Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: Angels and Fairies
Very nice ending. I've never seen Supernatural, so Sam and Dean are a new experience for me. I'm glad they brought Leo back. Now if you just give Justin another child, maybe adopt, and his name is Tim, we've even got Timothy back.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2014 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: Angels and Fairies
A "Supernatural" crossover, nice.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2014 11:02 AM · On: EPILOGUE
Oh great, Gus got to wear a white Vera Wang outfit too. LOL
I feel gypped as the white rabbit didn't get to deliver his famous line. "I'm late! I'm late! For a very important date! No time to say hello, goodbye! I'm late! I'm late! I'm late!" Okay, I feel better now I have recited it. :D
I thought I was in the wrong fandom when I started reading this. A whole chapter on hetro love; I'm glad you couldn't write the intimacy part. Haha
Thanks for finishing another fine fairy tale Jon.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2014 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 10: Angels and Fairies
Sam and Dean Winchesters, ha, I didn't see that coming. Leo's back so that's a nice ending and they seem to have their happily ever after so with trepidation I will read the epilogue.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Awwww, no trepidation needed! Enjoy!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2014 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Darkest Part of the Forest
I was never so glad to see a TBC as I was at the end of this chapter. The suspense in this one was unbelievable! At least the Big Bad Wolf is gone, but I wish that Leo and Opa weren't. So I'll just wait for your next chapter to see what happens. Great writing!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2014 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Darkest Part of the Forest
Haha, you fooled me; kinder isn't dead.
"WARNING!!! The following chapter is not for the faint of heart! But I just couldn't dumb it down into a people pleaser without it being totally wrecked". I appreciate this warning and I'm really pleased about it as I would hate to think you adjusted your plot just to appease people.
I'm curious; did Opa make a deal with the devil? No, I don't mean Mel,lol. Dueling fiddles or maybe whistles at 50 paces would have a least given Opa a fair chance of staying alive and keeping Gus that way too. Hurry back the last conversation was very ominous.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Woodsman
That was so unfair. But true to the tale and we know it ends better. Nice to see that Leo is still around, shame he must disappear again or does he. You're the writer and can take this whereever you want.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2014 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Woodsman
The last part's gotta be a dream.
Author's Response: A dream or a scream?
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2014 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Woodsman
Yay, Leo's back; at least there is something bright in this dark chapter. Blow Gus, blow. Was this chapter inspired by "Eat the meat" because I don't think Brian meant it so literally? :D I'm hoping this is some sort of regurgitation kink I've never heard of, as I wouldn't like to see him come out any other way than the way he went in. lol I'm really glad the hoody wasn't eaten as perhaps Opa can use it. There's nothing like having a trendy grandpa and ties are so outdated, yet they apparently have their uses. Thanks for the quick update. BTW, I didn't have time to read through my fingers as I wasn't expecting such an ending. Well done; I like it when someone can surprise me.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: You have a wonderful perspective. I never did think of the Eat the meat thing...Or did I? As a matter of fact...yeeeah that was it , I was thinking that the whole time.....yeaaahh, yeaah, that s the ticket...<looks around shifitily>
Seriousy to...glad you liked the ending. I'm working on the next chapter right now. The tone will remain dark and it will come with several warning labels. But that's all I'm saying. Wow. This story went from being totally blocked to my most closely guarded secret. Weird.
Reviewer: freddie (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2014 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 7 The Big Bad Wolfe
I love this story. Not every Brian and Justin tale has to be chock full of graphic b/j sex scenes, and this proves it.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I've nothing against sex scenes mind you but sometimes my mind goes to a different place, ya know? I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2014 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 7 The Big Bad Wolfe
Awesome chapter. Awesomer banner.
Author's Response: thank you so much and I'm sure the banner artist loves the praise too!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 7 The Big Bad Wolfe
Excellent banner by Christie. Thanks for the warning as I will now be reading this fic through my fingers. The Woodsman; is it Zack O'Tool? Or is it someone from Brian's "Got Wood" campaign? This fic has the potential to go in a humorous direction or is that just me thinking that. Maybe I should get my mind out of the gutter, but I really liked the poster Brian had made for Remson's Instant Wood (no not the revised old couples one, lol). I'm really glad Opa survived the choking and Mr Wolfe's stinky breath. Listerine (mouthwash) might be the weapon of the day. :D Hurry back if you can.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the excellent review. The woodsman will be revealed next chappy. And readng thru your fingers....would be a very good idea...Bwa hahahaha!!! That's all I'm saying.....no spoilers!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 7 The Big Bad Wolfe
Oh no, please don't let the wolf hurt Opa. Let me see, the big guy Gus has run into is a good guy and the wolf is about to meet his match!!!! Hopefully???
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Red Cloak
Hey, shouldn't that be a huff and a puff to blow the door down. Oh, wait that's the three little pigs. :D Beddy; so much like Debbie in many ways, yet not. Mr Wolfe, Mr Wolfe what big muscles you have? "All the better to rip out your throat with". I suppose it's a little more menacing than "all the better to eat you with" as that could be a whole different conversation. LOL I'm having way to much fun here so I'll wrap it up and wait patiently for the next installment.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thanx for the great review as always! And yes...we are heading to the oh what big___ etc etc you have although still not sure how I'm going to play that. Thanx for all the ideas. However, a WARNING to you and everyone else, I think part of the reason I've been taking so long with this is that the story is potentionally heading down a dark and potentionally scary path that might not be popular and not to mention is becoming hard to write. Potentionally. Well, I'll keep going , if you guys keep reading. Thanks for continuing to tell me what you think after my long pauses.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Red Cloak
Hurray! Another chapter. How sad to put him to work on his birthday. I thought the hashish brownies were too funny. Oh what a tangled weed we weave. The big bad wolf almost got Gus! He needs to tell his dads. Short chapters are good!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Don't worry, it's not meant to be hard work taking a basket of goodies to his grandfather. And yes! The big bad wolf shows his true colors at last! The writer's block is over so hopefully this story will be a bit quicker in coming and be over soon. But Beauty and Beast...then Jack and Beanstalk, now Red Riding Hood...what a journey this series has been! Oyy vey!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2014 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sweet Sixteen
Hey Jon. I'm sorry I thought I was up-to-date with this fic. I assumed when I seen it appear at the top of the list that you were reposting chapters from when the system crashed. Sorry you lost some of your reviews. I love Gus' hoody/cape and all the other clothing items it becomes. Jackson tells Jack he came from the maze and he believes his amazing story and puts him in charge of the maze. That's priceless, no amazing. :D John and Mathew 8, and Noah; I admit it, my mind went straight to Bible references. LOL
Cheers :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2014 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sweet Sixteen
Gus is such a good Prince, surely you can figure out some way to keep the Big Bad away and not let Gus suffer.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2014 03:22 AM · On: Ch 4: The Grey Walker
So that's the background on the Big Bad. There is a catch, he has to be polite and curtious, so that explains how he was with Justin! What is his plan for Gus?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 11:07 PM · On: Ch.3: The Red Hoody
Oh, no. What's coming for Gus! And what about his cousins? What are their names?
Author's Response: This confuses me a bit. Who are the cousins? Do you mean Justin's biological children? If you did, you know, I haadn't really thought about names at all! Bad me! I'll take care of it next chapter but I'm planning on another time jump anyway soeveryone will beheading out of the infancy stage anyway.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 10:21 PM · On: Ch. 2 The Bright Men
The wolfman, huh. Is his name by any chance Jackson? I like Leo and the idea of shiny men around us. Wish it were true!!!!
Author's Response: Loved writing the Bright men! Wish it was true too.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 10:10 PM · On: PART 2 Ch.1 Homecoming
Timothy certainly has come a long way and Gus seems to adore him. The house for the girls is perfect!!!
Author's Response: Yup...have triied to update Timothy to grandpa status as much as I could. As for the house, i tried to make it as nauseatingly girly as possible. I hope it was somewhat realistic....or at least a girls dream come true.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 09:24 PM · On: The White Tower/The Diner at 7 PM
Mikey! What nerve. Why am I not surprised. Thank goodness for Ben. On another note - It's nice to see that Brian and Timothy are getting along. Timothy has his own house and a puppy! Is Jackson the big bad?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 02:19 AM · On: Gus/ Jennifer and Molly
The truth comes out. While I can't feel sorry that Craig is dead, Jenn has gone over the edge. Nice to see Carl showing up. How did Justin get Jennifer to confess?
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2014 07:33 PM · On: Ch.3: The Red Hoody
Alls well with everyone. Just as a fairytail should be.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2014 10:53 PM · On: Ch.3: The Red Hoody
Ark! Loved the look of how the red hoody came into being. But the monster, that scares me!!!
Author's Response: Don't worry...It's just a sneak peek. And remember...there were TWO shockwaves of magic! HINT!
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2014 01:53 AM · On: Ch. 2 The Bright Men
Love the story!
Author's Response: Thanx hon!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 07:24 AM · On: Gus/ Jennifer and Molly
Thank goodness BabyHam had a sad story as it shifted away from all the touchy-feely stuff Brian was saying. LOL "I had your father murdered" would have been a great ending to this chapter. It's been so long since you began this story that I had forgotten about bad Jen. However, since Jen is going down for a very long time things are wrapping up nicely with Molly happily going to live with Justin.
Cheers
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 07:23 AM · On: Timothy's Surprise/ Michael & the Munchers
I have read Tagsit...Prego Stud; it's great. I love the way you wrote Michael in this chapter. He's just weird, and I'm pleased Brian isn't going to let him have his loft. Weird being a good thing as it's a different way to writing Michael, than the usual. Justin kissing his grandfather figure; yuck. Grandfather figure enjoying it; double yuck. LOL
Cheers
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2013 06:36 AM · On: PART 2 Ch.1 Homecoming
I have missed this story. Looking forward to what's in store for Michael as well, but in a positive sense.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2013 12:49 AM · On: PART 2 Ch.1 Homecoming
Damn, this fairy tale was great, with a happy ending for everyone. I will certainly be looking forward to where you go, be it a continuing happy or an evil dark scary tale.
Author's Response: Hopefully it won't be as bad as the Crucible (not sure what happened there, I had a lot of issues I was working out) but there will be both comedic and dramatic elements to it. How serious, I'm not sure yet. Thanks for all yur insightful reviews. Keep em comin!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2013 12:17 AM · On: The White Tower/The Diner at 7 PM
This story tends to jump, so will my review. You did it, you did it! You gave Timothy a puppy!! And all the other wonderful things. I would love to have one of those baskets that come with everything you need. Sadly I thoroughly enjoyed Michael getting his comeupence. And how nicely everything is turning out for almost everyone. I'm worried about that wolf though.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2013 10:26 PM · On: Gus/ Jennifer and Molly
OMG! Where to begin, where to begin. Can you give Timothy a puppy dog or a kitty cat? Is the big bad wolf good or bad? Gus is adorable! Jennifer, however is not. Thank goodness Justin didn't turn into a beast, and is taking Molly away. Nice to see Carl. Looking forward to the diner and whatever you plan for Michael. Sorry but I couldn't find it in me to be silent for Craig.
Author's Response: Sorry but Carl just has the cameo....for now. Thanx for all your reviews Don't worry about Craig. Truth be told...neither could I <wink>
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2013 10:05 PM · On: Timothy's Surprise/ Michael & the Munchers
Loving this fairy tale! Justin is doing all that he can for Timothy, which is very nice. Telling Timothy that Brian loves him may be going a bit too far. I'm sure that Brian accepts Tim for Justin's sake. Love the Mikey parts. <wicked laugh> He sure does need to have his bubble burst. Love the interaction with Mel as well. Pigs fly??? LOL.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2013 11:25 AM · On: The White Tower/The Diner at 7 PM
This is just too funny.
Snarky Justin is especially a hoot.
Author's Response: Thanx for the compliments. Thanx for reviewing!
Reviewer: Somme (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2013 11:51 AM · On: The White Tower/The Diner at 7 PM
Love the snappy dialougue between Justin and Brian, as well as the description of arguing between Michael and Debbie.
And Michael is lucky he has Ben, with his sexy baritone voice.
Author's Response: He sure IS lucky! I remember Ben's voice to this day and I love it too. Thanx for reviewing
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2013 10:27 AM · On: Gus/ Jennifer and Molly
Sooooooo much happening in this chapter, I don't know where to begin. . . I think Craig should only get 30 seconds of silence, even if he was murdered by an evil Jennifer. Personally I would have left everyone with the horrible cliffhanger, but I know you're just not as evil as me - You big softy! Mr Wolfe doesn't seem that Scarey, what am I missing? "BabyHam": typical bully tactics but, I'm ashamed to admit its rather funny. Oh, and, BTW, I like the repeated 'bruising' and 'feral' kisses - descriptive and hot! Now, I'm all caught up on your story so you can take time out for a summer challenge! Hehehe. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your insightful reviews. I look forward to them a lot. The BabyHam thing came to me as I was writing, it was unplanned.
I was wondering if I was being a softy....Oh well. As for the challenge, well still thinking about it here and trying to think of a summer-y fairy tale....Or might have to be an original fantasy, who knows. Or I might have to keep going on this, I'm literally half a scene away from posting the last Part 1 chapter so I'll wait until then at least. Or I might keep going it depends on how my idea factory is working. I'll keep you posted.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2013 09:38 AM · On: Timothy's Surprise/ Michael & the Munchers
Thought I'd tell you again how much I loved my chapter. Now, off to the new stuff! TAG
Reviewer: Somme (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2013 12:38 PM · On: Gus/ Jennifer and Molly
Wow. Michael seems extremely confused. And Jennifer has gone completly insane.
Author's Response: Yup. Unfortunately, Jennifer has gone completely around the bend (aat least in this AU and will not be returning to active duty in this storyline. You and maybe quite a few other readers may wonder why I've chosen to have Jennifer take a turn for the worst here. So...here's the deal:
Dear Readers: First of all, I'd like to assure you I still consider Jenn a "good guy" in most regards and in most of my stories. I liked her character in the show and thought Sherry Miller did a stellar job portraying her. I in no way plan to engage in "Jennifer bashing" or whatever. However, I am desperately trying to wrap up resolutions from events in Beauty and the Beast and have had this little twist up my sleeve since the beginning of Jack and the Beanstalk. Plus, her character in this AU simply isn't needed anymore so I'm sending her upstate to a nice funny farm where she can be well taken care of by Nurse Tucker for the rest of her life. She deserves a nice rest after all the BS Craig put her through.
Well that's my story, anyway, and I'm stickin' to it.
As for Michael I'm dealing with that now and boy is it coming out slowly. He's being a bit of a whiny bitch. But I'm getting there. Thx for your patience.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2013 07:39 AM · On: Gus/ Jennifer and Molly
I must say I'm intrigued. This good.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2013 07:11 AM · On: Timothy's Surprise/ Michael & the Munchers
This chapter was even better than the first. I loved the relationship between Justin and Timothy. Brian's handling of Michael and the loft was hilarious. And I wouldn't mind having a cottage like the one you described.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2013 10:35 PM · On: Gus/ Jennifer and Molly
Michael's gone crazy. And Jennifer's gone even more crazy.
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