Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2013 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 12 A Change of Heart
I couldn’t figure out why you had Karl call Jennifer before he had his suspicions confirmed. Then I thought Kenneth, Karl, Jennifer and Craig were going to interrupt Justin and Brian’s little chocolate, almost, afternoon delight; I would like to see Craig’s face if that happens. LOL I love the way you tease us at the end with the suspense. LOL Update soon please if your repetitive strain injury allows; I hope it’s better by now.
Cheers
Author's Response: all will be revealed (gradually) i'll try and post asap
my strain injury is fine but i was rushed to hosital last friday i passed out when i came round i was white as a sheet and my bloodpressure was up and down and i had really low blood sugar i've bee diagnosed with an overactive thyroid
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2013 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 12 A Change of Heart
Oh boy, you've created quite the cliff hanger here. Wonder what Craig will do when he finds out where they are going. What will Justin do when they arrest Brian? Will Jennifer learn what the hell is going on? So many question for the next chapter to answer.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2013 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 12 A Change of Heart
Oh nooooo....not a nasty cliffhanger lol. I must admit that I was looking forward to Horvath and Rickert seeing the boys so comfortable with each other and that Justin was not in any danger.
Please hurry back with more~JP
Author's Response: yeah sorry to leave it there
should have chapter thirteen up very soon hopefully by the end of this week
and thank you again for the lovely review
keep them coming
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 10 Villains Emerging
I love what you have done here. I wouldn’t have guessed this is how Sap and Brian became friends, but it is so believable and scary. Well done. I’m glad the guys are talking and Brian was upfront with the detectives.
Cheers
Author's Response: well the next chapter is nearly complete and should be up in a day or two
thank you for your kind words they are always appriciated
Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2013 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 10 Villains Emerging
Great update!
-b
Author's Response: thank you will post another chapter as soon as its finished
thanks for the review
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 10 Villains Emerging
Gosh, the suspense just keeps piling up.
Author's Response: there is still more to come
thank you for your comment
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 9 A Breakthrough
Hey, I’m glad to see you back. The men need to talk. I hope they get the chance.
Cheers
Author's Response: some pretty grim stuff is about to kick off in the next chapter or so
things will start to unravel for our antagonists
and thank you its nice to be back
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2013 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 8 Dinner with Brian
Well that surprised me; I thought they were going to work together to bring down Craig and Ethan, but it seems Brian is thinking with the wrong part of his anatomy. LOL Or maybe he is just creating a distraction to be illusive about what Craig has on him. Yay for Daphne; at least someone is missing Justin. Please continue as soon as your physical able.
Cheers
Author's Response: i have the next chapter almost done
things will start to move quite quickly
there is some dark contents comming soon
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2013 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 7 Justin’s First Encounter
I like the idea of Justin and Brian working together against Craig and Ethan. I'm still trying to get my head around Brian and Sap being friends though. LOL Nice update.
Cheers
Author's Response: thank you their is a reason there friends
all will be revealed soon
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2013 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 6 Kidnapping 101
oh so fuckable. Yep; Brian Kinney’s downfall is obvious now he has seen a photo of Justin. LOL You surprised me by having Ben kidnap Justin, and I like it when someone can surprise me. Sorry you have finger cramps; just update when you can.
Cheers
Author's Response: i'm glad you like my story so far
i will post another chapter when my fingers are better i have repetitive strain injury at the moment which sucks!!
i cant live without my computer!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2013 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 5 A Little Detective Work
Ethan and Craig are about to find out that they shouldn't mess with Mr Kinney. I can't wait for the kidnapping and for Justin and Brian to meet. I'm really enjoying your fic; please hurry back if you can.
Cheers
Author's Response: i'm hurrying! i have finger cramp!
i hope to have a chapter up tonight or tommorrow
thank you for your multiple comments and the positive thoughts
Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2013 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 5 A Little Detective Work
It is a very good story ao fr. Can't wait for some more chapters
Author's Response: thank you i'm trying my best
this is the first one i ever wrote!
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2013 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 5 A Little Detective Work
I am looking forward to Brian's work on these two - what a pair! Amazing Craig and Ethan.
Author's Response: thank you
i hope you like the results of my story when the next chapter comes
will update as frequently as i can
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2013 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 Blackmailed
I should have read the summary before reading this fic. Woo-hoo Brian is going to kidnap Justin. OMG Craig won't want him back, so Brian can keep him. LOL It won't be long Mr Kinney and you will be under Sunshine's spell. Update soon please.
Cheers
Author's Response: i will update asap
i'm glad you like it thank you
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2013 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 Easy Money
I can't wait to see how this works out.
Author's Response: it will all come together soon i promise
i'm scribbling more right now
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2013 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 3 Easy Money
Craig and Ethan blackmailing Brian. I can't wait to see this play out. Please update soon.
Cheers
Author's Response: i'm working on the next chapter right now
i hope it lives up to what your expecting
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2013 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 3 Easy Money
A different twist on the boys-speaking of boys, is Justin showing up somewhere soon? I guess by some of the language you are British. This is going to be interesting. Good beginning for your first dive into the MW waters.
Author's Response: yes Justin is in it and yes i'm a brit
thank you for the review and positive thought
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2013 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Big Scoop
I was blown away by the premise fro this story, but I didn't understand what was really happening until now. I initially thought the body was Jason Kemp's. It an interesting spin on it to make it Sap.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: i'll post another chapter soon
and thank you for the review
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Big Scoop
It looks like Brian is about to become famous (more than he already is) or is that infamous. Craig and Ethan joining forces to get a story; I like the combination. One consolation is Craig knows Brian didn't kill Gary. Great update.
Cheers
Author's Response: thank you for the comment and positive feedback
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2013 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Big Scoop
Usually 'Journalism' involves more than just taking a photo and then making up a headline, Craig! Maybe you might want to investigate a little? Maybe YOU should have reported the body yourself? Ack! Shoddy journalism! LOL! I can already see the mess this will cause! TAG
Author's Response: well what do you expect this is Craig Taylor
and with a colleague like Ethan well need i say anymore and yes things are going to get very messy
will post another chapter soon
Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Big Scoop
Well, we don't know why Brian chose to do this, but it might not have been a wise choice. Thanks for updating so quickly.
Author's Response: you will find out later why Brian chose to walk
thank you for the review
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 A Failed Deal
Welcome to the ranks of MW authors. Glad to have you aboard! TAG
Author's Response: thank you very much
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 A Failed Deal
What a great start, I can't wait to see where this is heading. I would welcome you to MW, but I can see you have been a member since last year, so instead I will welcome you to the scary side. LOL I look forward to the update.
Cheers
Author's Response: thank you for welcome yes i have been a member for a while things kept getting in the way and i never got round to posting until now
if you read my bio you would see i was in the middle of a move new job etc... so that explains that
thank you for the good comment
will post quick as possible
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2013 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 A Failed Deal
Quite an interesting beginning, I like it. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you very much for the postive thought
i will update asap to keep my readera happy
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 A Failed Deal
nice beginning. however, you got me real curious about the blackmail scene and hoping for more action in future
Author's Response: thank you for the review i am working on the next chapter as i type
i hope my next installment lives up to your expectations
Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1 A Failed Deal
Interesting concept for a story. It's a good first chapter. If you are interested in a beta, let me know.
Hugs ~ Cathy
Author's Response: my first review!
thank you i'm glad you like it so far
i will try and update a fast as i can
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