Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For SODOM & GOMORRAH
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2020 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 5

did read it again

Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2019 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Best ever!!!!

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 5

Good work

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Love vidio

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 2

LOL

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2017 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

i really enjoyed this story, love the time that Brian states his love for Justin even if Justin doesn't know it lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading it.  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: puanani (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2014 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

i enjoyedreading

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2013 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

The way you write Brian being protective to Justin is so moving.  I love this story so much and your one about Justin being attacked.  This was very funny too.

Reviewer: MEI (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2013 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

This chapter is so dirty it is hard to read but I have again.

Reviewer: MEI (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2013 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

I just love love love this chapter.  I have read it so many times.

Reviewer: MEI (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2013 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story and this chapter so much.  I lost count on all the times that I've read it.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 5

I really like Brian in this chapter becausae he was standing up for his man.  I really love this story.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

I did like this.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love the happy ending.  This is my second time reading this story and it is so interesting.  Your stories are like rides at a fair and they twist you all around and I like that.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

This is a big twist and the story has changed from funny to serious.  I really like this.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

This chapter was so explicit but I enjoyed the read.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is so funny.  I read it before and decided to leave comments on each chapter theis time.  You are one of my favorite writers.

Reviewer: Fergie (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2013 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start.

Reviewer: Fergie (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2013 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great story and I'm not just feeding you bs.  Very well written and the characters are the same from the show.

Reviewer: Fergie (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2013 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

Brian gives a damn.

Reviewer: Fergie (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2013 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

His acting was off.  Brian is a better bad waiter.

Reviewer: Fergie (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2013 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

Incredible scene that only Brian could invent.

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

Brian is so hot when he's protecting Justin.  This story made me laugh and blush and then angry for Justin.  You are a very good writer.  I really mean that.  You write such h different kinds of stories.  That's a good writer.

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

I couldn't believe this chapter.  You cm do funny and raunchy and its so good.  I almost felt like I was in the room and it felt so personal.  

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Funny.

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

I laughed so hard during this chapter.  I had my hands on my face because I COULDN'T BELIEVE HOW WILD THE PARTY WAS.

Reviewer: female reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2013 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

I think that you write the best Brian.  He's so true to character which makes it enjoyable to read.  I would let him be snarky with me and won't complain.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2013 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

I loved the bit about horseback riding and the diner scene was hilarious again.

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.  The sex scene was my first lengthy one and I wasn't sure it was too much, I appreciate the feedback.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2013 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Loved it. I went to a restaurant yesterday with service that was not much better and a waiter who wasn't as good to look at. I would have tipped better if he looked like Gal.

Author's Response:

It is a funny vid of Gale.  It seems you can put up with a lot if the scenery is hot.

Thanks for reading and commenting,

Laura

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2013 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 5

I really liked your story... and I always love Overprotective Brian.... Oh! And I loved the video you posted!:D Thanks to Predec2 indeed! ^-^ Anyway, I hope to read you soon in another story.... Kisses!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.  I love an overprotective Brian, too.  It's kind of hoooottt!  LOL.  The video was just so serenditpitous, what luck, and I couldn't thank Kim enough.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.  I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2013 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 5

Wow this fic certainly didn't end up where I thought it was going to go.  I loved how Brian handled Aaron.  A fic showing a protective and loving Brian, without a predictable plot, is an absolutely pleasure to read.  Thank you for the very well written, enjoyable entertainment. 

Cheers 



Author's Response:

Big hug to you for the lovely comment.  You put a smile on my face after a horrible day!  Thanks for hanging in there with this story, your support has so appreciated.

All the very best to you!

Laura

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2013 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great story. Great writing. Love how Brian is so protective of the ones he loves so much.
Some people need to learn that you don't fuck with Brian Kinney and you don't fuck with what belongs to him.

Author's Response:

Love your last sentence: "Some people need to learn that you don't fuck with Brian Kinney and you don't fuck with what belongs to him."  So well said! 

Thanks so much for hanging in there with this story and for your comments.  I really can't thank you enough, just know that it is truly appreciated!

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2013 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think you need to add/warn that there is some BDSM in the story.



Author's Response:

Done.



Author's Response:

Done.

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2013 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

You so need to write a sequel to this. I want to see if Aaron does anything more. I love a Brian that protects Justin.

Not a fan of the Dom/Sub context.

The first chapter was hilarious! I laughed so hard.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words.  I'm sorry you found the D/S so offensive.  You know, it never occurred to me that somewhat would find it offensive, hey - I get that feeling.  I'm really impressed and humored that you stuck it out to the end.  I really appreciate that, thanks so much.

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, especially since you pointed something out.  I took your suggestion and included that there are "BDSM references" in the description of the story.

All the very best,

Laura



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words.  I'm sorry you found the D/S so offensive.  You know, it never occurred to me that somewhat would find it offensive, hey - I get that feeling.  I'm really impressed and humored that you stuck it out to the end.  I really appreciate that, thanks so much.

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, especially since you pointed something out.  I took your suggestion and included that there are "BDSM references" in the description of the story.

All the very best,

Laura



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words.  I'm sorry you found the D/S so offensive.  You know, it never occurred to me that somewhat would find it offensive, hey - I get that feeling.  I'm really impressed and humored that you stuck it out to the end.  I really appreciate that, thanks so much.

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, especially since you pointed something out.  I took your suggestion and included that there are "BDSM references" in the description of the story.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2013 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

Loved it! I thought that Brian was pretty scary!!! You could do such a great "mafia Brian" etc. I really enjoyed your story thank you, that was really novel!!!! please keep writting!!!!!



Author's Response:

Many, many thanks for reading and commenting, your kind words are very appreciated!  Glad you liked a tough Brian and a mafia Brian is a great idea.

I really appreciate you hanging in there with this story, it was very kind of you.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2013 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

great final chapter! way to go Brian :)



Author's Response:

Snow,

Thanks for the kind words and sticking with the story.  Your comments were SO appreciated!

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

Epilouge please *hopeful eyes*

Author's Response:

Jassepoet,

I can't thank you enough for sticking with the story and commenting.  Being a writer yourself, you know the comments are nourishment for our creative souls. 

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

A million times incredible! I enjoyed this alot. More when you can darling ~ Yvonne xx



Author's Response:

This was my first full and fleshy sex scene.  Had a good number of readers but the comments were few... I don't know why.  What is the message behind the silence?  Maybe I won't be doing any more sex scenes.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2013 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Hahaha I never get tired watching Gale here :)



Author's Response:

It's a great video and it was kinda freaky for me that it came out write after I wrote the story.  But in a good way.

Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2013 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hahaha this is really funny, I was laughing alot at

“Oh!  Brian?  Is that you?  Where… where did you come from?”  Brian’s mood shifted down a notch and his sarcastic charm took over.  “My mother’s twat.”

actually I laughed during most of it, this is very funny Laura :)

Huge Hugs - Yvonne xx



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting.  You are such a dear.  I really, really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2013 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Laura,

I think the first chapter of this hilarious!! I love Brian as a waiter, and I was laughing so hard at

“Okay, now listen up; I only want to say this once.  If I have to repeat myself, you won’t like it.  Write down what you want to eat and drink on this piece of paper.  I want a clean, bulleted list, not a fucking running narrative of your Christmas vacation when you were a fucking seven-year-old twat. 

 

Then, one of you – just one of you - get up and go behind the lunch counter over there,”  Brian pointed to the lunch counter, “and get everyone’s drinks and bring them back to this table.  Don’t fuck around over there, get your shit and get back here!  Oh, and grab some silverware and napkins for your table.  You have three minutes until I get back.  Don’t fuck with me and don’t keep me waiting.”

 

Love it - Yvonne xx



Author's Response:

Yvonne,

Thank you so much for reading.  I love you to bits for it.  So glad it made you laughed.  The saddest thing is to write something that no one laughs at.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2013 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

Pony play sounded very hot. Brian really doesn't know how good he has it with his adventurous partner. Michael, royal ass. Take Justin to NY Brian.

Author's Response:

I hope you like th porny pony scene, it was a challenge.  I agree with you, Brian really doesn't know how good he has it with Justin! 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate the support.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jay123 (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

good porn scene,don't be upset.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind, supportive words.  It was my first porny scene of some length, so you're bolstering my flagging ego.

Thanks so much for reading.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jay123 (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

funny



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

More please :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I hope you liked it.  I'm not sure how it reads, I'm getting some interesting comments and I'm not sure if they're all good.  LOL.

Oh well. 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

Thank you for updating! I need a cold shower...Looking forward to see Brian's ideas, I am sure they will be decadent...



Author's Response:

XOXO - I'm sooooo glad you like it.  You did, didn't you?  LOL.  It was my first real, in-depth, racy scene and I wasn't sure how it would read and be recieved.  I can't thank you enough of reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

k4;kl9;kl3;k2;n3; l0;l9;m0;l6;ll0;n3;!! m3;l6;m5;km0;l9;n3; km7;k!!!



Author's Response:

I don't know what that means... I hope it's good.  It's the first really racy scene that I've ever written to that extent... I hope you liked it.

Thanks,

Laura

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 4

Nice.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I really mean it.  I'm not getting a lot of comments, so each one that I recieve is highly valued.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

hahaha! I could just see Justin throwing a fork at him! lol



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed it!  Things just pop into your head, you know, and you go with it.  I could see him doing it, glad you could, too.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh so decadent! Yeeeeeee Haw! TAG



Author's Response:

I hope you liked it.  I've never written "blue" to that extent, I was so anxious.  And actually, the fic is being read but I'm not getting that many comments, it makes me wonder. So, I really value the few that I'm getting.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I sincerely mean it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 4

So glad to see an update to this, and to find out that it's longer than three chapters (don't know where I got that number from, actually! LOL!).  Loved Brian's line about wanting to take up horseback riding, but not sure Justin appreciated it. 

Looking forward to the rest of this, Laura.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

Yes, it was supposed to be 3 chapters but the last one was so long, I cut it in half.  I loved writing Brian a little bit on the snarky side.  I hope you liked the chapter. 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I REALLY appreciate it!

All the best, my friend!

Laura

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2013 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 2

only Brian.......



Author's Response:

Yeah, only Brian... LOL

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2013 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is hilarious!!!

I was having a bad evening but this just erased all that!

Totally enjoying it.



Author's Response:

So glad it turned your evening around.  Thanks for sharing that, you made my day! 

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response:

So glad it turned your evening around.  Thanks for sharing that, you made my day! 

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2013 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

OMG that's hilarious.  Bad waiter Brian v Bad waiter Gale.  I think bad waiter Brian will make more tips.   Thanks for posting the link.

Cheers



Author's Response:

I totally agree with you, I think Brian would probably make more tips.  LOL.  What a hoot, this video.  So glad you enjoyed it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2013 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

I was told by a friend this was here and to watch it. I did. My God what a funny piece. Never any end to the man's talent. I wonder if he did this for fun? Kim if you read this-you are a finder of priceless joy for the readers here, especially all the Gale lovers. lol

Author's Response:

What a wonder surprise, Kim/Predec2 got a tweet from Gale that it was out there.  It's popping up everywhere, all over the QAF fandom. So glad you enjoyed it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Linda, Couldn't get on LJ, but watched it here. I absolutely loved it.

"All Hail to KIM"!

Brian may have been a bad waiter, but he was still a bossy one! :)

Much Love and Hugs, Cathy



Author's Response:

Cathy,

I was just so gob smacked!  Couldn't believe it.  So I now have a banner (my first) with fic and a video! LOL! I just posted the video at my LJ blog (the first time ever posting a video!!!).  It's popping up everywhere, all over the QAF fandom.  I loved it and this was such a brilliant find on Kim's part.  She got a tweet from Gale stating that it was out there. 

So glad you enjoyed it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is soooo wrong , but so funny. Maybe Brian really should open his own place. Thanks for the video .

Author's Response:

Who would you rather waiting on you: Gale's character in "Cafe Attitude," the video or Brian in the fic?  LOL.  What a choice, right?  But, anything with Gale/Brian is fun.

So glad you enjoyed the fic and video, thanks for reading/watching and commenting.  I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Would go there all the time just to be near him.

Author's Response:

If Gale really worked there, yes indeedy!  Even if the food was processed chicken bits on white bread.  LOL! 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2013 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

love! love! love! love!



Author's Response:

Me too! Me too! Me too! Me too!  LOL

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Thanks for posting this. It goes perfectly with your story. And, I didn't even really hate the beard in this -it went with the attitude so nicely. Very funny! TAG



Author's Response:

So glad you got a kick out of it.  I was gob smacked when Kim sent it to me.  I couldn't believe it.  Too cool for school!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2013 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

What a riot! Where did you ever find that? It must be recent as he still has the bandage on his finger. Funny and quite appropriate and in sync with your story. Kim's the best.

Author's Response:

Kim found it.  She got a tweet about this afternoon, went to the site, and voila!   She said that she may have seen an obscure tweet about it about a month ago, but never but 2 and 2 together until today's tweet.  I think it's just so surreally (is this a word, LOL) cool, what are the chances! 

 

Hi, Linda - Gale himself actually tweeted the link to it earlier today.  About a month or so ago, the chef featured in the video by the name of Ludo Lefebvre posted a still photo from it, but until someone mentioned it today I didn't put two and two together.:)  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

They must have read your story and decided they had to change it a bit for copy right infringement purposes. 



Author's Response:

LOL.  What a hoot, talk about surreal!  This is not the first time something like this has happended to me.   I have a True Blood fic that I'm writing and people swear - for real- that the writers are using it for the series.  Things I've written show up in the following season's  storyline.  They've counted 15 plot and character similarities that are so out of the ordinary, that it defies everyday explanation.  I say 'send me the royalty checks!'  LOL!  I guess there's no original ideas left, they just kept circling the globe and pop up every now and then, making us think they're original.

I got a kick out of the video, glad you did to!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Video Of Gale As A Bad Waiter!!!

Gaw, that was hilarious.



Author's Response:

It was surreal for me.  And, funny as hell!

 

Reviewer: Jay123 (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2013 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

great imagination



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words and for reading and commenting.  I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jay123 (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2013 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Funny as hell.  Great writer.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much for the high praise, I really appreciate it!

Thanks for reading and writing.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

Sodom and Gomorrah; I was wondering how such a solemn biblical refer of two cities condemned, for their homosexual activities, would be referred to in such a light-hearted fic; I like how you did it.   I love the sock thing with the phones, that's clever.  An after-dinner mint, what a party favor, even if it did cost ten dollars.  LOL  I love how you are bringing things into this fic that aren't rehashed ideas.  Very clever and very funny.  Hurry back.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Hi Flossee,

Oh my gosh, your words were so 'wow.'  Thanks so much, comments like that invigorate and motivate.  I really appreciate your kindness and support.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I sincerely mean that.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: randy4me (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2013 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

So much fun was had Laura,

Waiter Brian, one of my favorite Brians ever!

I loved that I had no idea what would happen next ...

I loved what happened next!

Ponies haha !

great details, like matching the cell phones to the socks, clever! and spot on Ted, he may own Jerk at Work but at heart he's still an accountant, "no it will cost us ninety dollars to sit here".

I also love that I get to read it before anybody else !! 

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2013 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

Brian Kinney was in his element, at his best. Fast worker if he got all that done I'm the two and a half hours Justin was gone.
What a fun read. Great job.

Author's Response:

Brian works in mysterious ways, and he's fast, too.  LOL.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2013 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh, my! What a clever devil you are! I loved Brian "hanging out"... LOL And my head was spinning at the pace of it all! Funny and so very original!

Thanks so much for the fun..

Roni



Author's Response:

Hi Roni,

Glad you're enjoying the ride.  I reallly appreciate you for reading and commenting.

Thanks so much!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2013 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh . . . My . . . I knew it was a dangerous idea to leave Brian in charge of the diner, but I had no idea. . . Hilarious! TAG



Author's Response:

Yep, gotta agree with you, Brian left to his own devices is like unchaining a tiger.  Not a good thing by any stretch of the imagination... well, at least in this fic.  LOL.

Thanks so very much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2013 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

Only Brian fucking Kinney could pull off a stunt like this....lol

Author's Response:

Yes, Brian is a man of many talents... scary, huh?  LOL/

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2013 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

I don't think I'll ever be able to say the word pony again without this popping into my mind. I think the sock deal for cell phone ID was very unique. Good thing it was such a select group of hungry diners, if it had been open to the public I'm afraid they night have been too many identical white tube socks. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Lori

Author's Response:

The pony-tailed butt-plugged image does kind of stick in the brain... sorry about that.  LOL.  And you're right, white tube socks individuals would not be allowed in, unless they were part of the entertainmen. (Oh, that didn't sound good, did it?)

Thanks so much for reading and I really enjoy your comments.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2013 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 2

Well, I have to hand it to you, Laura; this has to be one of the most ingenious and funniest stories I have ever read.  I am enjoying it thorougly. And when Brian said he was just 'hanging out,' I laughed out loud.  The entire set up at the diner was amazingly written and very creative.  I'm going to recommend people come over and read this on my Twitter account.  What a hoot! Thanks for sharing it with us - glad to see you writing again.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

Wow that is some high praise indeed.  Coming from you, it really means something.  I've been such a fan of yours for sometime, so to have your support is invaluable. I don't know what to say other than thanks for all the kindness and support.  Oh, and thanks for reading and commenting; as you know, that's why we do it, we write to give joy and hope to receive words of support.   Yep, we're saints.  LOL.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2013 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 2

hahaha! that was awesome! :)



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2013 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh my, only Brian would make people pay 10 dollars for water LOL. I have to say that I have no idea where you are going with this story. Will they be consequences, like Aaron after that party? For once I have no clue, but I am enjoying it very much, thank you.



Author's Response:

Yep, $10 for a glass of water - and they paid it!  LOL.  So glad you enjoyed it.  Don't want to ruin the ending, but I promise our boys will live happily ever after. <wink>

Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2013 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi there! You had me laughing like a lunatic in public! Loved it! I love your Brian's sense of humour! I love also the fact that he is honest with himself. Thanks for this entertaining chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Laughing in public - fantastic!  Loved hearing that.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  That's what I long to hear when I write, that the fic made them laugh, smile, or...what's next... oh, I can't remember... I hate that.  LOL, just joking... not really, the brain is going, so sad.

Big hug of thanks for reading and commenting. 

All the best,

Laura 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2013 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

OMG!  This is one amazing chapter.  You have Ted and Emmett down perfect up to and including their reactions to the pony and his Master.  Now that's an idea I never would have thought of, so of course, Brian Kinney did.  Luckily it took Justin quite awhile to do his errends.  I have an uneasy feeling about Aaron, but that's mainly because of Justin's gut reaction to the man.  Next chapter please.



Author's Response:

Hi There!

So glad you liked the chapter.  Thanks so much for the kind words.  I'm hoping to post by the end of this next week.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh what an awful tease we are :) i can't wait to see what Brian's brilliant idea is

Author's Response:

Hi There!

I'll be posting soon, so the teasing won't go on too long.  :)   

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2013 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is great. Never went to a diner where I had to get my own stuff, get told what to eat and get to have the hottest waiter ever. I so want to go there. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Hi Lori,

Yes, Brian is a giver - he just gives, and gives, and gives.  I would love to have him as my waiter, too.  LOL.  I plan to update very soon.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2013 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

LMAO, that was AWESOME!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Snow,

So glad you liked it!  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2013 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

“...and get everyone’s drinks and bring them back to this table."

HAHAHA! Debbie trained him well.

Somehow you wrote asshole-Kinney as loveable. So far, he has gone through great lengths to spend quality time with his Sunshine.

Love it!

Author's Response:

Hi There!

Yep, I do believe that Brian is a aXXhole with a heart.  I agree with you on all your points especially that he will go to great lenghts for his Sunshine.  And in the next chapter, he'll even go further. <wink>

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I mean that sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2013 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fun start to your story - Brian 'taking care' of the Diner. I bet he orders the customers to do their own dishes and not to forget to leave a nice tip. Hehehe. TAG



Author's Response:

TAG,

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Yes, Brian is taking care of the diner in his own special way.  <wink>

Thanks for your support.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2013 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm liking it can't wait for next chapter

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like the chapter and thanks for reading and commenting.  I say that sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2013 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

How refreshing; I love your Brian and your humor.  I'm worried for the three patrons though; until we find out what Brian's idea involves.   Please update soon.

 Cheers



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words!  I really appreciate the support and glad you liked the chapter.  Don't worry about the trio, there's more on the horizon that may be cause for concern... or not.  <wink>

Thanks for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2013 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

I think you've got a winner here. Great new ideas I can't wait to see where this goes.
Lori

Author's Response:

Big hugs to you, thanks so much for your kind words.  I'll be posting the next chapter soon.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2013 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love the romance part and Brian's taking over the diner.  He can wait on me anytime!  I know there is going to be more to this and am looking forward to it.



Author's Response:

Hi There,

I think Brian would be very nice to most people, unless he was in a bad mood.  LOL.  I'll be posting the next chapter soon. 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2013 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is one of the best things I have read here quite a while. I always love a bossy Brian. Had me in stitches, very funny how the trolls listened and did as he ordered. Looking forward to much more.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and your gracious compliment. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story and its humor, I'm glad it's coming across.  I'm be updating very soon.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2013 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Simply loved this story and very funny too!  I can imagine Brian being bossy to the patrons - lol-  Also the writing of order with "bullets" - lol  oh my, what we do for love...



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I love a snarky Brian who has a heart of gold.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2013 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Laura!  I knew a new story was coming, but I'm delighted to see the first chapter up so soon.  Love the idea of Brian taking charge while Justin is gone in only the way that he can do.;)  I thought it was hilarious how he barked out orders to the patrons, rather than the other way around.  And that part about not letting the diner having any carbs after 8 and switchng him to a Cobb salad was too funny!

Looking forward to the rest of your story.;)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim,

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate the support!  I just love a snarky Brian with a heart of gold.  I hope you like the next chapter, I'll be posting soon.

Thanks again and all the best,

Laura

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