! omggggggg!!!! i loved that ending! i was so glad when i got your email this morning. i had no idea you had finished it and posted it already. weird, since i'm pretty sure i put this to notify me whenever you post something new. so if i hadn't gotten that email i probably wouldn't have known. thanks for the heads up. i loved it, loved it, loved it. you know i love me some jealous brian ;} he's my favorite brian of all, well with lusty brian bringing up the rear (pun intended) ;p omg! when brian pulled justin away from emmetts hug, i laughed so loud, my neighbors may put in a complaint about me. i'm going to regret staying up this late to finish this, but hey, i'll have some nice dreams ;} you never seem to amaze me with your talent. i truly hope you know how good you are. this was just perfect.

 

p.s. i don't normally tell you about any boo boos i find this way, but it's something so simple that i thought you wouldn't mind. when brian and justin are in the cave, you wrote:

'It still amazed me that I held this type of power over someone such as him as I tailed the tips of my fingers lower, then toward his belly and patch of dark-colored pubes above his cock, lying hand (hard?) and heavy against my body.'

see, it was just a small typo. you know how compulsive i am. i was going to just let it go, but it kept nagging me ;} hope you don't mind that i put that here.

as always, you have blown me away. thanks for all your hard work.



Author's Response:

Hello, my dear - I should have guessed somewhere along the line my beta would find at least one error! Thanks, I corrected it.  I guess that's not too bad, though, considering the length of the story. So glad that you liked it.  And BTW, I'm proud of you - that one line of yours (lusty brian bringing up the rear) was pretty funny!

Thanks for all the support you give me, and for the comments.  You know I will always count on you to keep me in line!  I'm working on "MHD" right now, BTW, so get ready!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:41 AM · On: Fun, Fun, Funnel...

Love it!

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:38 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Nice:)



Author's Response:

You're a fast reader.;) Thank you again for taking the time to leave comments for each chapter; that's very thoughtful of you and greatly appreciated.:)   ~Kim

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:37 AM · On: The Game of Love

Very good!

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:37 AM · On: The Game of Love

Very good!

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:35 AM · On: Don't Worry, Baby...

Nice:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:33 AM · On: Wipeout

Love it:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:33 AM · On: I Get Around

Good:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World

Nice:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Nina!  Hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:31 AM · On: Surfin' USA

Nice:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:30 AM · On: The Warmth of the Sun

Nice:)

Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 08:29 AM · On: Cruel Summer

Very good!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 08:12 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Was that Do Not Disturb sign real?

Brian was charming to the end. I'm was happy to read a fic where Craig wasn't a total jerk and Brian was willing to admit his feelings. It's nice to read a Brian and Justin romance once in a while. Great Job! And thank you fr time well spent.

Now, I have to go pass out again. :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra - well, I guess you would say the "Do Not Disturb" sign was half-real; I did find the basic characters on line, but had to modify them slightly to be male/male rather than male/female.  Plus I had to add the shapes and the text.  But I saw those two figures and I thought  that would be perfect for Brian's office sign - LOL!  It was nice to have a relatively light piece for a change with all the angst I've been writing lately.  I think I'm goiing to have to go write my Tricky story as soon as I complete one or two of my WIPs just to get away from all th drama - ha!

Hope you get some much-needed rest!  THANK YOU for all the wonderful comments, for reading, and for all the support you give me!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 07:55 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

Even if Justin was kissing the guy, Brian had no right to punch him. He left Justin without any promises for a future.

Loved the pictures.

Author's Response:

H, Sandra - yeah, you're right.  But I think Brian's heart was still so stolen by Justiin that he acted before he thought.  Definitely overreacted though!  Glad you're loving the photos.:) Thanks for all the comments!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 07:53 AM · On: Paint It Black

"...just before he slid it over his head, something compelled him to look in my direction as his eyes found me huddled on the balcony."

Now THAT was a sad goodbye.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 07:50 AM · On: Only Love Can Break a Heart...

"...to prolong their goodbye would have only made it worse."

This made me think of the ending of the show. This was bittersweet.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 07:42 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I absolutely loved it!!!!! I wasn't able to read the chapters before because I've been having a lot of work at the office, but I finally managed to finish the story!!!! As always, great work!! ^-^ I cracked up when Justin called Brian Moondoggie, and I loved the sign they have for the door at the office... Did you make it or did you find it somewhere?? It was so original! ^-^ Also, I'm glad that Craig has apparently accepted (or is on the way.....) their relationship, for a minute there I was afraid it was going to be just like in the series, but I'm glad it was not... On another note, I kept picturing them going to see the rest of the gang (the ones that did not appear in the story) and Justin meeting Gus! Maybe in a sequel in the future? Please!? Anyway, hope to read you soon! Kisses!



Author's Response:

Hi, Fatima! I'm so happy you enjoyed this story!  Thank you for reading and for commenting.;)  I couldn't resist the "Moondoggie" after all those Gidget references.;)  I found the "Do Not Disturb characters, but had to change them from male/female, add the message, and the shapes.  I saw that one and couldn't pass it up.;) 

Well, you know how much I love to put Gus in my stories.  So perhaps I could do a sequel at some point.  I have SO many on the backburner right now, though!  Ack!  And, of course, the 3 WIPs and co-written story that I need to finish first.  I'm going to try and concentrate on those for a while.  "Parent Trap" is very close to the end, but not so sure about the other two.  Rest assured, I always ideas in the back of my mind for new stories.  Want to do another Tricky story, too, for the boys' wedding.  Already have the title for that one.;) Thank you for the suggestion, though!  I may just do that at some point.

Thank you again for reading and for all the support, Fatima!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 07:29 AM · On: It's In His Kiss

That was one perfect date and the pictures you provided were a nice bonus.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sandra.;) The photos took forever to manipulate, but I do like how they add to the story.  Thanks so much for reading and for the comments!  I hope you continue to enjoy this one.;) *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 04:56 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Loved it, a satisfying conclusion to a great story..thanks for keeping their love alive..looking forward to more BJ fics from you :)

Thanks, Kimi



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading and for the comments!  I'm delighted that you liked it. And yes, as long as readers enjoy them, I would love nothing more than to keep writing them. Thank you for the support; I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: cricrijolie (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 11:24 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Great story Kim, I enjoyed every chapter!!! It was funny and sexy, just the way I like it. And great ending! Love it, good job! Christine xox

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! So wonderful to see you reading this one!  Thank you for the comments and for reading; I really appreciate that.:)  It was a lot of fun writing it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 06:30 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Fantastic ending to a wondedful story, Kim!
I just loved it sooooo much. Sorry to see this one is finished. Will miss it so much! Hugs! Annie

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Annie!  So happy that you enjoyed it.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 04:32 AM · On: Fun, Fun, Funnel...

"Then...This is a date?"

"Justin...how b..?"

This is priceless.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying this, Sandra! I love to have fun with them, but it seems too often my stories have been so angsty lately.  Of course, this one will have its share of that, but it will be short-lived.;)  Thank you for reading and for all the wonderful comments!  Hope the headache is better now.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 01:15 AM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

"He was beginning to see how Justin could get irritated with this man."

I loved the confrontation between Emmett and Brian.

I wonder if Jennifer is more open ti Justin having a relationship with Brian.

Justin is acting like a Gidget. I don't see anything wrong with Jennifer's suggestion.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 10:04 PM · On: The Game of Love

"Well, then, don't worry, I'll protect you; you'll be on the bottom."

I think the protect part bothered Justin more than the part about being on the bottom. And just when things were getting hot and heavy.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 09:27 PM · On: Don't Worry, Baby...

"How will you leap tall lifeguard stations in a single bound ..."

Hilarious! But on a more serious note, I read about the contest issues. I was not pleased. I'm not sure if your story is back in the running, but I sincerely hope so. It would be the fair thing to do. And Flossee was right. You need to be a better job of rigging it this time, LOL.

(back to story) I'm with Justin on not being one of Brian's conquests.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Thank you for all the comments on this story!  That is very considerate of you.;)  And thank you for your comments regarding the challenge in general; I really appreciate the support and you taking the time to do that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 08:06 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

This was one great ride on the waves. Loved the pics posted throughout the story. Glad everything worked out for them. Great fic.

Author's Response:

Hi, Jane!  Thank you for reading this story and for the comments, my friend.  I am glad that you enjoyed it.;)  When I was out in LA in June at Venice Beach, I kept imagining this in my head, so I guess you could say that was my inspiration.;)  I'm now wandering back to my (semi-regular) posting schedule - hopefully!  Thanks again for taking the time to read and leave me feedback; I am truly thankful.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc, the peeps, and the vocal three (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 05:57 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

YEAH!!! you are back. All of us (22) today are so happy-we can't begin to tell you how happy. We all gave you a toast with our coffee. Yippee!! God's in his heaven-alls right with world. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Hi, peeps and vocal three (why does that sound like a singing group for some reason?? - LOL!).  Yes, after 'talking' with Bob via email and reading the comments over on the challenge post, I decided to remain in the challenge.   I appreciate everyone's support so much; perhaps that was the one good thing that came out of yesterday.  I have hopefully reassured everyone that the voting will, indeed, be fair and untainted now. The poll will probably go up either Wednesday or Thursday; Bob is currently working on it. 

Thank you again, lindc, and everyone else (22? wow!) for all the encouragement.  And I'm glad the other three authors who were willing to withdraw from the challenge on my behalf now won't have to do that - that would have been a real shame. Thanks for everything. Tell Lee I hope he has a quick recovery. Sending my love out to all of you.  "Father, Son, and the Blond" will be updated in the next few days, but then tell Lee his favorite is up next - with the election results (finally!).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 09:21 AM · On: Cruel Summer

My friend, you look so much better with a little sunlight shining on ya...

Roni



Author's Response:

Thank you, Roni.  It feels much better to feel warmth on my face rather than the cold earlier.  Thank you, BTW, for what you said in that other post.  It meant a lot to me, especially coming from such a gifted writer as yourself.  Been a long day and I have to be up at 5:30 a.m., so off to bed, but THANK YOU for everything.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 09:09 AM · On: Wipeout

Brian's antics are just too adorable. And I must admit, I didn't quite get the Gidget analogy other than them both being cute. I was thinking of Sally Field, not Sandra Dee.

You romantic comedy well, but reading this I became nostalgic to read The Secret Admirer again. I get in my mood to do marathons sometimes and get distracted from the new stories. As a matter of fact, I never got my nap. The kid kept me up and now I can't sleep, but I can enjoy some fan fiction and catch up.

Okay, I'm rambling, which means I'm going to pass out soon. :)

Author's Response:

LOL! Well, whatever you do, don't start reading "Secret Admirer" then; you know how long THAT story is!!  You might even have to go all the way back to "Remember Me" if you're looking for the angst.;)  I'm heading off to bed myself. Thanks for all the wonderful comments, Sandra!  Hope you get some rest soon, too.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 08:30 AM · On: I Get Around

This story, so far, is the epitome of what I love about your stories. It is the playful banter and the unavoidable attraction for each other that reminds me of the classic romantic couples of the old black and white movies I still enjoy, plus you add the raw sexual undertones that are uniquely Brian and Justin.

I'm loving this!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad, Sandra! I haven't written a lighter story in a while, and I've missed it. There WILL be some angst here coming up, but hopefully it won't turn you off.  And you know I will get them straightened out.  Thank you so much for the comments and the support!  I appreciate that so much.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 06:30 AM · On: Catch a Wave, and You'll be Sitting on Top of the World

"Gidget." Loved the nicknaming. The stunt was cute too.

Author's Response:

I think Justin looks like a Gidget, don't you?:)  Don't worry, though; eventually he'll come up with a nickname for Brian, too.  Thank you fo reading, Sandra.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 06:18 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Loved this. Great ending.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lorie.  I appreciate you reading and leaving me feedback. So happy that you enjoyed this.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc, the peeps, and the vocal three (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 06:17 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Well thank you for the info on where to find out what happened to your story being in the running. Never mind, Kim, you are much better than the "SOMEONE" who thought you shouldn't be in the running, petty, small-minded, jealous people are everywhere. I thought this site promoted fairness, it seemed so til now. IU am having a hard time getting my head around this. As you have so much to do maybe you should give up this administration position. It seems like a thankless job for all you do. Just saying. Sorry, but we are all very upset about this turn of events. Just remember there are a lot of readers who love you and we are the first in line. lol

Author's Response:

Thank you  - all of you - for saying that.  I will leave it up to Bob to decide.  I am too much involved to make that decision, but I do not want to be the cause of someone else backing out, either.  If I did win, though, now I would feel like it was done out of pity.  Thank you for everything.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 05:29 AM · On: Surfin' USA

"Save any lives yet, Dudley Do-Right?"

HA! I love your Brian and Justin first meet scenes.

Author's Response:

That's a very lovely thing to say, Sandra. Thank you very much for that.  I think I needed that today.;)  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 05:19 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I was wondering why you were down in your answer to my review. You should be in this challenge as your story is the best. That being said if we can't vote for your story we will vote for the one you are co-writing with your Brazilian friend. Please let me know why you are not in the running. This is just bogus and rediculous. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc - I didn't actually write one with Fatima.  She had another story that I'm betaing for her that is not in the challenge. As for the reason why, there's another post on here under the fan fiction challenge announcement that explains it.  What a mess.  Thank you for your concern; that means a lot to me.  I am very upset by this whole thing, to say the least.  I just wish if people had concerns they would bring them out in the open so they could be addressed, instead of waiting until it's too late and winding up with this calamity instead.  Maybe I'm too thin-skinned for this job.  Thank you, lindc.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 04:58 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Kim, another fantastic love story comes to an end.
Jennifer standing up up Craig did my heart good. That all of them handled it, well like the grown ups they are was a bit surprising. Thought for sure Craig would have lost it.
I liked this Brian alot. Yeah, Justin is so.good for him.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend. You are very kind. Thank you for all the support; I am glad that you enjoyed it.  Brian might have been somewhat OOC here, but I found I couldn't write him any other way. Thank you for being such a consistant reader and for all the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 04:19 AM · On: The Warmth of the Sun

"Just watch out for the sharks, Baby,"

Love Emmett. I have to get some sleep before I can read more. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading this latest chapter, Sandra.  I hope you continue to enjoy it.  I couldn't resist putting Emmett in there as the surf shop clerk;  it was just too good a fit!  Thank you again for reading and for the comments.  I appreciate that very much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 03:56 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

* giggles * at the - do not disturb - sign.

 

Just read the last three chapters. Big thumbs up, great work and here is my little dance you like so much my * happy dance * . Very lovely story, Kim. thanks for writing.

 

But Kim please put your "challenge sun" back up. It's ridiculous that other think you would cheat because you're are a admin * head desk * this is only for fun and you must participate too. Why not !? * sigh *

 

* very very very big hug *



Author's Response:

Hi, Marny - thank you for the supportive comments and for reading.  I snickered at the "Do Not Disburb" sign, too (I had to slightly revise it so it was two males instead).  I am very upset about this whole thing TBH.  I really think if the story was placed back in the voting it would be tainted now as a sort of 'pity vote,' and I don't want that.  It's probably best to just leave it as is. Thank you, though.  *hugs* back  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 03:51 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Ahh - such a sweet happy ending ...  :)

As I said before, this story has everything in it that's needed for an amazing summerstory, I enjoyed every little bit. And not to forget those wonderful pictures! So - very well done !!!  Thanks for sharing, and good luck for the challenge !!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading and for the comments. It makes me happy to know that you enjoyed this story.  The photos took me forever to manipulate and post, but I do enjoy including them and I do think they added to the story. Thank you for the well wishes, also.  I hope you will enjoy some of my other stories.  Thank you for your kindness.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 03:00 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Hello, my dear Kim!

You got a great end to a great story. This story is one of the best I have ever read. It's amazing how you managed to unite love, hope, a little tension and very romantic.

I love to see Brian and Justin chase fight for your love, for a change. You made it so fabulous and so little time to do it. I loved every line.

A huge hug!

Fatima.

 



Author's Response:

Obrigado, Fátima, por seu apoio e para a leitura. Estou muito feliz que você tenha gostado dessa história. E obrigado por suas amáveis r03;r03;palavras sobre o desafio, bem como, e para que nele participam. * Abraços * ~ Kim

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 02:28 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Thank you for this great story. I was always fevering for the next chapter.

Now I'm looking forward to a new story written by you.



Author's Response:

Hi, Kathrin!  What lovely comments; thank you for reading.  I really do appreciate it, and it makes me happy that you enjoyed this one.  I will try to get a new story up one of these days.  I really want to try and concentrate, at least for now, on getting my WIPs finished.  Perhaps I can work on one in the background in the meantime.  I DO want to write a new Tricky story for the boys' wedding.  Thank you again for reading and taking the extra trouble to leave a review.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Kiddo (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 02:26 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

great story :-)

 

sorry for not reviewing more. i read most of it on my phone and writing a review with it didn't work...

 

now you spoiled us with your fast updates :-)

what comes next ;-) ?



Author's Response:

Hello, Kiddo - thank you sincerely for reading and for the comments; that means a lot to me and really lifts my spirits today.  I am working on the update to my co-written story right now ("The Father, the Son, and the Blond") and we hope to have that posted in the next few days.  Then it's an update to "My Heart's Desire." Thank you again for all the support, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 12:48 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I loved your story! Also in the last chapter what episode did the very last pic come from and also the picture of Justin, emmett and brian?



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend - thank you for the lovely comments.  I do appreciate that. The photo of Emmett, Justin, and Brian came from the episode in Season One when they were standing by Brian's car outside Babylon, and Craig came out to punch Brian out after the two had kissed.  It was from Episode 108.  And I'm sorry; I don't remember where the other one came from - it was early, probably Season 1 as well, and I believe inside Babylon.  I will try to find out and let you know.  Perhaps one of my readers can help as well.;)

Thank you for reading this story and for taking the time to comment.  I am very grateful.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 12:17 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

LOVE IT IT!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading this story and for leaving a comment; I really appreciate that!  It means a lot to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc, the peeps, and the vocal three (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:14 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

We ALL loooved this one right down to the last word. Everyone thought it was kick-ass and boss. Ha! The younger generation and their slang. Oh well! chops to you. I know you are probably wondering why LEE hasn't been reviewing--more bad news-didn't want to upset you until I had good news about his condition. He was rear-ended in town stopped for a light and someone as texting, not paying attention, and ran into him. Thank god they were not going too fast. 'V' in in the shop-don't know all the details on 'HER' condition yet. LEE is here recovering. He has a severe case of whip-lash and a concussion. I have taken a couple days off to be with him until he goes home. He is a bit disorientated and has some swelling in his head. Hopefuly the swelling will go down soon and he will be more functional. I just don't understand why all the s--t has to happen to this nice kid. I will keep you posted. The listeneners want to know how the voting goes for the summer challenge. Can anyone vote or just the writers here? lol

Author's Response:

Hello, lindc - thank you for all the kind words.  I appreciate that so much, and I'm glad that everyone enjoyed this story.  I am SO sorry to hear about Lee. That poor man has been through so much over the past year.  I don't understand.  But I think it shows his fortitude and strength as well. Tell him I send him my love and wishes for a speedy recovery.  I am so thankful that he wasn't seriously hurt.  Poor V - hopefully she can be repaired as well back to good-as-new status, but Lee's health is obviously the most important thing.

As far as the voting goes, it is open to everyone, but I'm not sure if you have to be a registered member on the site.  I do not think so, but I DO think you can only vote one time per computer. So if you are sharing one, you might all have to come to a 'consensus vote.' There are some wonderful stories for the challenge!  I hope you find one that you like.  Thank you and all your friends for the support you constantly give me, lindc; it is especially needed today. You are all very special to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: himawari29 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 08:54 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

oh babe.. I really love this story very, very much.. I love how Brian didn't even hesitate or flinch to say taht he love Justin in front of Justin's family. ahhhhh...*dreamy*

and I also like when there're no Deb, Lindsay, Melanie and most of all, Michael in this story. It's kind of like a world in peace without them interfere.  but I kind of miss Theodore though. Thought would read a bit about him, being an accountant for Brian at Kinnetic.

job well done dear.. congrats!

~hugs & kisses~



Author's Response:

Hello, Sue - thank you for reading this story and for your comments.  I couldn't help throwing in the "I Love You," even though Brian might never have really said it.  I almost put Ted in there as the comptroller, but finally decided it could work without him.  Thank you again for all the kind words; I appreciate that so much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 08:35 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

beautiful ending!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Julieta - I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.  I hope I can look forward to more entertaining stories from you.  I especially loved "Alien." Thank you again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 06:36 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I must say this to you Kim! I love all the pictures you included throughout the story. Although the story is already perfectly amazing but with your pictures in it made our imaginations more wildly in one page with the author and that's you. Thanks much for that sweetie! And honestly this “Great Outdoors” Summer Fan Fiction Challenge becomes a really Big challenge for the other great authors with your story in it. This is definitely a great contender! Do I still need to say Good luck? Coz I am sure you already have it all. {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy - thank you so much for all the comments and for reading.  I appreciate your comments more than you know, and it really lifts my spirits. I am happy that you liked this story. Thank you again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 04:37 PM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Wow this is an amazing story! I practically swallowed it in one gulp! So interesting, so perfect for the challenge. You are so great, thank you a lot! There are so many great stories, so hard to choose one, but anyway, I hope you will win!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sasha!  You are too kind with your comments; thank you for reading and for that wonderful feedback!  I am most appreciative and happy that you enjoyed it.:)  I have enjoyed reading all the new stories from the challenge, too.;)  Everyone should be thanked for their efforts, as well as all the readers who took the time to read them. Thank you again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 01:38 PM · On: Cherish is the Word...

Absolutely AMAZING!!!! 

And the pictures you included are even more amazing!

I would really love to see more of their lives......

Maybe a sequel?? ;0)))

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 10:18 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Im new to reading fanfics During this whole chapter all i was doing was giggling loved it d84;😃this is the first Fanfic I've read of yours. looking forward to reading the rest of your fanfics



Author's Response:

Hi, Tash! Thank you for reading this story and for all the lovely feedback!  Welcome to the site, also!  I am honored that you are interested in reading some more of my fics, and that you enjoyed this one.  I have a wide variety of types of stories, including some other humorous ones, that I hope you will like.

Thank you again for the comments!  That means a lot to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 10:12 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

The perfect conclusion.  Cynthia and Justin bonding.  Another look at Emmett.  Ms. Molly on her brothers side.  Mrs. Taylor standing up to Mr. Taylor and winning.  Brian confessing his love.  Like I said a perfect conclusion.



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend, for all the support you gave this story and for all the comments!  I am truly appreciative and humbled by that.  I tried to tie up all the loose ends as best I could (knowing that pesky deadline was breathing down my back!), and, of course, my 'short' epilogue ran amok as a result - ha!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you again for everything.  And looking forward to reading more of your OWN stories in the future.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 10:03 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Brian was very true to character here.  And Justin is so lucky to have him.  And, let's hear it for Molly!  All well done.

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend!  I will always think of our adventure together whenever I read this story over again. Thanks for all the comments and for reading.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:31 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

I love the do not disturb sign! LOL

Another happy ending.  I really enjoyed reading this story.  Wish it didn't end... :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I liked the 'Do Not Disturb' sign, too.;)  I had to modify it somewhat for the boys, though.;)  I can't think of a better compliment than a reader not wanting the story to end, so I thank you sincerely for reading and for all the feedback!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:15 AM · On: I Wanna Make it with You...

Hey Kim! It was good to see that things turned out rather well for our boys. Having Justin's parents accept his relationship with Brian was very important here.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Yes, I thought the parents needed to be included here as well to tie it all up. Thank you so much for reading this story, and for taking the time to comment so frequently.  That means a lot to me.  I'll be looking forward to the continuation of your own stories, also.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Julie (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2013 08:55 AM · On: Cruel Summer

Great story, Kim!  It was a fun read and the pictures were a surprise bonus!

Julie



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment, Julie!  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 02:35 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

I knew it! I love jealous Brian. 



Author's Response:

LOL! Your internet connection is back!:)  I'm working on the conclusion right now; my simple, little 'epilogue,' though, is now up to 6,700 words - yikes!  But I'm trying to end it!  I'd better, since it HAS to be done by 9.;)

Thanks for all the comments and for reading, Nikki! I appreciate that so much.  One more chapter to go!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2013 04:59 PM · On: Cherish is the Word...

Yayy awesome chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tash, for these latest comments and for reading. And thank you, too, BTW, for leaving so much feedback on this story.  I truly appreciate that. I will have the next (last) part up later today, and then readers will see an update to "Father, Son, and the Blond" next (it's almost ready). THEN (finally!) I'm moving back to "My Heart's Desire" for the election.

Thanks again for everything, Tash.  I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 01:58 PM · On: Cherish is the Word...

Thank you for making me so happy today. I been sad since the day they were apart. I was waiting for this chapter to come. And finally! Thanks much sweetie for this wonderful chapter! {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Awww...hi, Cindy! Well, your comments make ME happy, my friend.  I'm glad I could bring the boys back together; you knew that I would.;)  Will have the last part up later today. Thank you for all the support!  *Hugs back*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 11:16 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

Oh good I would like to see Justin's reaction to Brian's world and Brian's protective reaction to Justin

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to comment!  I will definitely be working on the last part today.  I have a few ideas where to go with the boys, but you know I will make sure they remain happy.;)  Will try to provide both types of scenarios you have in mind; I love a protective Brian, too.;)  Can't make it TOO long, though (which you well know is HARD for me - ha!), but I will see what I can come up.;)

 

Thank you again for everything, Chris!  It is so appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 10:23 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

Kim - this chapter made an absolutely perfect day even that much better - I'd have never thought that possible.

And the familiar pictures with a new backdrop to match your words...well...it's as if I am seeing each of these images for the first time - and feeling totally different feelings for each than I did with the original use of them, funny how perspective changes with situation.  Great addition to the story!

looking forward to the epilogue...is it possible that we might see Justin finally able to find a position using his talents and his passion...at Kinnitek? hmmmm - I wonder?

thanks for this story - it is one of my all-time favorites!



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle - aww...you don't know how happy your words make me, my friend!  I am so thrilled that you enjoyed the story.  I'm not sure I would put as many photos in other stories (what a lot of work! I won't even go into how much!), but I do love to do that, and I think it does add to the visiual aspect of the story.;)

I will be working on the epilogue today (obviously as I have to get it done by tonight!), and I have a few ideas where to take it.  Will just have to see where my muse goes, but rest assured I will keep the boys happy.;)

Thank you again for those very kind words, Charle; that means the world to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 09:54 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

Kim, this chapter can only be defined by one word: Perfect!

So exciting, so touching and so sweet, but at the same time warm and full of love that only Brian and Justin can give us and you transmit to us.

Love each line of this story is very sad and it is ending.

Congratulations dear for this great work!

A big hug!

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Olá, caro amigo.;) Suas palavras são muito encorajadoras para mim, assim como a sua amizade. Estou muito feliz que você está gostando dessa história! E eu estava feliz por finalmente trazer os garotos de volta juntos. Eu vou estar trabalhando no epílogo mais tarde hoje só para mostrar onde os meninos estão agora. Estou tão feliz que você gostou deste! Eu vou estar olhando para a frente, também, para trabalhar com você em suas próprias histórias. * Abraços * ~ Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 08:41 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

I am so glad that they got that they got that talk out of the way.  I was worried that they wouldn't be able to get out of the cave in time.  Especially after that HOT sex.  Brian has come up with a perfect solution and  I can't wait to see how you tie it all up.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, my dear!  LOL!  Well, it's a good thing it was low tide.  Maybe they should have taken a surfboard in with them in case they got carried away and had to paddle out - ha!  I almost blushed myself at that one manip I did.;) 

So glad that you have been enjoying this! That makes me very happy. Thank you for all the constant feedback and for reading; I greatly appreciate that.  I will have one more part to this tomorrow sometime. Thank you again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 08:39 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

Perfection my dear Kim, sheer perfection. :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  You are too kind. Thank you for all the comments on this story!  I will have a short bit more to go before it's all said and done.  Thank you again for all the support, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 08:22 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

Brian finally gets a chance to express himself.  Never easy for him to do, but nicely done here.  

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend.  I always find Brian a challenge to write, but I'm glad you approve. Thank you for taking the time to read and for all the comments!  Will have a short "what happened to them later" epilogue sometime tomorrow to wrap it up. Thank you again.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2013 08:12 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

This was just the best story-one of your top three I feel. Epilogue will be great. Always nice to get to the what happened after scenario. I am off today so will read Sunday nite. Maybe the eppi will be up then. You need to have them do a Christmas contest too. Had spring and summer now we need a holiday one. Don't you think? lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! Well, that is high praise from you, considering how many stories of mine that you have read.  Thank you for that!  I feel an epilogue would be good to see how the boys are doing, say, six months or more down the road, so I will be working on that tomorrow.  Hopefully I won't get TOO carried away so I can meet the deadline!  It could stand as is, but I think it needs just a little more.:)

As for a Christmas fan fic challenge, that sound great!  They're a lot of work for several people, but I think most readers - and writers - would say it's been a successful one this time (well, both times, IMO).  I appreciate everyone who has contributed, whether writing a fic or reading it. Thank you for all the support, lindc!  Hope you enjoy the last part tomorrow.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2013 07:46 AM · On: Cherish is the Word...

I love happy endings!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Julieta!  I have perhaps an epilogue to go yet.  Hope you have continued to enjoy this story, and I didn't disappoint you. Thank you for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 03:12 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

We both know they need to give each other a second chance, and open up their hearts to one another... Loved it!

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Aww..thank you, Kathleen!  I do appreciate all of your support.;)  I am working feverously right now on the last part, and I can say they ARE talking - and maybe doing something else (wink, wink).  I will get this posted just as soon as I can - definitely before the all-important deadline! Thank you for all the feedback; that means the world to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 01:10 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

Hello, Kim!

Great meeting! To whom does relationships, Brian and lose all reason when jealousy strikes.

Poor Liam, was caught near Justin, trying to help and did not realize the danger.

Brian, this time will have to apologize. This is virtually unheard of.

I hope the conversation. I'm believing it will be a must.

A big hug, my dear friend!

Fatima.

 

PS: The title of Chapter 14 is the name of my favorite song by the Rolling Stones, along with Sympathy for the Devil. I have some pretty weird tastes.

 



Author's Response:

Olá, Fátima! Bem, eu não tenho certeza se Brian vai vir a público e emitir essas palavras difíceis ("Lamento"), mas ele vai ter que fazer algumas explicações sobre por que ele fez o que fez no resort quando ele saiu tão abruptamente. Esperemos que Justin vai entender. Eles irão certamente fazer um monte de falar no próximo capítulo. Estou furiosa trabalhando nisso agora.

E você está correto sobre o Capítulo 14. Todos os capítulos são de títulos de músicas, e esta foi tirada da canção dos Rolling Stones dos anos sessenta. Essa é uma das minhas músicas favoritas também. :) Muito astuto!

Obrigado por todo o apoio, Fátima, e por sua bondade. Eu vou pegar o resto desta publicado em breve. * Abraços * ~ Kim

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 07:24 PM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

That damn Irish temper of his! He owes Liam a big big apology.
One kiss and Justin's a goner. Make him work for it baby.

Author's Response:

LOL!  Don't worry - he's going to have a long chat with Brian in this next chapter before he just succumbs to his charms again.  I'm working on the last part now - maybe one more chapter and then an epilogue to wrap it up. Thank you for sticking with me!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 10:39 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

Ah, jealousy.  Always fuel for a fire.  Brian was certainly hot.  Hotter than I'd expect, but I guess he has been pining for quite a while.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Well, I guess he had been missing his Sunshine just a little too much and didn't want to share.;)  Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment!  I'll have the rest of this up something this weekend before it's put to bed.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BB (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 09:14 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

Thought I would have a chat with my extraordinary friend. I have been very reticent reviewing as lindc has been the spokesperson for all of us. I have been off for a few days-very run down. So busy here not much time to relax. This story is very refreshing. I like the scenerio very much as I enjoy surfing immensely. I have had to up my B12. It's good for the ole brain to keep it well. I imagine your schedule is very full also what with teaching, doing your beta work and making note worthy banners for your friends among other things. Keep yourself well, we want you around for a long time.(pardon the pun). lindc is talking about having a child. Shhhh! You didn't hear it from me.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  You are so thoughtful to take time to send me your thoughts!  I'm sorry to hear that you haven't been feeling 100%; I'm not surprised with everything that you do.  You take care of yourself too, my friend!  Lindc is always telling me that you work way too hard.  And BTW, I didn't hear a thing, but something tells me she would make a wonderful mother.;)

I will post the rest of this by the time the deadline is here on Sunday. And then it's (finally!) back to Lee's favorite and election night!

Thank you for writing, Brian!  You're pretty extraordinary yourself.;)  Sending my love back to you.  Get some much-needed and deserved rest!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 08:44 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

Mad dog Kinney strikes again lol

I am thoroughly pleased that Brian and Justin had the good sense to talk to each other and try to work things out.

Justin shouldn't forgive his actions so easily, but getting to the real root of Brian's anger will offer up a sort of understanding.

Author's Response:

Hi,Tamara!  Well, I thought Brian, of course, would jump to conclusions, but he wanted to see Justin so badly, I don't think he would want to go anywhere until he can hopefully reconcile with him.  That being said, as you mentioned they will need to do some talking and decide what they want to do with their lives, and how they can remain together, before they patch things up.

Thank you as always for reading and for the feedback, Tamara!  I am very grateful.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc &all (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 08:33 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

Well, three of us said by the water, soooo we decided to pool our money and have a bbq on the beach. Hopefully we can get a day off together at sometime soon. Loved this chapter they are so cute together-love the way you write them. I hope you win this challenge, it's the best. Yes, I know, I am very biased. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc, peeps, and vocal three (and any others!).  Well, you were right about the water; just a different locale than the resort.;)  The boys will have some talking to do (if Brian can stop kissing him long enough!). But something tells me they will work through it somehow. I almost wish I had more time to write a little more indepth about their lives afterward, but I do plan on an epilogue.  Just have to get it all wrapped up before the Sunday deadline!

Thank you for all the lovely comments.  Been feeling a little down in the dumps the past few days, so that really lifts my spiritis. Tell everyone I said hello and I send them my gratitude and my love.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 08:30 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

This turned out rather well.  Brian didn't see something and storm out without getting an explanation.  Thank goodness.  It's not only Justin who wants to hear him out,  I want to hear Brian out too.  Love the pics you picked and the backgrounds, but I've noticed spaces in the story and I'm wondering if there should be pics in them.  I'd hate to miss out  on your hard work!!!  This is just soooo romantic.



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear - I appreciate all the support you've given me for this story; thank you for that.  As for the gaps, I went in and looked at the chapter, and didn't see any gaps.  Do you mean just spaces where it looks like photos should be?  If so, when I open it up, I don't see that.  I do see the photos that I put in there.  I have four (?) altogether.  If you're not seeing them, I"m not sure why that's happening.  Hopefully, though, those are the gaps you are referring to, and I don't have some gap in the story text itself.

Thank you again for all the comments!  I will post the rest as soon as possible.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 08:26 AM · On: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

sigh...well now that that's drama over, we can go back to Brian winning back the love of his life!



Author's Response:

Hi, Julieta - as always, I am grateful to you for reading and for the comments.  There will be a little more where the boys try to piece their lives back together, and probably an epilogue before I'm done.  I hope it continues to hold your interest. Thank you again for all the support.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ZZ (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2013 07:54 AM · On: Paint It Black

THIS STORY HAS THE WOW FACTOR. PICTURES ADD AN EXTRA POW. I ESPECIALLY LIKE THE VW. THAT IS WHAT I AM DRIVING AT THE PRESENT.

Author's Response:

Hello, my friend.  Thank you for reading this story and for your lovely comments; I appreciate that so much.  Quite a coincidence that you are driving a similiar car!  I thought it would be an appropriate choice for our blond little artist.:) Thank you for taking the time to leave me feedback.  I just posted the next part; I hope you continue to enjoy it.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2013 02:48 AM · On: Paint It Black

this is absolutely the most perfect story ever...and there is no one in the QAF/fanfiction world I trust more than you (you even got me loving the 'little farm story' that I now love just as much as the others) lol ...

...so there is no doubt in my mind that you are going to fix the heartbreak Brian's inaccurate conclusions are going to cause any minute now...

loving life - and loving this story!!!

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle - I always appreciate your kindness and your support. Thank you for reading this story and for your confidence in me.  And yes, you know me well; I will not allow them to languish apart forever; these boys belong together!  I'll try to post the next part tonight; have a few things I need to do first.  At any rate, it WILL be done by the deadline; I do hope you continue to enjoy it, Charle.  Thank you again.

*Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 09:30 PM · On: Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Oh, so sneaky, Brian.  Getting Em to help you out.  Shame on you!  LOL.

I like that Craig is not as much as an a-hole as he was in the show and that MomJen seems to be more supportive of Justin having a love life.

Hope to get to another chapter later.  At least I can catch up after Sunday.  Duh, I just thought of that!

Enjoying the romance of the boys.  Nice build and sexual tension!

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response:

Hi, Laura - thanks for your latest comments; happy that you are enjoying this story.  Yes, I may have to work like a dog, but I have to get this all wrapped up by Sunday night.  No more extensions this time!  Probably just as well.;)  Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks again for taking the time to leave me feedback; I really do appreciate that.  *Hugs* ~Kim

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