Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Loss
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

I felt Brian's pain when he thought his Sunshine was gone forever. Loved this story and it is now one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment.

I feel very honored to have one of my stories among their favorites. Thank you!

A big hug!

Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2016 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

What a beautiful story.  And the characters were so believable.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I am very happy that the story and the characters seem believable to you. This is very important to me.

Thank you for your comment.

Umgrande hug, Fatima.


Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2015 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

First time for me - reviewing every story I read by an author simply because they are so good and so well written. Well done once again, this was lovely.



Author's Response:

Thank you, my dear!
You were so kind to read all my stories and comment on them. It makes me much honored.
Much and thank you for your kindness. It makes me very happy.
A big hug, Fatima.

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

You know how much I love this story already. It was one of the earlier ones that I had read and I have come back to read it a few times. But you deserve comments. You deserve all the comments! It just a beautiful tale and thank you for writing it :)

 

Hugs! -  Anne



Author's Response:

 

Thank you Anne! I love comments and am very happy with your comments on the my stories.

I am very happy and honored to know that one of my stories are among their favorite stories.Thank you for letting me know. 

I love your stories and hope with anxiety your updates.

A big hug, my dear!

Fatima.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2015 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

Hi, Fatima! For some reason I’ve only found this beautiful story just now. I’m glad I have, because it’s simply wonderful!

I didn’t expect the news to be so terrible… I can’t even imagine what Brian went through during those painful, scary moments, in what kind of hell he’s been. It must be agonizing – he was just sitting in his loft, a place Justin has just left, and a few moments later his entire world has collapsed. You described Brian’s reaction beautifully, those raw emotions, that pain and terror, desperation… I understand why Michael was afraid to leave him – I was, too.

When Justin has re-appeared, I couldn’t breathe for a moment, it was an ethereal moment, one that I won’t forget any time soon! You showed in a perfect way how much love both Brian and Justin have for each other, how desperately they were to finally hold each other again. I loved it, I enjoyed every moment of their reunion.

Thank you! And I hope you’ll have a fantastic new year!)       



Author's Response:

Oh Katrin!

I'm sorry for being slow to respond to you, but real life has been confused these days.

Much and thank you for this wonderful review.

When you told me that was reading my stories I was very excited about it.

And now I am very happy and proud to receive a comment so wonderful yours.

I was so happy with their very kind words and to know that you liked my story.

You could perfectly understand what I wanted to express with the story.

I wanted to demonstrate the irreparable loss of Justin to Brian. He had just lost the love of his life and I wanted to portray the pain and emptiness that he would feel the absence of Justin in his life.

I'm very happy that I was able to show how I see the depth of love that unites Brian and Justin for you. And even happier when you say you will not forget the moment when Justin returns to the loft. This is a scene I really liked writing because I pretty much saw it happen while writing the story.

Thank you, my dear again.

A big hug, Fatima.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2014 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

That was the perfect way to wake up drinking my extra strong coffee...

Thanks Hon ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Glad to have helped you appreciate their extra strong coffee, reading my story. How I wish Justin had just returned from the airport (of course the plane need not have fallen and killed many people) and  Justin realized how much it was unreal and meaningless to try a career in NY with only a favorable article in a magazine of arts under the arm, no experience and no training. This solution found by CowLip to separate Brian and Justin gets to be ridiculous. 

Thanks Kathleen, for reading and commenting on my stories. 

A big hug, my darling! 

Fátima.

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2014 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

Great!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Snow! 

For reading and commenting on my history. I'm very glad you liked it. 

A big hug! 

Fátima.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2014 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

What a wonderful story you wrote - I have just read it multiple times.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jane! 

 

I am very happy with all your comments and even happier that you have enjoyed this story to the point of reading it several times. It makes me very happy. Thank you! 

 

A big hug, my dear! 

Fatima.


Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2014 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

I love this so much. Cried along with Brian, thinking Justin was dead. So relieved when he opened the door.

Author's Response:

Thanks Lorie, for the comment. I'm sorry for the tears. I'm very glad you liked my story. 

Hugs! 

Fatima

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2013 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

I reay want there to be a sequel to this. 



Author's Response:

Hello Shauna!

You have liked the story to the point of asking for a sequel makes me very happy!

It's something I've been considering, but at the moment I'm not too disponibiladade time to do it.

Maybe the sequel takes a listen, but I intend to do it.

Thank you for your comment.

A big hug!

Fatima.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

I really loved this.... for a moment there I thought that Justin had really gotten into the plane.... ¬¬ but I'm glad that he didn't.... Now a sequel would be perfect, I hope you consider it! :D Anyway, hope to read you soon! Kisses!



Author's Response:


Hello, Mafita!
I was very glad you liked the story.Sorry for the moment of concern.As for the sequel,

I've been writing some stories post 513, where the boys are always together (because only in this way that I can see them), but I can think of a sequel in the future.

Thank you!

Kisses!

Fatima.

Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2013 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

Very nicely done!



Author's Response:

Hello, Taurus!
Thank you for your comment. I am very glad you liked my story.
A big hug!
Fatima.

Reviewer: crazykitty (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2013 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

great



Author's Response:

Hello, Crazykitty!

I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for your comment.
A hug!

Fatima.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2013 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

What a wonderful story and the ending was gratifying. So many of the stories here are not quite so romantic. I loved it. Hope you write many more along this same vein.

Author's Response:

Hello, Linda!

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
Thank you for your lovely comment.

A big hug!
Fatima.

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2013 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

That was amazing. Imagine if that had really happened in the show.
It would have been the perfect ending. A bad scare, and THAT happy end!

Really and truly PERFECT! Thanks for that story!

Diana



Author's Response:

Oh, Diana!

This really made r03;r03;me very happy. I so wanted to end the show with Brian and Justin together consugo not get used to the end of Cowlip.

Thank you for your comment!
A big hug!
Fatima.







Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

I was already scared that Justin is seriously off. I do not do this!
Very nice story. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Hello, Saskya!Thank you for your attention to my stories and make your dear comments.
I am in love with the image of r03;r03;Brian and Justin together and they hardly remain separate so definitive in my stories (unfortunately, I did it a few times).
Thank you!A hug!Fatima.    

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

This was fantastic. I thought I died along with Justin when Brian heard the news. And Brian wailing! My pain was his until Justin walked in the door. Great work.

Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you, balrogtweety!I'm so happy with your comment!
I have a big problem accepting the episode 513 and this story was like a catharsis for me.I wanted Brian had a small glimpse of what your life would be without Justin.
Thank you for reading the story and have left this comment so kind.
A big hug!Fatima.    

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2013 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

That was so intense and touching! thank you!



Author's Response:

Hello, Andromeda!
I am very grateful for your words.
I'm glad you have given your attention to read the story, you have enjoyed and given a bitof your time to leave a comment. Thanks for that!
A hug!
Fatima.    

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2013 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

That certainly had my hair standing on end in the beginning but it's laying flat now!  Whew - what a ride...thank God Justin turned around!  I may have had a stroke.  I just love love love your happy ending, thank you!  Great story! 



Author's Response:

Hello, Jane!

If it depends on me Brian and Justin will nearly always have a happy ending.
I am in love with the two together and I can not keep them apart.

Sorry for the scare. But, I wanted to cherish the love of Brian Sunshine realizing what might miss.

Thank you!
A big hug!
Fatima

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2013 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 My life without you.

Oh, my. This is so wonderful and a bit deja vu! Thank you so much for this...

The image of Brian wailing in pain is so heartwrenching. And the shock when he sees Justin walk in the door! Love it all...

Thank you.

Roni



Author's Response:

Wow, Roni, much, and thank you!

I'm very, very happy when I receive a comment as beautiful as this. Especially when it comes from an author whose stories I like both.

I wanted to make the experience a little Brian feeling the loss of Justin (in Brazil is said to only give value to what we lost). So I wanted to give Brian a glimpse of it.

Thank you!
A big hug!
Fatima

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