Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Love Swap Play
Reviewer: Sid401k (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2021 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 8

Mpreg with a twist?

 

That was a great series!



Author's Response:

Thank you Sid401k. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it and you took the time to let me know.  I really appreciate your kind words.

Cheers

Reviewer: LEAM (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2017 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 8

You should definitely add more to this storyline.

What else does Lindsey do?

Do they destroy the couch and how?

Do Lindsey and Mel stay together?

Great story; however, the dream sequence is really confusing. Did Lindsey sell Justin's painting or was that part of the dream. If it was a dream, what did Lindsey want done in NY. Please expain.



Author's Response:

Hello LEAM :)))

Thank you for saying I should write more to this storyline.  I have had so many thoughts about adding to this under the pretext that Brian and Justin insist that they get rid of the couch for Mel and Lindsay; however they secretly take it to Britin and use it every now and then.  I also thought I would like to explore Ted and Emmett swapping bodies, enabling them to find out just how deep their feelings for each other were or maybe still are, even though they are both now with other partners.  My wicked mind did think of a Dr David and Ben swap.  Ben would have to convince Michael he wasn't David, while David would see it as an opportunity to get revenge on Michael for running back to Pittsburgh.   A certain other character, who may remain nameless at this time, may guess these men have swapped at some stage in the story, yet they might not speak up.  It could be loads of fun depending on the way it happens and if they are aware of how to reverse the effect, which if I wrote Dr Dave and Ben, they wouldn't automatically know and therefore it would be days before anyone in the know found out and maybe longer before they were willing to share the reversal technic.  As you can see I have thought about it a lot, unfortunately the cancer medication I am taking is now affecting my eyesight and I cannot use a computer for any length of time.   I am hoping my fiction writing days have not come to an end.

Thank you for commenting on the dream sequence and giving an honest opinion.  I thought the ***** would denote a period of time had passed.  Sorry if that wasn't clear.  Sometimes my brain seems to work differently to others and even expecting people to understand the connection to Joseph, who interpreted dreams, may have been going too far.  Yes, Lindsay did sell Justin's painting.

Thank you for taking the time to leave this review.  I really appreciate the feedback and the kind words.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

I loved the series Great job

 



Author's Response:

Hello Artfuleye66 :))))

I am pretty chuffed with this review.  Thank you for the ‘great job' comment.  I am stoked that I didn't lose you by the end of the series.  I should explain that comment; I think the fact Justin was in Lindsay's body when the baby was conceived was forgotten by some readers by the end of the series, so it is really nice to know you got that.  I'm sure you guessed before you read it that Justin was once again in Lindsay's body to deliver the baby.  Thank you for taking the time to review.

Cheers :))))

Flossee

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! What a way to end the story! I'm glad Justin swapped bodies with Lindsay. I wouldn't trust her cray cray self either.



Author's Response:

Cray cray Lindsay probably would have tried to hold the baby in by crossing her legs. LOL  Thanks for the 'wow' comment.  I'm really happy you enjoyed this series.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm sad there is just one more chapter on this story. Been such a fun read!



Author's Response:

This chapter I think I may have gone off the deep end.  What was I thinking having Ethan singing in a supermarket denoting he does hate Brian and that he would champion Brian and Justin's rights to be in a relationship against any homophobic.  WHAT WAS I THINKING?????????

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 6

Michael was trying to cause a fight as always. LOL at Brian's Ethan rating!



Author's Response:

"Beyond disgusting." Just the thought of those two men together is exactly that.LOL  Michael; what can I say.  Well, probably nothing you don't already know. :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 5

I like how they're learning even more about each other by being in one another's bodies. I also like how they get off on looking at and having sex with themselves lol



Author's Response:

I admit.  This chapter has weird role play.   I like what you wrote as I was worried about the men having sex with themselves. LOL.  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm glad Brian and Justin handled this very maturely, and wrapping up the issue with a 69 is always a great idea. 

This is such a great series!



Author's Response:

Love that number for the boys, but again, weird since they would be pleasuring their own body.  Haha  Maybe some readers would envy that. LOL  OMG, did I just go too far then?????

I'm glad you're enjoying this part of the series too. 

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

One of my fave things on QAF was Brian calling Ethan Ian. Always funny.

Now who is this person kissing Brian's body??



Author's Response:

I rarely call him Ethan when I write fics, I call him Ian.  Like you I find it funny. :)))

Who indeed????  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

Now Justin knows how much Brian desires cuddle time. Love it!



Author's Response:

I love how you pick out these pieces to comment on.:)))  Cuddle time looks like it will became part of the norm now. LOL  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Justin does have a great ass! Glad he got to enjoy it himself! 



Author's Response:

Haha It seemed quite odd writing Justin in Brian's body and enjoying his own ass.  Sometimes I think I'm a little warped. LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 8

So happy with how you wrapped this story up. Keep up the amazing stories!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the encouragement; I truly appreciate it and all your very kind reviews.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good for Brian for discovering that he can tell Justin everything without judgement. I think the value of that paining may now be priceless to. 



Author's Response:

"I think the value of that painting may now be priceless." LOL  That remark is priceless. Thank you.

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 6

Brian bottoming may be my favorite thing.



Author's Response:

Brian is certain getting a glimpse of life as a bottom. LOL  At least he has something to look forward to "free access to his own ass". LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

Go Justin. I always really liked George. This story is so believable in a weird way. Lol. 



Author's Response:

"Believable in a weird sort of way."  I really love that sentiment.  So much so I might even do a little happy dance. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 4

theyre learning a lot about each other. Hope the couch switches them back.



Author's Response:

Zack Rogers, there had to be someone before Brian's self-imposed one-fuck policy.

Fingers crossed the couch will adhere to the childish poem. LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

cant wait to see who kissed Brian. Also, I still hate Ethan.



Author's Response:

I think Brian might agree with you, at this stage, about the Ethan statement. LOL  I'm sure Brian wished he had alcohol instead of water to rinse out his mouth, as that would disinfect any lingering Ethan germs.  LOL 

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

lol at Justin. I love that he knows now that Brian has the urge to cuddle after sex. Lol



Author's Response:

Love the lol's, thanks heaps.  Yep, of all the secretes Brian's body could give away I'm sure Brian didn't expect that to be one. LOL   

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

i am in love with Brian and Justin swapping bodies. This is my favorite part of this series.



Author's Response:

Even though I hadn't planned on taking the series this far when I originally started writing it, I suppose it was inevitable that the men swap bodies. LOL  Wow, thanks for letting me know this is your favorite part of the series. :)))

Cheers :) 

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 8

aww A happy ending.  Now Justin needs to get his body back b4 Lindsay gets any crazy ideas. lol I have read this more than once so thank you for the fun.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you have also read these fics more than once and I'm glad you had fun.  I truly appreciate every review you have left me, thank you so very much.  A happy ending, yeah, it will be if Justin gets his body back. Dun-dun-dun-dah!  LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 7

That painting is definitely a Taylor original. lol



Author's Response:

Haha A Taylor original, yes, that it is.  So the future analysis reads; canvas, paint and an unknown crusty substance. LOL   

Cheers :)    

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 6

Michael helped them even if he did it unwittingly. lol  How generous free access to my own ass. lol 2 funny  



Author's Response:

Yep, Michael helped give Brian and Justin more time to explore each other's bodies.  Who would have thunk it; that I would write that.  LOL

"Free access" I'm glad you like that line and it gave you a laugh. :D  

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

Lucky for Nick Justin is in Brian's body.



Author's Response:

Yep, Nick would have been out of a job.  However, Justin knows the allure of Brian and understands that Nick's hormones are probably overriding his brain function. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 4

Zack has a mole on his ass with a hair growing out of it. eww lol  I like the way you wrote that Brian didn't always have a no repeat rule as his rules had to begin at some point in his life.  69 sucking on their own cocks that sounds crazy fun? :)



Author's Response:

I can't believe I wrote that about Zack ass.  Eww is right, what was I thinking?  LOL

Suggesting Brian's rules had a begining, as he was not born with them, does seem to be a popular topic now so I'm glad I have encouraged others to investigate that area. 

Crazy fun or weird, one or the other. LOL

I am totally enjoying all your comments.  Thanks heaps. :)))

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 3

Echidna shaped dildo?  Brian rinses his mouth to get rid of all those Ethan gems lol  Brian's one consolation is little Justin hasn't raised his head lol  



Author's Response:

Hey, BigPaw is behind the echidna shaped dildo (oh wait, that sentences doesn't sound right). LOL

Brian probably wished he had mouthwash when it comes to Ethan gems, or even girl gems. LOL

Thankfully, Ethan just doesn't do it for any size (big or little) Justin anymore. Much to Brian's relief. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 2

I think I broke your body lol 2 funny



Author's Response:

Cuddles anyone. LOL 

Cheers :)

Oh wait, I forgot to comment on your line "Fun with Brian & Justin". :D  I love it, as I'm sure you know that is what I called one of my series, thank you. :)))

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fun with Brian & Justin :)  I like how Brian is willing to swap places with Justin for a few days.



Author's Response:

Yep, I think that surprised Justin a little that Brian was willing to swap bodies for longer than a day.  Still, Brian wouldn't have any worries about Justin taking care of his body. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2014 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 8

Interesting and a very fun read!  Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Hello JoAnn.  Thank you for letting me know you have read the "Body Swap" series.  It is always a pleasure to know who is reading my fics.  "Interesting and a very fun read", thank you, that is very kind.  I know this is the first time you have reviewed for me so I would be remiss if I didn't belatedly welcome you to MW.  I hope you are enjoying the site.

Cheers

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hello, Flossee!

It was so amazing to read!

There are so many things I would emphasize: Ethan kissing Brian (yuck!) thinking that is Justin, Michael doing his service "I'm your best friend" to be thinking Brian Justin, Justin's body is excited about the presence of Ben and Brian and Justin finally start a family. Why is usually that Justin has a child? I think Brian would take turns with him in this work Mpregs? I liked how you become a topic was folded into a very interesting story.

I understood what you meant about the boys recite the time shared fashion and romantic. But, in contexts were totally different.

A big hug!

Fatima.



Author's Response: Hi Fatima. Yes I agree with you about the context being different in reciting the time, however, it was still strange for me to review that after just writing it. I don’t have a problem with words or lines appearing in other fics, as I know coincedences happen (like here), and I only become disappointed if someone copies another person’s premise, sentiment or punch line. I hope you understand what I am trying to say as I not sure I’m doing a very good job of explaining. LOL. I love that you commented on why is it always Justin that has the child, as I so wanted it to be Brian, but I didn’t dare give Lindsay his body to play with. At least with Justin’s body she wouldn’t have the same temptations. I hope. LOL Thank you again for taking the time to leave me a review telling me you enjoyed this and saying it was an amazing read. Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 4

“They are still fucking raw, even after Brian’s little tryst with Lindsay’s body…”

I never thought about them not using protection. It’s makes perfect sense now.

Clever girl. You did a Mpreg.

Author's Response:

I was wondering if people would see this as a Mpreg, but I know I can't technically call it one as it involved a woman's body.  When Brian was with Justin in Lindsay's body he did use a condom, but it failed unbeknown to them at the time, causing the pregnancy (addressed in chapter 8).   "They are still fucking raw, even after Brian's little tryst with Lindsay's body..." this comment was because Justin thought Brian was cheating with unknown office intruder (aka Zack).  I hope that's as clear as mud.  LOL

 Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 3

“Brian notices Justin’s body is having a reaction to seeing Ben and he doesn’t like it.”

That was interesting. I guess Justin’s body didn’t react to Ethan, though. There was a lot of kissing of other people going on. I’m surprised Justin/Brian hadn’t kissed Mikey.

Author's Response:

Ewww B/J kissing Michael, I have my standards.  LOL  Yes there was a lot of people partaking in kissing because I didn't want it to go any further since the men's relationship has evolved.   Brian had a bit of a learning experience, Justin still finds some other men attractive, but Ethan is no threat.  However, the lesson was probably lost once Ethan kissed him and his only coherent thought was probably to wash his mouth out.  LOL   Thank you for the review; including the disturbing Michael image.  LOL

Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 2

“Brian I think I broke your body.”

Hilarious! I like the thought of Justin having to play with Brian's body and not being able tokeep his hands off himself.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the hilarious comment.  Hands up if you had Brian's body would you be able to keep your hands off it?  Oh, so it's not just Justin and me then.  LOL  Yeah I agree with you, Justin would be in heaven with his new toy.  LOL

Cheers

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

I can actually read this and not be confused this tme. The thought oof BJ switching bodies does sound exciting. I can see the two them doing that. I was afraid they were switched with the children for a second. They should have locked the door.

Author's Response:

LOL I'm glad you had the thought that they may have swapped bodies with the children for a few seconds, however, that would have been wrong, considering the world these men live in; although Brian going to school in Gus' body and dealing with some snooty children could have been fun.  LOL  I was going to put in a disclaimer: No children were harmed or swapped in the making of this series, however; a baby did have to navigate its way through a birth canal.  Then I thought that's going too far, even for my sense of humor.  LOL  Yes in hindsight they should have locked the door.  I'm glad you read it again and thank you for letting me know.

 

Cheers

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2013 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

"Justin was in Lindsay's body when it became pregnant..."

OMG! You’re right. I forgot. That puts an entirely new spin on the story. That’s beautiful. And, yes, now I understand about them asking questions only they would know – clever. I had forgotten that, too. Now I have to go back and read the two stories again

Author's Response:

Thank you for the clever and beautiful comments.  I changed the wording slightly on the two years, five months thing, as I trust your opinion that it needed tweaking.  I'm so pleased you are willing to read the stories again and I really appreciate you taking the time to leave reviews, as your comments are truly valued. 

 Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

I must admit, I could not keep up with who was whom or who. And what was the two years, five months thing? I couldn't figure that out.

I loved the ending though. That was clever.Wait, why did Justin say "We made a baby"? I thought Brian and Lindsay made the baby. See. I'm confused, and it doesn't take much, LOL.

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reviewing; I'm so pleased you have, as I know if you don't understand something you will ask, and do it in a friendly manner.    You aren't alone with not being able to keep up with who was in what body, I wrote it and I still had to double check myself.  LOL  I must say though, if anyone is going through what I am, it's a great way to keep your mind ticking over, so I'm just pleased nobody has said I mixed them up.  LOL 

 The two years, five months thing was the answer to the question they used since the couch came into their lives.  In the first fic Brian asks Justin "How long have we been monogamous?" so he could tell that Justin was back in his own body.  I couldn't fit it in the next fic, as there wasn't an appropriate place, so I put it in the first chapter of the third fic, however, I didn't actually repeating the same wording when Justin asks Brian the exact same question.  So to continue using this question, which only the two of them knew the answer to, was achieved by them answering the question without either one of them asking it.  I hope I haven't over explained here.  LOL  If it isn't clear enough just let me know as it only means I should go back and reword one sentence, which I'm happy to do.

 Justin was in Lindsay's body when it became pregnant, that's why Justin said we made a baby.  LOL  OMG I hope you didn't think Brian and Justin had more sex in Lindsay's body to make a baby.  Ewww.  LOL.  Thank you so much for the review, but not for the image of Brian and Lindsay's bodies together again.  LOL

 

 Cheers

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 8

Even I am so much busy @ work, I really find time to read this one since I was having so much fun with Justin and Brian body swap. I can only imagine Justin really experiencing having a baby with Lindsay's body, hahaha! Ohhh and I love Brian bitching Lindsay with these words: "I want the baby bonding with Justin's body, not yours." Nicely done dear! {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Poor Justin he's my favorite and look what I put him through.  Push Justin Push.  LOL  I'm happy you enjoyed Brian setting Lindsay straight with the agreement.  Did Brian know you don't get to have sex for six weeks after having a baby, plus Justin would have had to deal with worse than Brian did with Mel's body.   Ewww.  LOL   I'm glad you have a job and are working hard, therefore, I will wait patiently for your next fic.  Thank you for taking the time to review and letting me know you enjoyed this.

Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

OMG, this chapter has got to be the most interesting thing I have ever seen. I think you must have the right idea about how to have children, just switch to someone else body. I think this poor kid might have some issues to deal with once the bodies are returned to the correct owners. I hope that evil couch is burned or cut up with a silver knife, and turned into kindling. So who is going to ask to be godparents of this spawn from hell? I think Mysterious Marilyn is the only choice for Godmother. Then to even things out maybe a bouncer from Meat Hook to lend a macho influence for Godfather. Now if only there wasn't a chance the kid would burst into flames when entering the church I think sexy Father Tom from Grandma Joan's church would be the ideal choice to host the holy service but I think that's too risky and you'll have to find a more free and easy man of some god to make it all happen. I will be happy to provide the blood of a sacrificial blood of a diseased animal if needed. Now on to a different subject...how soon till we find out how the echidna dildo work? Did it add the needed spice to their dull and boring sex life? Do you think it made him howl like a dingo, hop like a wallaby or scream like a hungry cockatoo? I'm sure he didn't purr like a kitten. Well I must stop for now, it's bedtime or close to it. I must make sure the rocks are watered and then call it a night.
Lori

Author's Response:

I struggled with Justin giving birth as I so wanted it to be Brian, but I couldn't give Lindsay Brian's body.  Brian would have been so funny as I bet he doesn't handle pain well.  How about Mysterious Marilyn and Ethan as godparents?  LOL  Since I made almost everyone good.  Ethan and Michael good, who would have thunk it, in one of my fics.  LOL   I so wanted to credit you with the echidna dildo, but I didn't know if you would appreciate that.  Father Tom sexy, you have a kink, huh, for men with their collars on backwards?  LOL  Now you are off to bed and the last thing you read is probably what you will dream about.  Father Tom, Father Tom, Father Tom.   Please don't have that dream interpreted or shared in anyway.  LOL  Thanks for the review my friend.  I would say I'm off to Oz, but since I can't even identify myself there I'll just go and clean up the water I spilt on my carpet.  I know it's not a wallaby or cockatoo, but it is a pet and a car apparently.  LOL

 

Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

How sneaky of you to add another chapter while I was busy reading another author. How nice that we are both awake at the same time. Now I think I will carry a black light with me to every museum to check for splashes on the canvas. Lindsay is such a total C word. How dare she sell a painting that was given as a gift with deep meaning. I really think she needs to take a nap on the couch with a flea infested rat and then taken down to the docks where all the feral cats hunt. I sure hope Mel does the right thing and dumps her.
Lori

Author's Response:

OMG what are you doing to me, now we have animals on the couch.  LOL  As long as it's not an echidna I'm happy to go with it.  LOL   A black light in a museum, let me know what you find, just don't touch it.  Ewww.    Mel dump Lindsay, maybe but I made her wimpy so maybe not, well not until they change bodies back as Mel doesn't want loosey Lindsay's body.  Again Ewww.  LOL  Thank you for the laughs my friend.

 

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 7

Flossee my dear this has been a very interesting ride and I hate to see it end. After this experience, our boys will no doubt come out of it having a greater respect for one another.

Can't wait for the next chapter~JP

Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with me and reviewing, I really appreciate it.  We are back to weird for the final chapter so I hope you aren't disappointed.   As soon as your schedule permits I'll be looking forward to your updates.

 

Cheers

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

How sweet of Michael to be a little tattle tail. Actually I wonder what took him so long to place the call. I bet if he saw Justin being attacked by rabid werewolves he wouldn't think to help or alert the proper authorities. He would just turn his face and walk away. I have wondered why Ben was willing to believe it was worth the time and energy it took to share living space with that horrid hunk of flesh.

I'm sorry it took me so long to catch up on this fantastic tale of intrigue but as you know RL does have a way of messing things up. I wish I could send you a kitten but I'm afraid the shipping would be a problem. Well I must go tend the farm and work in the brick factory. My life is so busy these days.
Lori

Author's Response:

I adore how you try and disguise your love for Michael; your favourite character.  LOL   Ben and Michael OMG could you imagine them swapping, poor Ben would be so whiny and Michael would be so Zen.   Ben would have women's hips and Michael would get the body of a God.  Was that statement a little too bitchy, as I always thought Michael had women's hips?   I hope to catch up with you on the farm.  3D yes or no?

 

Cheers

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

I think more people are going to figure out something is just not right with our two dreamy boys. Hmmm a Ted and Cynthia swap? Not to sure that would cause much of a stir, they are both pretty committed to their jobs and as far as we know Cynthia has no personal life at all. I think the creepy little intern should have been removed at once.
Lori

Author's Response:

A Ted and Cynthia swap could lead to a Cynthia and Blake tête-à-tête; Yuck, no yay, no yuck, no yay...okay I don't know, you have just blown my mind and it wasn't 100% functioning anyway.  Thanks, now how am I going to feed the chickens?  What are chickens?   Where are my chickens?  Thanks for the water and the reviews.  LOL

Cheers

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh No, I see Ted finding out and then he'll want to swap bodies with Brian, remember his fantasy before when he wore Brian's clothes and used the loft. Somehow I don't think Brian would willing allow that switch to happen. I don't think he'd have much use for Ted's boring body.
Lori

Author's Response:

Ted and Brian I can see that.  Brian giving everyone advice on their investments and they could all end up broke and all living together at the loft, which Ted would now own as he wouldn't swap back.  Such fun.  LOL 

 Cheers

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

I think you have come up with the perfect birthday gift for Brian. Where ever did you get such an idea? You are so lucky to live in a land of odd shaped creatures. The mention of the echidna is nearly enough to make me forgive you for the unspeakable act of the chin rat touching Brian, no matter what body he might be wearing. Now if only you could arrange for Justin, in his own body to have a moment of passion with Ben, and let Micheal catch them....I do believe Michael would burst into flame. Can you imagine how wonderful that would be. Just another idea.
Lori

Author's Response:

I must admit I was bursting to put the echidna dildo in somewhere and thanks to you I did the research to find out what I was talking about.  Yes, googling echidna's genitals is research, no matter how disturbing it was.  LOL   Michael bursting into flames; does that make him a flaming queen?  LOL  I don't even know what that terms means so I should go and google it I guess.

Look I can put in paragraphs now as my new search engine is incredible.  I know it doesn't take much to make me happy.  Speaking of being happy I was so pleased to wake up this morning to your reviews as they always make me laugh and that's the best way to start the day.  Okay, I admit 11am wake up was only just technically morning.   LOL

Cheers

 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

That damn Mikey....he almost screwed things up.

That line of Brian having free access to his own ass is hilarious....I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

I didn't want to make Michael bad; is that wrong of me.  LOL   The next chapter gets a little silly, and then the last one is beyond absurd; I can only apologize now.  LOL    Brian accessing his own ass, that's disturbing; how could I write that?  LOL

 

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

That damn Mikey....he almost screwed things up.

That line of Brian having free access to his own ass is hilarious....I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Bonus review happy dance, yay.  Thank you so much.

 Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 5

Flossee please forgive my tardiness (earned myself extra duty for being surly lol) I can't tell how much I'm enjoying this. This really gives new meaning to the saying "walk a mile in my shoes"

Author's Response:

Please don't apologize as that makes me feel bad; I just love getting your reviews so whenever you can makes me happy.   Ouch, extra duty for being surly that's tough.  I'm glad you can laugh about it. 

 

I have loved writing these fics as I gave myself a challenge and I didn't realise how hard that would be.  The first one I just wrote as a weird fic to see if anyone had my, let's say uniqueness.  LOL  The second one I wrote aiming at humor since I wasn't sure if people would read a Brian and Mel fic  This one; you nailed it when you wrote "walk a mile in my shoes"  I am hoping to end it by going the full circle and ending on bizarre again.  LOL   I really don't think I'm meant to have this much fun writing; I hope you feel like that sometimes too.  Thank you so much for letting me know you're enjoying this, I really appreciate it.

 

 

 

Cheers

Reviewer: meclarayoda (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Best line in the story so far is "Brian, I think I broke your body!  bwahaha!  Too funny!  I've tried commenting before, but I keep forgetting my password-so I'm logged in now - sorry I haven't been around to give you any ideas - my mind has drawn a blank - patiently waiting for next installment!



Author's Response: "I keep forgetting my password" I’m so glad I’m not the only person who does that, thank you for letting me know I’m not alone. LOL I feel really honored Jane, as I can see you joined MW only this year and I am your first review, thank you so much. The one thing I have really enjoyed about writing these fics is the participation of the reader. I haven’t done that before and people can give such fun ideas, so please feel free at any time to share your thoughts and I'll try and put them in. I hope one day to see you writing. Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hmm trying to work this all out in my head...is Justin being sweet by paying so much attention to the body of his dearly beloved partner, using his time to find out how to please Brian more, or should he be thinking about bringing Brian some pleasure in the body he's currently using. One would think Justin would know how to get the job done for his physical body and there by allow Brian some joy and comfort especially now that Brian is trapped in the bubble butt body...Maybe they both need to take a field trip to boy toy or meat locker and add a little spice to the day. I bet if they call Deb she would be happy to watch the kids tonight.
Lori

Author's Response: OMG does this make me selfish because if I was to swap bodies with someone else I would be taking the new body out for a test run before worrying about the other person. Would that be selfish, curiosity or human nature? LOL I promise no porn in the next couple of chapters as I do need some story line, besides I don’t think I could write about every encounter they are going to have in the next couple of days as that would mean using lots of words, and you know I have an aversion to that. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm sorry I'm late to review this. So much to do and not a lot of time. I'm afraid the whole family is going to forget who each one is, will they just have to assume the body they are wearing or will the body become unimportant? How confusing for everyone. Will Ted be filled in on what's going on? I am pretty sure Gus will soon figure out what's happening, he is so gifted. Now on to the next chapter.
Lori

Author's Response: I can see my beta now as she reads the next two chapters. WHAT! Gus and RJ changed bodies. LOL I gave him a speaking part, I thought you would be so pleased; or did I? Gus? Gus who? LOL You think the characters are confused with my fuzzy brain keeping track of who is in what body is hilarious. You should see my drafts. I don’t think I should have taken up anything this challenging right now. LOL Note to self, apologize to Angie. BTW I tried to send you some tomatoes I grew as I know you love tomatoes, but alas it didn’t happen. Now I must go and feed the animals and make some hay while the sun shines or is that for Sunshine. Cheers

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

HOT HOT HOT!!!

This is the body swap I had been waiting! More please :) :) :)

Nicely done once again dear. {{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response: I’m so pleased you found it Hot. I always worry I might overdo Brian and Justin fun time and I think I only have one or two chapters that look like there won’t be any in it. I hope that much body action isn’t a turn off for anyone. LOL This will be updated a little slower than the others as it is technically a WIP, but I have almost finished it. Scary for me, I have a WIP. LOL Thank you so much for taking the time to review and the hugs. Cheers

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