Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For An End To It
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 06:03 AM · On: The Way Back To What We Were

This went down better than I thought, maybe it's because of what Agron is going through after the Romans captured him but also maybe being around Brion and Justinus and seeing just how they mimic hs and Nasir's own beginning lets him understand better.

 

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Great comments, Vision.  I agree that Agron sees a lot of himself and Nasir in Brion and Justinus.  It helped him understand the reasons behind Brion protecting Justinus, because he would do the exact same thing to protect Nasir if needed.  The final battle is about to commence, and their friendship will go a long way in helping all four cope with what is coming.  I'll see you then.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2013 08:56 AM · On: Consequences

Just as moving as it was in the actual episode but mixed in with some Brion/Justinus expose. I need for them to all talk about things though when things settle down cause they have seen what secrets can do and they can't afford for them to hurt others they care about.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Vision.  This next chapter involves a great deal of talking.  In order to go forward for lovers AND friends, all four men will need to deal with what has happened, and they will.  I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter and felt you were reliving those dramatic moments from the series.  I will never forget that scene when Agron returned to Nasir's arms and hoped I'd do it justice.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2013 08:05 AM · On: A Question Of Which Path To Take

I read your update days ago but for some reason I don't see my comment - consider this a replacement comment: 'Nooooooooooo' Agron, don't be stupid! TAG



Author's Response:

Well, as far as I'm concerned, your comments are welcome any time, TAG.  Poor Agron... so like our old Brian, thinking that his lover is better off without him.  It will be a costly mistake, but real love usually conquers anything in my world, so we'll have to see what happens next.  More coming up soon.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 10:04 AM · On: A Question Of Which Path To Take

Never thought you would have actually still gone the route of Agron leaving NAsir behind. The only difference is that Justin and Brion are there for him during this event and I am hoping to see how they go through helping him especially during the false loss he will feel when he thinks Agron fell in battle until the day he sees him again.

 

Amazing chapter



Author's Response:

There are certain parts of the series itself that I didn't want to mess with entirely.  Of course, I had to diviate a bit from canon because of Brion and Justinus being there, but I think the separation between Agron and Nasir was one of the best, and most emotional, parts of their entire story.  I had to include it.  I just needed for the secret to be the catalyst, rather than Agron fearing that Nasir had a real connection with Castus.  Brion and Justinus will certainly figure strongly in how Nasir handles his loss, both real and imagined.  Much more coming up shortly.  I appreciate your comments very much, Vision.  Thank you.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 09:45 AM · On: Within the City of Rome

Such a sad end to chapter 17 :(  Agron needs to come clean with Nasir, Brion and Justinicus.  I like the idea of splitting up and heading North.  



Author's Response:

I hated separating Agron and Nasir, but this was such a pivotal part of their story in the series that I wanted to include it in my story too.  The idea, of course, for the split up of the forces in based on true history and the series.  Much more has to happen before the two couples will have the chance to rectify misunderstandings.  I'm working on the next chapter right now and hope to have it ready very shortly.  Thank you again for your continued support of my story, Debv.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2013 03:41 AM · On: Escape From Hell

I finally got a chance to catch up on this. You're doing a remarkable job with the historical part of this story. I'm just getting worried because there's no way this can end well, is there? TAG



Author's Response:

I am so happy to hear from you TAG.  Whenever I write a period piece, I try very hard to be accurate with details for that time period.  It is what I look for when reading the works of others.  It makes the story more believable.  So I really appreciate your comment.  You are right to be worried, but it helps that our couples are both fictional, so there will be trauma ahead, but only time will tell how it all ends for them.  We are not far from that ending, but not yet there.  Next up, a little respite for our couples, temporarily.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2013 09:00 AM · On: Escape From Hell

*clapping* amazing! Very visual, gritty and real.... I love this!



Author's Response:

Well, all I can say is I am deeply grateful for such terrific comments, Snow.  My one hope when writing a chapter is that the reader be able to visualize the scenes as if there themselves, and it sounds like it worked for you with this chapter.  I am so happy about that.  Thank you very much for commenting.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2013 08:40 AM · On: Escape From Hell

Wow Nasir is an even better man than I gave him crdit for cause I thought he would be unable to keep this secret from Agron. Nasir's thought and insight into why he still trusted Justin was true though we shouldn't be punished because of the bloodline we carry.

I still think Justin should start by telling Spartacus and then let him filter it down to his generals but leave Agron to Justin to tell cause the four of them have become close.

 

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Nasir was always one of my favorite characters on 'Spartacus' because he had it all.  He was fierce in battle, but gentle at heart.  He genuinely cared about other people no matter who they were as long as they were good human beings.  It is easy for me to write him that way in this story.  I always see Justin in a similar way... as a young man with courage and a gentleness that brought out the best in Brian, as Nasir does for Agron.  

I see your point in Justinus telling Spartacus (who, for the most part) is also a man who judges by character rather than birth , but I'm not quite ready for the secret to come out.  Truth be told, I haven't settled yet on how the secret is revealed, although it must come out.  The test of a true friendship is how bad things are handled, not the good.  The story is coming to a close soon enough, but first a little respite from all the pain and suffering before more is heaped on them.  The next chapter will be coming up soon, and thank you so much for your comments, Vision.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2013 02:17 AM · On: Fight For Survival

Where's a miracle when you need one? Aaaccckkk! TAG



Author's Response:

Miracles come from the most unexpected sources, so don't despair yet.  More coming up very shortly, TAG.  Thank you for commenting.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2013 08:30 AM · On: Fight For Survival

I have finally caught up. This is such a thrill to read! Please don't keep us waiting too ling for an update!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear from you, Snow.  And I'm very happy you are enjoying my story.  I'm working hard on the next chapter right now and hope to have it ready as quickly as possible.  Thank you.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2013 05:45 AM · On: Fight For Survival

Okay I love the fact that even with this deception Nasir was able to keep calm but all is not over yet cause they will now have to tend to the discussion of Justin's lineage. If I know Spartacus he will understand, Agron has trust isues but he will eventually get over it but Crixcus on the other hand I'm not so sure about.

 

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Nasir is definitely a man who knows his priorities, and trusts his gut reaction to people.  He knew from the beginning that Justinus was a good human being and friend, so he isn't rushing to judgement that he is a bad guy just because of what he has learned.  He also knows that staying alive right now is more important than confronting Justinus.  Agron is certainly going to be the question mark in Brion and Justinus's future.  Coming up next, all of them are going to be far more concerned about surviving than anything else.  See you then.  And thank you for the wonderful comments, Vision.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2013 07:15 AM · On: Intrique & Deception

Let's hope Justinus has learned enough fighting skills in the past few weeks to fight off Craigh! Great cliffhanger there! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the great comments, Tag.  I love a good cliff-hanger (I'm old enough to remember the old radio serials that always ended with them LOL), so I enjoy throwing one in sometimes.  I also needed to take a break in the story before getting down and dirty, because the next chapter gets really scary.  A lot of pain is in store for many folks, including loved ones, but I promise it won't take long to get there.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 09:27 PM · On: Intrique & Deception

Oh damn I didn't want Nasir to learn about Justin's identity this way, if they are captured by by Craigh and Cassius. Things are reaching a fevered pitch now it's not long before all things are out in the air and we will see how they learn to re-trust Justin and Brion.

 

Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Yes, Vision, all secrets are about to be exposed, and all deceptions will come to light.  Justinus and Brion are about to learn what being at war really means, just as Agron and Nasir had already learned long before.  Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.   I appreciate them a great deal.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2013 01:07 AM · On: Changes in the Air

This is an engrossing read, even though i havent seen spartacus.  Im enjoying this greatly. Cant wait to see what happens next :0

 



Author's Response:

This is such a lovely comment lrknow.  So much of the story is rooted in the 'Spartacus' series, especially the dialogue, that to know you are enjoying the story without knowledge of the show is a great compliment indeed.  Thank you very much for letting me know.  I hope you will continue to find the story interesting as we get into the rebellion much deeper.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2013 08:47 AM · On: Changes in the Air

I knew Brion would see it was wholly innocent but Agron was see otherwise but like they said he would see reason if he truly listened to Nasir. Things are reaching a fevered pitch and the tide will turn soon.

 

Great chapter



Author's Response:

It's kind of fun, writing Brion as the level-headed one in this story.  Poor Agron has such a strong fear of losing Nasir that he sees threats even in an innocent situation.  He is lucky that Nasir knows just the right thing to say to get him to listen to reason.  You are right about what is coming next, Vison.  Everything changes in this next chapter, and much of it won't be pretty.  I'll see you then.  Thank you so much for the wonderful comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2013 06:51 PM · On: Secrets Kept, Knowledge Gained

All I can say is oh shit oh shit. Things are reaching there breaking point now. Justinus assessment of Nasir is true but it is still risky especially considering Agron's jealousy and hatred for secrets if he found out Nasir was keeping things from him. It would make more sense to tell them both it would show some level of faith in both and then maybe he would lay arms for both of them.Craigh the sleaze has taken notice of Justinus being with the rebels damn, I can imagine how much more he hates his son.

 

Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

You are absolutely right in thinking it isn't a good idea to tell Nasir the truth, leaving out Agron.  First of all, Nasir would find it hard keeping it from Agron.  Look how he acted when it came to keeping the secret of Naevia being alive to himself.  His moral compass won't allow for deceptions.  As for Craigh, he is most defintiely a threat to his son, because his hatred of what Justinus has done, especially in regards to Brion, is overwhelming.  The s**t is about to hit the fan for all involved in the story, so be prepared.  Thank you so much for your great comments, Vision.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 07:25 PM · On: A Snake Within Their Midst

Knew Latea could be trusted but that damn Julius has entered the ranks so things shall soon hit the fan and our characters secrets may come out especially if Craigh and Cassius see them together.

 

Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Yes, Vision, they were indeed lucky that it was Laeta who spotted Justinus, and that she had been observant enough to see how the two men felt about each other.  She is a woman who believes in love and has no desire to squash it, which is why she didn't expose their feelings for each other before the rebels arrived.  Julius Caesar is definitely the one to fear, as well as the two rats stuck inside the wall.  More on them coming up very shortly.  Thank you very much for your great comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2013 04:16 PM · On: A Snake Within Their Midst

I don't know if they should trust Laeta? And with Craigh soon to emerge from hiding, it seems like bad days are coming. Ack! TAG



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Tag.  Laeta may be Roman, but she is a woman of honor and has a loving heart.  If she gives her word, she means it.  That's not to say that Justinus and Brion are safe... not by a long shot.  There are far more dangerous things lurking around waiting to destroy their freedom and happiness, along with many others.  More coming up shortly.  Thank you again for your wonderful comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 02:55 AM · On: A Dangerous Discovery & the Green-Eyed Monster

I'm loving the love of both couples.  I hope Justinus' luck holds out.  Don't want to see B/J's story end sadly - no pressure!  LOL!

Looking forward to your updates.  Finding time to read is a problem these days, but so glad I carved out time for this. 

Saw that you entered the summer challenge. I'm looking forward to reading it soon, maybe tonight.

All the best dear lady!

Laura



Author's Response:

You are such a sweetheart, Laura.  Thank you for making this old girl very happy.  I was really nervous at the idea of tackling a crossover story, but both of these couples have taken over my heart and I had to try to bring them together in a single world.  I'm thrilled that you approve.  

All those who stand beside Spartacus in his fight for freedom from oppression will face obstacles, including Brion and Justinus, but there will also be plenty of time to strengthen their bonds of love too.  I promise you that.  More is coming up shortly, but I had to pause in order to complete my Annual Anniversary story.  I can't believe it, but Monday is the 7th year since I posted my first story.  i hope you will find time to check out that story, which is short and sweet, someday.  I would also love to hear what you think of my Summer Challenge story.  It's the first B/J story I've written since last year.  Hope I still have the touch with them.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 02:01 AM · On: One Man's Death Means Another Man's Life

Craigh is such a sickening character, both in the show and this story.  What action packed chapter.  I just hope no one rats out Justin.

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response:

I'll bet by now, you've figured out that I detested Craig Taylor on the show.  LOL!  I love making him the villain over and over in my stories.  Justinus is walking a dangerous road right now, but at least he isn't walking it alone.  I'm so glad you are still enjoying my story, Laura.  Thank you very much.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 01:46 AM · On: A Costly Mistake

Oh, this was just so gripping, it's hard to fanthom that these happened and are still happening.  Very, very moving.  I hope Justin/Brian's chance for revenge comes fast.

And poor Ethan - I never thought I would say that!  LOL.

All the best,

Laura 



Author's Response:

Even though same-sex relationships were not fully frowned on in ancient Roman times, there were limits.  A Roman could spend time with a slave (if he owned that slave or had the owner's permission), but love was unacceptable between the two.  Unfortunately a father had as much power over the son as he did over the slave.  Don't worry about Cassius or Craigh.  Evil deeds always come back to haunt in my stories.  

I knew from the beginning of the story that I needed a sacrificial lamb for Justinus.  Poor Ethan just can't catch a break in my stories.  LOL!  But even Brian would hate to see him suffer such a fate.  Thank you again for the terrific comments, Laura.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2013 11:30 PM · On: Roman Rules, Be Damned

Love reading about the boys' growing affections.  I feel like all hell is about to break loose.  I just hope Justin fares well when it's all over with.

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response:

Hell is indeed waiting for our lovers, right down the road, and life will become risky and complicated.  I can't promise you smooth sailing during these turbulent times, but I hope you'll enjoy the ride anyway, Laura.  Thank you again for your comments.  They are much appreciated.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2013 11:00 PM · On: Two Journeys Towards Their Futures

Hi Grammy,

FINALLY getting a chance to catch up to the story.  I'm way behind and looking forward to reading each and every chapter.  I love how you've captured the flavor, speech pattern, and "world" of the story.  You transport us into another time. 

Enjoying this so much!

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response:

Whenever I write a story that is set in a different time period than our own, I always consider comments like yours to be the greatest compliment of all, Laura.  It's important to me that my readers can feel as if they are actually living in those other time periods, along with our boys.  Thank you so very much for taking time to let me know that you are enjoying my story.  I appreciate it very much.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2013 05:46 PM · On: A Dangerous Discovery & the Green-Eyed Monster

I see big trouble coming from Justinus hiding his true identity. If he just told Agron now, I'm sure they would understand. And then, the rebels could use Justin as a spy . . . Love the possible plot twists here! TAG



Author's Response:

It sounds like it would be easier on Brion and Justinus if they told Agron the truth, however, Agron is very vocal about his hatred of Romans, which runs deep.  The couple would be far better off being honest with Nasir.  And remember that they have seen the brutality of the rebels towards even the women and children of Sinuessa.  The couple have made friends among the rebels, but they still don't feel that secure in their position.  However, something will happen soon to elevate Justinus's position in the eyes of some very important rebels.  But more on that later.  Thanks for the great comments, Tag.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2013 10:22 AM · On: A Dangerous Discovery & the Green-Eyed Monster

If one thing we know about Laeta is that she is a smart and compassionate woman and will keep their secret. I think it is only a matter of time before their cover is blown and they should start out telling Spartacus and Nasir not necessarily in that order and then gauge how to tell the others. Personally I think Agron will be pissed but he should be able to relate since Nasir even though not being Roman he is so similar to Justinus.

 

Can't wait for another excellent chapter



Author's Response:

We are definitely thinking on similar lines, Vision, especially concerning Laeta personality and Agron's reaction once the truth comes out, which we all know always does.  There are going to be some tricky events coming up that will test more than one friendship.  The next chapter is in the works.  I'll see you then, and thank you so much for your insightful comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2013 07:27 PM · On: Friendships Formed & Evil Deeds

More, please! I need more! TAG



Author's Response:

Great timing, Tag.  I just got my next finished chapter back from Judy this morning.  As soon as I make the corrections, the new chapter will be up, and I can promise you plenty of action and a bit of suspence.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2013 07:05 PM · On: One Man's Death Means Another Man's Life

Craig has been evil throughout all of history, now. Some things never change! I hope he gets his head put on a stake at the city gates! TAG



Author's Response:

I have no problem turning Craig into a villian in this story too (He always is in my stories).  He and Dr. Dave were my most hated characters on the show, with pathetic Hobbs coming in a close third.  I'll never make Justin's father a hero in my works.  *rubs hands gleefully together, thinking of ways to torture the man*  Don't worry, Tag, I never let the man get away without paying for his sins.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2013 12:48 PM · On: A Costly Mistake

First: 'Ohhhhh!'* pant, pant, squee*. Then: 'Ohhhhh! *Nooooooo*!  

TAG



Author's Response:

Oh yes, I did go there!  But this particular night is far from over, Tag.  I love all your comments.  Thank you so much.  Huge hugs, Grammy 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2013 12:18 PM · On: Roman Rules, Be Damned

Enticing! Can't stop reading long enough to comment! TAG



Author's Response:

You know, that simple sentence is the best kind of praise.  I really appreciate it, Tag.  Hope you continue to enjoy my story.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2013 05:39 AM · On: Outside the City of Rome

Great - now I've got all the characters in place. Off to discover the plot. TAG



Author's Response:

In this case, all roads to the plot lead to one particular city.  I hope you enjoy the journey, Tag.  And thank you so much for the feedback.  It is appreciated a great deal.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2013 04:46 AM · On: Within the City of Rome

Okay, I've watched the first season of Spartacus, so I think I have the general idea. Which means I'm finally going to start reading your story - I can't wait until the next season comes in. TAG



Author's Response:

Oh Tag, I am so excited to hear that you checked out 'Spartacus'.  I was one of those who watched the first episode when the show began and quit because of the violence.  But when I discovered the characters of Agron and Nasir two years later, I knew I had to give the show another try.  Once I accepted that the violence was a necessary part of the story (and actually realistic to that time period), and I realized how intriguing all the other characters were, I was hooked.  Nasir doesn't come into the show until the second episode of Season 2, but once he does, he is magnificent... the perfect companion for Agron.  Thank you so much for checking out my story.  I stick to a lot of the canon Spartacus episodes at first during the Agron and Nasir scenes, but I diverge from canon with this latest chapter.  There will still be a lot of canon, however, but mixed with my own interpretation.  I really hope you enjoy the rest of my story as it goes along.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2013 08:47 PM · On: Friendships Formed & Evil Deeds

I think it's so cute that Justinus and Nasir became friends and I hope Brion and Agrons jealousy and suspicions fade away since it's baseless.
And I hope for a long suffering for Craigh and Cassius.

Looking forward for more. :-)

 

Hugs, Meggi



Author's Response:

Justinus and Nasir are so similar in personality, that it is inevitable for them to form a close bond.  Even their taste in partners is very much alike, witness the similarities in Brion and Agron.  Brion and Agron have anger issues... they just handle them differently.  Brion, as  slave for so many years, has learned to keep his anger under control.  Agron wasn't a slave long enough to learn that skill, and his brother's death only made his anger more intense.  

Jealousy will play a part in their lives, but real love is always stronger than baseless emotions in the end.  As for Craigh and Cassius., well let's just say that they will learn to feel like the rats they are before they meet their justice.

The next chapter is completed and in the hands of my beta.  It should be posted in a day or two at most.  The 7th Anniversary of my first ever story posted online is coming up and I'm also working on a special story for that, so I've been a bit delayed.  You won't have to wait long, however.  Thank you so much for commenting, Meggi.  It is always a thrill to hear from you.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

 

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 08:00 PM · On: Friendships Formed & Evil Deeds

So you decided to diverge from the whole Agron being jealous of Nasir and Castus situation and used Justin even though it is clearly friendship to stir up some trouble and now adding Brion into the mix. Like Justin and Nasir thinks because they are so closed off/ and possibly agnry at life it tends to cloud their own judgment of things (Brion/Agron). They aren't talkers they don't show their emotions except when it comes to their mates  and that inability to reason/talk things out can lead to trouble.

 

Here's hoping this problem will be resovled before they lose Sinuesa.

 

Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

You are right, Vision, and I did warn my readers that I would be going off script right about now.  You are, however, wrong about Castus.  That poor fellow will serve a purpose, but more on that later.  The one thing Brion and Agron have in common, besides falling in love with very similar young men, is that they don't trust easily.  Also, Brion is reluctant to open up to Justinus because he still hasn't revealed what he knows about Justinus's father.  Agron has always had a temper when people he cares about are endangered,...witness his behavior with Duro at the ludus.  Their way of handling their emotions has worked for them in the past, but now it will affect their relationship with the one most important person in their lives.  Only time will tell how and when life will change again for the couples.  More coming up shortly.  Thank you so much for your terrific comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 02:10 AM · On: One Man's Death Means Another Man's Life

Craig is such an unbelievable asshole...to have the nerve and ask his son and Brion for help. But for sure was turned down, the only right thing to do for Justinus. I so hope you will have the best punishment possible for Criagh and consorts.
And now Justinus and Brion are in the best hands...namely Agron and Nasir. I'm so curious how they will get along...:-)
This story is so exciting and amazing...can't wait for more. *sigh*

Huge hugs, Sheela



Author's Response:

Craigh had made a deal before with the enemy (Romans) to save his own skin, so naturally he figured he could do the same with his own son.  And, like all bullies, he thought he could control his son through manipulation because Justinus was a weakling (in his own mind).  He didn't know Justinus at all.  His son is far from weak, especially with someone like Brion in his corner.  We're not quite through with Craigh or his cohort, but trust me, karma is a bitch further down the line.

One of my readers caught on to what I had noticed...the similarities in personality between Justinus and Nasir: also between Agron and Brion to some degree.  That will lead to some interesting connections.  And remember, I won't be sticking strictly to canon 'Spartacus' with Nagron now.  More coming up very shortly.  See you then, Sheela, and thank you so much for the great comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2013 11:17 AM · On: One Man's Death Means Another Man's Life

Wow they seized Sinuessa and Brion being brilliant as always came up with a plan but how will the others perceive this when they find out the truth. I  have this feeling Nasir and Justinus will bond quite easily and Agron.Brion will be apprehensive but will seek words with one another for counsel.

I'm kind of upset Craigh got away or did e but seriously he needs to pay for his treatment of Justin and Brian not to mention the slaves he killed.

 

Amazing chapter



Author's Response:

Don't worry about Craigh or Cassius escaping their just desserts for despicable behavior.  It ain't over quite yet for their story.  As for the kind of connections our four heroes make with one another, I hope you'll find it interesting.  A lot will go on during their time in Sinuessa.  Remember, I am now going off script with the canon Spartacus series.  Who knows what fate awaits the two couples?  More coming up next week.  Thank you again for your great comments, Vision.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2013 07:24 AM · On: One Man's Death Means Another Man's Life

Finally a use for Ethan!  There are many ways you could take an encounter with Craigh.  Brion could tell the rebels who Craigh really is, Justin could claim Craigh is his father through a slave Craigh raped,  they could claim Craigh is Cassius body slave and wanted Justin for himself but his advances were spurned and B&j mocked him.... Look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, Debv, I definitely wanted Ethan's life to be worthwhile... and what better way than providing a means of deception to keep Justinus alive?  As for Craigh, oh he will have his day... mark my words.  And I have to say, you are not far off the mark with some of your ideas.  As a matter of fact, I owe you some appreciation.  One of your ideas fits nicely into my original plans and I'll have to tweak them a little thanks to your comment.  Gratitude!  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2013 04:02 AM · On: A Costly Mistake

OMFG!

Are you trying to kill me, my dear Grammy?

This asshole of a father will hopefully pay dearly for what he has done to his son. Poor Justinus and of course also poor Brion.

Now I'm waiting impatiently for the arrival of Spartacus and his rebels and look forward to the meeting of Agron/Nasir and Justinus/Brion. I've sufferd with them.

Amazing chapter as always, can't wait for more. ;)

Huge hugs, Sheela

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm sorry for the pain, Sheela, but hold on cause it's going to get worse before it gets better.  With a father like Craigh, who needs an enemy?  But in my world, people pay for their sins, so don't despair.  And yes, the meeting of two amazing couples is about to happen, and then we'll be off and running.  The next chapter is well on its way to completion so I'll see you soon.  Thank you so much for these wonderful comments.  They are the best kind of encouragement.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 02:31 AM · On: A Costly Mistake

I have never watched Spartacus the series, but I love this story. Look forward the the next chapter and the siege..



Author's Response:

Wow!  Your comments are such a delight, Debv3.  You see, the dialogue is most definitely spoken in a 'Spartacus' venacular, which is unique to that series alone.  It is almost poetic and is not that easy to capture or understand.  The fact that you are enjoying this story without knowing all about the 'Spartacus' characters I use and their histories is such a compliment.  Thank you very much.  The next chapter will finally bring the four main characters together and I'll no longer be sticking closely to canon 'Spartacus'.  I hope you will continue to enjoy where this story leads.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 05:17 AM · On: A Costly Mistake

Neever thought they would be found out so fast but damn Craigh is a real shit not only stripping him of title and disowning Justinus but also to hurt his mother by divorcing her in  sense. The whipping scene was hard to read cause I just picture the show and placed Brion within it but I think Craigh ha a rude awakening coming cause those 2 are a force to be recon with and especially wwith the rebel just outside their door step.

 

Amazing chapter



Author's Response:

I would love to have given Brion and Justinus more time to develop their relationship before being discovered, but events are moving fast now that the two world of Britin and Nagron are about to collide.  It was hard for me to write the violence, as it isn't something I normally do in my stories, but you can't get away from it within this kind of story or setting.  Don't worry, though, because Craigh is indeed in for a rude awakening, and it is coming up next.  I will see you next week with your next chapter.  Thank you so much for your great comments, Vision.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2013 08:49 PM · On: Roman Rules, Be Damned

I had already thought that it would sooner or later get this far between Brion and  Justinus and they will indulge their emotions. I just hope and pray to the Gods they will not be discovered.
I loved the banter between Nasir and Lugo. The two are so cute together, so opposed as they are. LOL.

Can't wait for the next update. ;-)

 

Hugs, Sheela



Author's Response:

Brion and Justinus can never turn back now.  This next chapter seals their fates.  I love the prickly, yet genuine friendship between Nasir and Lugo, so I had to add a little fun between the two of them.  I'm so glad you liked it.  Next week, there will be a little pain to go with the bit of pleasure, so I'll see you then.  Thanks again for being so supportive of my story, Sheela.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2013 06:36 PM · On: Roman Rules, Be Damned

Well it happened and now there is no turning back for these two on their way to destiny even if it is going to cost them eventually friends and family. The world of the Romans was a harsh environment and it has taken strides over all these years to reach where we are today but damn the inequality.

 

Loved the little scene with Nasir and Lugo I always found what few scenes Lugo had to be very entertaining especially when he started to see Nasir for more than just a puny Syrian boy.

 

Great chapterand unto Sinuesa



Author's Response:

You are so right, Vision.  There is no turning back for Brion and Justinus now.  And they will soon be thrust into a world where all the rules have changed.  The question is, how will they survive it?  

I love the moments between Nasir and Lugo.  They seemed such an unlikely duo at first, but they became such good friends.  One of my favorite scenes is when Spartacus paired them up for that challenge that was made in order to get all the warring factions to work together, a brilliant move in my opinion.  I could easily see them bantering back and forth good-naturedly during guard duty.  Glad you enjoyed that.

In the next chapter, I make up for leaving everyone hanging on what actually happens after that kiss between Brion and Justinus, and we finally have Sinuessa involved for one of the couples.  See you soon.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 07:43 AM · On: Two Journeys Towards Their Futures

Poor Justin even in with freedom in his life as a Roman his true freedom is kept from him cause of his father, but this rebellion may just be his savior not to mention Brion.

 

Great chapter



Author's Response:

It is true that not all slaves are enslaved, and not all freedmen are free.  But it is what you do with the life you're given that makes you who you end up being, so look for some major changes coming soon for at least one couple, if not both.  Thank you so much for the terrific comments, Vision.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 07:41 AM · On: Two Journeys Towards Their Futures

I love how you are taking this story...this direction is fascinating, and I can't wait for your next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you are enjoying this plot, Snow.  It gets a bit more complicated for Brion and Justinus in the next chapter, but it is only the beginning for them.  And it won't be long before Agron and Nasir find their lives becoming more complicated too, but not quite yet.  See you soon with the next chapter.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 03:49 AM · On: Two Journeys Towards Their Futures

What a great dream Justinus had, I can't blame him and I enjoyed every scene of your description of Brion, a God like creature. LOL.

May it be luck or fate that Brion and Justinus are on this journey together, well I'm just pleased they met again.

And as for Agron and Nasir, I love it that they are happy in each others Arms. *sigh*

Thanks for this update, can't wait for more.

Hugs, Sheela



Author's Response:

When it isn't possible to logically have my couple making love, I confess that I enjoy a good fantasy (or dream, in this case).  Anything to put the two together.  LOL!  I can promise you that the trip to Sinuessa is going to be quite interesting for both Brion and Justinus.

It's easy to write for Agron and Nasir.  Britin were very much in love, but had more ups and downs than a roller coaster.  Nagron, outside of one bout of jealousy and one attempt by Agron to save Nasir from certain death, were always passionately in love and stable in their relatiionship.  I love writing about the strength of their bond.  I'm glad you enjoy that too.

I'm well into the next chapter now and will have it ready next week.  See you then, Sheela.

Huge hugs, Grammy

 

 

 

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2013 10:29 PM · On: A Party for the Romans... A Celebration for the Rebels

Poor Justinus he is so frustrated over his whole situation and especially with his father, maybe he needs to meet Brion. LOL.
And Brian can finally show his multiple talents and specially his advertising skills to his dominus and get a favor or so in return.
What can I say about Nasir and Agron. You captured their growing love for each other so beautiful, they're so amazing.

I need my four favorite men to meet soon, please. *sigh*

Hugs and thanks, Sheela



Author's Response:

Well hi again, Sheela.  It took a second to realize you had posted the same comment under both your names, so I'll just say...thanks for giving me double the pleasure of hearing from you.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2013 10:14 PM · On: A Party for the Romans... A Celebration for the Rebels

Poor Justinus he is so frustrated over his whole situation and especially with his father, maybe he needs to meet Brion. LOL.
And Brian can finally show his multiple talents and specially his advertising skills to his dominus and get a favor or so in return.
What can I say about Nasir and Agron. You captured their growing love for each other so beautiful, they're so amazing.

I need my four favorite men to meet soon, please. *sigh*

Hugs and thanks, Meggi



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Meggi, Justinus is about to meet his future in the next chapter, which is almost complete.  As for Brion getting any favors from his Dominus...have you met Cassius?  LOL!  The man isn't capable of doing any good for anyone but himself.  But don't worry, because you know the fate of Romans during the era of the slave rebellion led by Spartacus.  

As for both couples meeting up, it is coming but not quite yet.  You won't have to wait long, however.  At least one of the Britin duo will meet Nagron very shortly (or maybe even both).  See you then.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

 

 

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2013 07:45 AM · On: A Party for the Romans... A Celebration for the Rebels

I like how you show Brion's advertising skills in this :)

Poor Justinus is in a tough situation, I wonder what will happen when he meets Brion?

As always, Nasir and Agron are wonderful together. I think you captured them beautifully :)



Author's Response:

Bingo!!  You are the first person to mention my little nod to our beloved canon Brian.  I appreciate you catching on to it, Snow.  Justinus is definitely not a happy young man.  Maybe a certain someone can help him deal with life better in the future.  Hmmmm???

I'm so glad you enjoyed my Nagron too.  I love those guys, but life is going to get complicated very soon for them.  More coming up ver soon.  See you then, and thank you so much for the great comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2013 02:29 PM · On: A Party for the Romans... A Celebration for the Rebels

i was so glad to see this update. especially since i checked to be notified when you do update and am not receiving the alerts. i just happened to be looking through here and spotted it this chapter (did a little happy dance too). okay, it's late where i am so i think i might have missed where our couples unite. i was thinking it was the city by the sea, but now i'm not so sure. i loved that you kept the scene from the first episode of season 3. that has got to be one of my favorite scenes with the two of them looking all blissed out ;} you did a great job with writing that scene out. oh, and sorry, but still don't like ethan. i'm trying, but it's just not working. i can't wait to see how you get brian and justin together. please continue soon.



Author's Response:

Apparently our MW is having some technical issues to deal with.  I've always gotten an email whenever a review is posted to any story, but all of a sudden I'm not getting them.  They aren't going to my Spam folder either.  So I can understand why you aren't getting notices of updates.  I'm hoping to have a new chapter at least once every week.  I'm about a third of the way through Chapter 4 right now, so keep an eye out.  

 

You are very observant, Boriqua, and obviously caught my hint.  I knew a Spartacus fan would recognize what I was thinking for a meeting place between at least one of the Britin couple and Nagron.  Planning on both of the couples meeting isn't quite there yet, but is coming up.  As for Brion and Justinus...you don't have to wait on them.  Chapter 4 is their meeting place.  

 

I'm really glad you enjoyed that scene at the beginning of Season 3 with Nagron.  Wasn't it amazing?  So much passion between them, not to mention the way that Agron shows how proud he is of his beatiful Syrian lover.  *deep sigh*

 

Don't worry about Ethan.  He isn't long for...well, let's just say, he won't be of concern for long.  Thank you so much for your great comments.  They have made my day.  See you soon.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2013 08:03 AM · On: A Party for the Romans... A Celebration for the Rebels

Love the way in which you are pulling together both individuals and the coupling of Nagron together as if it were so in the actual show. I am dying to see how Justin and Brian react to seeing one another for the first time.

 

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comments, Vision.  So far I am sticking close to canon with Agron and Nasir.  I will go off canon a little once the two couples meet up, however.  You won't have to wait long for Justinus and Brion to come face to face.  It's coming in the very next chapter.  See you then.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2013 08:13 PM · On: Outside the City of Rome

this is soooo good!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Snow.  I hope you'll like where I take our couples as the story progresses too.  Next chapter should be up in a few days.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2013 03:01 AM · On: Outside the City of Rome

Nasir is very courageous to make an attempt on Spartacus life but it went well in the end for both Spartacus but also Nasir since he got his first glances on Agron.

And I always loved Agrons words about training this wild little dog. LOL.

Now I can't wait for our four boys to meet. Pwetty pweese a soon update is much appreciated, my dear Grammy. :-)



Author's Response:

I absolutely believe that the thing that first attracted Agron to Nasir was the way he stood up for himself and the spirit that was clearly inside the young man.  Most of the other slaves were so timid, but Nasir never showed that in his behavior.  I'll never forget how Agron reacted not long after Spartacus started training Nasir himself, when his friend Donar made the comment that once a dog bites, it will probably do so again.  Agron simply looked at Nasir and said...'Pity'.  I think his attraction really began right about there.

I promise not to make you wait too long for all four to meet up.  As you can see I actually went back in time for Chapter Two, but now I have to move forward again, and it won't be long before there is an event that brings all of them together at the same time.  I just have to build up to it as quickly as possible.  Just hold on a tiny bit.  I will give you a little heat before that happens, however.  I promise.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2013 02:28 AM · On: Within the City of Rome

Ok, so...Brion is a more fortunate slave and saved all his coins to possibly buy his freedom. Very clever and providently concerning his future. Good for him.

Oh my poor Justinus, such a treatment from his uncaring father, but Abelia was such a darling and spared Justinus from having sex with her. ;-) And Justinus indeed lose his virginity but not as his father thought. LOL.

I'm already in love with this story. *sigh*

 



Author's Response:

I can't tell you how happy I am that you like what I've chosen to do with Brion and Justinus.  It took me so long to get started on this story simply because I changed my mind over and over on how to proceed with Britin.  I sure hope you'll continue to approve of where I take this couple, especially when they meet up with Nagron too.

I loved making Craigh the lousy father again.  I guess my dislike for the man really shows in my work.  LOL!  I was just happy to find that the name Craig was common among the Celts back then, but spelled slightly different.  I really wanted to include him.  

Now I'm just waiting for someone to become irritated that Justinus had sex with Ethan before Brion.  But don't worry, he won't be around for long.

Thank you so much for checking out this story and all your fantastic comments, Sheela.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2013 10:47 PM · On: Outside the City of Rome

Amazing first 2 chapter can't wait to see where you go with this. Even in ancient Rome Craig is still a dick



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving this story a chance, Vision.  Yes, even in AU stories I make Craig the villain every single time.  Can't help it.  I really hate the man.  LOL!  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Psychokatal (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2013 02:52 PM · On: Within the City of Rome

Wow, I was looking for an entire different fic when stumbled over this. Two of my most favorite couples in one fic! I'm looking forward to more =3



Author's Response:

Britin and Nagron are my two favorite couples too so I thought it was time I put them together.  I promise you won't have to wait long to see all four meeting up, and who knows what will come of that.  Thank you so much for giving this story a chance, Psychokatal.  Hope you'll enjoy more of the story.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Britin1729 (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2013 02:22 PM · On: Outside the City of Rome

It seems interesting enough... Though I really would've like a gladiator!Brian. Brian is thin but he's as tall as Agron. And there is Photoshop to help bring muscular gladiator!Brian to life.

Author's Response:

I hope you will find this story interesting in the future, Britin1729.  I spent a great deal of time before even starting this story in deciding which way to go with Brian and Justin.  Agron and Nasir was easy because I'm sticking to canon with them, but Britin was another story.  I chose Brian (Brion) as a slave for specific reasons which will be clearer later on.  I like to stick closely to canon characters even in AU stories and QAF Brian would never be a gladiator.  He was no wimp, but he hated violence (probably due to his upbringing by his father).  If you'll recall, even when angry he wasn't able to strike his father, although he came close.  Brian always used words as his weapon, not fists.  That doesn't mean he won't take up arms and fight in this story, but I simply couldn't picture him as a gladiator who makes his living killing.  

Funny thing, you mentioning the photoshopping thing though.  My Granddaughter, who makes my banners, did send me a photoshoppped pic of Brian's head on an extremely muscular gladiator's body from the show Spartacus.  It was hilarious, but looked ridiculous.  She sent it as a joke and I did enjoy it.  I like a thin, yet athletic Brian far better.  Hugs, Grammy

 

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