Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: arianionstaljongli (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2014 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 8: Funerals, Trails, and Memories

oh my god Im crying. IM CRYING. how could you make justin leaves brian just like that??! brian needs his sunshine, And all of the sad scene it was... really SAD. (LOL) I just cant help it, after they found him, and God take him away again from brian:'(

 

how could you...

but you are really great writer. you made me cry... :'(

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2014 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 8: Funerals, Trails, and Memories

great story:)

 

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2013 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Funerals, Trails, and Memories

OMG crying here beautiful chapter the ending was just perfect 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2013 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Funerals, Trails, and Memories

I gotta say this ending should have been really sad, but it turned out more inspirational.  Brian never forgot Justin and he didn't do something stupid.  Stockwell got what he deserved and I hope the Judge used his paddle on him.  The funeral was well written and it was nice to see Mikey and Emmett being such good friends.  The album was a nice touch.  Hearing what happened to everyone brought closure and the fact that they all end up together and not old and decreped is nice to know.  There is a light at the end of the tunnel. 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2013 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 8: Funerals, Trails, and Memories

oh the Judge's hammer is called a gavel. And one quick correction trial is like a court trial and trail is like a trail you walk on. You just had the 'i' and 'a' switch during that part of the chapter. Otherwise its sad to see it finished, good ending~



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!! I couldn't think of the name to save my life lol:p and thanks for the spelling correction:)

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2013 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 7: Love That Let's Go

Hmmm, well I AM upset that you killed Justin; but don't listen to the people who practically cursed you for it.  You DID warn us with a Major Character Death tag so really it's their own fault for reading this and not seeing that coming.

Anyways, it's horrible that he's gone, but I am willing to stick it out for the last few chapters to see where it goes and how Brian copes.  I hope Brian keeps his heart open and will be looking forward to see how you bring this to an end.  Personally, I can't imagine a future for Brian without Justin in it...But that's because I'm a helpless romantic and totally believe in soul mates and that they are each other's.  Anyways, update soon!  <3



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I actually wasn't lettling them get to me, I just never responded to one or deleted one cuz they're not worth my time it would take to do that lol:) plus you're right I DID warn everyone that this might happen in the first chapter and if they read it they can't get mad at me cuz I DID warn them. Thank you for the review:) and I plan on updating soon lol:)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2013 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 7: Love That Let's Go

Should put that this is a death fic! Unless you're going to bring him back from the brink or kill Brian off too. You warned that this sad but nothing about death. Not fair to readers who don't want to read these types of stories

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2013 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 7: Love That Let's Go

I don't know what to say.....I was really hoping that Justin would be spared here. I mean, after all he went through....this is just TOO heartbreaking for words. How is Brian ever supposed to deal with the guilt of deciding to end his life?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2013 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 7: Love That Let's Go

What?  We have to wait a whole week?   This is just too sad.

Reviewer: Mag (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2013 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 7: Love That Let's Go

You had a good story I Will Find You, but its sequel was disastrous. It's unfair you kill Justin and cause so much pain after they have passed. If you intended to lead to a death fic was better to have continued with more chapters to the story earlier and Justin killed it. I'm sorry, but that's my opinion and I'm abandoning her story from here. Maybe I will not read other fics of his own. Sorry.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 6: Finding Stockwell

The end is close, or at least it seems that way.  I can't help but wonder where you're taking this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: Bad News Part Two

Amazing, almost paranormal.  Do you think that Brian and Justin are communicating in their dreams?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bad News

Oh no.  How can you let this happen?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 3: One Week Later

How is it that Mikey slept so long and didn't notice the Justin was getting weaker?  You must not like Justin very much. lol.



Author's Response:

No I love Justin a lot lol. I call Brian and Justin mine since they're a package deal lol:) I just thought it'd make the story more sad if I had that happen lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 2: Finding Out

It doesn't look good.  Stockwell will be tried for murder, but that won't help Brian nor the rest of the family.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: Our Problems Have Only Just Started

Okay this is what I have so far.  Justin was kidnapped and branded by Stockwell.  Now I have a few questions.  Where was he found?  Who is Laurence, besides being a doctor?   What story is this a sequel to?

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 6: Finding Stockwell

I'm very worried for Justin, I hope  Justin gets better soon :(

I don't like the idea that Justin dies 

It's possible that Justin doesn't die , please

kiss

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2013 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bad News

I've never been one to give a really review, if I wasn't happy with a story I usually stop reading it. That 's what I intend to do
here.
This story is getting just plain ridiculous.
Good luck with the rest of your story whether you kill Justin off or not.

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Reviewer: toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2013 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: Our Problems Have Only Just Started

Is this a continuation of another story that I should read first?



Author's Response:

ya lol:) the first is called I Will Find You 

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2013 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: Our Problems Have Only Just Started

why/how is Justin back at work after only a month, and with a cast? Did I miss something, or are you going to talk about that in the next chapter?



Author's Response:

I actually noticed that after I started typing this but I couldn't figure out how to take it out and the story still make since. That's why I had Brian take Justin home early, because he's not going to be working at the Diner until I say so lol:) he will still eat and hang there obviously:)

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 1: Our Problems Have Only Just Started

you used the Major Character Death tag so I assume that means at some point either Justin or Brian will die? just wanted to check :)



Author's Response:

Like I said in the End Chapter Notes. I put Major Character Death as a genre because there isn't a Possible Major Death genre. As to if Brian and/or Justin live I'm not hinting towards it at all:) the only thing I will say is that Brian's going to be alive at the end of this:) that doesn't mean I've given something away though lol:p

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: Our Problems Have Only Just Started

poor Justin. I hope Justin will get better .

I like this story.

 

kiss

 

 

 

 

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